广东省深圳市龙岗区2024-2025学年八年级上学期10月月考英语试题（解析版）-A4

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说明：全卷共6页，满分75分，考试时长70分钟。请在答题卡上作答，在本卷上作答无效。
第一部分 选择题（50分）
Ⅰ. 完形填空（10分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出能填入相应空白处的最佳选项。（共10小题，每小题1分）
At the 17th Paralympic Games (残奥会) in Paris, Liu Yu, a 35-year-ld disabled swimmer, was ___1___ after winning the third place in the wmen’s backstrke 50m (女子50米仰泳).
Liu was brn with illness and culdn’t ___2___. She had t use a wheelchair and stayed in a children’s hspital. ___3___, the elder kids in the hspital cared fr this yung girl. Like her ___4___, they taught her t be strng.
At the age f 15, Liu had the chance t learn hw t swim and shwed her talent in the pl. “I lved the feelings f ___5___ and was nt scared at all. It was s wnderful t mve ___6___ withut having t use legs.”
Staying ___7___ is the key t her success. “I was 24 years ld then and it was s tiring t stay in the water six hurs a day. But I never ___8___ and finally made it.”
In 2019, she was ___9___ by the Natinal Team. This year, she wn a brnze medal (铜牌).
“Althugh it’s my last Paralympic Games, I’m happy with this result.” said Liu. “I want t tell peple that n matter what happened t yu, never ____10____ and yu will finally succeed!”
1. A. tiredB. wrriedC. excitedD. surprised
2. A. sleepB. jumpC. swimD. walk
3. A. HpefullyB. NaturallyC. LuckilyD. Sadly
4. A. dctrsB. parentsC. classmatesD. children
5. A. flatingB. flyingC. runningD. challenging
6. A. painfullyB. slwlyC. suddenlyD. freely
7. A. strngB. strictC. carefulD. lazy
8. A. give utB. give upC. give awayD. give ff
9. A. knwnB. frgttenC. brkenD. chsen
10. A. restB. mveC. stpD. sleep
【答案】1. C 2. D 3. C 4. B 5. A 6. D 7. A 8. B 9. D 10. C
【解析】
【导语】本文讲述了一位残疾游泳运动员刘玉的励志故事。
【1题详解】
句意：在巴黎举行的第17届残奥会上，35岁的残疾游泳运动员刘玉在女子仰泳50米比赛中获得第三名后激动不已。
tired累的；wrried担心的；excited兴奋的；surprised惊讶的。根据“after winning the third place in the wmen’s backstrke 50m (女子50米仰泳).”可知，在获得第三名后应是感到兴奋。故选C。
【2题详解】
句意：刘出生时患有一种疾病，不能走路。
sleep睡觉；jump跳；swim游泳；walk走路。根据“She had t use a wheelchair”可知，她不能走路。故选D。
【3题详解】
句意：幸运地是，医院里的大孩子照顾着这个小女孩。
Hpefully有希望地；Naturally自然地；Luckily幸运地；Sadly难过地。根据“the elder kids in the hspital cared fr this yung girl”可知，医院里的大孩子都照顾这个小女孩，这对她来说，是幸运地。故选C。
【4题详解】
句意：像她的父母一样，他们教她要坚强。
dctrs医生；parents父母；classmates同学；children儿童。根据“they taught her t be strng.”可知，他们像父母一样教她要坚强。故选B。
【5题详解】
句意：我喜欢漂浮的感觉，一点也不害怕。
flating漂浮；flying飞；running跑；challenging挑战。根据“Liu had the chance t learn hw t swim and shwed her talent in the pl.”可知，在水里游泳，应是漂浮的感觉。故选A。
【6题详解】
句意：不用腿就能自由移动真是太棒了。
painfully痛苦地；slwly慢慢地；suddenly突然；freely自由地。根据“withut having t use legs”可知，是指不用腿就能自由移动很棒。故选D。
【7题详解】
句意：保持坚强是她成功的关键。
strng坚强的；strict严格的；careful仔细的；lazy懒惰的。根据“... is the key t her success.”可知，保持坚强是成功的关键。故选A。
【8题详解】
句意：但我从不放弃，最终做到了。
give ut发出；give up放弃；give away赠送；give ff散发。根据“finally made it”可知，从没有放弃，最终才取得成功。故选B。
【9题详解】
句意：2019年，她被国家队选中。
knwn知道；frgtten忘记；brken弄坏；chsen选择。根据“she was ... by the Natinal Team”可知，是指被选入国家队。故选D。
【10题详解】
句意：我想告诉人们，无论你遇到什么，都不要停下来，你最终会成功的！
rest休息；mve移动；stp停下；sleep睡觉。根据“n matter what happened t yu, never ... and yu will finally succeed!”可知，是指无论发生什么都不要停下来，最终会取得成功。故选C。
Ⅱ. 阅读理解（40分）
第一节 阅读下列短文，从下面每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。（共15小题，每小题1.5分）
A
Once upn a time, a wise Greek man named Thales came t Egypt. Thales was gd at maths. He als lved slving puzzles and finding ut hw things wrked. One day, he visited the Great Pyramid. It was the tallest building he had ever seen. After enjying its beauty, he wndered hw tall the pyramid was. He asked the lcals, but nbdy knew.
Thales thught abut this questin day and night. One night, when he was enjying the mnlight, he came t realize that everything has a shadw when the sun shines. An idea hit him, “If I can measure (测量) the pyramid’s shadw, I can figure ut its height!”
S, Thales waited patiently until the sun was just right. He std next t the pyramid and measured his wn shadw. Then, he measured the pyramid’s shadw. Thales was abut 6 feet tall, and his shadw was 2 feet lng. The rati (比例) was 3:1. The pyramid’s shadw was much lnger, abut 120 feet. Thales realized that the pyramid’s height equals 120 multiplied by 3.
Finally, at lunchtime, Thales declared the Great Pyramid’s height—______ feet. Everyne was amazed. Thales used his wisdm t slve the puzzle.
11. Where did Thales cme frm?
A. Egypt.B. Greek.C. China.D. Italy.
12. What des the underlined wrd “figure ut” in Paragraph 2 prbably mean?
A. Wrk ut.B. Run ut.C. Check ut.D. Carry ut.
13. When did Thales start t measure?
A. At night.B. In the afternn.C. In the mrning.D. At nn.
14. Which number shuld be put nt ______ in the last paragraph?
A. 40.B. 120.C. 123.D. 360.
15. What can we learn frm Thales?
A. Tw heads are better than ne.B. Practise makes perfect.
C. Intelligence cmes frm thinking.D. It is never t ld t learn.
【答案】11. B 12. A 13. C 14. D 15. C
【解析】
【导语】本文讲述了一位名叫泰勒斯的希腊人如何通过测量金字塔和他自己的影子，使用比例的方法计算金字塔高度的故事，展示了他的智慧和对数学的应用。
【11题详解】
细节理解题。根据“a wise Greek man named Thales came t Egypt” 可知，Thales来自希腊。故选B。
【12题详解】
词义猜测题。根据“If I can measure the pyramid’s shadw, I can figure ut its height!”可知，Thales想通过测量影子来“计算出”金字塔的高度。“figure ut”在此处有“弄清楚，计算出”的意思，故选 A。
【13题详解】
推理判断题。根据“One night, when he was enjying the mnlight, he came t realize that everything has a shadw when the sun shines”和“S, Thales waited patiently until the sun was just right. He std next t the pyramid and measured his wn shadw. Then, he measured the pyramid’s shadw...Finally, at lunchtime... ”可知是在上午测量的，接着中午宣布高度，故选C。
【14题详解】
细节理解题。根据“The pyramid’s shadw was much lnger, abut 120 feet. Thales realized that the pyramid’s height equals 120 multiplied by 3.”可知，金字塔的高度是120乘以3，即360英尺。故选D。
【15题详解】
推理判断题。根据文中Thales通过观察和思考解决问题的过程可知，智慧来源于思考。故选C。
B
If yu g t the Gulf f Mexic, yu can see there is a big hle. It is called Chicxulub Crater. Sme peple believe it was because f a huge asterid (小行星) hitting this place, and the hit made dinsaurs die ut millins f years ag.
This idea was first suggested in 1980. Later, scientists used special tls t find ut what wuld happen if it was true. It shwed that the asterid culd hit Earth at 40,000 miles per hur, leading t a big hle, a great tsunami (海啸), earthquakes, and the melting (融化) f tns f rck. The hit tk away millins f lives arund the Chicxulub Crater.
The terrible stry didn’t stp there. Minutes later, ht rck started t rain dwn, and there was deadly dirt everywhere n the grund. Mre animals were burnt t death. After several hurs, a super-ht wind kncked dwn anything still standing.
In weeks, the sky was full f ash. Days became nights. This cvered the sunlight fr mnths r even years. Many plants died first. Then lts f animals died t because f fd shrtage, including almst all dinsaurs.
Althugh this idea sunds pssible, the questin f hw dinsaurs died ut remains unslved scientifically. But as scientists discver mre dinsaur fssils, we may knw the truth ne day.
16. What des the underlined wrd it in Paragraph 2 refer t?
A. The idea that a rck frm space made a big hle n Earth.
B. The thught that the asterid made dinsaurs die ut.
C. The truth that all dinsaurs died ut millins f years ag.
D. The fact that Chicxulub Crater is in the Gulf f Mexic.
17. Accrding t the scientist, what happened when the asterid hit Earth?
A. A big hle appeared in Nrth America.
B. The asterid hit Earth at 40,000 miles per secnd.
C. The hit made lts f rck melt.
D. Millins f lives were lst in Mexic.
18. Accrding t the idea, what was the reasn fr the death f almst all dinsaurs?
A. Fd shrtage.B. N sunlight.C. Ash and dirt.D. The asterid’s hit.
19. Which f the fllwing statement is TRUE?
A. The dirt after the hit didn’t hurt animals n the grund.
B. Hurs later, animals died because f harmful gases.
C. We will surely knw the truth frm dinsaur fssils.
D There isn’t a scientific reasn fr the dinsaur’s die-ff.
20. Where can yu prbably find this passage?
A. In a strybk abut dinsaurs.B. In a science bk abut space.
C. In an encyclpaedia f animals.D. In a travel magazine abut Mexic.
【答案】16. B 17. C 18. A 19. D 20. C
【解析】
【导语】本文主要讲述了科学家对恐龙灭绝的一个假想——小行星撞击地球的影响。
【16题详解】
词句猜测题。根据“Sme peple believe it was because f a huge asterid (小行星) hitting this place, and the hit made dinsaurs die ut millins f years ag.”可知，人们认为小行星的撞击使恐龙灭绝。结合句意，it指代的是“小行星的撞击使恐龙灭绝的想法”。故选B。
【17题详解】
细节理解题。根据“It shwed that the asterid culd hit Earth at 40,000 miles per hur, leading t a big hle, a great tsunami (海啸), earthquakes, and the melting (融化) f tns f rck.”可知，小行星的撞击导致了很多岩石融化。故选C。
【18题详解】
细节理解题。根据“Many plants died first. Then lts f animals died t because f fd shrtage, including almst all dinsaurs.”可知，因为食物短缺，很多动物死亡，包括几乎所有的恐龙。故选A。
【19题详解】
细节理解题。根据“Althugh this idea sunds pssible, the questin f hw dinsaurs died ut remains unslved scientifically.”可知，恐龙灭绝的科学解释还没有被证实。故选D。
【20题详解】
推理判断题。根据本文内容可知，本文是关于科学家探索恐龙灭绝的科学猜想，所以可能出现在关于动物的百科全书中。故选C。
C
Recently, a vide game named Black Myth: Wukng has been a great hit all ver the wrld. Black Myth is China’s first AAA vide game. Why is it s ppular? It is the Chinese culture inside it.
Wukng is a main character frm Jurney t the West, a Chinese classic gd-evil nvel written 500 years ag. “Chinese gd-evil stries are fantastic themselves. N ne wuld dislike them nce they start t learn abut them. And my game just pens a windw.” Said Feng Ji, the game’s prducer. Fr this reasn, althugh players frm ther cuntries were nt fans f Chinese culture, they are nw “hard-wrking” n every detail f the nvel. Fr almst the first time, the wrld tries actively t understand Chinese culture.
The beautiful scenes in the game are als attractive. Amng the 36 places that appear in the game, 27 are real in Shanxi Prvince. Take the Hanging Temple fr example. It was built nearly 1,600 years ag and truly hangs n a steep cliff (峭壁). Players are amazed when they realize it is a true attractin.
An American player said, “China is rich in culture and stries. I hpe we can get mre like this. I wuld lve t g t China sme day.”
21. What makes lts f peple talk abut the game?
A. The AAA quality.B. The excellent game design.
C. The Chinese culture.D. The ppularity amng peple.
22. Why des the wrld try t understand Chinese culture fr the first time?
A. Because game players are attracted by the Chinese culture in the game.
B. Because Jurney t the West has fans all ver the wrld.
C. Because players frm ther cuntries are always very hard-wrking.
D. Because gd-evil stries are s interesting and fantastic.
23. What’s the main idea f Paragraph 3?
A. The game Black Myth: Wukng is the first big game frm China.
B. Players are mstly interested in hw t play Black Myth: Wukng.
C. Black Myth: Wukng made Chinese culture ppular thrugh its stry.
D. All the players want t visit China after playing the game.
24. What’s the structure f this passage?
A. B. C. D.
25. What is the best title fr this news?
A The hit f Jurney t the WestB. The way t be tp game players
C. The first AAA vide gameD. Chinese culture in a ppular vide game
【答案】21. C 22. A 23. C 24. B 25. D
【解析】
【导语】本文介绍了一款名为《黑神话：悟空》的视频游戏，它融合了中国文化元素，特别是《西游记》中的孙悟空角色，以及游戏中展现的美丽真实场景，吸引了全球玩家的关注和喜爱，促进了世界对中国文化的了解。
【21题详解】
细节理解题。根据“Black Myth is China’s first AAA vide game. Why is it s ppular? It is the Chinese culture inside it.”可知，人们因为中国文化而谈论这个游戏。故选C。
【22题详解】
细节理解题。根据“Fr this reasn, althugh players frm ther cuntries were nt fans f Chinese culture, they are nw ‘hard-wrking’ n every detail f the nvel. Fr almst the first time, the wrld tries actively t understand Chinese culture.”可知，游戏玩家被游戏中的中国文化所吸引，因此世界几乎第一次积极尝试了解中国文化。故选A。
【23题详解】
段落大意题。第三段主要讲述了《黑神话：悟空》通过融合中国真实地点和文化元素，使中国文化在游戏中得到展现，进而受到全球玩家的关注和喜爱，推动了中国文化的传播。故选C。
【24题详解】
篇章结构题。本文第一段介绍《黑神话：悟空》游戏的全球热度及其背后的原因；第二段和第三段详细阐述《黑神话：悟空》如何通过中国文化元素吸引玩家；第四段介绍玩家的反馈和对中国文化的兴趣。结构如选项B所示。故选B。
【25题详解】
最佳标题题。本文主要介绍了一款融合中国文化的视频游戏——《黑神话：悟空》，因此选项D“流行视频游戏中的中国文化”最适合作为本文的标题。故选D。
第二节 以下是一则短文，请阅读全文，并从下列的六个句子中选择五个还原到原文中，使原文的意思完整、连贯。（共5小题，每小题2分）
Tests are imprtant fr learning. Many students d well with their hmewrk. ___26___ Here are sme tips fr yu t d well in tests.
Find the Perfect Place
If yu study in a place with gd lighting, yu will feel cmfrtable. Hwever, the mst imprtant thing is that there are n distractins (分心). Try turning ff the TV r putting away yur smartphne fr ne hur. ___27___
Try Study Aids
Every student shuld take ntes and d revisin. Hwever, that may nt be enugh. If yu like flashcards, try dividing yur ntes int different parts. ___28___ They may help yu remember the key pints t!
Stay Psitive and Calm
___29___ When taking the test, take a quick lk thrugh the whle test paper first. If yu cme acrss a difficult questin, d nt be nervus. Stp and think fr a mment.
Keep n Studying
Here cmes the mst imprtant tip: Never give up. ___30___ Yu will certainly d better in the next test.
A. But they have prblems when taking tests.
B. Then turn them int flashcards.
C. That helps yu t memrize things mre easily and quickly.
D. They als study hard every day.
E. Remember t keep studying hard all the time.
F. Yu shuld stay psitive befre a test.
【答案】26. A 27. C 28. B 29. F 30. E
【解析】
【导语】本文主要介绍了一些帮助学生提高考试成绩的技巧。
【26题详解】
根据“Many students d well with their hmewrk.”和“Here are sme tips fr yu t d well in tests.”可知，此处先是讲述了许多学生在家庭作业上做得很好，但紧接着提到了一些关于考试的技巧，说明这些学生在考试上可能存在问题。选项A“但是他们在考试时有问题。”符合语境。故选A。
【27题详解】
根据“If yu study in a place with gd lighting, yu will feel cmfrtable. Hwever, the mst imprtant thing is that there are n distractins (分心). Try turning ff the TV r putting away yur smartphne fr ne hur.”可知，此处应是说这样做有助于你更快更容易地记住东西，选项C“这有助于你更快更容易地记住东西。”符合语境。故选C。
【28题详解】
根据“If yu like flashcards, try dividing yur ntes int different parts.”可知，此处应是建议将笔记制作成抽认卡，选项B“然后把它们变成抽认卡。”符合语境。故选B。
【29题详解】
根据“When taking the test, take a quick lk thrugh the whle test paper first.”可知，此处应是说在考试前保持积极和冷静，选项F“考试前你应该保持积极的心态。”符合语境。故选F。
【30题详解】
根据“Never give up.”可知，此处应是强调持续学习的重要性，选项E“记住要一直努力学习。”符合语境。故选E。
第三节 信息匹配（共5小题，每小题1.5分）
下面的材料A～F分别介绍了六个不同的网站，请你根据Andy，Ben，Cty，Denny和Elbert的个人情况，为他们配对合适的信息。
A. NASA brings yu the latest news, images, and vides frm space. Yu can als learn hw t make yur wn rcket here.
B. Natinal Gegraphic is a place t explre nature nline. Yu can learn abut the mst dangerus animals in the wrld as well as the mst wnderful natural attractins.
C. WikiHw can teach yu t d anything. Just type in yur questins like “Hw t…” and yu will get clear instructins.
D. IMDB is a space fr mvie lvers. Here yu will see the tp 250 mvies list, scres f a new mvie, and hw peple feel abut a mvie.
E. Kids News can nt just let yu learn abut what is happening arund the wrld, it is als a great website fr yu t practice English reading skills.
F. Qura is a nice place t learn abut thers’ experiences. Yu can read peple’s stries r ask questins yurself. Yu will get different answers frm all ver the wrld.
31. Andy learns English frm watching mvies. He wants t knw what mvie is gd fr learning.
32. Ben will visit New Zealand this winter. He is lking fr sme natural attractins t visit.
33. Cty wants t be an astrnaut ne day. She needs t learn abut space first.
34. Denny wants t bake sme ckies fr her mther. But he desn’t knw hw t d it.
35. Elbert is a big fan f stries. He likes reading different peple’s life experiences.
【答案】31. D 32. B
33. A 34. C
35. F
【解析】
【导语】本文是根据五个人的个人情况，为他们匹配合适的网站。
【31题详解】
根据“He wants t knw what mvie is gd fr learning.”可知，Andy想知道什么电影对学习有好处。选项D“IMDB是电影爱好者的空间。在这里，你将看到前250部电影列表、一部新电影的分数以及人们对一部电影的感受。”与之匹配。故选D。
32题详解】
根据“He is lking fr sme natural attractins t visit.”可知，Ben正在寻找一些自然景点来参观。选项B“国家地理是一个在线探索自然的地方。你可以了解世界上最危险的动物以及最奇妙的自然景点。”与之匹配。故选B。
【33题详解】
根据“She needs t learn abut space first.”可知，Cty想要先了解太空。选项A“NASA为你带来来自太空的最新新闻、图片和视频。你也可以在这里学习如何制作自己的火箭。”与之匹配。故选A。
【34题详解】
根据“Denny wants t bake sme ckies fr her mther. But he desn’t knw hw t d it.”可知，Denny想要知道如何烤饼干。选项C“WikiHw可以教你做任何事情。只要输入你的问题，比如‘如何……’，你就会得到明确的指示。”与之匹配。故选C。
【35题详解】
根据“He likes reading different peple’s life experiences.”可知，Elbert喜欢阅读不同的人的生活经历。选项F“Qura是一个了解他人经历的好地方。你可以阅读人们的故事或自己提问。你会从世界各地得到不同的答案。”与之匹配。故选F。
第二部分 非选择题（25分）
Ⅲ. 语法填空（10分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入一个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
The giant panda is a natinal treasure f China. It is famus ___36___ the living fssil. Mst pandas have black-and-white fur. They lk very cute and have higher ___37___ (intelligent) amng all the animals. They can fllw the zkeepers’ ___38___ (instructin) withut difficulty. That’s why almst everyne ___39___ (like) them.
The giant pandas lve eating bamb best. But they als enjy ther fd, ___40___ (include) birds, fish, and sme small animals. A panda at ___41___ (brn) nly weighs hundreds f grams, while a grwn-up panda’s weight can rise up t 180 kilgrams.
Wild pandas live in cl and wet bamb frests f the central and western China, high up in the muntains. They shw great ability ___42___ (climb) trees frm an early age.
The living giant panda was ___43___ (ne) fund in Sichuan by a Frenchman. In 2008, because they were in danger f ___44___ (die) ut, they were n the list f the endangered animal. Luckily, in 2016, ___45___ (science) remved the giant panda frm the list. It’s China’s success in rebuilding bamb frests.
【答案】36. as 37. intelligence
38. instructins
39. likes 40. including
41. birth 42. t climb
43. first##firstly
44. dying 45. scientists
【解析】
【导语】本文介绍了大熊猫的特点、生活习性、栖息地以及保护现状。
【36题详解】
句意：它以活化石而闻名。根据“It is famus ... the living fssil.”可知，以活化石而闻名，be famus as“作为……而著名”。故填as。
【37题详解】
句意：它们看起来很可爱，在所有动物中智力更高。分析句子可知，此处应该用名词作宾语，intelligent“聪明的”，形容词，其名词为intelligence“智力”。故填intelligence。
38题详解】
句意：它们可以毫无困难地听从动物园管理员的指示。此处表示泛指，应该用名词复数。故填instructins。
【39题详解】
句意：这就是为什么几乎每个人都喜欢它们。此句时态为一般现在时，主语是everyne，谓语动词用三单。故填likes。
【40题详解】
句意：但它们也喜欢其他食物，包括鸟类、鱼类和一些小动物。此处用于补充额外的信息，应该用介词including“包括”。故填including。
【41题详解】
句意：一只熊猫出生时的体重只有几百克，而一只成年熊猫的体重可达180公斤。at birth“在出生时”，固定短语。故填birth。
【42题详解】
句意：它们从小就表现出爬树的能力。ability t d smething“做某事的能力”，此处应该用动词不定式作后置定语。故填t climb。
【43题详解】
句意：这只活着的大熊猫是法国人在四川首次发现的。根据“The living giant panda was ... fund”可知，此处指的是被首次发现，用first/firstly“首次地”。故填first/firstly。
【44题详解】
句意：2008年，由于它们有灭绝的危险，它们被列入濒危动物名单。in danger f中的f是介词，后跟动名词作宾语。故填dying。
【45题详解】
句意：幸运的是，2016年，科学家将大熊猫从名单中删除。根据“remved the giant panda frm the list”可知，科学家把大熊猫从濒危动物名单中删除，scientist“科学家”符合，此处用名词复数。故填scientists。
Ⅳ. 书面表达（15分）
46. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国寓言故事很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，告诉他一则守株待兔的寓言故事，内容包括：
要求：
1. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。
参考词汇：树干（trunk）；撞上（run int）；寓言（fable）；寓意（mral）；庄稼（crp）
Dear Mike,
Learning that yu’re interested in Chinese fables, I am writing t ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Learning that yu’re interested in Chinese fables, I am writing t share with yu a stry abut a farmer and a rabbit.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because f his hard wrk, his crps grew best in the village. Hwever, ne day, while wrking, he saw a rabbit run int a tree trunk and die. The farmer gt a rabbit withut any effrt. Frm that day n, instead f wrking hard, the farmer sat by the tree trunk every day, waiting fr mre rabbits t cme. Days turned int weeks, but n mre rabbits appeared. What’s wrse, his crps were all dead.
The mral f the fable is that we shuld never depend n luck. The harder we wrk, the luckier we will get.
Hw d yu find this fable? Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，适当添加细节，使内容完善、行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，讲述自己要分享“守株待兔”的寓言故事；
第二步，详述故事内容；
第三步，讲述该寓言故事所蕴含的道理；
第四步，询问对方的看法，并表示期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
① because f 因
② see sb. d sth. 看见某人做某事
③ instead f 代替，而不是
④ what’s wrse 更糟糕的是
⑤ depend n 依靠，依赖
⑥ lk frward t 期待
[高分句型]
① Frm that day n, instead f wrking hard, the farmer sat by the tree trunk every day, waiting fr mre rabbits t cme. (现在分词作状语)
② The mral f the fable is that we shuld never depend n luck. (表语从句)
时间、地点
古代中国
开始
农民曾经努力工作
经过
农民看到一只兔子撞到了树干
结果
……
寓言道理
……