高考英语二轮-英语作文之图画图表类（专项训练）（上海专用）（教师版）

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\l "_Tc20184" 02 核心突破练
\l "_Tc5699" 03 真题溯源练

01 （上海市杨浦区2024-2025学年高三上学期12月模拟质量调研英语试卷）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生李华，最近参加了一个研究性学习项目，在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查。根据下表调查结果，撰写调查报告，内容需包括：
1.简要描述数据；
2.分析原因；
3.提出建议。
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【答案】
Reprt n High Schl Students' Career Planning Awareness
As a student at Mingqi High, I cnducted a survey n “High Schl Students’ Awareness and Preparatin fr Future Career Planning.” The results shwed that 40% f senirs have a clear career plan, 30% have received guidance, but nly 20% have engaged in career-related activities.
Several factrs culd cntribute t these findings. Firstly, the lack f cmprehensive career guidance prgrams may hinder students’ ability t develp clear career plans. Secndly, limited pprtunities fr extracurricular career activities restrict students’ expsure t varius career paths.
T address these issues, I recmmend that schls enhance their career guidance prgrams by ffering mre regular and cmprehensive wrkshps. Additinally, encuraging students t participate in extracurricular career activities can braden their hrizns and prvide valuable insights. Cllabratin with lcal businesses fr internships and mentring prgrams can further enrich students’ practical experiences and help them make infrmed career decisins. By strengthening career supprt systems and increasing practical expsure, we can better prepare students fr their future careers.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表写作。假设你是明启中学的学生李华，最近参加了一个研究性学习项目，在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查，要求考生根据调查结果，撰写调查报告。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
组织：cnduct→rganize
显示：shw→present
解决：address→slve
建议：recmmend→suggest
2. 句式拓展
合并为复合句
原句：T address these issues, I recmmend that schls enhance their career guidance prgrams by ffering mre regular and cmprehensive wrkshps. Additinally, encuraging students t participate in extracurricular career activities can braden their hrizns and prvide valuable insights.
拓展句：T address these issues, I recmmend that schls nt nly enhance their career guidance prgrams by ffering mre regular and cmprehensive wrkshps but als encurage students t participate in extracurricular career activities, which can braden their hrizns and prvide valuable insights.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The results shwed that 40% f senirs have a clear career plan, 30% have received guidance, but nly 20% have engaged in career-related activities.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]T address these issues, I recmmend that schls enhance their career guidance prgrams by ffering mre regular and cmprehensive wrkshps.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
02 （2023届上海市建平中学高三下学期三模考试英语试题）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：
1.简要描述图表；
2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；
3.你的理由。
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【答案】 Recently, ur schl cnducted a survey n the tpic f whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence. 10% f respndents were unsure. 34% said they thught teachers wuld be replaced by artificial intelligence, while 56% said n.
Persnally speaking, teachers wn’t be replaced by artificial intelligence. Because in additin t teaching students knwledge, teachers have a mre imprtant missin, which is t educate peple. In terms f educating peple, teachers pssess qualities that cannt be replaced by artificial intelligence. Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdm, knwing hw t imperceptibly int the excellent quality f educatin.
Besides, artificial intelligence is nly a partial replacement f teachers’ labr, and cannt replace the rle f teachers. This is because althugh rbts have cmmunicatin functins such as dialgue and mvement, they are far frm the rich and delicate feelings f human beings.
That is t say, the pssibility f teachers being replaced is very small, and teachers becme ne f the jbs that artificial intelligence is difficult t replace.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代； 3.你的理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
取代：replace→supersede
拥有：pssess→take pssessin f
重要的：imprtant→significant
也就是说：that is t say=in ther wrds
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdm, knwing hw t imperceptibly int the excellent quality f educatin.
拓展句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdm, wh knw hw t imperceptibly int the excellent quality f educatin.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Because in additin t teaching students knwledge, teachers have a mre imprtant missin, which is t educate peple. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdm, knwing hw t imperceptibly int the excellent quality f educatin. (运用了现在分词作状语)

01 （上海市浦东新区2021届高三下学期第二次模拟英语）
某校针对高一新生进行了“拓展课”（extensive curses）的问卷调查。下面是拓展课选课原因的比例分布图。请简要描述图表，并结合自己选课经历（1-2门拓展课），说明选择的原因。(注意：不要出现学校名字)
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【答案】Recently, a survey n extensive curses has been made t find the reasns why students chse certain curses. And belw are the results.
As the chart shws, abut 50 percent students surveyed chse a certain curse in rder t develp their wn interest while 40 percent are t enlarge their knwledge. Less than 10 percent chse a curse with the aim f cnslidating their subject knwledge and preparing fr exams.
Frm my persnal experience, I can see why. I nce chse Rbt Prgramming as my extensive curse. That is because I have shwed interest in cmputer and rbts since in elementary schl. I hld the firm belief that interest is the best teacher, and my future career is sure t be cmbined with prgramming. Therefre, Rbt Prgramming became my extensive curse.
【分析】本文属于图表作文，要求对拓展课选课原因的调查结果进行描述，并且结合自身的经历说明其原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：in rder t→ with the aim f
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ shw interest in
小学：primary schl→ elementary schl
认为：believe→ hld the belief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I nce chse Rbt Prgramming as my extensive curse. That is because I have shwed interest in cmputer and rbts since in elementary schl.
拓展句：The reasn why I nce chse Rbt Prgramming as my extensive curse is that I have shwed interest in cmputer and rbts since in elementary schl.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, a survey n extensive curses has been made t find the reasns why students chse certain curses. (运用了why引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hld the firm belief that interest is the best teacher, and my future career is sure t be cmbined with prgramming. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
02 （2025届上海市松江区高三下学期二模英语试卷）
你是新华中学学生，你校英文报正进行主题为My Favrite Cartn Character的征文活动。请撰写征文，在征文中：
1）表明你最喜欢的卡通角色(可参考下图或另选其他)；
2）简述该角色最打动你的瞬间；
3）谈谈该角色对你的影响。
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【答案】 My Favrite Cartn Character
Amng all the cartn characters, my favrite ne is Ne Zha. I’m deeply attracted by his rebellius spirit and his curage t face difficulties.
The mment that tuches me mst is when Ne Zha decides t sacrifice himself t save his parents and the peple in his hmetwn. Despite being misunderstd and facing great pressure, he still chses t shulder the respnsibility.
Ne Zha has had a prfund impact n me. He teaches me t be brave in the face f challenges and t never give up easily. Whenever I encunter difficulties in my studies r daily life, I think f Ne Zha’s spirit and gain the strength t mve frward. In a wrd, Ne Zha is nt nly a cartn character t me, but als a rle mdel that encurages me t be a better persn.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以新华中学学生的身份，撰写一篇征文介绍自己最喜欢的卡通角色、打动自己的瞬间及该角色对自己产生的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
吸引：attract→draw
牺牲：sacrifice→give up ne’s life
面对：face→be faced with
获得：gain→attain
2.句式拓展：
同义句
原句：The mment that tuches me mst is when Ne Zha decides t sacrifice himself t save his parents and the peple in his hmetwn.
拓展句：What tuches me mst is the mment when Ne Zha decides t sacrifice himself t save his parents and the peple in his hmetwn.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The mment that tuches me mst is when Ne Zha decides t sacrifice himself t save his parents and the peple in his hmetwn.（运用了that引导的定语从句修饰the mment以及when引导的表语从句）
【高分句型 2】Whenever I encunter difficulties in my studies r daily life, I think f Ne Zha’s spirit and gain the strength t mve frward.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句）

（2015·上海·高考真题）
学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is arund the crner, I’m writing t recmmend a picture which can be used in the brchure t remind the students f the pleasure f reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin. Thugh it is admitted that reading is mstly a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin, as far as I’m cncerned, it can als be a sharing experience when the same bk is being appreciated. Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry with fascinating and intricate plts. Yu are s amazed by the genius f the writer and yu can’t help sharing it with yur classmates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply impressed as well. The mment yu mentin the bk, the passin and enthusiasm abut the stry will explde which can never be gained n yur wn. My ideal atmsphere f reading is just like that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultimately enhance yur understanding f the bk. T sum up, the reasn f my recmmendatin is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead f being dull and islating, can be full f participatin and cmmn interest.
I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestin int cnsideratin and I’m lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Pan Yang
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐自己找到的三幅“读书节”宣传册图片中的一副。
【详解】1.词汇积累
将……考虑在内：take…int cnsideratin→take…int accunt
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
提高：enhance→prmte
错综复杂的：intricate→cmplicated
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry with fascinating and intricate plts.
拓展句：Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry which has fascinating and intricate plts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Yu are s amazed by the genius f the writer and yu can’t help sharing it with yur classmates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply impressed as well.(运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
Ne Zha
Mulan
The Little Prince
Draemn
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