高考英语二轮-求助信(专项训练)(天津专用)(教师版)
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\l "_Tc20184" 02 求助信常用句型
\l "_Tc5699" 03 求助信示例仿写
\l "_Tc20184" 04 真题模拟融合练
求助信常用表达
求助信常用句型
(一)补全句子
1. I dn't feel quite accustmed t the life here, and I seem nt t be able t fit in well with thers.
我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活,而且我似乎不能与他人融洽相处。
2. I lng t study English well, but I dn't knw hw, which makes me upset.
我渴望学好英语,但我不知道怎么学,这使我感到烦恼。
3. I can't cncentrate n my study these days, and I failed in the last exam, which wrries me a lt.
这些日子我不能专心学习,上次考试我没有及格,这使我很担忧。
4. I ften feel left ut in this schl, and I dn't knw hw it has cme abut.
在这所学校我经常觉得受到冷落,我不知这是怎么回事。
5. I'm s pr at English that I can't make myself understd.
我的英语不好,他们听不懂我的话。
(二)翻译句子
1.我曾试着减肥,但是毫无效果,这使我很沮丧。
I tried lsing weight, but nthing wrked, which frustrated me a lt.
2.我现在压力很大,能劳烦你给我一些减压的建议吗?
I feel greatly stressed nw, s wuld yu be kind enugh t ffer me sme advice n hw t relieve stress?
3.面对如此有挑战性的难题,我别无选择只得向你求助。
Faced with s challenging a prblem, I have n alternative but t turn t yu fr help.
求助信示例仿写
1. 示例
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教 Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间、地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
【布局思路】
【高分范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
Hw is everything ging? I'm writing t seek help frm yu regarding a shrt play we have adapted frm ur textbk.
The play is abut hw mney influences peple's attitudes t thers. Hwever, we are still uncertain whether the plt is cmplete. Besides, we are eager t knw hw t crrect ur tne and prnunciatin in rder t perfrm the play perfectly. Therefre, I was wndering if it was cnvenient fr yu t give us sme guidance at ten am this Saturday in the schl hall.
I’d appreciate it if yu culd d us a favr.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操
假定你是李华,是一名刚转学不久的学生。你在新的学习环境中遇到了很多问题。你现在写邮件向你的好友 Jack求助,倾诉一下你的苦恼。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
【写作实践】
Dear Jack,
It seems ages since I last saw yu. Hw are yu getting n?
These days I feel very wrried. I dn't feel quite accustmed t the new schl life and I find it hard t fit in well with my new classmates. Wrse still, I seem nt t be able t cncentrate my attentin in class, and I find myself behind thers in study. I ften feel left ut by my teachers and classmates, which makes me very upset.
I really dn't knw hw t get ver all this. Wuld yu please give me sme advice?
Yurs,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华,打算高中毕业后学习文学,但你的父母要求你学习金融。请给你的英国朋友 Jack写封邮件,倾诉你的苦恼并寻求他的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging? I'm faced with a difficult situatin nw and I'm writing t ask fr yur advice.
As a senir, I'd like t chse literature as my majr after graduating frm high schl. Hwever, my parents are ppsed t my chice, insisting that I shuld majr in finance fr a mre prmising future. T be hnest, I have been in lve with literature since childhd and it's really hard fr me t accept my parents' idea. What shuld I d? Culd yu give me sme advice?
Yur suggestins will be highly appreciated. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
真题模拟融合练
1.(2024·天津南开·一模)假定你是高三学生李津,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Chris写封邮件,请他帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
(1)剧情简介;
(2)指导内容;
(3)商定时间地点。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I am Li Jin, and I’m writing t ask if yu culd help me and my classmates in changing ur text int a shrt play.
Our play will be based n the text “hrse”. The text tells a stry f a king and an artist. In the stry, the king asked the artist t draw him a beautiful hrse. But the artist misunderstd the king, and in the end the king frgave him because f his effrt. My classmates and I are struggling with the lines f the play, as we always stumble ver prnun citatins. We will have a rehearsal next Wednesday afternn in the schl hall, and I hpe yu can cme and give us sme advice.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧,要求考生给外教Chris写封邮件,请他帮忙指导。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
改编:change→adapt
要求:ask→request
因为:because f→due t
2. 句式拓展
简单句合并为复合句
原句:Our play will be based n the text “hrse”. The text tells a stry f a king and an artist.
拓展句:Our play, which will be based n the text titled “hrse”, tells a cmpelling stry abut a king and an artist.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am Li Jin, and I’m writing t ask if yu culd help me and my classmates in changing ur text int a shrt play.(if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]My classmates and I are struggling with the lines f the play, as we always stumble ver prnun citatins.(as引导的原因状语从句)
2.(2025·广东·模拟预测)假定你是李华,即将高三毕业,请你写封信就如何选择职业向校英语报纸编辑王老师求助。信的内容包括:
1. 个人倾向及原因;
2. 个人理想与父母期待不一致;
3. 困惑及请求帮助。
注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a Senir 3 student wh is abut t graduate frm schl.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a Senir 3 student wh is abut t graduate frm schl. I’m writing t ask fr yur advice n chsing a career, as I’m nw facing a difficult dilemma. I’ve always been passinate abut envirnmental science because I believe prtecting the planet is crucial fr future generatins, and I dream f wrking in this field t make a difference.
Hwever, my parents hld a different view: they think I shuld pursue a career in medicine, which they cnsider mre stable and rewarding. Thugh I understand their cncerns, I’m wrried that chsing a path I dn’t lve will make me regret it later.
I’m really cnfused abut hw t balance my wn aspiratins with my parents’ expectatins. Culd yu please give me sme practical suggestins? I wuld be grateful fr yur help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 要求考生写一封信,就如何选择职业向校英语报纸编辑王老师求助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:advice → suggestin
选择:chse → select
重要的:crucial → imprtant
然而:hwever → nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m really cnfused abut hw t balance my wn aspiratins with my parents’ expectatins
拓展句:I’m really cnfused abut hw I can balance my wn aspiratins with my parents’ expectatins.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hwever, my parents hld a different view: they think I shuld pursue a career in medicine, which they cnsider mre stable and rewarding. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thugh I understand their cncerns, I’m wrried that chsing a path I dn’t lve will make me regret it later. (运用了thugh引导的让步状语从句、that引导的宾语从句以及省略关系代词的定语从句 )
3.(2025·山东·三模)兼职工作既可以提升个人能力,也可以缓解经济压力。假如你是李华,一名大学生,想利用暑假时间做兼职,但你的父母不同意,请你用英语在网站上发帖求助。要点包括:
1. 苦恼的问题;
2. 你和父母所持的不同观点及理由。
参考词汇:
做兼职工作 take a part-time jb与不同的人进行沟通 cmmunicate with different peple
缓解家庭的经济压力 ease the family’s financial pressure工作时的安全问题 the security in wrk
注意:
1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 词数 80~120。
June 2
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, a cllege student. ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I dn’t knw much abut taking a jb, but I think that culd be right. Dear friends, what d yu think I shuld d?
Li Hua-a cllege student
【答案】
June 2
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, a cllege student. I want t take a part-time jb this summer t imprve my skills and ease the family’s financial pressure. In additin, I can build a wide netwrk in advance. Hwever, my parents disagree. They wrry abut the security in wrk and think it might affect my studies.
On my side, a part-time jb ffers pprtunities t cmmunicate with different peple, which can bst my cnfidence and scial abilities. I als want t earn sme mney t reduce my parents’ burden. But my parents insist that summer is fr rest and study preparatin, nt wrk. They fear I might face risks r get t tired.
I dn’t knw much abut taking a jb, but I think that culd be right. Dear friends, what d yu think I shuld d?
Li Hua-a cllege student
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语在网站上发帖求助,因为想利用暑假时间做兼职,但父母不同意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:imprve→enhance
机会:pprtunities→chances
此外:in additin→what’s mre/besides
减少:reduce→decrease
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In additin, I can build a wide netwrk in advance.
拓展句:In additin, I can build a wide netwrk in advance, which will be beneficial t my study and scial life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On my side, a part-time jb ffers pprtunities t cmmunicate with different peple, which can bst my cnfidence and scial abilities. (运用了动词不定式作后置定语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】But my parents insist that summer is fr rest and study preparatin, nt wrk. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
4.(2025·河北石家庄·二模)假定你是国际学校学生李华,你所在学校打算下个月举办英语诗歌大赛,需要你来筹备,但困难重重。请你给有相关经验的留学生好友Jim写信救助。内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)你遇到的困难。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
Hw’s everything ging?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m reaching ut because I’m rganizing ur schl’s English Petry Cmpetitin next mnth, but it’s turning int a bigger challenge than I expected. Since yu’ve successfully hsted similar events, yur insights wuld mean a lt!
Despite putting up psters and sharing updates nline, nly 15 students have signed up s far — mst are senirs, while yunger grades shw n interest. The current plan includes a basic recitatin rund and a writing sessin, but feedback frm classmates suggests it’s “t predictable.” Wrst f all, the lcal pets I cntacted either lack internatinal experience r are unavailable. Culd yu give me sme valuable suggestins?
Thanks in advance fr yur wisdm!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给有相关经验的留学生好友Jim写信救助,说明写信目的以及你遇到的困难。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管:despite→in spite f
基本的:basic→primary
宝贵的:valuable→precius
建议:suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:The current plan includes a basic recitatin rund and a writing sessin, but feedback frm classmates suggests it’s “t predictable.”
拓展句:Althugh the current plan includes a basic recitatin rund and a writing sessin, feedback frm classmates suggests it’s “t predictable.”
【点睛】【高分句型1】’m reaching ut because I’m rganizing ur schl’s English Petry Cmpetitin next mnth, but it’s turning int a bigger challenge than I expected.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Since yu’ve successfully hsted similar events, yur insights wuld mean a lt!(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
5.(2025·贵州黔东南·一模)假定你是李华,你校计划举办一场主题为“科技创新与青少年发展”的科技展览,并希望通过英文网站将其展示给更多人。请你写一封邮件给你的外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年,内容包括:
1. 阐明写信事由;
2. 征求建议;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Chris,
I hpe yu’re ding well! I’m writing t ask fr yur help. Our schl is planning a technlgy exhibitin n the theme f “Technlgy Innvatin and Yuth Develpment”. We want t share it n an English website t attract mre peple, especially teenagers frm different cuntries.
Culd yu please tell me which technlgy tpics are the mst interesting t freign teen-agers? Fr example, are they mre interested in artificial intelligence, space explratin, r maybe smething else? Als, d yu have any suggestins n hw t make the exhibitin mre engaging and interactive fr a glbal audience?
Yur advice wuld be really helpful and much appreciated.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Chris写一封邮件,向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
寻求帮助:ask fr yur help→seek yur help
吸引:attract→appeal t
此外:als→besides
建议:suggestin→advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our schl is planning a technlgy exhibitin n the theme f “Technlgy Innvatin and Yuth Develpment”.
拓展句:Our schl is planning a technlgy exhibitin, the theme f which is “Technlgy Innvatin and Yuth Develpment”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Culd yu please tell me which technlgy tpics are the mst interesting t freign teen-agers?(运用了which引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Als, d yu have any suggestins n hw t make the exhibitin mre engaging and interactive fr a glbal audience?(运用了“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
汉译
英文表达
习惯了的
accustmed
焦急的
anxius
尴尬的
embarrassed
失望的
disappinted
使烦扰;使不安
bther
困惑的
cnfused
烦恼的
upset
受挫的;沮丧的
frustrated
恼怒的
annyed
焦虑的;有压力的
stressed
帮助
assistance
指导
guidance
与……相处融洽
fit in with
习惯于
get used/ accustmed t
使自己适应
adjust/ adapt neself t
做某事有困难
have truble/ difficulty ding sth.
徒劳地
in vain
帮某人一个忙
d sb. a favr
紧缺
be/ run shrt f
向……呼吁
appeal t
1.写作任务:写邮件给外教 Miss Evans,请她帮忙指导根据英语课文改编的短剧。
2.写作要素:(1)剧情简介;(2)指导内容;(3)商定时间、地点。
3.细节丰满:(1)构思短剧的剧情,比如这个短剧是根据课本提到的《百万英镑》改编的,主要是金钱影响人们对他人的态度;(2)构思指导内容,可以对改编的剧情是否完整进行指导,也可以指导同学们的发音;(3)商定指导的时间和地点,比如本周六上午十点在学校礼堂进行指导。
[行文思路]
第一段:说明写信目的。
第二段:简介剧情,说明需要得到哪些方面的指导,商定指导的时间和地点。
第三段:希望得到帮助。
[中文内容]
一切都好吗?我写信是想就一个短剧来寻求你的帮助,这个短剧是我们根据课本内容改编的。
这个短剧讲述的是金钱如何影响人们对他人的态度。然而,我们仍然不确定情节是否完整。此外,为了完美地表演这个短剧,我们特别想知道如何纠正我们的语调和发音。因此,不知你是否方便于本周六上午十点在学校礼堂给我们一些指导?
如果你能帮我们一个忙,我将不胜感激。
1.写作任务:因在新的学习环境中遇到了很多问题,写邮件向好友 Jack求助,倾诉自己的苦恼。
2.写作要素:(1)倾诉苦恼;(2)寻求帮助。
3.细节丰满:构思在新的学习环境中遇到的问题,比如不适应新的学校生活,难以和同学们打成一片;在课堂上难以集中注意力,学习上落后;感到被老师和同学冷落,心情沮丧。
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