高考英语二轮-建议信（专项训练）（天津专用）（教师版）

这是一份高考英语二轮-建议信（专项训练）（天津专用）（教师版），共26页。
\l "_Tc20184" 02 建议信常用句型
\l "_Tc5699" 03 建议信示例仿写
\l "_Tc20184" 04 真题模拟融合练
建议信常用表达
建议信常用句型
（一）补全句子
1. I'm very glad t hear frm yu, and I'm writing t express my persnal views abut hw yu fit in well with yur classmates.
收到你的来信我很高兴，我写这封信是为了表达对你如何与同学融洽相处的个人看法。
2. If I were yu, I wuld try anther methd.
如果我是你，我会尝试另一种办法。
3. Yu can find sme mbile apps t learn Chinese, which are easily available n the Internet, and it is als advisable t watch Chinese films.
你可以找一些手机应用程序来学习汉语，它们在网上很容易找到，看中文电影也是可取的办法。
4. I hpe that my suggestins will be f sme help t yu.
我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。
（二）翻译句子
1.既然你如此喜欢，那为什么不参加漫画俱乐部呢?
Since yu like it s much, why nt jin the cartn club?
2.在我看来，对此抱怨是没有意义的。
In my pinin, it desn't make any sense t cmplain abut it.
3.我认为你跟他面对面地谈一谈是明智的做法。
I think it advisable fr yu t have a face-t-face talk with him.
4.有关英语学习的事情，我会尽量提出一些建议。
As fr English study, I will try t make sme suggestins.
建议信示例仿写
1. 示例
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。请给你们的外籍校长 Mr. Smith写一封邮件，建议他把学校操场后面的一大块空地开辟为菜园，并说明理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
【布局思路】
【高分范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing t suggest making use f the spare area behind ur schl playgrund.
Taking the fertile sil there int accunt, I think we can use the area t develp a schl vegetable garden. First, it will nt nly beautify the schl, but prvide a great way fr students t learn abut gardening. Besides, students will gain hands-n experience by grwing their wn fd. What's mre, it might raise sme students’ interest in agricultural science.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give my suggestin sme thught. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Rbert最近给你发了一封电子邮件，诉说了他在学校难以和他人相处的苦恼。请你用英语回复他，给他提出合理的建议并表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
【写作实践】
Dear Rbert,
I'm srry t hear yu have sme truble getting alng with yur classmates at schl. Here are sme suggestins fr yu.
Firstly, I persnally think it advisable fr yu t take an active part in all kinds f teamwrk at schl. Thus, thers will knw yu better and yu will easily make sme gd friends. Besides, in yur daily life, it's wise t be ready t help the peple arund and cmmunicate with them actively.
I hpe my suggestins can make a difference, and that everything will be all right.
Yurs,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你的朋友Lily给你来信说她最近很烦恼，因为她妈妈在未征得她同意的情况下把她的照片发到微信朋友圈（WeChat Mments）。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear Lily,
I'm srry t learn yu feel upset because yur mther is always psting yur phts n WeChat Mments withut yur permissin. I truly understand hw yu feel and I'd like t ffer my suggestin.
I think it's wise t have a face-t-face cnversatin with yur mther. Tell her abut yur true feelings and she will understand yur situatin. Persnally, if yur phts are cnstantly shared n WeChat Mments, yur privacy will be expsed t the public, which will have a bad effect n yu in the lng run.
I d hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
真题模拟融合练
1．（2025·天津·二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频，现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐拍摄主题（从节日传统、校园社团、家庭生活、科技教育任选其一）；
2.说明推荐理由及关于该主题你感兴趣的内容；
3.希望通过该视频有何收获。
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
It’s exciting t hear abut yur vide prject intrducing British life t Chinese students!
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Gd luck with yur vides!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
It’s exciting t hear abut yur vide prject intrducing British life t Chinese students! Fr yur next vide, I recmmend fcusing n English hliday traditins, specifically Thanksgiving dinner custms. This tpic is nt nly rich in cultural significance but als visually engaging, which wuld attract yur audience.
The reasn I chse this theme is that hlidays are a windw int a cuntry and its value. Thanksgiving, in particular, highlights the imprtance f family, gratitude, and cmmunity in English culture. I’m mst interested in hw families gather t prepare and share a meal, the symblic fds like turkey and pumpkin pie, and the traditin f expressing gratitude. These elements culd help Chinese students understand the cultural uniqueness f British hlidays and the emphasis n family bnds and appreciatin.
Thrugh this vide, I hpe we, Chinese students , can gain a deeper appreciatin fr the cultural diversity and values that shape British sciety. It culd als spark curisity abut hw different cultures celebrate and express gratitude in ur wn ways. Lking frward t seeing it!
Gd luck with yur vides!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频，现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
推荐：recmmend→suggest
吸引：attract→draw
表达：express→cnvey
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展：
同义句转换
原句：This tpic is nt nly rich in cultural significance but als visually engaging, which wuld attract yur audience.
拓展句：Nt nly is this tpic rich in cultural significance but it is als visually engaging, and it will surely attract yur audience.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The reasn I chse this theme is that hlidays are a windw int a cuntry and its value.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句 以及that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型 2】I’m mst interested in hw families gather t prepare and share a meal, the symblic fds like turkey and pumpkin pie, and the traditin f expressing gratitude.(运用了hw引导的宾语从句)
2．（2024·天津和平·二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国朋友Chris计划今年暑假来中国研学旅行（study tur），正在考虑选择哪所大学、参加科技项目还是文化项目，特写信向你征求建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）支持他来研学旅行：
（2）阐述需要考虑的因素（如地域，课程特色等）；
（3）研学期间相约游玩。
参考词汇：特色，专长：specialty
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I'm glad t hear that yu’re cming t China fr a study tur this summer.
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t hear that yu’re cming t China fr a study tur this summer. Since yur custms are quite different frm urs, and in rder t make yur stay here safe and cmfrtable, I’d like t give yu sme advice.
First, yu need t cnsider the lcatin f yur study tur. It is quite cld here in winter, s yu’d better wear heavy clthes when yu are ut. Additinally, yu need t learn abut the lcal custms in rder t adapt t it sn. Besides, what is the mst imprtant is the curse features. When chsing the curses, yu need t take yur specialty int accunt.
Hpe yu can have a chance t play with me and I will accmpany t sme turist attractins.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Chris计划今年暑假来中国研学旅行，正在考虑选择哪所大学、参加科技项目还是文化项目，特写信向考生征求建议，要求考生按照要求给他回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了：in rder t→ s as t
舒服的：cmfrtable→ cmfy
非常：quite→ extremely
重要的：imprtant→ significant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First, yu need t cnsider the lcatin f yur study tur.
拓展句：First, it is the lcatin f yur study tur that yu need t cnsider.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since yur custms are quite different frm urs, and in rder t make yur stay here safe and cmfrtable, I’d like t give yu sme advice.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, what is the mst imprtant is the curse features.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
3．（2024·天津滨海新·三模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你在天津的留学生朋友Chris正在策划一次为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动。他发来邮件询问你的建议，请你用英语回信，内容包括：
（1）活动形式（城市漫步、摄影展等）；
（2）推荐以上活动的理由；
（3）预祝活动成功。
参考词汇：
城市漫步 city walk 摄影展 phtgraphic exhibitin
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled t hear abut yur plan fr a week-lng event whse theme is “Beautiful Tianjin” ! I’d lve t cntribute sme thughts n hw t make it an unfrgettable experience.
A city walk wuld be a fantastic start. Imagine strlling thrugh the histric streets f Tianjin, like the Eurpean-style buildings alng the Five Avenues r the lively Ancient Culture Street. This firsthand explratin allws participants t absrb Tianjin’s unique blend f histry and mdernity, enhancing their understanding and appreciatin f the city’s heritage. Fllwing the explratin, rganize a phtgraphic exhibitin where students can exhibit their visual narratives f Tianjin. Capturing the city’s scenic riverfrnt, bustling markets, r serene parks, this platfrm encurages artistic expressin while sharing Tianjin’s beauty frm diverse perspectives.
I recmmend these activities because they ffer immersive experiences that g beynd sightseeing, nurturing a sense f belnging and fstering cnnectins amng students frm different backgrunds. I whleheartedly wish yur event t be a tremendus success.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Chris写一封回信，给他正在策划的为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感到兴奋的：thrilled→excited
活动：event→activity
展览：exhibit→display
提高：enhance→imprve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’d lve t cntribute sme thughts n hw t make it an unfrgettable experience.
拓展句：I’d lve t cntribute sme thughts n hw yu can make it an unfrgettable experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m thrilled t hear abut yur plan fr a week-lng event whse theme is “Beautiful Tianjin” !（运用了whse引导的限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Fllwing the explratin, rganize a phtgraphic exhibitin where students can exhibit their visual narratives f Tianjin.（运用了where引导的限定性定语从句）
4．（2024·天津红桥·一模）近些年，中国的春节受到了越来越多的外国人的关注与喜爱。假定你是李津，校国际部的网站正在就改版征求学生建议。你觉得这个网站缺少一个中外学生可以互动的社区功能和介绍中国文化的栏目。请你给该网站负责人写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.陈述你的理由（至少写出两点理由）。
注意：
1.词数不少于100，开头结尾已给出不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Best regards,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing t suggest that the website shuld include a cmmunity functin fr Chinese and freign students t interact and a sectin fr intrducing Chinese culture.
Firstly, it wuld allw us t cmmunicate with freign students n the website, make new friends and learn abut different cultures. It is essential fr us t have a platfrm thrugh which we can share ur wn cultural heritage with them. Secndly, the Chinese culture sectin wuld help freign students learn and understand mre abut China, and wuld als help them better adapt t the life in China, prmting inclusiveness and diversity in ur campus cmmunity.
I hpe yu can take my advice int accunt.
Best regards,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给校国际部的网站负责人写一封邮件，就其改版给出自己的建议，希望其能增加一个中外学生可以互动的社区功能和介绍中国文化的栏目。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggest→ advise
首先：firstly → first f all
必要的：essential → necessary
适应：adapt t→ get accustmed t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secndly, the Chinese culture sectin wuld help freign students learn and understand mre abut China, and wuld als help them better adapt t the life in China, prmting inclusiveness and diversity in ur campus cmmunity.
拓展句：Secndly, the Chinese culture sectin wuld help freign students learn and understand mre abut China, and wuld als help them better adapt t the life in China, which will prmte inclusiveness and diversity in ur campus cmmunity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing t suggest that the website shuld include a cmmunity functin fr Chinese and freign students t interact and a sectin fr intrducing Chinese culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It is essential fr us t have a platfrm thrugh which we can share ur wn cultural heritage with them.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
5．（2023·天津和平·二模）假设你是天津晨光中学的学生李津，你的英国笔友Chris最近给你写信告诉你他即将作为交换生来中国学习一年，他对中国的生活和学习有些担心和焦虑，请你给他回信，要点如下：
1）欢迎他来中国，钦佩他的勇气；
2）安慰他的焦虑并提出建议（生活和学习上）；
3）对他的祝愿和期待。
注意: 1.词数不少于120；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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【答案】Dear Chris,
Hw is everything ging with yu? I was s happy t hear that yu are cming t China as exchange student! It really takes a lt f curage t leave yur hme cuntry and cme t a new place, s I admire yur bravery.
I understand that yu may be feeling anxius abut yur upcming experience in China. As yur friend, I have sme suggestins that I hpe will help yu adjust t yur new life. I strngly recmmend that yu find a hst family, where yu can easily experience the real Chinese family lifestyle and can greatly help yu frm regular life rutine. In terms f yur studies, what yu are suppsed t keep in mind is that it will benefit yu a lt if yu wrk in grups. By studying with thers, nt nly can yu meet new peple but als yu can experience mre f Chinese culture.
Finally, I wish yu all the best in yur upcming adventure. I hpe that yu will have a fulfilling and enriching experience here in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设考生是天津晨光中学的学生李津，你的英国笔友Chris最近给你写信告诉你他即将作为交换生来中国学习一年，他对中国的生活和学习有些担心和焦虑，请你给他回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的：happy→pleased
钦佩、欣赏：admire→appreciate
建议：suggestin→advice
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：It really takes a lt f curage t leave yur hme cuntry and cme t a new place, s I admire yur bravery.
拓展句：What I admire is that it really takes a lt f curage t leave yur hme cuntry and cme t a new place.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand that yu may be feeling anxius abut yur upcming experience in China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】In terms f yur studies, what yu are suppsed t keep in mind is that it will benefit yu a lt if yu wrk in grups.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句）
6．（2024·天津和平·一模）假设你是李津，你的英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福（a blessing in misfrtune）”和“揠苗助长（T pull up the seedings t help them grw）”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。
1．鼓励他积极参与：
2．提供帮助（如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等）
3．表达美好的祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数不少100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hearing that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it. And I am writing t encurage yu t get prepared and g fr it!
Regarding the tpic f the speech, the idim “a blessing in misfrtune” means that smetimes we lse smething, but we may get better returns in ther aspects, while anther ne means smetimes simply being eager fr success will nly make things wrse. But as fr the speech, I d suggest yu share sme examples r persnal experiences, which can shw yur understanding f the language and als yur life here in China. In additin, pay attentin t yur prnunciatin, and try t make yur speech clear and understandable. What I strngly recmmend is t share yur persnal jurney, r similar expressins in yur culture, which will nt nly make yur speech mre authentic, but will als aruse the interest f yur audience.
Finally, I sincerely wish yu gd results in the cmpetitin. Mst imprtantly, enjy yurself!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福”和“揠苗助长”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向考生求助，要求考生按照要求给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：cnsider→ think abut
参与：participate in→ jin in
积极地：actively→ psitively
方面：aspect→ way
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it.
拓展句：Because I hear that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it.（运用了现在分词Hearing作状语、that引导的宾语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】What I strngly recmmend is t share yur persnal jurney, r similar expressins in yur culture, which will nt nly make yur speech mre authentic, but will als aruse the interest f yur audience.（运用了What引导的主语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．（24-25高三上·天津·阶段练习）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，今年是你所喜爱的英语App “Teen’s Dmain”运营五周年。在此之际，该公司向用户征集对App的建议，请你根据以下内容给运营方写一封信。内容包括：
①说明你是该App的忠实用户并表示祝贺；
②简述你喜欢该App的原因（至少两点）；
③提出你的建议（如增加有关人工智能、低碳生活的相关内容等）。
注意：①词数不少于100；②可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir r Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir r Madam,
My name is Li Jin, a lyal user f yur prduct. At the 5th anniversary f “Teen’s Dmain”, I’d like t extend my cngratulatins and gratitude fr the remarkable wrk yu’ve dne.
There are many reasns why I find “Teen’s Dmain” s impressive and appealing, amng which yur user-friendly interface plays a mst significant rle. What’s mre, I am als grateful that a number f the functins are practical and f great assistance t my English learning.
Since yu’re seeking advice frm users, I’d like t prpse sme f my ideas. First f all, it will be a gd mve t update mre cntents related t AI technlgy and lw-carbn lifestyle. In the meantime, I truly hpe mre discunts can be ffered t users because the current mnthly fee is a bit expensive fr cash-strapped students like me.
I really hpe yu will give my suggestins serius cnsideratin and that yur App will enjy further success in the years t cme.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。今年是考生所喜爱的英语App“Teen’s Dmain”运营五周年。在此之际，该公司向用户征集对App的建议，要求考生按照要求给运营方写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude → appreciatin
非凡的：remarkable → extrardinary
重要的：significant → imprtant
许多：a number f → numerus
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Jin, a lyal user f yur prduct.
拓展句：My name is Li Jin, wh is a lyal user f yur prduct.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since yu’re seeking advice frm users, I’d like t prpse sme f my ideas.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】In the meantime, I truly hpe mre discunts can be ffered t users because the current mnthly fee is a bit expensive fr cash-strapped students like me（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句、because引导的原因状语从句）
8．（24-25高三下·天津南开·阶段练习）假如你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的英国好友Chris来信说，他准备参加学校组织的运动俱乐部，征求你的意见。请你给他写一封回信。内容包括：
1. 表示支持；
2. 说明参加运动俱乐部的好处（身心健康，多种能力及未来发展等方面）；
3. 给出如何选择运动俱乐部的两条具体建议。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词：运动俱乐部：sprts club
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled t hear that yu’re cnsidering jining a sprts club! It’s abslutely a fantastic idea, and I fully supprt yur decisin.
Participating in a sprts club brings numerus benefits. First, it imprves bth physical and mental health — regular exercise bsts energy, reduces stress, and enhances fcus. Secnd, it helps develp teamwrk, discipline, and leadership skills, which are valuable fr future studies and careers. Plus, it’s a great way t make friends and build cnfidence!
As t chsing a club, here are my suggestins. Pick a sprt yu genuinely enjy, whether it’s ftball, swimming, r tennis, s yu’ll stay mtivated. Besides, cnsider time cmmitment, which means balancing club activities with academics t avid burnut.
I’m sure yu’ll lve the experience. Let me knw which club yu chse!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李津的身份，给准备参加学校运动俱乐部的英国好友Chris回一封信，需首先对他的想法表示支持，再说明参加运动俱乐部的好处，最后给出选择俱乐部的具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
无数的：numerus→cuntless, numberless
减轻：reduce→alleviate, relieve
宝贵的：valuable→precius, treasurable
选择：chse→pick
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As t chsing a club, here are my suggestins.
拓展句：When it cmes t chsing a club, here are my suggestins.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Secnd, it helps develp teamwrk, discipline, and leadership skills, which are valuable fr future studies and careers. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Pick a sprt yu genuinely enjy, whether it’s ftball, swimming, r tennis, s yu’ll stay mtivated. (运用了that或which引导限制性定语从句并被省略、whether引导让步状语从句)
9．（24-25高三上·天津武清·阶段练习）假设你是天津某国际学校高三学生李津，你校拟在教室门口安装一款多功能智慧屏，现向学生们征集建议。请你给学校负责人Mr. Hall 写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1. 建议开发的功能（如展示学生校园生活等）
2. 说明理由
3. 表达祝愿
注意：
（1）词数不少于120；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Hall,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin.
【答案】Dear Mr. Hall,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3, Grade 3. I am really excited abut the upcming installatin f a multifunctinal smart screen at the entrance f ur classrm and wuld like t share a cuple f suggestins.
Firstly, an interactive message bard wuld be a valuable additin. It will streamline cmmunicatin by allwing us t pst imprtant annuncements and reminders, thus fstering a mre cnnected and engaged cmmunity. Secndly, it’s better t update the daily menus f the student canteen with clear ingredient labels and nutritinal details, which wuld empwer us t make mre infrmed and healthier dietary chices. Finally, it is suggested t add the functin f shwing students’ campus life.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my suggestins and I d hpe this prject will cme t fruitin sn.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校拟在教室门口安装一款多功能智慧屏，现向学生们征集建议。请考生给学校负责人Mr. Hall 写一封英文邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
1.词汇积累
培养：fster→develp
建议：suggest→advise
选择：chice→ptin
考虑：cnsider→take accunt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, it is suggested t add the functin f shwing students’ campus life.
拓展句：Finally, I suggest that it’s better t add the functin f shwing students’ campus life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Secndly, it’s better t update the daily menus f the student canteen with clear ingredient labels and nutritinal details, which wuld empwer us t make mre infrmed and healthier dietary chices. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Finally, it is suggested t add the functin f shwing students’ campus life. (运用了it作形式主语句型)
10．（24-25高三上·天津河东·期中）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你在天津的留学生朋友Chris正在策划一次为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议，请你用英语回信，内容包括：
1. 活动形式（城市漫步、摄影展等）；
2. 推荐以上活动的理由；
3. 预祝活动成功。
注意：1）词数不少于100；
2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：城市漫步city walk 摄影展phtgraphic exhibitin
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m glad t hear that yu plan t hld a week-lng event fr internatinal students with the theme “Beautiful Tianjin”. I’d lve t cntribute sme suggestins n hw t make it an unfrgettable activity.
A city walk wuld be an excellent beginning. Imagine rlling thrugh the histric streets f Tianjin like the Eurpean-style buildings alng the Five Avenues r the lively Ancient Culture Street. This explratin nt nly allws participants t sak in Tianjin unique blend f histry and mdernity, but als imprves their understanding and appreciatin f the city’s heritage. Then yu can rganize a phtgraphic exhibitin where students can shw their visual narratives f Tianjin. This platfrm will share the beauty f Tianjin frm diverse perspectives.
I recmmend these activities because they ffer wnderful experiences that g beynd the sightseeing, and fster cnnectins amng students frm different backgrunds. I wish yur event t be a great success.

Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在天津的留学生朋友Chris写信，为他正在策划一次为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动提出你的建议，内容包括：活动形式、推荐理由并预祝活动成功。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：plan→ schedule
吸收：sak in → absrb
展示：shw→ shwcase
促进：fster→ prmte
2.句式拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句：This explratin nt nly allws participants t sak in Tianjin unique blend f histry and mdernity, but als imprves their understanding and appreciatin f the city’s heritage.
拓展句：Nt nly des this explratin allw participants t sak inTianjin unique blend f histry and mdernity, but als imprves their understanding and appreciatin f the city’s heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad t hear that yu plan t hld a week-lng event fr internatinal students with the theme “Beautiful Tianjin”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Then yu can rganize a phtgraphic exhibitin where students can shwcase their visual narratives f Tianjin.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
汉译
英文表达
明智的
advisable
提议；建议
prpsal
建议；推荐
recmmend
就个人意见
persnally
有益的
beneficial
实用的；切实可行的
practical
n. 建议 (advise v.)
advice
n. 建议 (suggest v.)
suggestin
最好做某事
had better d sth.
是明智的；合乎情理
make sense
在我看来
as far as I’m cncerned
有作用；有影响
make a difference
关于
as fr/ as t
为什么不……
why nt d...
1.写作任务：给Mr. Smith写一封邮件，建议他把学校操场后面的一大块空地开辟为菜园，并说明理由。
2.写作要素：(1)提供建议；(2)说明理由。
3.细节丰满：重点构思开辟菜园的理由，比如美化学校，为学生学习园艺提供途径，让学生获得实践经验，可能会提高一些学生对农业科学的兴趣。
[行文思路]
第一段：表明写信目的。
第二段：提供建议并说明理由。
第三段：期望得到回复。
[中文内容]
我写信是为了建议利用我们学校操场后面的空地。
考虑到那里肥沃的土壤，我认为我们可以把那块区域开辟为一个学校菜园。首先，它不仅会美化学校，而且也会给学生学习园艺提供一个很好的途径。此外，学生将通过自己种植食物来获得实践经验。而且，这可能会提高一些学生对农业科学的兴趣。
如果您能考虑一下我的建议，我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。
1.写作任务：Rbert在学校难以和他人相处，给他提供建议并表达祝愿。
2.写作要素：(1)提供建议；(2)表达祝愿。
3.细节丰满：(1)开头可以表达对 Rbert的同情和安慰；(2)构思合理的建议，比如多参加学校的团队工作；帮助周围的人，多和他们交流沟通。