2025届北京市高考英语一模专项训练：写作（含答案）

这是一份2025届北京市高考英语一模专项训练：写作（含答案），共16页。
写作
一、写作
1．（2025北京东城高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim打算参加“我眼中的孔子（Cnfucius in My Eyes）”全球原创作品征集活动，来信询问你的建议。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议；
2．说明理由。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m s glad t hear that yu plan t take part in the “Cnfucius in My Eyes” glbal riginal wrks cllectin activity. I think it’s a great pprtunity fr yu t learn mre abut Chinese culture. Here are sme suggestins fr yur wrk.
First, yu culd fcus n Cnfucius’ cre ideas, such as respect, kindness, and learning. Yu may als include sme f his famus sayings, like “Isn’t it a jy t have friends cming frm afar?” These ideas are nt nly imprtant in China but als valued arund the wrld.
Secnd, if pssible, try t cnnect his teachings with yur wn life r sciety tday. This will make yur wrk mre vivid and meaningful.
I believe yur creativity and effrt will help mre peple understand the spirit f Cnfucius.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2．（2025北京西城高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你们学校的网站看到你们学校组织了“我的年度词（My Wrd f the Year）”的学生活动，发来邮件询问你的年度词。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 你的年度词是什么；
2. 你选该词的理由。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy t hear frm yu! I’m glad yu’re interested in ur schl’s “My Wrd f the Year” activity. My wrd f the year is “grw.”
I chse this wrd because 2024 was a year full f challenges and changes. I faced a lt f pressure with schlwrk and cllege entrance exams, but I als learned hw t manage my time better, became mre independent, and imprved my relatinships with thers. I feel like I’ve really grwn, nt just in knwledge, but als as a persn.
“Grw” reminds me that every experience—whether gd r bad—helps me becme strnger and wiser.
What wuld yur wrd f the year be?
Yurs,
Li Hua
3．（2025北京房山高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与本校外国交换生 Jim准备组队参加学校举办的主题为“Technlgy Meets Chinese Traditinal Culture”的创意大赛。请你用英文给 Jim发一封邮件，内容包括：
1.分享你的创意设计；
2.询问Jim的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m s excited abut the “Technlgy Meets Chinese Traditinal Culture” creative cmpetitin! I’d like t share my idea with yu first. I’m thinking abut designing an interactive AR (Augmented Reality) app that brings traditinal Chinese paintings t life. When peple use their phnes t scan the paintings, the characters and landscapes wuld mve and even tell stries behind the artwrks in bth Chinese and English. I believe this can help mre peple, especially yung nes, understand and appreciate ur traditinal culture in a mdern and fun way.
What d yu think f this idea? D yu have any suggestins r wuld yu like t add smething?
Yurs,
Li Hua
4．（2025北京石景山高三一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim要参加学校举办的“世界智慧城市”(Glbal Smart City)展示活动。他打算介绍北京，聚焦智慧北京的亮点，向你寻求相关建议、请你用英文回复，内容包括：
1.建议内容；
2.说明理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad t hear that yu’re ging t intrduce Beijing at the “Glbal Smart City” event! I suggest yu fcus n Beijing’s smart transprtatin system. Fr example, the city uses AI-pwered traffic lights t reduce cngestin and has ne f the largest fleets f electric buses in the wrld. Yu can als talk abut smart payment systems, like QR cdes and facial recgnitin, which make life mre cnvenient in daily shpping and travel.
These examples shw hw technlgy imprves urban life, making Beijing a leading smart city glbally. Let me knw if yu need mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
5．（2025北京顺义高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。中国电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》（简称《哪吒2》）在全球放映，你的英国笔友Jim看过之后非常喜欢，发来邮件请你推荐另外一部中国电影。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.电影的内容；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m s happy t hear that yu enjyed Ne Zha 2! If yu’re interested in mre Chinese films, I’d like t recmmend The Wandering Earth. It’s a science fictin mvie that tells the stry f humans trying t mve the Earth away frm the dying sun t save the planet. The film cmbines Chinese cultural values like family, sacrifice, and unity with amazing special effects.
I think yu’ll lve it because it’s nt nly exciting and visually stunning, but it als shws hw Chinese peple see the wrld and their rle in it. Let me knw what yu think!
Yurs,
Li Hua
6．（2025北京门头沟高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim因使用AI工具完成写作作业而受到批评。他写信询问你对这件事的看法，请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1 你的看法；
2.你的建议和理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
Thanks fr sharing yur experience. I understand why yu used AI t help with yur writing—it can be useful fr getting ideas r imprving grammar. Hwever, I think it’s imprtant t use AI tls wisely. If we rely n them t much, we may miss the chance t develp ur wn thinking and writing skills.
My advice is t treat AI as a helper, nt a replacement. Use it t check yur wrk r get suggestins, but always write yur wn thughts first. This way, yu’ll imprve faster and shw yur true ability.
Yurs,
Li Hua
7．（2025北京丰台高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的外国好友Jim打算在学校举办的世界非物质文化遗产展示周（Wrld Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibitin Week）中介绍中国非物质文化遗产，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你推荐的非物质文化遗产；
2. 简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad t hear that yu’re ging t intrduce a piece f Chinese intangible cultural heritage. I recmmend yu chse Peking Opera. It’s ne f the mst famus traditinal Chinese art frms, cmbining music, dance, drama, and acrbatics.
Peking Opera nt nly shws Chinese histry and values but als highlights the beauty f Chinese language and cstumes. Its unique facial makeup and symblic gestures make it fascinating t audiences arund the wrld. I think it will impress yur classmates and help them better understand Chinese culture.
Let me knw if yu need mre help!
Yurs,
Li Hua
8．（2025北京朝阳高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校正在举办以“美丽校园”为主题的原创作品征集活动，交换生Jim打算参加，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 建议创作内容；
2. 就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I'm s glad t hear that yu're jining the “Beautiful Campus” creative wrk activity! I suggest yu create a painting r pht stry abut ur schl garden. It’s full f flwers in different seasns and is ne f the mst peaceful and beautiful places n campus.
This place nt nly shws the beauty f nature but als reflects hw much ur schl values a green and friendly envirnment. It’s a perfect subject t express the theme and can easily cnnect with everyne’s daily schl life.
Hpe this helps and gd luck with yur creatin!
Yurs,
Li Hua
9．（2025北京平谷高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的朋友Jim打算暑假到中国旅游，他对中国的科技发展很感兴趣，发来邮件请你推荐一座能深度体验中国最新科技发展的城市。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐城市；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I'm excited t hear that yu're planning t visit China this summer! If yu're interested in experiencing the latest in Chinese technlgy, I highly recmmend visiting Shenzhen. Knwn as China's "Silicn Valley," Shenzhen is hme t tech giants like Huawei and DJI, and it's full f smart city innvatins—frm 5G netwrks and AI rbts t unmanned stres and cashless payments.
Yu can visit tech museums, explre high-tech shpping centers, and even experience smart transprtatin systems. It’s the perfect city t see hw technlgy is shaping the future f China.
Hpe yu have an amazing trip!
Yurs,
Li Hua
10．（2025北京海淀高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。世界读书日即将到来，你的外国好友 Jim正在开展主题为“信息时代中学生如何阅读”的项目式学习，他发来邮件对你进行访谈。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.信息时代对阅读的影响；
2.你的阅读方式和理由。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
Thanks fr yur email! In the infrmatin age, reading has becme easier and mre diverse. We can access bks, news, and articles anytime thrugh phnes r cmputers. Hwever, it als brings distractins, and many students find it hard t fcus n deep reading.
As fr me, I prefer a mix f paper bks and e-bks. I use e-bks fr cnvenience, especially when I'm traveling. But when I want t fully enjy a stry r study carefully, I chse paper bks because they help me stay fcused. I als try t set screen-free time t imprve my reading quality.
Hpe this helps with yur prject!
Yurs,
Li Hua
11．（2025北京延庆高三一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim打算本周末参加北京市中小学“游学中轴”活动，向你了解相关情况并征求你的建议。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐一条中轴线游学线路；
2.说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
提示词：北京中轴游学 the Beijing Central Axis study tur。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【作者 ChatGPT】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad t hear yu’re interested in jining the Beijing Central Axis study tur this weekend! I recmmend the rute frm Yngding Gate t the Bell and Drum Twers. This rute cvers many famus cultural landmarks, such as the Temple f Heaven, Qianmen Street, the Frbidden City, Jingshan Park, and finally the Bell and Drum Twers.
This rute is great because it shws the histry and develpment f Beijing step by step. Yu’ll nt nly enjy beautiful views but als learn abut the city's traditinal layut, culture, and architecture. Dn’t frget t bring a ntebk and take sme pictures!
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
1．Dear Jim,
Glad t receive yur email. What an exciting activity! Here is my idea.
I'm thinking yu can make a shrt animatin film. The film will fcus n yur understanding f Cnfucius' philsphy. Yu can shw hw his ideas, like kindness,influence us teenagers t share, help each ther, and build warm friendships, making schl life mre enjyable. Even better, yu can start a “kindness challenge” t encurage friends t d smething nice every day and recrd their gd deeds.
ideas.Ish perspective will help peple realize the everlasting value f Cnfucius'ideas.I am sure it will make a great entry. Gd luck!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国好友Jim打算参加“我眼中的孔子（Cnfucius in My Eyes）”全球原创作品征集活动，来信询问建议。请考生用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人兴奋的：exciting→thrilling
影响：influence→affect
帮助：help→assist
鼓励：encurage→mtivate
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：I'm thinking yu can make a shrt animatin film. The film will fcus n yur understanding f Cnfucius' philsphy.
yu can make a shrt animatin film, which will fcus n yur understanding f Cnfucius' philsphy..
[高分句型1] Yu can shw hw his ideas, like kindness, influence us teenagers t share, help each ther, and build warm friendships, making schl life mre enjyable. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I am sure it will make a great entry. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
2．Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled t hear frm yu and share my “Wrd f the Year”—“Resilience”.
This year has been filled with challenges, frm heavy academic pressure t persnal setbacks. Hwever, I’ve learned that resilience helps me bunce back frm difficulties. When facing tugh exams, I didn’t give up but studied harder. When dealing with interpersnal cnflicts, I stayed calm and fund slutins.
Resilience is like a strng rpe that supprts me thrugh tugh times. It makes me believe that I can vercme anything with perseverance.
What’s yur wrd f the year?
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jim写封邮件，说明你的年度词是什么以及你选该词的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
压力：pressure→stress
然而：hwever→nevertheless
处理：deal with→cpe with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This year has been filled with challenges, frm heavy academic pressure t persnal setbacks.
拓展句：This year has been filled with challenges, which varied frm heavy academic pressure t persnal setbacks.
[高分句型1] Resilience is like a strng rpe that supprts me thrugh tugh times. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It makes me believe that I can vercme anything with perseverance. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled t team up with yu fr the “Technlgy Meets Chinese Traditinal Culture” creativity cntest. My idea is t design an interactive app that cmbines AR technlgy with traditinal Chinese paper-cutting art. Users can scan real paper-cuttings with their phnes, and the app will bring them t life thrugh 3D animatins, telling stries related t the patterns.
I believe this can nt nly shwcase the beauty f Chinese paper-cutting but als make it mre engaging fr mdern audiences. Hwever, I’m nt sure abut the technical feasibility and user experience. What d yu think f this idea? D yu have any suggestins t imprve it?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给 Jim发一封邮件，分享你的创意设计以及询问Jim的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
合作：team up with→cperate with
展示：shwcase→display
建议：suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Users can scan real paper-cuttings with their phnes, and the app will bring them t life thrugh 3D animatins, telling stries related t the patterns.
拓展句：Users can scan real paper-cuttings with their phnes, and the app will bring them t life thrugh 3D animatins, which tell stries related t the patterns.
【高分句型1】My idea is t design an interactive app that cmbines AR technlgy with traditinal Chinese paper-cutting art. (运用了that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this can nt nly shwcase the beauty f Chinese paper-cutting but als make it mre engaging fr mdern audiences. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
4．Dear Jim,
Learning that yu are ging t intrduce Beijing at the “Glbal Smart City” Exhibitin, I’m glad t share what I knw with yu.
First, Beijing fcuses n technlgical innvatin, leading t the bming develpment f smart turism, smart healthcare, smart manufacturing, etc. Peple can easily enjy all kinds f services prvided by artificial intelligence. Fr example, peple can visit the Frbidden City n their wn with the Wechat guide and learn abut its histry, which is really fantastic. Besides, mre and mre subways are built t make ur travel cnvenient.
Hpe my advice can be helpful t yu. If yu need mre infrmatin, d feel free t ask me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim回信，关于对方要参加的“世界智慧城市”(Glbal Smart City)展示活动给出建议，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的：glad → pleased
集中精力：fcus n → cncentrate n
提供：prvide → ffer
此外：besides → in additin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, Beijing fcuses n technlgical innvatin, leading t the bming develpment f smart turism, smart healthcare, smart manufacturing, etc.
拓展句：First, Beijing fcuses n technlgical innvatin, which leads t the bming develpment f smart turism, smart healthcare, smart manufacturing, etc.
【高分句型1】Fr example, peple can visit the Frbidden City n their wn with the Wechat guide and learn abut its histry, which is really fantastic. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If yu need mre infrmatin, d feel free t ask me.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
5．范文1：
Dear Jim,
Glad t hear yu enjyed Nezha 2. Nw, I’d highly recmmend Uprar in Heaven.
This film, prduced in the 1960s, is based n the early chapters f the famus Chinese classic Jurney t the West. It tells the stry f Sun Wukng, the Mnkey King, and his resistance against the Emperr in Heaven.
I recmmend it because it’s a masterpiece f Chinese animatin, shwcasing traditinal art frms like Peking Opera in its character design and mvement. Plus, it ffers a great intrductin t ne f China’s mst famus fictitius figures and belved stries! I believe it’s a visually wnderful and culturally significant film that’s sure t delight.（107）
Yurs,
Li Hua
范文2：
Dear Jim,
I'm s glad t hear yu enjyed Nezha 2 and I'd like t recmmend yu anther fantastic film deeply rted in Chinese traditinal culture: Cruching Tiger, Hidden Dragn.
This film, directed by Ang Lee, is a martial arts tale set in the Qing Dynasty. It tells a stry f lve, duty, and sacrifice. The film centers n a legendary swrd, the Green Destiny, and the lives it tuches.
I highly recmmend it because it beautifully shwcases traditinal Chinese values like hnr, faith, and respect fr elders. The film's wnderful visuals, cmbined with its attractive stry make it a truly unfrgettable cinematic experience. It als prvides insight int the wrld f martial arts spirit and explres the cmplexities f human relatinships. Hpe yu can enjy it.（125）
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信，推荐另外一部中国电影。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
喜欢：enjy→be fnd f
著名的：famus→well-knwn
展示：shwcase→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This film, directed by Ang Lee, is a martial arts tale set in the Qing Dynasty.
拓展句：This film, which was directed by Ang Lee, is a martial arts tale set in the Qing Dynasty.
[高分句型1]I recmmend it because it’s a masterpiece f Chinese animatin, shwcasing traditinal art frms like Peking Opera in its character design and mvement.（运用了because引导原因状语从句和现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]I believe it’s a visually wnderful and culturally significant film that’s sure t delight.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句）
6．Dear Jim,
I’m truly srry t hear abut yur experience. It’s understandable t feel upset when yur effrts are questined, but let’s try t see this frm anther perspective.
First, sincerely aplgize t yur teacher and clarify yur intentins, which shws maturity and helps rebuild trust. Explain that yu aimed t save time but nw realize the imprtance f independent practice. Secnd, use AI as a “helper,” nt a “der.” Fr example, let it check grammar, but always write the cntent in yur wn wrds. By balancing efficiency with effrt, yu’ll grw academically while staying hnest.
This is a learning experience, nt a failure. Stay cnfident and keep plishing yur skills!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给Jim回复，他因为使用AI工具完成写作作业而受到批评。对此提出你的看法以及建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沮丧的：upset→frustrated
真诚地：sincerely→heartfeltly
打算：aim t→intend t
例如：fr example→fr instance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By balancing efficiency with effrt, yu’ll grw academically while staying hnest.
拓展句：If yu can balance efficiency with effrt, yu’ll grw academically while staying hnest.
【高分句型1】It’s understandable t feel upset when yur effrts are questined, but let’s try t see this frm anther perspective.（运用了when引导时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】First, sincerely aplgize t yur teacher and clarify yur intentins, which shws maturity and helps rebuild trust. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled t hear that yu’re intrducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the Wrld Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibitin Week. I’d highly recmmend Chinese paper-cutting.
Paper-cutting, with a histry nning ver 1,500 years, is a traditinal flk art in China. It invlves cutting intricate designs frm paper using scissrs r knives. Nt nly des it shwcase the remarkable craftsmanship f Chinese artisans, but it als carries prfund cultural meanings, ften symblizing gd luck, happiness, and prsperity. It’s a wnderful way t experience the charm f Chinese culture firsthand.
I believe yur presentatin will be a great success. Gd luck!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】作文本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国好友Jim打算在学校举办的世界非物质文化遗产展示周中介绍中国非物质文化遗产，要求考生按照要求用英文给他提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled → excited
推荐：recmmend → nminate
展现：shwcase → shw
非凡的：remarkable → extrardinary
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m thrilled t hear that yu’re intrducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the Wrld Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibitin Week.
拓展句：Hearing that yu’re intrducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the Wrld Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibitin Week, I’m thrilled.
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled t hear that yu’re intrducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the Wrld Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibitin Week.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Nt nly des it shwcase the remarkable craftsmanship f Chinese artisans, but it als carries prfund cultural meanings, ften symblizing gd luck, happiness, and prsperity.（运用了nt nly位于句首的部分倒装句和现在分词作状语）
8．Dear Jim,
Excited abut yur plan t participate in “The Beauty f Campus” activity! I’m eager t share my suggestins abut what t create.
I believe it wuld be a wnderful idea t sht a vide highlighting the heartfelt bnds between students and teachers. Yu can capture ftage f bustling ffices where teachers diligently help students with their academic challenges. T add a mre heartwarming tuch, yu culd interview students and incrprate their appreciatin fr teachers’ guidance, supprt, and the psitive impact they’ve had n their lives int the vide. Their hnest remarks wuld nt nly beautifully shw the dynamic campus life, but als prtray the beauty f character.
What d yu think f my ideas? Feel free t ask me any questins during yur shting.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考试给交换生Jim回封邮件，就他所询问的有关学校正在举办的以“美丽校园”为主题的原创作品征集活动的创作内容提出建议，并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
参加：participate in→take part in
渴望的：eager→lnging
突出、强调：highlight→emphasize
联系：bnd→cnnectin
影响：impact→influence
充满活力的：dynamic→energetic
2. 句式拓展：
同义句转换：
原句：I believe it wuld be a wnderful idea t sht a vide highlighting the heartfelt bnds between students and teachers.
拓展句：I believe it wuld be a wnderful idea t sht a vide that highlights the heartfelt bnds between students and teachers.
【高分句型1】Yu can capture ftage f bustling ffices where teachers diligently help students with their academic challenges.（运用了以关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】T add a mre heartwarming tuch, yu culd interview students and incrprate their appreciatin fr teachers’ guidance, supprt, and the psitive impact they’ve had n their lives int the vide.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语和省略了关系代词的限制性定语从句。）
9．Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled t hear yu’re planning a trip t China this summer! Based n yur interest in cutting-edge technlgy, I highly recmmend Shenzhen as yur tp destinatin.
Shenzhen is China’s “Silicn Valley” and a glbal center fr innvatin. First, it’s hme t tech giants like Huawei, Tencent, and DJI, where yu can visit exhibitin halls t witness futuristic inventins, frm AI rbts t 5G applicatins. Secnd, dn’t miss the Shenzhen Science Museum, where interactive exhibits let yu experience VR ce explratin r prgram a mini rbt! Besides, Shenzhen perfectly cmbines technlgy with daily life. Yu’ll even see drnes delivering packages and cashless payments everywhere!
Wish yu an inspiring jurney!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以个人名义向朋友推荐一座能深度体验中国最新科技发展的城市，并解释推荐理由及表达美好祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled → excited
旅行：trip → tur
此外：besides → mrever
鼓舞人心的：inspiring → encuraging
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Based n yur interest in cutting-edge technlgy, I highly recmmend Shenzhen as yur tp destinatin.
拓展句：Since yu are interested in cutting-edge technlgy, I highly recmmend Shenzhen as yur tp destinatin.
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled t hear yu’re planning a trip t China this summer! (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Secnd, dn’t miss the Shenzhen Science Museum, where interactive exhibits let yu experience VR ce explratin r prgram a mini rbt! (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
10 . Dear Jim,
Thank yu fr inviting me t share my thughts n reading in the infrmatin age.
The digital age reshapes reading prfundly. While e-bks and nline articles ffer instant access t glbal knwledge, fragmented infrmatin and digital distractins hinder deep reading.
T adapt, I blend digital and traditinal methds. Fr quick updates, I read e-bks n my phne fr cnvenience. Yet, fr serius learning. I chse paper bks—they bst fcus and memry withut screen interruptins. I als allcate daily screen-free reading time t avid distractins.
This hybrid strategy balances efficiency with thughtful engagement. Hpe it aids yur prject!
Best regards.
Li Hua
11 . Dear Jim,
I'm delighted yu're jining the Beijing Central Axis study tur! Here's my recmmended rute: Start at Yngdingmen Gate, then walk nrth t Tianqia fr flk culture, visit the Temple f Heaven, explre Qianmen Street, and end at Tian'anmen Square.
This rute perfectly blends histry and mdernity. Yu'll see imperial architecture at Yngdingmen and the Temple f Heaven, experience lcal life at Tianqia, and enjy Qianmen's vibrant mix f ld and new. It's a great way t understand Beijing's cultural heritage in just ne day.
Wear cmfrtable shes and dn't frget yur camera! Let me knw if yu need mre tips.
Yurs,
Li Hua