高考英语一轮-征文投稿（复习课件）（全国通用）

第01讲2026年高考英语一轮复习征文投稿讲师：xxx智能导览·极速定位04真题溯源·考向感知05五大考点，真题研析+核心精讲+变式训练紧扣新风向，设题新语境，聚焦重难点01 考情解码·命题预警02 体系构建·思维可视03 核心突破·靶向攻坚知识点1  命题规律 征文和投稿，与书信不同，通常会指定一个明确的主题。例如，为了纪念英文版创刊十周年，或者描述你最尊敬的人等。避免在文章的开头和结尾使用生硬的书信式表达，如“I’ writing to...”。基本上，撰写一篇与主题相关的小短文即可，这类短文主要以叙述文或议论文的形式呈现。 投稿是指作者将自己创作的文章、作品、论文等提交给杂志社、报社、出版社、网站、比赛组织方或其他媒体平台，期望其能够被选用、发表或参与评选的行为。投稿的目的可能是为了发表作品、分享观点、获得认可、赢取奖项或报酬等。知识点2  写作技能提升 投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行的写作，所投稿件应紧贴主题，内容应新颖、创新、实用，符合词数要求等。 文章的结构框架应遵循“点明主题-介绍基本情况-总结”的模式。文章的主次内容要分明，逻辑要清晰。主题句中应包含关键要素，例如当前状况、成因、个人见解、影响、重要性、应对措施、建议等。在拓展句中，应具体详细地展开，并有意识地运用逻辑衔接词。具体写作结构为：知识点1 常用词汇be aimed at publishrequirements of the article be limited to about ... words about 120 words would be fine submit your article before 1.旨在；以......为目的 2.出版 3.文章的要求 4.限制在......词 5.大约120字就可以了 6.在......之前提交你的文章 知识点1 常用词汇entertainment column characteristics of the column language style extend the deadline 7.体育专栏 8.娱乐专栏 9. 栏目特点 10.语言风格 11. 延长截止日期 sports column 知识点2 必背开头段An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 2.说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.1.报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意。3.近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。There are many people who I respect . As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect him are as follows.In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl.4.在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠知识点2 必背开头段5.Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns.如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。6.Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishments/achievements/impact.某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。7.The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most.中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。8. I would like to invite sb to write an article for... 我想邀请某人写一篇......文章 知识点2 必背开头段9.I’d like to ask you to writr an article for our school’s English newspaper.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 10.Could you/Would you please write something concerning your school life?你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？11. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. 有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。12.And here are some relevant detail about the articles we are eager for.这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。知识点3 必背主题句1.As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。2.My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。3.Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。4.Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。知识点3 必背主题句5.For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals.首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。6.Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。7.Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected. 面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。知识点4 必背结尾句1．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。2．I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。3．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。4．We hope that with all these measures taken,　eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。5．I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future.我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。 知识点4 必背结尾句6．I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled with more love, justice and peace.我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。7．Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics.就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。8．Encouraged by their spirits，I will go all out to pursue my dream.在他们的精神鼓舞下，我将全力以赴去追逐我的梦想。9．I believe that，with innovative ideas and perseverance，we human beings will be able to fly further and further not only from the Earth to the Moon，but to the Mars and beyond.我相信，凭借创新的理念和坚持不懈的精神，我们人类不仅能够从地球飞向月球，还能飞向火星及更远的地方，飞得越来越远。10.You’d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine .你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。期待您方便时尽快答复。 知识点5 模板必背Dear Editor, when it comes to ___________________(当谈到...时） , it is widely acknowledged that________________________（众所周知）. For one thing ,_________________________（主题特色一）. Not only_________________________but also_________________________________(具体特点) For anther, there is no doubt that________________________________(主题特色二) I do hope that________________________.(表达期望). All in all , it is high time that ... .(sb did sth) 04 真题溯源·考向感知1. (2024·浙江1月卷)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.高考真题01考点分析【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。【详解】1.词汇积累厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with首先：first→above all提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)2. (2023·全国甲卷) 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.高考真题02考点分析【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1. 词汇积累著名的：well-known → famous人物：figure → person强调：emphasize → stress基础：foundation → basis2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)3. (2023·全国甲卷)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.高考真题03考点分析【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1. 词汇积累机会：opportunity → chance使沮丧：demoralize → discourage满意的：satisfied → content空闲的：leisure → spare2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)4.（2022·全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【范文】Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.高考真题04考点分析【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累缺乏：lack→shortage加强：strengthen→enhance就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)。5.（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 海洋的重要性；2. 保护海洋的倡议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Our Oceans, Our Responsibility When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.高考真题05考点分析【解题导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越：more and more→increasingly重视：place importance on→attach importance to重要的：key→significant此外：what’s more→furthermore2 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)6.（2021·新课标I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。Youth and Me________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Youth and Me It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.高考真题06考点分析【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：found→establish沮丧的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’s more得到：receive→obtain2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)7.（2021·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li Jin______________________________【范文】A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021 By Li Jin Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.高考真题07考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程第二步:列提纲（重点词组）第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇【点睛】[高分句型1]What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what引导的主语从句）[高分句型2]Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.（现在分词作状语）8.（2020·全国I卷）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】The person I respect most We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher, who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.高考真题08考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介： 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因 2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。9.2016·全国卷2假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间； 3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com. Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua高考真题09考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，具体为书信体裁。信件的目的是邀请 Peter 参加学校举办的以环境保护为主题的国际高中生摄影展，通过介绍摄影展相关信息激发对方兴趣。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：书信（邀请信）。时态：以一般现在时为主，描述摄影展时间等客观信息；涉及回忆时用一般过去时，如提及上次 Peter 展示照片。结构：总分结构。开头点明写信目的，中间介绍摄影展主题、时间、参与方式等关键信息，结尾表达期待回复。要求：1. 说明摄影展的基本信息（主题、时间）；2. 邀请对方参加并阐述原因；3. 告知参与方式；4. 表达期待。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）photography club；hold an International High School Student Photography Show；the theme of；start from；last for；be interested；take good pictures；want to do something for；send...to第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，同时注意主谓一致和时态问题。例如：Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. ；The theme of the show is environmental protection.第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：先表明写信目的，再介绍摄影展详情，接着说明邀请原因，最后给出参与方式和期待。2. 表示因果关系：I know...I remember...This is surely... ； 表示条件关系：If you want to join第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，符合书信格式和语境，语篇连贯自然，词数适中，上下文逻辑清晰。作者在文中运用了多种句式，如 who 引导的定语从句 Any student who is interested is welcome to participate，准确限定参与对象；还通过回忆 Peter 之前展示的相关照片，自然引出邀请，增强说服力；条件状语从句 If you want to join, you can send your photos to... 清晰说明参与方式，整体使文章表达流畅，层次分明，很好地完成了邀请的任务。10.（2015·全国卷1）假定你是李华，你校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1. 栏目介绍； 2. 稿件内容； 3. 稿件长度：约 400 词； 4. 交稿日期：6月28 日前。注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter,I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【范文】 Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The ＂Foreign Cultures＂section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua高考真题10考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，具体为书信体裁。信件的核心目的是邀请 Peter 为学校英语报纸的 “Foreign Cultures” 版块撰写文章，通过介绍版块情况、写作要求等信息，吸引对方参与写作。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：书信（邀请信）。时态：以一般现在时为主，用于陈述报纸版块情况、写作要求等客观信息。结构：总分结构。开头直接表明写信目的，中间详细介绍报纸版块、写作主题、内容要求、字数限制以及交稿时间，结尾表达期待回复。要求：1. 介绍报纸相关版块；2. 明确邀请对方撰写文章及主题；3. 说明文章内容、字数要求；4. 告知交稿时间；5. 表达期待。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）ask sb. to do sth.；English newspaper；Foreign Cultures section；be popular among；carry articles；write about；how...spend...；high school students；relevant；interesting and informative；look forward to第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，同时注意主谓一致和时态问题。例如：I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.；The ＂Foreign Cultures＂section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.第四步：连句成篇表示文章结构顺序：先点明写信意图，再依次阐述报纸版块、写作主题、要求、时间，最后表达期待。2. 表示并列补充关系：And；also ；表示条件关系：so long as第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，符合书信格式与语境，语篇连贯，词数合理，上下文逻辑清晰。文中使用了多种有效表达，如过去分词短语 written by foreign friends 作后置定语修饰 articles，清晰说明文章来源；so long as 引导的条件状语从句 You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative，明确写作范围；直接提出交稿时间 Could we have your article before June 28? ，使要求清晰明了。整体文章层次分明，表达流畅，有效完成了邀请撰写文章的任务。11.（2013·四川卷）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1．说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2．介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3．描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意：1．词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits._________________________________________【范文】 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed.As a student, we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study. I'm sure “repeat” is a best habit.Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers have taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master.How to develop the habit？Set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan; don't stop. When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness. How to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework.And then I do it little by little.Maybe I can correct my mistakes in this way.高考真题11考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，文章围绕学习习惯展开论述，强调了良好学习习惯的重要性，介绍了 “重复” 这一习惯的培养方法，并探讨如何克服做作业粗心的问题。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：议论文。时态：文章主要阐述一般性观点和方法，时态为一般现在时。结构：采用总分结构，先提出讨论学习习惯的必要性，再分别论述 “重复” 习惯和克服粗心问题。要求：1. 表明学习习惯的重要性；2. 阐述具体学习习惯及培养方法；3. 提出解决学习中常见问题的办法。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）discuss learning habits；good learning habits；pay attention to；improve study；develop the habit；set a timetable；stick to；make mistakes；overcome the shortage第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。例如：It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. ；We should repeat what the teachers have taught us again and again.第四步：连句成篇表示文章结构顺序：先总述学习习惯的重要性，再分别阐述具体习惯和问题解决方法。2. 表示因果关系：If...we should... ；表示并列关系：and；表示条件关系：as long as第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章内容围绕主题展开，逻辑较为清晰，涵盖了学习习惯相关的重要方面。使用了一些常见的连接词和表达方式，如 “and”“If”“as long as” 等，使文章具有一定连贯性。但文章也存在一些不足，语言表达上存在错误，如 “make your study go to succeed” 应改为 “make your study successful”，“a best habit” 应改为 “the best habit” ；部分论述较为简略，缺乏具体事例支撑 ，如在阐述 “重复” 习惯和克服粗心问题时，可增加更多个人经历或具体场景描述，使文章更具说服力和可读性。12.（2013·安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】 On the Way to School These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me, it should start on my way to school. I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bicycle, I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk, I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile, I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.高考真题12考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，文章以 “On the Way to School” 为题，针对交通违规和乱扔垃圾现象，阐述个人在上学途中为改善这一状况将采取的行动，呼吁大家共同努力。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：议论文。时态：文章阐述个人的行动和决心，以一般现在时为主。结构：采用总分总结构，开头指出交通违规和乱扔垃圾现象及其危害，中间具体说明自己在上学路上的做法，结尾表达期望。要求：1. 指出存在的问题及危害；2. 说明个人在上学途中为解决问题采取的行动；3. 表达对改善现状的期望。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）breaking traffic rules；littering；cause harm to；keep traffic rules in mind；keep to the right；pedestrian crossing；regard...as...；keep from；clean up；make a difference第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。例如：These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. ；I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.第四步：连句成篇表示文章结构顺序：先提出问题，再阐述个人做法，最后总结期望。2. 表示并列关系：meanwhile；not only...but also... ；表示条件关系：if第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章主题明确，逻辑清晰，结构完整，围绕上学路上的行为展开论述，很好地完成了写作任务。语言表达上，运用了现在分词短语 causing serious harm to life and the environment 作结果状语，自然说明不良现象的后果；使用条件状语从句（If I ride a bicycle...；If I walk...）清晰表明不同出行方式下的做法；还运用倒装句 Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere 增强句子表现力。不过，文章在论述个人做法时，整体较为简略，可适当增加具体细节，如描述在上学路上遇到不文明行为时的具体应对方式，使内容更加丰富充实。13.（2013·辽宁卷）一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：1．它是中国的传统节日之一；2．家人团聚；3．赏月、吃月饼；4．还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。4．参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid－Autumn Festival农历 lunar calendar赏月 enjoy the full moon月饼 moon cakeThe Mid－Autumn FestivalThe Mid－Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】 The Mid－Autumn Festival The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.高考真题13考点分析【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，文章以 “The Mid－Autumn Festival” 为题，围绕中秋节展开，介绍了中秋节的时间、地位、传统习俗及现代活动，让读者全面了解这一传统节日。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文。时态：文章介绍中秋节的客观信息和传统习俗，以一般现在时为主。结构：采用总分结构，开头点明中秋节的时间，接着阐述其作为传统节日的受欢迎程度，再具体介绍节日习俗，最后提及现代的活动选择。要求：1. 说明中秋节的时间；2. 阐述中秋节的重要地位；3. 介绍中秋节的传统活动；4. 提及现代的相关活动。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）falls on；lunar calendar；traditional Chinese festivals；great popularity；come home for the celebration；the full moon；in addition to；a wider range of第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。例如：The Mid－Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. ；As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country.第四步：连句成篇表示文章结构顺序：先介绍节日时间，再说明节日地位，接着描述传统活动，最后补充现代活动。2. 表示递进关系：In addition to；表示并列关系：and第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章内容完整，条理清晰，准确地介绍了中秋节的相关信息，很好地完成了说明性写作任务。语言表达上，运用了让步状语从句 no matter how far away or how busy we are，生动体现人们对中秋团圆的重视；使用 What 引导的主语从句 What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together，突出人们对中秋赏月的喜爱；With 复合结构 With the beautiful moon up in the sky，营造出中秋夜晚的美好氛围，使文章语言丰富且富有表现力。同时，文章通过 In addition to 自然引出对现代活动的介绍，过渡自然，逻辑连贯 。2026年高考英语一轮复习