【新教材】沪教版（2024）七年级下册英语：Unit 1~4作文 专项测试卷（含答案+范文）

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【新教材】沪教版（2024）七年级下册英语：Unit 1~4作文 专项测试卷试卷满分：100分 时长：90分钟班级：__________ 姓名：__________ 得分：__________考试说明：本试卷聚焦沪教版七年级英语下册 Unit 1-4 核心写作知识点，针对各单元主题开展专项训练与综合拔高，全面考查学生书面表达能力。一、单元专项训练（共4小题，每小题15分，满分60分）1. Unit 1 People around us（我们身边的人）题目：请以 A Person I Like 为题，为学校英文网站投稿，介绍一位陪伴你成长、让你喜爱的人（家人、老师、社区人物均可）。内容要点：内容要点：人物的身份与职业；人物的外貌与性格特征；人物常做的事或常说的话；你对该人物的情感与看法。写作要求：写作要求：涵盖全部要点，可适当合理发挥；正确使用定冠词 the，语法规范；词数80词左右，语言流畅，情感真挚。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. Unit 2 Travelling around the world（环游世界）题目：假设你是李华，今年暑假前往杭州西溪国家湿地公园旅行。请写一张明信片给你的美国朋友 Susan，分享你的旅行见闻与感受。内容要点：内容要点：公园的位置与面积；公园的环境价值（享有“地球之肾”的美誉）；你在公园参与的游玩活动、品尝的特色美食；邀请对方来中国游玩。写作要求：写作要求：包含所有要点，适当补充细节，内容完整；明信片格式正确，语言自然地道；词数80词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Unit 3 Trees and us（树木与我们）题目：深圳获评“国家森林城市”，绿色是这座城市的标志性底色。请以 Green Shenzhen 为题，介绍深圳的绿化优势，呼吁大家守护绿色家园。内容要点：内容要点：深圳绿化相关数据（植物覆盖率、绿道长度等）；城市公园的类型及主要功能；市民亲近自然、绿色生活的日常场景；发出环保倡议，呼吁守护绿色城市。写作要求：写作要求：数据合理，内容充实完整；正确使用连接词，行文逻辑清晰；词数80-100词，结尾呼吁有力。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Unit 4 Our animal friends（我们的动物朋友）题目：动物是人类的好朋友，很多动物能为人类提供帮助、守护人类。请以 A Helpful Animal 为题，介绍一种乐于助人的动物，展现人与动物的温情。内容要点：内容要点：动物在人类生活中的重要作用；该动物帮助人类的具体事例（如导盲犬、搜救犬等）；该动物的优秀品质（忠诚、聪明、勇敢等）；呼吁大家保护动物，与动物和谐共处。写作要求：写作要求：紧扣主题，恰当使用反身代词（by itself, take care of himself 等）；事例具体，细节生动，语法规范；词数80词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、综合专项训练（共2小题，每小题20分，满分40分）5. 综合一：跨单元叙事写作（融合Unit 1 & Unit 4）题目：人与动物相伴相守，温暖又治愈。请结合身边的人与动物朋友的主题，讲述一个 人与动物共同守护 的温暖故事。内容要点：内容要点：故事背景：介绍核心人物与对应的动物角色；核心情节：详细描写动物助人、人与动物互动的关键细节；情感升华：谈谈你的感悟，呼吁关爱身边的人与动物。写作要求：写作要求：文体为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主；情节完整，运用连接词串联全文，细节生动；词数100-120词，语言流畅，情感真挚。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.综合二：主题论述写作（融合Unit 2 & Unit 3）题目：请以 Travel in a Green Way 为题，写一篇短文，阐述绿色旅行的意义与践行方式，倡导人与自然和谐共生。内容要点：内容要点：解释绿色旅行的含义及重要意义；列举常见的绿色旅行方式（徒步、骑行、游览自然保护区等）；阐述旅行中保护环境的具体做法；发出倡议，呼吁践行绿色旅行，守护地球家园。写作要求：写作要求：文体为说明文，结构清晰、逻辑分明；活用单元核心词汇与句型（play an important role, protect... from 等）；词数100-120词，观点明确，富有号召力。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、作文评分标准内容完整性30%：涵盖题目所有要点，细节充实，主题突出，无内容缺失、偏题现象，完整贴合单元写作主题要求。语言准确性30%：语法时态正确，单元核心词汇、句型运用恰当，熟练掌握指定语法（定冠词、反身代词等），句式丰富多样，拼写、标点错误极少。结构逻辑性25%：段落层次分明，过渡词使用自然恰当，行文流畅连贯，完全贴合对应文体格式与写作规范，整体结构清晰。情感与规范15%：情感真挚、观点积极正向，严格符合词数要求，书写工整、格式规范，深度贴合单元主题核心内涵。参考答案一、单元专项训练题范文1. Unit 1：A Person I LikeA Person I LikeMy favourite person is my English teacher, Miss Li. She is in her thirties and has long curly hair. She is always kind and patient with us.Miss Li works very hard. She prepares lessons carefully every day and always uses interesting games to make English learning fun. When we have difficulties, she never gets angry. Instead, she explains things again and again until we understand. She often says, "Never give up, and you will make progress."I really like Miss Li. She not only teaches me English but also teaches me to be brave and confident. She is like a light in my life, guiding me to grow better.点评：范文紧扣 “身边的人” 主题，清晰介绍老师的身份、外貌、工作态度和对自己的影响，情感真挚。运用了定冠词 the（如 the English teacher）、连接词 instead 等，符合单元语法要求，词数控制在 80 词左右，结构完整。2.Unit 2：Postcard to SusanDear Susan,How are you? I'm writing to tell you about my wonderful trip to Hangzhou Xixi National Wetland Park this summer.The park is in Hangzhou, Zhejiang. It covers an area of about 11.5 square kilometers and is called the "Kidney of the Earth" because it plays a key role in improving the environment.There, I enjoyed the beautiful natural scenery and took a boat ride on the river. I also tried delicious local food. It was so relaxing!I really hope you can come to China one day. We can visit this park together and have more fun.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua点评：范文符合明信片的格式要求，内容涵盖公园位置、面积、环境价值、旅行活动和邀请，要点齐全。语言自然流畅，运用了简单句和复合句，词数约 80 词，贴合七年级学生的表达能力，同时传递了旅行的快乐与邀请的真诚。3.Unit 3：Green ShenzhenGreen ShenzhenShenzhen is a beautiful "National Forest City". The city's green coverage rate is over 40%, and there are more than 1,200 kilometers of greenways. People can easily enjoy nature here.In Shenzhen, there are many kinds of parks. City parks are great places for families to relax on weekends. Country parks are perfect for hiking and camping. Every morning, you can see people running, doing yoga or walking their pets in the parks.Green Shenzhen makes our life healthier and happier. Let's work together to protect the trees and plants. We should never cut down trees and try to plant more trees. In this way, we can keep our city green forever!点评：范文紧扣 “绿色深圳” 主题，准确运用绿化数据，介绍了公园类型和市民的绿色生活场景，结尾发出环保倡议。运用了连接词 and、perfect for 等表达，逻辑清晰，词数在 80-100 词之间，符合写作要求，同时体现了环保意识。4.Unit 4：A Helpful AnimalA Helpful AnimalAnimals are our best friends. They play an important role in our lives. One of the most helpful animals is the guide dog.Guide dogs are very smart and loyal. They help blind people live independently. For example, a guide dog can lead its owner to cross the road safely. It can also help its owner avoid dangers. The owner can take care of himself with the help of the dog.Guide dogs are trained to work hard. They never leave their owners alone. They are not only animals but also members of the family.We should love and protect all animals. They are our important partners. Let's live in harmony with them!点评：范文聚焦导盲犬这一帮助人类的动物，清晰阐述了其重要性、帮助场景和优秀品质，正确使用了反身代词 himself，符合单元语法要求。内容紧扣主题，呼吁保护动物，词数约 80 词，语言简洁规范，逻辑连贯。二、综合专项训练题范文5. 综合题一：跨单元叙事写作My Grandpa and His Guide DogLast winter, an unforgettable story happened between my grandpa and his guide dog, Lucky.Grandpa is blind. Lucky is his loyal guide dog. One afternoon, when Grandpa was walking in the park, he suddenly fell down and couldn't stand up. Lucky barked loudly to call for help. At that time, I was nearby. I heard the bark and ran to Grandpa quickly.With Lucky's help, I found Grandpa and called my parents. Lucky stayed by Grandpa's side all the time. Soon, Grandpa was sent to the hospital safely.This story taught me the deep friendship between humans and animals. We should not only take care of the people around us but also protect our animal friends.点评：范文以记叙文的形式，结合 Unit 1（身边的人）和 Unit 4（动物朋友）的主题，讲述了爷爷和导盲犬的暖心故事。情节完整，包含背景、关键情节和情感升华，时态以一般过去时为主，运用了连接词 when、at that time 等，逻辑清晰，词数约 100 词，情感真挚，符合写作要求。综合题二：主题论述写作Travel in a Green WayNowadays, green travel is becoming more and more important. It not only helps protect the environment but also makes our trips more meaningful.There are many ways to travel in a green way. For example, we can walk or ride bikes for short trips. This can reduce air pollution. We can also choose to visit nature reserves instead of crowded cities. When we travel, we should never throw litter everywhere. We should protect the plants and animals around us.Green travel plays a key role in keeping our earth beautiful. Let's start with small things. By traveling in a green way, we can enjoy nature and protect our home at the same time.点评：范文紧扣 “绿色旅行” 主题，清晰阐述了绿色旅行的意义、实践方法和环保呼吁，结构分明。运用了单元核心词汇和句型，如 play a key role in、protect...from，逻辑严谨，词数约 100 词，符合说明文的写作要求，具有较强的号召力，贴合综合题的写作目标。便字第 号