人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 1 What’s the matter？-话题作文写作提升专练（教师版）

这是一份人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 1 What’s the matter？-话题作文写作提升专练（教师版），共33页。试卷主要包含了 能用＂have， 写作微技能， 感冒 have a cld， 摔倒fall dwn， 割伤cut neself等内容，欢迎下载使用。

近三年考情分析
本单元的写作任务是会写针对健康问题提出合理化建议的短文。在写作过程中，要求同学们熟悉人体部位的表述，掌握描述人体的不适等健康问题。要注意关键词语的正确使用，并能够针对健康问题运用情态动词shuld和shuldn’t提出更加正确、具体和深入的合理化建议。
写作目标
能表达生活中存在的健康问题，并就这些提出建议；能描述意外伤害事故，并给出合理的应对措施。
1. 能用＂have...＂表达健康问题及意外事故。
2. 能描述健康问题的状况或意外事故发生的过程及病情或受伤的程度。
3. 能用 ＂shuld/shuldn’t＂ 提建议。
4. 写作微技能：不同句式的表达。
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：1.描述问题；
◆ 步骤二：给出合理化的建议；
◆ 步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。
真题感知
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 mypia；电子产品 electrnic device
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu?
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Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】
例文：
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m srry t learn that yur eyesight is getting weaker. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight. And reading bks fr t lng may cause mypia.
But dn’t wrry. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f prtecting eyesight. At first, yu shuld cntrl the time yu spend n electrnic prducts. Yu can d mre utdr activities. What’s mre, yu shuld develp sme gd habits. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. They are gd fr yur health. Besides, ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes. Lastly, yu shuld have yur eyes examined every term t make sure yur eyes stay healthy.
I hpe yu’ll find my ways helpful.
Yurs,
Li Ping
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
②be gd fr对……有好处
③play an imprtant rle in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
【词汇积累】
1. 牙痛 have a tthache
2 感到恶心feel sick
3. 肚子痛 have a stmachache
4. 流鼻血 have a nsebleed
5. 感冒 have a cld
6. 摔倒fall dwn
7. 膝盖受伤 hurt ne’s knee
8. 割伤cut neself
9. 撞到头 get hit n the head
10. 躺下来休息 lie dwn and rest
11. 喝热的蜂蜜水 drink ht tea with hney
12. 看牙医 g t the dentist
10. 休息几天 rest fr a few days
11. 去看医生 g t a dctr
12. 量体温 take ne’s temperature
13. 在……敷药 put sme medicine
14. 用绑带包扎 put a bandage n...
15. 在水下冲 run under the water
16. 去医院 g t the hspital
【句式积累】
1.As is knwn t all，health/playing sprts/eating healthily/having enugh sleep/washing hands befre meals is f great imprtance t us.
2.It's imprtant fr us t live a healthy life/drink plenty f water/have a healthy diet.
3.Firstly, early t bed and early t rise/ging t bed early and getting up early/getting enugh sleep can make us feel full f energy.
4.Secndly, eating habits als play an imprtant part in ur life. We shuld eat as many kinds f fd as pssible/eat mre fruit and vegetables/eat less fast fd/drink water instead f sft drinks.
5.Last but nt least, sprts help make teenagers healthier and strnger.
Thrugh these activities, we can imprve ur sleep and get a gd rest.
6.In a wrd, if we stick t/fllw the advice (given) abve， we will have/live /lead a healthy life.
7.Fllw the advice, and we will be healthy.
8.Ding eye exercises at break will surely benefit us a lt. I really hpe ur schl can rganize mre such activities.
【俗语谚语】
①Health is nt valued till sickness cmes. 病时方知健康可贵。
②An apple a day keeps the dctr away. 一天一苹果，医生远离我。
③Early t bed and early t rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
早睡早起让人健康、富有和明智。
（一）健康问题类短语
1. 牙痛 ___________________
2. 头痛 ___________________
3. 肚子痛 ___________________
4. 背痛 ___________________
5. 喉咙痛 ___________________
6. 流鼻血 ___________________
7. 感冒 ___________________
8. 发烧 ___________________
9. 咳嗽 ___________________
10. 感到恶心 ___________________
（二）意外事故短语
1. 摔倒 _____________________
2. 割伤 _____________________
3. 撞到头 _____________________
4. 膝盖受伤 _____________________
5. 背受伤 _____________________
6. 手臂受伤 _____________________
（三）措施短语
1. 躺下来休息 _____________________
2. 喝热的蜂蜜水 _____________________
3. 看牙医 _____________________
4. 拍X光 _____________________
5. 量体温 _____________________
6. 在……敷药 _____________________
7. 用绑带包扎 _____________________
8. 在水下冲 _____________________
9. 去医院 _____________________
10. 休息几天 _____________________
11. 去看医生 _____________________
12. 切除 _____________________
（四）其他短语
1. 怎么了 _____________________
2. 下车 _____________________
3. 使……惊讶 _____________________
4. 同意做某事 _____________________
5. 造成麻烦 _____________________
6. 习惯于…… _____________________
7. 冒险 _____________________
8. 用尽；耗尽 _____________________
9. 离开，从……出来 _____________________
10. 掌管；管理 _____________________
11. 坚持做某事 _____________________
12. 放弃 _____________________
13.做决定 _____________________
14. 考虑做某事 _____________________
二、句子积累
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
1. I sat in the same way fr t lng withut mving. The bus driver stpped the bus withut thinking twice.（withut ding sth没有做某事）
我一直在做作业没有休息。
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2. But t his surprise, they all agreed t g with him.（t ne’s surprise 使……惊讶；出乎……意料）
让我感到惊讶的是，他能独自穿越这片森林。
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3. Thanks t Mr. Wang and the passengers, the dctrs saved the man in time.（thanks t多亏；由于；in time及时）
多亏了黄老师，快速送我到医院，我才及时得到治疗(receive treatment)。
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4. He bandaged himself s that he wuld nt lse t much bld.（s that 因此）
我早起是为了赶上早班车。
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5. His lve fr muntain climbing is s great that he kept n climbing muntains even after his experience.（s... that... 如此……以至于……）
这蛋糕是如此美味，以至于我吃了好多，肚子痛了。
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6. Arn is used t taking risks.（be used t ding sth习惯于做某事）
我习惯于早上喝一杯水。
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（二）根据健康问题或生活中的伤害事故，提出建议。（提建议的句式有shuld，shuldn’t，Why Why dn’t yu... ? What/Hw 等）
1. Tina fell dwn frm her bike and hurt her knee.
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2. Steve ate t much at the party s that he had a stmachache.
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3. Mr Smith gt hit by a ball when he was walking.
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参考答案：
（一）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 mypia；电子产品 electrnic device
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu?
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m srry t learn that yur eyesight is getting weaker. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight. And reading bks fr t lng may cause mypia.
But dn’t wrry. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f prtecting eyesight. At first, yu shuld cntrl the time yu spend n electrnic prducts. Yu can d mre utdr activities. What’s mre, yu shuld develp sme gd habits. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. They are gd fr yur health. Besides, ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes. Lastly, yu shuld have yur eyes examined every term t make sure yur eyes stay healthy.
I hpe yu’ll find my ways helpful.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
②be gd fr对……有好处
③play an imprtant rle in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
（二）
你的朋友Jim非常喜欢玩游戏。由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且晚上睡不好觉。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一下他的情况，并指出你对他的建议。
具体要求：
1. 内容包含上述所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 书写认真，句子通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数：80词左右。
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【答案】
例文
Jim is my friend. He likes playing cmputer games very much. He ften sits in the same way fr t lng withut mving. Nw he has a headache, sre eyes and a sre back. He desn’t sleep well at night, s he feels tired every day.
I think he shuld take breaks away frm the cmputer. He shuldn’t use the cmputer fr a lng time. He shuld d eye exercises t relax his eyes and g t bed early at night.
I think if he has a gd rest, he will feel well sn.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Jim的基本情况；
第二步，阐述自己给出的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①like ding sth喜欢做某事
②in the same way以同样的方式
③d eye exercises做眼保健操
[高分句型]
①I think he shuld take breaks away frm the cmputer.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I think if he has a gd rest, he will feel well sn.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（三）
假如你是李华，你的网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤，请根据以下内容是示，用英语给Peter写一封电子邮件。
提示：1. 询问病情并提出建议；
2. 介绍一下你学校的近期活动；
3. 表达祝愿。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m srry t hear that yu gt injured while playing basketball.
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Hpe yu’ll get better，and be back t yur schl as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Peter,
I’m srry t hear that yu gt injured while playing basketball. Hw are yu feeling nw? I think yu shuld have a gd rest at hme. And yu’d better take care f yurself when yu d sprts.
Everything ges well here! I enjy great changes in my schl. Nw, the teachers make their teaching styles clrful. In my science class, my teacher always encurages us t think, and cultivates ur ability t study independently. In additin, we have plenty f time t try what we want t d. We had ur Schl Day last week. There were different kinds f activities, such as the speech cntest, the talent shw, vlunteering…I tk part in the English speech cntest, and I wn the first prize. I will send yu sme phts abut my Schl Day if yu like.
Hpe yu’ll get better, and be back t yur schl as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，询问病情并给出建议；
第二步，介绍一下你学校的近期活动。
[亮点词汇]
①encurage sb t d sth鼓励某人做某事
②in additin另外
③plenty f许多
④such as例如
⑤win the first prize获得了一等奖
[高分句型]
①I think yu shuld have a gd rest at hme（省略that的宾语从句）
②There were different kinds f activities, such as the speech cntest, the talent shw, vlunteering（there be句型）
（四）
许多孩子喜欢吃零食，这是导致他们肥胖的主要原因之一。英语课上，老师引导学生就吃零食这一问题展开讨论。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文，简要谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1. 吃零食是一种坏习惯；
2. 科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人们摄取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易发胖。
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 可适当补充细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：snack n.零食 take in摄取 verweight adj.肥胖的；超重的
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【答案】例文
Mst f the students in ur class like eating snacks. I think it’s a bad habit. Snacks are delicius, but they are bad fr ur health if we eat lts f them. D yu knw why? Scientists say sme snacks have t much fat and sugar. The mre fat and sugar we take in, the mre easily we will becme fat. Becming verweight can cause a lt f health prblems and even illnesses. S in rder t keep healthy, we shuldn’t eat lts f snacks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏作文提示里的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“大多数学生都吃零食”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“吃零食有害健康、科学家论证等”几个方面介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家少吃零食，保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①bad habit坏习惯
②delicius美味
③be bad fr对……有害
④verweight超重
⑤health prblems健康问题
[高分句型]
①the mre fat and sugar we take in, the mre easily we will becme fat. (“the+比较级，the+比较”句型）
②S in rder t keep healthy, we shuldn’t eat lts f snacks. (“in rder t”引导目的状语)
（五）
暑假中，Le喜欢玩手机游戏，最近他的脖子有点难受。假如你是Le的朋友Denny，请你写一封信，帮Le分析一下他的问题，并就此提出几点建议。
提示：（1）久坐不动有害健康；
（2）注意休息；
（3）适当增加锻炼。
词数：不少于80；开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：语句通顺，不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Le,
I am srry t hear abut yur prblems.
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If yu fllw all these tips, yu’ll be better sn!
Yurs truly,
Denny
【答案】【参考范文】
Dear Le,
I am srry t hear abut yur prblems. As we knw, health is very imprtant t all f us.
Yu shuldn’t play the mbile phne games all the time. It is harmful t sit in the same way fr t lng withut mving. Since yu have sme prblems with yur neck, yu shuld stp playing the mbile phne games first. Then yu shuld take breaks after yu play with yur phne. Besides, exercise can help yu keep healthy. S try t take mre exercise. If yu still have a bad neck pain, yu shuld see a dctr.
If yu fllw all these tips, yu’ll be better sn!
Yurs truly,
Denny
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干和提示中对Le的问题分析和建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，紧接首段，指出健康的重要性
第二步，指出Le的问题在于长时间玩手机游戏，久坐不动；
第三步，针对Le的问题提出具体的建议；
[亮点词汇]
①all the time 总是
②have sme prblems with 有问题
③take breaks 休息
[高分句型]
①It is harmful t sit in the same way fr t lng withut mving.（运用句型：It is adj. t d“做某事是……的”）
②Since yu have sme prblems with yur neck, yu shuld stp playing the mbile phne games first.（since引导原因状语从句）
③If yu still have a bad neck pain, yu shuld see a dctr.（if引导条件状语从句）
（六）
英国作家萨克雷曾说：“播种习惯收获性格，播种性格收获命运。” 在生活中，一定有好的习惯伴随你的成长。请你以“Gd habits make me ________”为题写一篇短文（词数80—100）。
要求：
1.补全标题（参考词汇：better, happier, healthier, strnger等）；
2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
3.鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出，不计入词数。
Gd habits make me ________
Gd habits are imprtant in ur lives. They influence (影响) us a lt in many ways. I think ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One pssible versin:
Gd habits make me healthy
Gd habits are imprtant in ur lives. They influence us a lt in many ways. I think gd habits make me healthy. As we all knw, gd habits and gd health are twins. Gd habits can make peple healthy, fr example, getting enugh sleep, having breakfast, and ding exercise regularly.
I had such a experience, in the past, I ften went t bed very late at night. S I felt very tired and sleepy the next day. I culdn’t pay attentin t what my teachers said, s I culdn’t learn well. Later, my mther asked me t g t bed befre 10 ’clck and little by little, I have develped this habit. Nw I feel much better, I can fllw my teachers in class and learn well.
Frm my experience, I knw having gd habits are s imprtant that I take up frming mre gd habits. I believe I will certainly have gd health. Gd habits will als make me better and better.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：根据以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：已给出部分作文标题及参考词汇，考生可根据给出的提示写出符合题目要求“好的习惯对人的影响”的作文，注意单词的正确拼写，避免出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接表达自己的个人观点。以“好的习惯让我健康”这个观点为开头，简单举例说明好习惯有哪些；
第二步，具体阐述关于“好的习惯让我健康”的个人经历。以过去的坏习惯（熬夜）和现在的好习惯（早睡）来形成对比，突显出好的习惯对自己的好处；
第三步，书写总结。表达对于“好习惯”的认同和“自己会养成更多好习惯”的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all knw正如我们所知
②fr example例如
③in the past在过去
④little by little逐渐地
⑤take up ding sth.开始做某事
⑥better and better 越来越好
[高分句型]
①I culdn’t pay attentin t what my teachers said, s I culdn’t learn well.（“pay attentin t sth.” 句型，及what引导的宾语从句）
②Later, my mther asked me t g t bed befre 10 ’clck and little by little, I have develped this habit.（“ask sb. t d sth.” 句型）
③Frm my experience, I knw having gd habits are s imprtant that I take up frming mre gd habits.（“s+形容词+that+结果状语从句）
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假如你是李大明，你昨天骑自行车时遇到一位疲劳驾驶的司机，发生了一场交通事故。请根据图片提示写一篇英语短文，介绍事故发生的经过及吸取的教训，并呼吁大家遵守交通规则、注意交通安全。
要求：
1）包含图片信息，语句通顺、流畅，可适当发挥；
2）100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
I’m Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened t me near my hme.
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【答案】例文
I’m Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened t me near my hme. While I was riding a bike in the middle f the rad, I was listening t music.
A car appeared and it wasn’t ging fast. Hwever, the driver was very tired, s he didn’t see me. The driver and I didn’t stp and I hit the car. I fell ff my bike and brke my leg. The driver called 120 and I went t the hspital with his help.
Nw I am very careful. It’s imprtant t pay attentin n the rad. Dn’t listen t music when yu are riding a bike. And dn’t drive a car when yu are very tired.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文，介绍一起交通事故的记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据题目图片提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、经过以及结果等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍昨天发生了一起事故；
第二步，具体阐述事故的情况。包括事故发生的经过以及结果等；
第三步，最后介绍通过这次事故吸取的教训。
[亮点词汇]
① happen t发生于
② in the middle f在……中间
③ ride a bike骑自行车
[高分句型]
① While I was riding a bike in the middle f the rad, I was listening t music.（while引导时间状语从句）
②And dn’t drive a car when yu are very tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的“运动与健康”栏目正在以Let’s D Exercise Tgether为题，向广大中学生征文。
Let’s D Exercise Tgether It’s very imprtant fr us t d exercise.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Let’s D Exercise Tgether
It’s very imprtant fr us t d exercise. Ding exercise can nt nly help us keep fit, but als help t train a persn’s character. What’s mre, ding exercise helps us t study better.
We can d exercise whenever we want. It is gd fr us t g t schl n ft r by bike. In PE classes, we can d all kinds f exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and s n. On weekends, we can climb muntains r g swimming with ur friends. Als, we can g hiking during vacatins.
Let’s d exercise and have a healthy lifestyle tgether!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题干要求以“Let’s D Exercise Tgether”为题结合所给材料写一篇倡导运动以及提建议的一篇文章。
2.写作指导：人称主要采用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。写作内容围绕运动的重要性以及针对运动的时间和方式提出相关建议。写作时注意主谓一致，无语法和标点错误。
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健康是高质量生活的根本，是人类一个永恒的话题。如何在高度紧张的学习生活中保持健康的体魄尤其重要。请根据内容提示以“Healthy Lifestyle”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 拥有良好的健康可以更好地工作和学习，迎接更多挑战（challenge）；
2. 保持健康有很多种方式，如健康均衡的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜水果；多锻炼，摆脱不良生活习惯；保持快乐积极的心情，缓解来自学习和工作的压力等。
Healthy Lifestyle
Living a healthy lifestyle can have an effect n bth ur wrk and life. We can have mre energy t face challenges.
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【答案】参考范文
Healthy Lifestyle
Living a healthy lifestyle can have an effect n bth ur wrk and life. We can have mre energy t face challenges.
Althugh everyne hpes t have a strng bdy, sme peple dn’t knw hw t stay healthy. Here are sme tips t keep healthy.
Gd eating habits play an imprtant part in staying healthy. Fruit and vegetables are necessary, because they are gd fr yur health. At the same time, keeping a balanced and regular diet is als imprtant. Besides, exercising is als a useful way t keep healthy. Last but nt least, being in a gd md is a gd way t deal with the pressure frm study and wrk.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。需要根据所给要点谈论健康的重要性以及如何保持健康。
2. 写作指导：人称使用第三人称；时态使用一般现在时。写作内容要包含所有的提示要点，在提出建议时，多使用情态动词shuld。写作目的明确，注意语句之间的衔接。
（2023·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
参考词汇：做早操d mrning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessns
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise prperly
注意：
1. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
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That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening.
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favrite exercise is playing basketball. I ften play basketball fr abut ten hurs a week. Because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it als enables me t make friends with thers.
I think we shuld d mrning exercises every day t start ur day. What’s mre, when we have PE lessns, we can take part in different kinds f activities. We can als run fr half an hur every day t build up ur bdy. If we have time, we can ride bikes n weekends with ur friends.
I hpe everyne can exercise mre and have a better life.
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示信息进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的日常锻炼；
第三步，介绍给同学的建议；
第四步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③n weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessns, we can take part in different kinds f activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hpe everyne can exercise mre and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
（2023·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）
当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，习近平总书记对此高度重视并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年3月30日印发了《2023年全国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有何看法和建议。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，告诉大家如何保护视力。
要求：
1. 包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
As we all knw, eyes are very imprtant t us. Hwever, many students have pr eyesight. In rder t prtect ur eyesight, we shuld fllw these suggestins.
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In a wrd, let’s take actin t say gdbye t thick glasses.
【答案】例文
As we all knw, eyes are very imprtant t us. Hwever, many students have pr eyesight. In rder t prtect ur eyesight, we shuld fllw these suggestins.
In my pinin, it’s imprtant t have gd eyesight. We shuld develp gd habits f using ur eyes. Fr example, we’d better take a break after reading fr 45minutes. We can d eye exercises and d mre sprts. They are helpful t prtect ur eyesight. Eating healthy fd is als gd fr prtecting ur eyesight. I hpe we prtect ur eyes well s that we can see the clrful wrld.
In a wrd, let’s take actin t say gdbye t thick glasses.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容呼吁人们保护视力，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对下文建议的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍如何保护视力；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin在我看来
②take a break休息一下
③be gd fr有益于
[高分句型]
①In my pinin, it’s imprtant t have gd eyesight.（It固定句型）
②I hpe we prtect ur eyes well s that we can see the clrful wrld.（省略that的宾语从句和s that引导的目的状语从句）
（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）
自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要求：
（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：physical health 身体健康 psychlgical health 心理健康
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Nwadays, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n teenagers’ health. The fllwings are my pinins abut hw we teenagers live a healthy life.
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【答案】例文
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Nwadays, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n teenagers’ health. The fllwing are my pinins abut hw we teenagers live a healthy life.
Firstly, we must keep healthy. We shuld have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds f fd and lts f fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sprts at least ne hur every day. Exercise makes us strnger and helps us relax. We shuld get at least eight hurs’ sleep at night, s that we can have enugh energy t study.
Secndly, we have t be mentally healthy. We must be cnfident and have gd mds every day.
Finally, be happy. Happiness is imprtant fr ur health. If yu are wrried abut smething, try t slve it as sn as pssible.
T sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very imprtant fr us. I hpe everybdy can live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②different kinds f不同种类的
③be wrried abut担心
④sum up总结
[高分句型]
①We shuld get at least eight hurs’ sleep at night, s that we can have enugh energy t study.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
②If yu are wrried abut smething, try t slve it as sn as pssible.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·内蒙古包头·统考中考真题）
你校英文报正在征稿，主题是“Frm healthy eating habits”。请根据以下征稿启事，写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.词数80左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Frm healthy eating habits
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【答案】例文
Frm healthy eating habits
Getting int gd eating habits benefits us a lt. Fr ne thing, it helps us build up ur bdy. Fr anther, it gives us the energy we need t make the mst f the day.
In rder t frm healthy eating habits, we’d better take a variety f fds and nt be picky. It’s a gd chice fr us t eat vegetables, tfu, and meat that are all rich in nutrients. At the same time, we shuld avid fast fd and eat fewer fds high in fat, salt and sugar.
“Yu are what yu eat”, as the ld saying ges. S try t frm gd eating habits and stay healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明为什么养成健康的饮食习惯很重要；
第二步，具体阐述养成健康的饮食习惯的方法。
第三步，最后呼吁大家养成良好的饮食习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①Fr ne anther一方面……另一方面
②in rder t为了
③at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①it gives us the energy we need t make the mst f the day.（省略that的定语从句）
②In rder t frm healthy eating habits, we’d better take a variety f fds and nt be picky. （动词不定式作目的状语）
（2023·云南·统考中考真题）
Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life
Cycling is ne f my favrite sprts.
It always makes me relaxed and full f energy. It was sunny last Saturday mrning. After finishing my schlwrk, I felt a little bit tired. S I went cycling alng the rad in a frest nt far frm my hme. What great beauty f nature it was when I gt clse t it! Clrful flwers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stpped singing. Sft wind tuched my face when I rde a little faster. I gt relaxed and refreshed at nce.
What an enjyment f cycling it is! I enjy my life by ding sprts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get clse t接近
③far frm远离
[高分句型]
①Sft wind tuched my face when I rde a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjyment f cycling it is! （感叹句）
（2022·西藏·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户，保护视力对青少年来说尤为重要。请以“Hw t Prtect Our Eyes”为题写一篇英语短文，号召大家爱眼、护眼。
写作要点：
1.保护视力的重要性。如：好的视力可以使生活更加便利……
2.保护视力的方法。如：早睡早起，睡眠充足，多吃水果蔬菜……
3.保护视力的建议。如：少用手机，坚持每天做眼保健操……
写作要求：
1.词数不少于 70 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Hw t Prtect Our Eyes
As we all knw, the eye is the windw t the sul.
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【答案】例文
Hw t Prtect Our Eyes
As we all knw, the eye is the windw t the sul. They are very imprtant t us. Gd eyesight can make life easier. But d yu knw hw t prtect yur eyes? First, yu shuld g t bed early and get up early t keep enugh sleep. In additin, yu shuld eat mre fruits and vegetables. Secnd, yu shuld use cell phne less and d eye exercises every day. Third, yu shuld take part in sme after-schl activities t exercise.
Let’s prtect ur eyes by fllwing the ways abve.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给信息提示，写一篇作文号召大家爱眼、护眼。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍保护视力的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述保护视力的方法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be imprtant t对……重要
②in additin此外
③take part参加
[高分句型]
First, yu shuld g t bed early and get up early t keep enugh sleep.（and连接两个并列结构）
话题
考查热度
“健康和急救”
描述某人存在的健康问题及给出合理建议
近视原因
长时间使用电子产品；
读书时间过长。
建议
控制使用电子产品时间；
养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望
……
（一）1.have a tthache
2.have a headache
3.have a stmachache
4.have a sre back
5.have a sre thrat
6.have a nsebleed
7.have a cld
8.have a fever
9.have a cugh
10.feel sick
（二）1.fall dwn
2.cut neself
3.get hit n the head
4.hurt ne’s knee
5.hurt ne’s back
6.hurt ne’s arm
（三）1.lie dwn and rest
2.drink ht tea with hney
3.g t the dentist
4.get an X-ray
5.take ne’s temperature
6.put sme medicine n...
7.put a bandage n...
8.run under the water
9.g t the hspital
10.rest fr a few days
11.g t a dctr
12.cut ff
（四）1.what’s the matter
2.get ff
3.t ne’s surprise
4.agree t d sth
5. get int truble
6.be used t
7.take risks
8.run ut (f)
9.get ut f
10. be in cntrl f
11.keep n ding sth
12.give up
13.make decisins
14.think abut ding sth
二、句子积累
（一）1. I did my hmewrk all the time withut having a rest.
2. T my surprise, he culd g thrugh the frest himself.
3. Thanks t Mr Huang, he sent me t the hspital quickly and I received treatment in time.
4. I get up early s that I can catch the early bus.
5. The cake was s delicius that I ate t much and had a stmachache.
6. I am used t drinking a glass f water in the mrning.
近视原因
长时间使用电子产品；
读书时间过长。
建议
控制使用电子产品时间；
养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望
……
运动的重要性
运动的时间与方式
● 保持健康
● 培养个人的性格
● ……
● 上学时步行或骑自行车
● 上体育课时做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球……）
● 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等
● ……
我的日常锻炼
1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
给同学的建议
1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
号召
1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
身体健康
心理健康
坚持锻炼
拥有自信
保证睡眠
保持好心情
……
……
ARTICLES WANTED!
The Wrld Wide Fund Fr Nature (WWF) suggests:
Eat mre plants: have mre vegetables and whle grains (全谷类);
Eat a variety ffds: dn’t be picky (挑剔的) and have a clrful plate;
Eat fewer fds high in fat, salt and sugar;
…
Write an article answering the fllwing tw questins. We will publish the best ne in ur newspaper.
1. Why is it imprtant t frm health y eating habits?
2. Hw can yu frm healthy eating habits?