考点25 书面表达-备战2020年中考英语考点一遍过（浙江专版） 试卷

考点二十五 书面表达

一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为＂启、承、转、合＂。＂启＂就是开头，＂承＂就是承接，＂转＂是转折，＂合＂是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示＂启＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示＂承＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。
3. 用于表示＂转＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。
4. 用于＂合＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等。
总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，＂一代，五加，一扩＂帮你轻松解决问题。＂一代，五加，一扩＂具体说来就是：
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——for example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语（词块）
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。

一、开头句型
As far as ...is concerned
It goes without saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the proverb says ...
It has to be noticed that...
It’s generally recognized that...
It’s likely that ...
It’s hardly too much to say that...
What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是
There’s no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问，无可否认
Nothing is more important than the fact that...
What’s far more important is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in point is ... As is often the case...
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore... 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
But it’s a pity that...
For all that...In spite of the fact that... Further, we hold opinion that...
However, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we should pay attention to... not (that)...but (that)... 不是……而是……
In view of the present station... 鉴于目前形势
As has been mentioned above... 综上所述
In this respect, we many as well (say)... 从这个角度上我们可以说……
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即……
三、结尾句型
I will conclude by saying... Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... All things considered 总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
It can be concluded from the discussion that... 从中我们可以得出这样的结论
From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
It remains to be further studied... There’s question is how...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.

应用文
应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出的特点是它 的实际应用性，应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同等。应用文的语言应使用规范语言，重在实用，力求朴实、准确、简洁。
常用写作模板
一、书信

... Middle School, ...（写信人地址）
April 8th, 2016（写信的日期）
Dear XXX
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Yours sincerely,
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信头
称呼
签名
结束语
正文

二、日记




三、通知


Announcement/Notice
Ladies and gentlemen,
Your attention, please. I have something to tell you.
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Thanks for listening. / That’s all. Thanks.
标题
开场白
称呼
内容
结束语

四、启事

1. 遗失启事

2. 招领启事

3. 招聘启事

五、便条


六、发言稿


七、倡议书


八、调查报告





（一）
随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为＂手机控＂一族。假定你是某校学生，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报社投稿，谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
＂手机控＂的表现
沉迷于手机娱乐活动(聊天、看电影等)，与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现……
＂手机控＂的危害
对健康不利，影响学习……
你的建议
……
参考词汇：手机控a phone freak；焦虑anxious(adj.)；沉迷于be addicted to
注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
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（二）
学校最近以＂学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案？＂为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对。请根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以＂Think before you search online＂为题用英语写一篇作文。

赞成者
反对者
你自己
观点
1.做题
2.别人
3.时间
1.于提升能力
2.于思维发展
（至少2点）
注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Think before you search online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
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（三）
亲爱的同学，你生活中有烦恼、学习有压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据提示以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 积极参加体育锻炼，有一个健康的身体。
2. 多与老师、家长和朋友交谈， 说出自己的烦恼。
3. 多听听音乐，多看看书。
4. 尽自己最大努力学习，勇敢面对自己的成绩。
5. 如果经常压力太大，可以去看医生。
要求：1. 内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
2. 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and in our lives. How should we solve them? _____________________________
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（一）（2019 • 浙江杭州）
假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。
Subject:
From: Linda
To: Li Ping
…
I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Linda
Subject:
From: Li Ping
To: Linda
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Ping
（二）（2019年浙江温州市中考）



最近，用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门……外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。
请你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题，写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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【小词典】
acknowledge v.承认，认可 bone n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部
cipher n. 标记 crowd n. 大众 elect v. 选举，推选
franc n. 法国法郎 invisible ad. 不可见的 muscle n. 肌肉
profound adj. 深刻的 radio telescope射电望远镜 reflect n. 反射
signal n. 信号 stimulate v. 刺激 toe n. 脚趾

（三）（2019年浙江宁波中考）
回顾初中三年。有许多事令人难忘。校英语报如Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你选择其中一个话题, 并结合具体事例, 用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加此次征文活动。
要点如下：
say "thanks" to___________
say "sorry" to_________
1. be not good at...
2. encourage me to…
3. make great progress
4….
1. argue with…
2. not talk to each other
3. regret doing…
4…..

注意： (1) 短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点, 并适当拓展；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数:80-100,书信格式已给出；
(4) 首句供参考Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say...
Dear ___________________,
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Yours,
Li Hua
（四）（2019年浙江湖州市中考）
5月18日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。

注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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（一）（浙江省温州市2019届九年级下学期第一次学业调研）

如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

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（二）（山东威海（鲁教版)2019初中中考英语模拟）
如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示：
Advantages
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
Take exercise…
Problems
Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen…
Advice
Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of…

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）（2019年浙江省温州市永嘉县中考三模）
假如你是Li Daming，与来自加拿大的交换生朋友Amanda约好一起去温州博物馆，但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件，内容包括：
1) 表示歉意；
2) 说明原因；
3) 另约时间。
注意：
1) 词数110左右；
2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Amanda,
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Yours,
Li Daming
（四）（2019年浙江省温州市中考二模）
假定你是李华(Li Hua)，是九（3）的一名学生。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则志愿者招募启事。请阅读启事，写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our yearly English Festival，which will be held on June 25­27,2017，is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show and Speech Contest. If you are interested, please send an email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要求：
1．邮件词数110左右;
2．可根据情况增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Li Hua



跟踪训练
（一）
【思路导航】
这是一篇图表作文，要求对当前随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为＂手机控＂一族的现象写一篇文章，说说自己的观点。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Today，many people，especially young people，are phone freaks. They are addicted to playing mobile phones. They often use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play games, listen to music or take photos and so on. In fact, they will be anxious without phones.
However, it does harm to their study. Because they spend too much time playing with phones. They can’t have a good rest. They don’t have time to do their homework. They can’t get good grades.
In my opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take it to school, we mustn’t use it during the class. And remember that study is our first work.
（二）
【思路导航】
本文是一篇话题作文，题目是Think before you search online。主要根据调查情况写一篇调查报告，并写出自己观点。考生首先要认真阅读提示,认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，提示词需用上。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
Think before you search online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
Some students agree with it. They sometimes don’t know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet, They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, it’s easy and it saves time. However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the answers won’t improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.
I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.
【亮点说明】
这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态。文中使用so，at the same time, however等连词，使文章表达更有条理性。写作内容包括表格中所有提示词和提示内容。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。
（三）
【思路导航】
1. 这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当的发挥，说出自己的观点。
2. 动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。
3. 根据材料内容可知用一般现在时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。
4. 写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文紧密联系，符合逻辑关系。
5. 要注意使用情态动词should 和could，为文章增色。
【参考范文】
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?
Firstly, we should take more part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. It’s a good way to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we have too much stress, we’d better see a doctor.
真题再现
（一）
Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读Linda的来信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答，并根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题目要求，并且叙述要注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信，介绍了哥哥的一些情况。首先短文内容符合题目要求，按照Linda在来信中的提问，介绍了哥哥的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、第三人称单数来叙述，符合题目要求，尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使用了简单句、并列句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词，如动词不定式、现在分词等。文章中较好的句型和短语有：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.、He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. 、He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.、He’s of medium height with short straight black hair.、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。
（二）
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You ,an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题，写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（三）
Possible version 1:
Dear Alice,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.
Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.
Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
(100 words)
Possible version 2:
Dear Alan,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.
When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.
I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
这个作文要求我们从题目中给出的两个话题中选择一个，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加学校英语报的一个征文活动。题目中利用表格的形式展示了两个话题的主要结构，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。文章内容应包括：首先确定一个话题和人物；然后具体说明你感谢他或者向他道歉的原因，这是文章的主体部分，叙述应详细，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感谢或歉意，并表达祝愿。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应完整、充实，注意分清段落和层次；其次需注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。句式结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句直接使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向自己的同学表达了感谢或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表达了感谢，并详细介绍了Alice帮助自己学习英语的过程；第二篇作文向Alan表达了歉意，介绍了由于足球比赛失利，互相埋怨，产生矛盾的过程，并表达了自己的悔意。文章内容都非常丰富，叙述也很完整、详细。两篇作文都使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。注意了谓语动词过去式形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式结构完整，语言得体、地道，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如第一篇里When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English.、Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.。再如第二篇中When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.、Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.等等。
（四）
【参考范文】
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.
Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.
Museums make it possible for us. 'students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?
【详解】
这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
模拟检测
（一）
【参考范文】
Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。
which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。
（二）
【参考范文】
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
【点睛】
本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。
（三）
【参考范文】
Dear Amanda,
I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to Wenzhou Museum with you on Saturday morning. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Sunday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to visit the museum and know more about Wenzhou’s history, people, culture and so on. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Daming
【详解】
1、题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时，要把不能去博物馆的原因写清楚以及对不能去表示歉意，最后写出另约的时间。
2、例文点评：例文采用两段式；用第一人称来叙述不能去博物馆的原因；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述另约时间时，详细具体，逻辑性强，条理清晰。
3、高分亮点：
短语：attend an important class meeting；too much trouble；set out；it’s convenient for sb。
句型：We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to visit the museum and know more about Wenzhou’s history, people, culture and so on.；I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that morning。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如attend an important class meeting；too much trouble；set out；it’s convenient for sb 以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写
错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（四）
【参考范文】
Dear Ms Chen，
I’m Li Hua，a student from Class3，Grade 9. I want to be a volunteer in English Festival. I think it’s a perfect opportunity for me to develop my abilities.
For the past two years，I took an active part in our yearly English festival and played an important role in it. As a hard-working student，I’m good at English and can express my thoughts and opinions clearly with foreigners. In addition，I am an outgoing girl who has rich experience in organizing school activities. I would appreciate it if you give me a chance.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours truly，
【分析】
本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示——校报英语专栏“英语文化节”的一则志愿者招募启事，完成一封应征邮件。
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以九（3）学生李华的身份，用第一人称的方式写一封应征学校“英语文化节”志愿者的邮件；介绍自己的情况用一般现在时；书写时要可加入合理的表达，使文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，做自我介绍，阐述我想当志愿者的目的；正文部分介绍了自己曾经参加的活动、自己英语能力水平及工作能力都可以胜任志愿者的工作等；结尾以I would appreciate it if you give me a chance.总结全文，表达自己想当志愿者的期待。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。用宾语从句、固定句型I think it’s a perfect opportunity for me to develop my abilities；短语take an active part in； play an important role in ；as a hard-working student ；be good at； express my thoughts and opinions clearly with foreigners；in addition； have rich experience in organizing school activities等阐述自己可以胜任志愿者的工作；用I would appreciate it if you give me a chance；Look forward to your reply. 总结全文，表达自己的期待；文句精彩，行文通畅。
【点睛】
本篇话题作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；关注题材的格式（书信格式），注意文章的篇章结构；书写时要紧扣主题，做到中心突出，内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。