题型7 书面表达【题型易-期末复习】2024-2025学年八年级下册 英语 仿真模拟特训 满分冲刺(译林版)（江苏专用）（解析版）-A4

这是一份题型7 书面表达【题型易-期末复习】2024-2025学年八年级下册 英语 仿真模拟特训 满分冲刺(译林版)（江苏专用）（解析版）-A4，共16页。

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文明从点滴做起，城市因你我而美丽。近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“Hw t be a civilized (文明的) middle schl student?”为主题的短文。内容应包含以下要点：
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hw t be a civilized middle schl student?
The summer hliday is cming sn! As middle schl students, I think we can d smething t make Huai’an mre civilized.___________________________________________
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Frm nw n, let’s jin tgether t be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer hliday!
【答案】例文
Hw t be a civilized (文明的) middle schl student？
The summer hliday is cming sn! As middle schl students, I think we can d smething t make Huai’an mre civilized.
First, we shuld always bey traffic rules when crssing the rad. In public places, it is necessary t behave plitely. Fr example, we must keep quiet in the library. Then, learning t care abut thers is als imprtant. We can dnate ur pcket mney t charities and wrk as vlunteers at the cmmunity centre.During the summer hliday, we can als take part in charity activities.
Mrever, we can save water by taking shrter shwers. (At the same time, we can save energy by turning ff the lights when we leave a rm). It’s wise fr us t chse public transprt, because prtecting the envirnment can help us live a green life.
Finally, as a middle schl student, I plan t finish my hmewrk n time and read mre meaningful bks in the next tw mnths. Besides, I am ging t travel t Beijing t learn mre abut the histry and culture with my parents. Just as the saying ges, read ten thusand bks and travel ten thusand miles.
Frm nw n, let’s jin tgether t be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer hliday!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何做一个文明的中学生的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“Hw t be a civilized (文明的) middle schl student?”为主题的短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“行为习惯、公益活动、暑假计划等”几个方面重点介绍如何做一个文明的中学生的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们将有一个快乐而有意义的暑假”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①care abut关心；
②take part in参加；
③plan t d sth计划做某事；
④frm nw n从现在起。
[高分句型]
①In public places, it is necessary t behave plitely. (“It’s+形容词+t d sth”句型)
②Besides, I am ging t travel t Beijing t learn mre abut the histry and culture with my parents. (动词不定式作目的状语)
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在这个快速变化的时代，成为“全面发展的人”不仅是一种追求，更是一种必需。假设你是李林，你们班正举行以“T be a well-runded persn”为主题的演讲比赛，请写一篇演讲稿，跟自己的同班同学谈谈作为中学生如何成长为一名全面发展的人。提示如下：
写作要求：
1. 根据提示，内容自拟，要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的班级、人名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hell, guys!
I’m Li Lin.________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hell, guys!
I’m Li Lin. As students, we can start this jurney by imprving urselves in varius ways.
Firstly, we must strive t imprve urselves. This invlves learning practical life skills, lking after urselves, and develping a reading habit. Additinally, we shuld behave plitely. Secndly, we shuld care fr sciety. We can actively take part in charity activities and extend ur care t vulnerable grups such as the disabled. This will help us develp a sense f respnsibility. Furthermre, we shuld prtect the nature. This need t prtect the envirnment and wildlife. We als shuld learn t live a green lifestyle.
Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据思维导图内容介绍如何成为全面发展的人，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍如何成为全面发展的人；
第三步，书写结语：谢谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①strive t努力
②lk after照顾
③take part in参加
④develp a sense f respnsibility培养责任感
[高分句型]
We can actively take part in charity activities and extend ur care t vulnerable grups such as the disabled. (and并列句)
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“骑行”这一低碳环保的休闲运动，受到越来越多人的青睐。“骑行”既是一种运动，又能保护环境减少污染。请以“Enjying Cycling”为题，写一篇英文短文，并介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。
注意：
1. 词数100个左右;
2.短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Enjying Cycling
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【答案】
Enjying Cycling
Nwadays cycling is becming mre and mre ppular with yung peple. It’s a useful sprt and it brings us a lt f benefits.
Firstly, cycling is gd exercise because it can help us keep healthy. When we are cycling, we feel active and relaxed. It’s full f fun. Besides, it’s als gd fr the envirnment because it can greatly reduce air pllutin. It can help us save energy. What’s mre, it’s very easy t park and helps t avid traffic jam. Hwever, we shuld be careful when riding. We shuldn’t ride t fast. Remember t wear helmets when riding. It’s imprtant fr us t bey the traffic rules.
In a wrd, we can benefit a lt frm cycling. Let’s get n bicycles and enjy cycling!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出“Enjying Cycling”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从骑行的优点、注意事项等方面来具体说明；
第三步，书写结语并呼应主题。
[亮点词汇]
①be full f 充满……
②save energy 节约能源
③avid traffic jam 避免交通拥堵
④benefit... frm从……收益
[高分句型]
Besides, it’s als gd fr the envirnment because it can greatly reduce air pllutin.（because引导原因状语从句）
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近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we d fr ur city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3. 词数：100词左右（开头不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。
What can we d fr ur city?
Dear teachers and students,
The tpic f my speech is “What can we d fr ur city?”
As students, we can d smething t help. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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If we take actin, I’m sure ur city will becme mre and mre beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks fr listening.
【答案】参考例文
What can we d fr ur city?
Dear teachers and students,
The tpic f my speech is “What can we d fr ur city?”
As students, we can d smething t help. First f all, we shuld walk r ride t schl when we study at schl, instead f parents picking us up in cars. Secnd, we shuld reuse used bks as much as pssible. Finally, we must nt waste fd.
In ur daily life, we can d mre. First, we use clth bags instead f plastic bags when we shp. Secnd, we must save water and prtect water resurces. Third, we need t srt and recycle waste.
If we take actin, I’m sure ur city will becme mre and mre beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍演讲的话题；
第二步，介绍在学校和在日常生活中能够采取的措施；
第三步，鼓励大家行动起来并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②instead f而不是
③pick up接载
④recycle回收利用
⑤take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
First, we use clth bags instead f plastic bags when we shp.(when引导时间状语从句)
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近日，我校在开展“善意传递，温暖同行”主题宣传活动。作为小报英文专栏的小记者，请你围绕“A Small Act can Make a Big Difference”为题写一篇短文，向同学们分享你的理解。包括：
● 你看到或做过的一个“小善举”；
这个举动带来的影响或意义（1—2点）；
● 你今后的做法。
注意：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，适当发挥，书写规范；
2.词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A Small Act can Make a Big Difference
We dn’t always need t d smething special t help thers. Smetimes a small act can mean a lt.
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【答案】例文
A Small Act can Make a Big Difference
We dn’t always need t d smething special t help thers. Smetimes a small act can mean a lt.
Last week, my friend Lucy was sad. She culdn’t finish her science hmewrk. I sat with her and helped her d it. We wrked fr 30 minutes, and she understd everything. This small help made Lucy happy. She thanked me a lt, and we became clser. I learned that even small acts can bring jy t thers.
In the future, I will help mre. I’ll share my snacks, help clean the classrm, and say kind wrds. Let’s all d small acts f kindness every day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态以一般过去时和一般将来时为主。
③提示：按题目要求，写自己帮助朋友的事，帮助朋友后的影响或意义，把小善举的好处写清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明主题，引出故事。
第二步，具体写朋友不会做科学作业，我帮她，最后她懂了，还很开心，我们关系变好了。
第三步，写从这件事学到小善举能让人快乐，还说以后要多分享零食、帮忙打扫、说暖心话。
[亮点词汇]
①finish hmewrk完成作业
② lt多谢
③becme clser变得更近
[高分句型]
①I learned that even small acts can bring jy t thers.（宾语从句）
② Let’s all d small acts f kindness every day!（祈使句）
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“吾日三省吾身”是一句出自《礼记•大学》的名言，意思是每天反思自己的言行以完善自己。我们即将进入九年级，请你以“My ways t imprve myself”为题结合自身实际情况选择三个方面介绍你自我完善的方式。
注意：（1）词数90词左右。（文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。）
（2）省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Life is really a lng jurney. In my grwing up life, I have been lking fr ways t imprve myself._________________________________________________________________
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Fllw these ways, and I am sure I can imprve myself and becme a better persn.
【答案】范文：
Life is really a lng jurney. In my grwing up life, I have been lking fr ways t imprve myself.
First, I shuld always bey traffic rules when crssing the rad. It is necessary t behave plitely in public places. Fr example, I must keep quiet in the library. Then, I want t live a green life. I can save energy by turning ff lights when I leave a rm. Als, rubbish shuld be separated int different grups carefully. Mrever, it’s wise f me t chse public transprt.
Last but nt least, as a student, I am ready t develp sme gd qualities. I want t be a careful student. I shuld pay attentin t every detail. As the saying ges “A miss is as gd as a mile.” What’s mre, I want t get myself mre rganized. I will keep my things in gd rder. I will never frget the things I need t d.
Fllw these ways, and I am sure I can imprve myself and becme a better persn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“我的自我完善方法”为题介绍自己的自我完善方法及成效或理由，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍自己的自我完善方法及成效；
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①bey traffic rules遵守交通规则
②pay attentin t关注
③in gd rder处于良好状态
[高分句型]
① I can save energy by turning ff lights when I leave a rm.(when引导时间状语从句)
② I will never frget the things I need t d. (定语从句)
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One’s destinatin(目的地) is never a place, but a new way f seeing things. ——Henry Miller.
请以“Enjy travel, enjy life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。
内容要点：
1.旅行地的介绍：你游玩了哪些景点、有没有印象最深的活劫、品尝了当地的什么美食……
2.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项或意义等；
3.下一站计划去哪里?为什么?
注意：
1.词数90左右，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实人名。
Enjy Travel, Enjy Life
Last summer, I went t __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Enjy Travel, Enjy Life
Last year, I went t Qingda with my family. We went there t see the sunrise in the early mrning. The sky was clrful and the sea was shining brightly. When we walked n the beach, we felt the sft wind. We had seafd which was delicius. All f us had a wnderful time.
As we all knw, the utside wrld is wnderful. If pssible, I want t visit Hng Kng. I want t see the Ocean Park there. I’m eager t knw hw the dlphins perfrm. Als, I’d like t visit the Hng Kng Disneyland. I want t see Snw White.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍游玩景点、印象深刻的活动和美食；
第二步，表达自己的旅行感受；
第三步，介绍接下来的游玩计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager t d 渴望做某事
②wuld like t d 想要做某事
[高分句型]
①When we walked n the beach, we felt the sft wind. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If pssible, I want t visit Hng Kng. (if引导条件状语从句)
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4月23日是第三十个世界读书日(Wrld Reading Day)，为进一步提高学生的阅读意识，改进阅读习惯，我校英文俱乐部开展了“Reading makes me better”的主题研讨，旨在鼓励更多的人参与读书。请根据提示写一篇英文短文，分享你对阅读的看法和建议。
1. What type f bks d yu like best? Why?
2. Why d yu need t read mre bks?
3. What reading advice can yu give t yur classmates? （time, habits,...）
注意：
1）包含所有要点，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thusand bks is like travelling ten thusand miles.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thusand bks is like travelling ten thusand miles. Reading can braden ur visin. Thrugh it, we may knw useful experiences and new ideas which make us better. I like bks n histry best. Frm these bks, I can learn abut the past and find that many prblems we have nw are similar t thse in the past and that their slutins are als useful fr the prblems tday.
Reading mre bks can nt nly help us learn mre knwledge and skills t deal with the difficulties in life, but als braden ur visin and let us knw mre abut the wrld. Therefre, we shuld read mre bks every day, fr it is never t late t read.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢什么类型的书以及原因；
第二步，介绍自己需要多读书的原因；
第三步，给你的同学阅读建议。
[亮点词汇]
①learn abut了解
②deal with处理
③let sb. d sth.让某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Reading can braden ur visin.（动名词作主语）
②Reading mre bks can nt nly help us learn mre knwledge and skills t deal with the difficulties in life, but als braden ur visin and let us knw mre abut the wrld.（nt nly…but als…不但……而且……）
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假如你校英文校刊正在开展“Travelling”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的（unfrgettable）一次旅行经历和你对旅行的看法。
注意：
1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，适当发挥，书写规范；
2. 词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
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【答案】例文
I like travelling very much.
S far, I have travelled t Beijing, Hng Kng, New Yrk and many ther places. But my favurite place is Hng Kng, which is an internatinal mdern city with many beautiful places f interest. We can enjy delicius fd there. Last summer, we visited Hng Kng Disneyland. We watched a parade f Disney characters there and I culdn’t stp taking phts with them. I had a gd time there. What an unfrgettable experience!
Travelling is really a gd way t pen ur minds and learn mre abut the wrld.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己去过的地方；
第二步，具体介绍自己难忘的一次旅行经历以及感受；
第三步，表达自己对旅行的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①places f interest名胜古迹
②take phts拍照
③have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
But my favurite place is Hng Kng, which is an internatinal mdern city with many beautiful places f interest.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
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随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes arund us”。请你根据下表中的提示，从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化，并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Changes Arund Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place arund us.______________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Changes Arund Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place arund us.
In terms f traffic, we used t mainly travel by bike r bus. Nwadays mre peple drive cars fr daily trips, and high-speed railways make lng-distance travel much faster. As fr study, students had few bks t read and mstly studied alne in the past. Hwever, nw we can d mre reading and take part in varius grup wrk, which imprves ur cperatin ability. When it cmes t travel, nt nly can we g t mre places abrad, but als nline travel ffers new experiences. In terms f the envirnment, we’ve realized its imprtance. We are planting mre trees and wrking t reduce pllutin.
These changes have brught us a mre cnvenient and clrful life. They shw the prgress f sciety and make ur future mre prmising.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，直接表明发生了巨大变化，引出文章的核心话题，为后文具体阐述变化做铺垫。
第二步，从交通、学习、旅行和环境四个角度，具体对比过去和现在的不同；
第三步，总结升华，强调变化的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms f 就……而言
②take place 发生
[高分句型]
①Hwever, nw we can d mre reading and take part in varius grup wrk, which imprves ur cperatin ability. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②When it cmes t travel, nt nly can we g t mre places abrad, but als nline travel ffers new experiences. (when引导时间状语从句、nt nly… but als…引导并列复合句)
内容提要
期末仿真题
期末模拟题
行为习惯
遵守交通规则，公共场合举止礼貌……
公益活动
捐钱给慈善机构，做志愿者……
绿色生活
节约用水，选择公共交通……
暑假计划
按时完成作业，多读有意义的书……
在学校
1. 走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送
2. 尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本
3.……
在日常生活中
1. 购物时使用布袋子(clth bag)，不使用塑料袋
2. 节约用水，保护水源
3. 垃圾分类，循环利用
4. ……
D yu like travelling?
Where have yu been?
Which is yur unfrgettable experience? Why?
(When? What? …)
What d yu think f travelling?