备考2027中考英语一轮复习之七八年级核心考点精讲精练 专题二十 写作提升：句型升级与逻辑连接词（含答案）

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【考点精讲】
考点一 句型升级技巧
多数学生写作习惯全部采用 “主语 + 谓语 + 宾语” 基础简单句，文章单调乏味。以下五种句型升级方法可快速提升作文档次，以一篇学生习作逐句修改演示升级思路。
学生习作原稿（典型问题范文）
My hmetwn is a small city. It is in the suth f China. The weather is warm. There are many trees and flwers. The peple are friendly. I like my hmetwn very much. I ften g t the park with my friends. We play games there. We have a gd time. I think my hmetwn is the best place t live.
问题诊断：全文 10 句均为简单句，句式单一，缺少逻辑连接词，行文生硬、连贯性差。
技巧一：简单句→并列句
将语义关联的两句简单句用并列连词衔接，优化行文流畅度。
技巧二：并列句→复合句
把并列分句拓展为状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句，增加句子层次感。
技巧三：非谓语动词替换从句
技巧四：增加修饰成分（介词短语 / 时间状语）
技巧五：使用比较级 / 最高级结构
升级后完整范文
My hmetwn is a small city in the suth f China. The weather is warm, and there are many trees and flwers everywhere. The peple here are s friendly that I feel at hme. I really think my hmetwn is ne f the mst beautiful cities in China. On weekends, I ften g t the park with my friends t play games. We always have a great time tgether. I lve my hmetwn because it is a place full f beauty and warmth.
考点二 逻辑连接词的分类与使用场景
逻辑连接词是保证文章连贯的核心工具，使用原则：贵在恰当，不在堆砌。150 词左右英语作文使用 5—8 个连接词即可，过多会显得刻意生硬。
一、表顺序与递进
二、表转折与对比
三、表因果与推理
四、表举例与补充
五、表总结与结论
连接词使用规范警示
三级过关精练
过关一・基础达标
一、将简单句合并为并列句或复合句
I like reading bks. My sister likes watching mvies.
He is very tired. He keeps wrking.
The by is my brther. He is standing there.
It was raining. They went ut fr a walk.
She gt up late. She missed the first bus.
I think. He is a gd student.
The bk is very interesting. I want t read it again.
He is very pr. He is very happy.
I will wait here. Yu cme back.
She speaks English very well. She is nly 10 years ld.
二、选择恰当连接词填空
I was tired, ________ I went t bed early.
A. s B. but C. because D. hwever
She studied very hard. ________ , she passed the exam.
A. Hwever B. Therefre C. Althugh D. Because
I like sprts, ________ running, swimming and basketball.
A. fr example B. like C. fr instance D. such as
________ , I believe that we shuld prtect the envirnment.
A. In cnclusinB. Hwever C. Fr exampleD. On the ther hand
He is yung, ________ he knws a lt.
A. s B. because C. althugh D. therefre
________ ne hand, the city is beautiful. ________ the ther hand, the life is expensive.
A. In; In B. On; On C. At; On D. In; In
I was ill. ________ , I didn't g t schl.
A. Hwever B. Althugh C. Besides D. Therefre
________ the help f my teacher, I made great prgress.
A. Because B. Due t C. Thanks t D. As
She is gd at many subjects, ________ English, maths and Chinese.
A. fr example B. such as C. like D. fr instance
________ , I had a wnderful time during the hliday.
A. All in all B. Hwever C. Fr exampleD. On the ther hand
过关二・能力提升
三、用指定连接词 / 句型改写句子
I like this city. I want t live here. (because)
He gt up early. He culd catch the first bus. (s that → t d)
He is a kind man. He always helps thers. (wh 引导定语从句)
She wrked hard. She passed the exam. ()
I dn't like this mvie. I dn't like the music. ()
四、段落润色改写
原稿 A
I like my schl life. I get up at 6:30 every mrning. I g t schl by bike. I have fur classes in the mrning. I have three classes in the afternn. I ften play basketball after schl. I g hme at 5:30. I d my hmewrk in the evening. I watch TV fr half an hur. I g t bed at 9:30.
改写要求：至少 4 个连接词；2 种以上不同句式；合并零散简单句
原稿 B
My best friend is Tm. He is 14 years ld. He is tall. He is kind. He ften helps me with my studies. We g t schl tgether. We play basketball tgether. We have lunch tgether. I like him very much. He is a gd friend.
改写要求：至少 3 个连接词；2 种以上句式；使用非谓语动词
原稿 C
My family has fur peple. They are my father, my mther, my sister and me. My father is a dctr. He wrks in a hspital. My mther is a teacher. She teaches English. My sister is a student. She is in Grade 9. I am a student t. We lve each ther. We are happy.
改写要求：至少 3 个连接词；2 种以上句式；增加修饰成分
原稿 D
I want t be a teacher in the future. Teachers are imprtant. They help students learn. They help students grw. I will study hard. I will learn many things. I will be kind t my students. I will make my classes interesting. I believe I can becme a gd teacher.
改写要求：至少 4 个连接词；2 种以上句式；使用非谓语动词
原稿 E
Last weekend, I went t the z. I went with my parents. We saw many animals. We saw pandas. We saw mnkeys. We saw elephants. The pandas were cute. The mnkeys were funny. The elephants were big. We tk many phts. We had a gd time.
改写要求：至少 3 个连接词；2 种以上句式；增加修饰成分
过关三・综合突破
五、整篇作文改写升级
习作 A
My hmetwn is a small city. It is in the suth f China. The weather is warm. There are many trees and flwers. The peple are friendly. I like my hmetwn very much. I ften g t the park with my friends. We play games there. We have a gd time. I think my hmetwn is the best place t live.
改写要求：
至少 3 处将简单句合并并列 / 复合句
添加不少于 4 个逻辑连接词
补充修饰成分丰富细节
使用至少一处非谓语动词结构
习作 B
My schl is big. It has many trees. It has a big playgrund. I like my schl. I g t schl at 7:30. I have fur classes in the mrning. I have three classes in the afternn. I ften play basketball after class. I g hme at 5:30. I d my hmewrk in the evening. I g t bed at 9:30.
改写要求：同上
习作 C
My favurite seasn is spring. Spring is warm. Flwers blm. Trees turn green. Birds sing. I like spring. I can g utside. I can fly kites. I can ride bikes. I feel happy. Spring is the best seasn.
改写要求：同上
习作 D
The Internet is very useful. It helps us get infrmatin. It helps us cmmunicate. We can learn nline. We can shp nline. We can watch vides nline. But we shuld be careful. Sme infrmatin is nt true. Sme peple cheat nline. We shuld use the Internet wisely.
改写要求：同上
习作 E
I have a dream. I want t be a pilt. Pilts fly planes. They travel t many places. They see the wrld. I will study hard. I will learn English well. I will practice flying. I believe my dream will cme true. I will be prud.
改写要求：同上原句
修改句
修改理由
The weather is warm. There are many trees and flwers.
The weather is warm, and there are many trees and flwers.
两句均描述家乡优势，and 并列连接，逻辑更紧密
The peple are friendly. I like my hmetwn very much.
The peple are friendly, s I like my hmetwn very much.
前半句为原因，后半句为结果，s 表因果
原句（并列句）
修改（复合句）
修改理由
The peple here are friendly, s I feel at hme.
The peple here are s friendly that I feel at hme.
s…that 引导结果状语从句，强化因果逻辑
I think my hmetwn is the best place t live.
I really think my hmetwn is the best place t live.
增加程度副词 really，加强情感表达
原句
修改句
修改理由
I ften g t the park with my friends. We play games there.
I ften g t the park with my friends t play games.
不定式 t d 表目的，精简句式，替代并列短句
I think my hmetwn is the best place t live.
I think my hmetwn is a great place t live in.
不定式作后置定语，修饰 place，语法完整
原句
修改句
修改理由
My hmetwn is a small city.
My hmetwn is a small city in the suth f China.
介词短语作后置定语，合并原文第二句话
I ften g t the park with my friends.
I ften g t the park with my friends n weekends.
添加时间状语，内容更具体详实
原句
修改句
修改理由
I think my hmetwn is the best place t live.
I think my hmetwn is ne f the mst beautiful cities in China.
最高级结构增强语言表现力
连接词
使用位置
first(ly) / t begin with
段首
secnd(ly) / in additin / besides
段首 / 句中
finally / last but nt least
段首
连接词
使用位置
hwever
句首 / 句中，前后常用逗号分隔
althugh / thugh
句首 / 句中，引导让步状语从句
n the ther hand
段首
连接词
使用位置
because / since / as
句首 / 句中（后接完整从句）
s / therefre
句中 / 句首
because f / thanks t
句首 / 句中（后接名词 / 名词短语）
连接词
使用位置
fr example / fr instance
句首 / 句中，后接完整句子
such as
句中，后接名词 / 名词短语
连接词
使用位置
in cnclusin / all in all
段尾段首，用于收尾总结
常见错误类型
错误示例
正确使用方法
过度堆砌
First…Secnd…Third…Finally… 全文机械罗列
单段仅使用 1—2 个连接词，精简搭配
逻辑搭配错误
He was ill. Hwever, he didn't g t schl.
表因果改用 Therefre / As a result
重复用词
全文多次重复 besides
交替使用 in additin、mrever、what's mre
标点位置错误
She was tired, hwever she kept wrking.
拆分两句：She was tired. Hwever, she kept wrking.
参考答案与解析
过关一・基础达标
一、简单句合并（并列 / 复合句）
I like reading bks, and my sister likes watching mvies.（and 表并列）
Althugh he is very tired, he keeps wrking. / He is very tired, but he keeps wrking.（but/althugh 表转折）
The by wh is standing there is my brther.（wh 引导定语从句）
Althugh it was raining, they went ut fr a walk. / It was raining, but they went ut fr a walk.（让步 / 转折）
She gt up late, s she missed the first bus. / Because she gt up late, she missed the first bus.（因果）
I think (that) he is a gd student.（that 引导宾语从句，that 可省略）
The bk is s interesting that I want t read it again.（s…that 结果状语从句）
Althugh he is very pr, he is very happy. / He is very pr, but he is very happy.（转折 / 让步）
I will wait here until yu cme back.（until 时间状语从句）
Althugh she is nly 10 years ld, she speaks English very well. / She is nly 10 years ld, but she speaks English very well.（让步转折）
二、连接词单选
A 解析：前半句疲惫是原因，早睡是结果，s 表因果；but 转折，because 接原因从句，hwever 转折。
B 解析：努力学习因此通过考试，therefre 表 “因此”；hwever 转折，althugh 让步，because 引导原因从句。
D 解析：后接名词短语，such as 用于举例；fr example/fr instance 后接完整句子。
A 解析：in cnclusin 用于段落结尾总结观点；其余无总结含义。
C 解析：年纪小但懂得多，althugh 引导让步状语从句。
B 解析：固定搭配 On the ne hand…On the ther hand 一方面…… 另一方面。
D 解析：生病因此没上学，therefre 表因果。
C 解析：thanks t 多亏，后接名词短语，贴合感恩语境；because/as 后接从句，due t 侧重客观原因。
B 解析：后接名词短语列举科目，such as 为写作正式举例用词。
A 解析：all in all 总而言之，用于文末总结。
过关二・能力提升
三、句型改写
I like this city because I want t live here.（because 引导原因状语从句）
He gt up early t catch the first bus.（不定式 t d 表目的）
He is a kind man wh always helps thers.（wh 定语从句修饰 man）
She wrked s hard that she passed the exam.（s…that 结果状语从句）
I like neither this mvie nr the music.（neither…nr 连接并列宾语）
四、段落润色参考范文
原稿 A 改写范文
I lve my schl life s much. Every mrning, I get up at 6:30 and ride my bike t schl. At schl, I have fur classes in the mrning and three in the afternn. After schl, I ften play basketball with my classmates, which is a wnderful way t relax myself. Then I head hme at 5:30. In the evening, I finish my hmewrk first, and then I watch TV fr half an hur. Finally, I g t bed at 9:30. All in all, my schl life is busy but meaningful.
原稿 B 改写范文
My best friend is Tm, wh is a 14-year-ld tall by. He is warm-hearted, s he ften helps me with my weak subjects. We g t schl, play basketball and have lunch tgether every day. Thanks t his help, my grades have imprved a lt. I treasure ur friendship because he is such a reliable friend standing beside me all the time.
原稿 C 改写范文
There are fur members in my warm family: my parents, my sister and me. My father wrks as a dctr in a lcal hspital, while my mther is an English teacher at a middle schl. My sister is a Grade Nine student, and I am als a student. Althugh we are all busy with ur daily wrk and study, we care abut each ther deeply. All in all, I live in a lving and happy family.
原稿 D 改写范文
I dream f becming a teacher in the future because teachers play an imprtant rle in guiding students t learn and grw. T realize this dream, I will keep studying hard and absrb mre knwledge. Besides, I will treat every student kindly and design lively classes t attract their interest. In cnclusin, with cnstant effrts, I firmly believe I can becme an excellent teacher.
原稿 E 改写范文
Last weekend, I paid a visit t the city z tgether with my parents. We saw varius lvely animals, such as cute pandas, funny mnkeys and huge elephants. The pandas lked lazy but adrable, while mnkeys jumped arund t make us laugh. We felt s jyful that we tk plenty f phts t recrd this happy trip. All in all, we enjyed urselves a lt that day.
过关三・综合突破（整篇改写范文）
习作 A 升级范文
My hmetwn is a small city which lies in the suth f China. Thanks t its mild warm climate, green trees and clrful flwers can be seen everywhere. What’s mre, lcal peple are extremely friendly and plite. That’s why I fall in lve with my hmetwn deeply.
On weekends, I ften g t the city park with my friends t play different games, such as badmintn and frisbee. Besides playing games, we walk alng the lake and share interesting stries with each ther. Every time we hang ut, we have unfrgettable fun.
In cnclusin, I think my hmetwn is ne f the mst cmfrtable places t live in. Althugh it is nt a big mdern city, it fills my life with beauty and warmth.
习作 B 升级范文
My schl is large and beautiful, with lts f green trees and a wide playgrund. I lve my schl deeply because I spend my busy but jyful schl days here.
I arrive at schl at 7:30 every mrning. I have fur lessns in the mrning and three in the afternn. After class, I ften play basketball with my classmates t release pressure. Then I g back hme at 5:30. In the evening, I finish my hmewrk befre watching shrt vides, and I finally g t bed at 9:30. All in all, I cherish every day at schl.
习作 C 升级范文
Spring is my favrite seasn, when the weather turns warm gradually. Flwers blm everywhere, trees turn fresh green and birds sing sweet sngs in branches. Because f the pleasant weather, I can g utside t fly kites and ride bikes with my clse friends. Every time I enjy the beautiful spring scenery, I feel relaxed and cheerful. In cnclusin, spring is the mst lvely seasn all year rund.
习作 D 升级范文
The Internet brings us great cnvenience because it allws us t cllect infrmatin and cmmunicate with distant peple easily. We can take nline curses, shp fr daily gds and watch all kinds f vides n it, which greatly simplifies ur daily life. Hwever, we have t stay alert while surfing nline, fr sme false infrmatin and nline cheats exist everywhere. Therefre, it’s necessary fr us t make gd use f the Internet. In cnclusin, the Internet is a pwerful tl that we shuld use prperly and wisely.
习作 E 升级范文
I have a lifelng dream that I want t becme a pilt in the future. Pilts cntrl planes, travel arund the wrld and enjy amazing glbal views, which sunds extremely attractive t me. T make my dream cme true, I will keep studying hard, master English well and learn prfessinal flying skills step by step. Althugh the training will be tugh, I still hld the belief that I will succeed thrugh persistent effrts. When my dream cmes true ne day, I will be prud f myself.