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小学英语写作方法和技巧
作文在小学英语考试中占了很大的分值，那么究竟怎样做才能写好一篇小学作文呢?
要写好英语作文，具体要做到以下几点：
注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持坚持英语阅读的习惯，不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度，更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维，从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。
(1)平时多读，积累句型：读的越多，语感欲强烈，写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了，另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。
(2)选出一些代表性范文精读：选出不同题材的优秀作文范文，读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文，并做到学以致用。
注重平时的写作训练英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记，保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练，正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。
五步写出一篇好作文什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单，同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外，我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。
(1)认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ag，last…过去时;next，in…将来时等人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。例如：Thanks t the teachers， we have imprved ur English.其中we和ur就是人称的统一。
格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
(2)找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
(3)成文时表述正确，文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
(4)文章结构清晰，重点句型画龙点睛，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次，考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all， Firstly/First，Secndly/Secnd…And then， Finally， In the end，At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What is mre， Besides，Mrever，
3.表转折对比关系的：Hwever， On the cntrary， but, On ne hand… On the ther hand…Sme…， while thers…
4.表因果关系的：Because， As、S， Therefre， As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In ther wrds
6.表进行举例说明：Fr example，句子;Fr instance，句子;such as + n/ding
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I knw， In my pinin
9.表总结：In shrt， In a wrd.文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be mre beautiful and prsperus.
感叹句举例：Hw I want t study in the best middle schl in Guangzhu!
动名词做主语举例：Reading bks and swimming are my hbbies.
常用状语从句句型：
1)时间：
when， nt…until(直到…才…)， as sn as(一…就…)
2)目的：
s that + clause; (为了)
3)结果：
s…that…(如此…以至于…)， t…t d(太……以至于……)
4)条件：
if， unless(除非)， as lng as(只要)
5)比较：
as…as…(与…一样)， nt s…as…， than
(5)认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：
We live mre and mre cmfrtable.
改正：cmfrtably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can get many infrmatins by reading newspapers.改正：much infrmatin (不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There will have a ftball game tmrrw.改正：There will be a ftball game tmrrw.(There be句型的将来时结构)
4.I think ride a bike can keep ur health.改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)
掌握了以上的写作方法和技巧，建议同学们多练习或模仿不同题材的文章，正如一句格言“N pains，n gains.”所述，相信参加小升初的学子们只要能够坚持反复的写作磨练与付出就一定能在来年的择校考中写出一篇能够展示内心世界之美的英语作文。
好文章的标准：
内容要点齐全
结构合理，篇章连贯，主题明确
文辞正确、出彩
◆ 如何写好文章
审题
谋篇
结构（段落、衔接等）
utline 提纲
表达
小学英语作文范文
基础仿写训练：
1）我的书包My Backpack
I have a backpack. It is large and it is blue. It is a birthday gift frm my parents. I lve it very much. It is very "hard-wrking", because I keep all my schl things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during schl days. It is a gd friend f mine.
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（2）我的房子My Huse
I have a huse. It is big and new. There are eight rms in it. They are a living-rm,a kitchen,three bedrm,ne study and tw bathrms. I watch TV in the living-rm. I d my hmewrk in the study. I have dinner in the kitchen. This is my huse. I like it.
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（3）今年暑假(This vacatins)
In this vacatins I g t travel in sme famus places and i g t visit my grandparents in the village.i learn smething different.like example:I knw peple wrk in the village it is s hard and s tired,they are grw the vegetable,rice and smething else it is very difficult.
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范文精读：
（4）小学的最后一个暑假(the last summer in my elementary schl)
the last summer in my elementary schl is very unfrgettable,i remember i will g t anther schl and have t leave my friends and teachers,i feel sad ,but i learned t get tgether with them t remember the friendship between us,we have a gd time and swear t study hard in rder t have a bright future.
（5）今天的经历(Tday's experience)
It was a fine day tday and the sun was bright . I visited Beijing Z with my classmate ， Zhang Hng .
The animals there were s interesting that all the peple lved them . When I saw a visitr thrwing fd t the mnkeys ， I went ran t stp him and said ，“ Animals are ur gd friends and we must take gd care f them .”
（6）My Dg
I have a dg. My dg name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white cat. DuDu has tw big eyes and tw small ears. It has ne shrt muth. My dg is smart. I like my dg. D yu like it?
高分仿写训练：
（7）My Gd Friend
Zhang Ying is my gd friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 f Tianjia Primary Schl. She’s a mdel student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, t. She ften helps teachers and yung students at schl. She is gd at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and s n. She has a lt f hbbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening t music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, t. But she desn’t like playing basketball, ftball, table tennis r vlleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend f mine. I like playing with her. We always wrk tgether and help each ther.
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（8）My new teacher
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strng. He has a big muth, tw big ears, tw big eyes and a nt t big and nt t small nse. He ften wears a black new shirt and brwn pants, with tw big shes。
My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Tday, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is s funny. Wh is he? He’s a Mr. Zhu .
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（9）Birthday
My birthday is n Sunday. My parents are ging t have a birthday party at hme. I invite my friends t cme t the party.
At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture bks, pens.
They sing Happy Birthday t me. My mther makes a big cake fr me. I cut the cake int small pieces and give them ut. we sing and dance.
We have a gd time at the party.
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范文精读：
（10）Animals
I like animals very much. I have a dg, It’s my favurite animal. It’s white, It lks like a snw ball. It has tw big eyes and ears. But its nse and muth are very small. It’s very naughty.
It ften stares at my fd when I have a meal. When I’m hme it fllws me all the time.
When I d my hmewrk, it ften sits beside quietly, but smetimes runs arund me and shuts: wm wm.
I like my dg very much.
（11）My Study
My study is big. It’s abut 20㎡. The walls are white and the flr is dark yellw. The lights n the wall are very beautiful. There is a big windw n the wall. The windw curtains are yellw and light green.
In frnt f the wall, there is my desk. There is a telephne, a glbe and sme bks n the desk. There is a pian n the right f the desk. It’s my favrite present frm my parents when I was nine years ld.
On the left f the desk, there is a bkshelf. There are many bks n the shelf. Sme are strybks. Sme are picture bks. Sme are cartn bks. Sme are music bks.
There are sme English bks, t. On the shelf, there is a Snpy and a Blue Cat. I like them very much!
In the evening r at the weekends, I d my hmewrk and play the pian in my study. I can read all kinds f bks, t. In my study, I can gain much knwledge. I like my study. What abut yu?
（12）Learning Freign Language
I lve learning freign languages. Especially English because English is the mst widely spken language in the wrld, it is used by cuntries all ver the wrld. Fr example, if yu want t find a nice jb, yu prbably need t be gd at English, and when yu surf n the Internet, yu'll see many dialgues and keywrds in English. If yu dn't knw them, then yu'll have t spend a lt f time lking them up in an English dictinary. Therefre we must try harder t learn English and imprve ur English, and we culd learn mre besides.
Nw, I'm a junir high student, I try t read magazine articles in English everyday. In fact, learning English is lts f fun. It's rather like learning Chinese. Just pen yur muth and say smething in English r read lts f achievement. All in all, it's useful fr everyne t learn English.
（13）My gd habits
In the mrning. First, I get up. Next, I brush my teeth. Then, I wash my face. After that, I have breakfast. At last, I g t schl.
In the evening. First, I finish my hmewrk. Next, I have dinner. Then, I pack my schlbag. After that, hang up my clthes. At last, I g t bed.
（14）I lve my bedrm
I have a bedrm .It is nt big , but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedrm . A yellw dg is n the bed .Every night,I sleep with it . Next t the bed, there is a desk. A bear lamp is n the desk .I like the bear lamp. It's cute. I like t d hmewrk under the lamp every evening. I have a new cmputer in my bedrm .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are als several beautiful pictures n the wall.
I like my bedrm. D yu like it?
(15)D yu like me?
Hell! Everyne. I’m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Lk! I’m very lvely. My eyes are red. My ears are lng. My hair is white. My tail is shrt. I like carrts very much. I have a gd friend. She’s my little master. Her name is Zhu Xun. We always play games tgether. I like her very much and she likes me, t.
(16)My Pencil-bx
I have a gd friend. Her name is Pencil-bx. She is a very beautiful girl. Lk! There is a picture n her face. It’s a picture f flwers. Her cat is blue and yellw. There are sme pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stmach. Frm Mnday t Friday, I g t schl with her. When I want t cpy r write the new wrds, I pen her muth and take ut the pencil frm her stmach. She helps me a lt. And I like her very much.
(17)Wh am I?
Hell! My name is Feifei. My mther is very beautiful. My father is very handsme. S I’m very lvely. Lk! My cat is white. My eyes are blue. I have a lng tail. Fish is my favrite fd. I like mice t. Guess! Wh am I?
(18)My Mther(我的妈妈)
My mther is a beautiful wman.She is 38 years ld.She is an engineer.She likes singing and she can sing very well.She als likes reading,her favurite bk is HARRY POTTER.Althugh she hasn't any mney,I lve her very much.Because she is my mther.And she lves me,t.This is my mther.
(19)我想成为校长(I want t be a headmaster)
I want t be a headmaster when I grw up. I think that’s a gd jb. My schl is in the frest. It’s very beautiful. I g t wrk by Benz at eight ’clck in the mrning. The teachers in my schl are kind and patient. The female teachers in my schl are gd lking and yung. The male teachers are handsme and strng. They are all hardwrking s they get gd salary. The children in my schl have three classes in the mrning. In the afternn, they play and pick up mushrms r strawberries in the frest. They have n hmewrk. They are very happy! At fur ’clck in the afternn, I g hme with kinds f mushrms and fruits in my Benz. They are fr my dinner.
课后作业：
(20)我最喜爱的照片(My favurite pht)
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小学英语写作必看，50句经典谚语
1. 眼见为实。Seeing is believing.
2. 人生短暂，学艺无穷。Art is lng, life is shrt.
3. 三思而后行。 Lk befre yu leap.
4. 有其父，必有其子。Like father,like sn.
5. 再晚也不算迟。Better late than never.
6. 条条大路通罗马。All rads lead t Rme.
7. 并非闪光的都是金子。All that glitters is nt gld.
8. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。As yu sw,s shall yu reap.
9. 物以类聚。Birds f a feather flck tgether.
10. 不劳无获。N pain,n gain.
11. 入乡随俗。When in Rme,d as the Rmans d.
12. 那恰是我所喜欢的。It's my cup f tea.
13. 一日一苹果，医生远离我。An apple a day keeps the dctr away.
14. 患难见真情。A friend in meed is a friend indeed.
15. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。A yung idler; an ld beggar.
16. 熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.
17. 一分耕耘，一分收获。N sweet withut sweat.
18. 时间就是金钱。Time is mney.
19. 欲速则不达。Haste makes waste.
20. 说起来容易做起来难。Easier said than dne.
21. 人各有所好。Every man has his taste.
22. 物极必反。Extremes meet.
23. 活到老学到老。Live and learn.
24. 事出必有因。Nthing cmes f nthing.
25. 隔墙有耳。Walls have ears.
26. 失败是成功之母。Failure is the mther f success.
27. 江山易改，本性难移。A lepard can nt change his spts.
28. 冰冻三尺非一日之寒。Rme is nt built in a day.
29. 得饶人处且饶人。Frgive thers whenever yu can.
30. 爱乌及乌。Lve me ,lve my dg.
31. 活到老，学到老。Live and learn.
32. 礼尚往来。Give and take.
33. 知足者常乐。Cntent is happiness.
34. 言出必行。 S said, s dne.
35. 光阴似箭。Time flies.
36. 爱屋及乌。Lve me，lve my dg.
37. 既来之则安之。Take things as they cme.
38. 有志者事竟成。Where there is a will,there is a way.
39. 时间就是生命。Time is life.
40. 团结就是力量。Unity is strength.
41. 一切皆有可能！Nthing is impssible!
42. 让我们自己做。Let’s d it by urselves.
43. 记住：面带微笑。Remember: Keep smile n yur face.
44. 好书如挚友。A gd bk is a gd friend.
45. 良好的开端是成功的一半。A gd beginning is half dne.
46. 覆水难收。Dn’t cry ver spilt milk.
47. 不要泄露秘密。Dn’t put the cat ut f the bag.
48. 三个和尚没水吃。Everybdy’s business is nbdy’s business.
49. 今日事，今日毕。Dn’t put ff till tmrrw what shuld be dne tday.
50. 知识就是力量。Knwledge is pwer.
教案课题
小学六年级 书面表达
教师姓名
学生姓名
上课日期
学科
英语
适用年级
教材版本
学习目标
1. 理解和掌握小学作文技巧
2. 专题训练高分作文
3. 仿写满分作文
重难点
重点： 写好每一个句子
难点： 写好每一篇作文
小学英语写作方法和技巧
作文在小学英语考试中占了很大的分值，那么究竟怎样做才能写好一篇小学作文呢?
要写好英语作文，具体要做到以下几点：
注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持坚持英语阅读的习惯，不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度，更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维，从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。
(1)平时多读，积累句型：读的越多，语感欲强烈，写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了，另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。
(2)选出一些代表性范文精读：选出不同题材的优秀作文范文，读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文，并做到学以致用。
注重平时的写作训练英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记，保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练，正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。
五步写出一篇好作文什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单，同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外，我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。
(1)认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ag，last…过去时;next，in…将来时等人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。例如：Thanks t the teachers， we have imprved ur English.其中we和ur就是人称的统一。
格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
(2)找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
(3)成文时表述正确，文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
(4)文章结构清晰，重点句型画龙点睛，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次，考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all， Firstly/First，Secndly/Secnd…And then， Finally， In the end，At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What is mre， Besides，Mrever，
3.表转折对比关系的：Hwever， On the cntrary， but, On ne hand… On the ther hand…Sme…， while thers…
4.表因果关系的：Because， As、S， Therefre， As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In ther wrds
6.表进行举例说明：Fr example，句子;Fr instance，句子;such as + n/ding
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I knw， In my pinin
9.表总结：In shrt， In a wrd.文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be mre beautiful and prsperus.
感叹句举例：Hw I want t study in the best middle schl in Guangzhu!
动名词做主语举例：Reading bks and swimming are my hbbies.
常用状语从句句型：
1)时间：
when， nt…until(直到…才…)， as sn as(一…就…)
2)目的：
s that + clause; (为了)
3)结果：
s…that…(如此…以至于…)， t…t d(太……以至于……)
4)条件：
if， unless(除非)， as lng as(只要)
5)比较：
as…as…(与…一样)， nt s…as…， than
(5)认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：
We live mre and mre cmfrtable.
改正：cmfrtably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can get many infrmatins by reading newspapers.改正：much infrmatin (不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There will have a ftball game tmrrw.改正：There will be a ftball game tmrrw.(There be句型的将来时结构)
4.I think ride a bike can keep ur health.改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)
掌握了以上的写作方法和技巧，建议同学们多练习或模仿不同题材的文章，正如一句格言“N pains，n gains.”所述，相信参加小升初的学子们只要能够坚持反复的写作磨练与付出就一定能在来年的择校考中写出一篇能够展示内心世界之美的英语作文。
好文章的标准：
内容要点齐全
结构合理，篇章连贯，主题明确
文辞正确、出彩
◆ 如何写好文章
审题
谋篇
结构（段落、衔接等）
utline 提纲
表达
小学英语作文范文
基础仿写训练：
1）我的书包My Backpack
I have a backpack. It is large and it is blue. It is a birthday gift frm my parents. I lve it very much. It is very "hard-wrking", because I keep all my schl things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during schl days. It is a gd friend f mine.
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（2）我的房子My Huse
I have a huse. It is big and new. There are eight rms in it. They are a living-rm,a kitchen,three bedrm,ne study and tw bathrms. I watch TV in the living-rm. I d my hmewrk in the study. I have dinner in the kitchen. This is my huse. I like it.
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（3）今年暑假(This vacatins)
In this vacatins I g t travel in sme famus places and i g t visit my grandparents in the village.i learn smething different.like example:I knw peple wrk in the village it is s hard and s tired,they are grw the vegetable,rice and smething else it is very difficult.
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范文精读：
（4）小学的最后一个暑假(the last summer in my elementary schl)
the last summer in my elementary schl is very unfrgettable,i remember i will g t anther schl and have t leave my friends and teachers,i feel sad ,but i learned t get tgether with them t remember the friendship between us,we have a gd time and swear t study hard in rder t have a bright future.
（5）今天的经历(Tday's experience)
It was a fine day tday and the sun was bright . I visited Beijing Z with my classmate ， Zhang Hng .
The animals there were s interesting that all the peple lved them . When I saw a visitr thrwing fd t the mnkeys ， I went ran t stp him and said ，“ Animals are ur gd friends and we must take gd care f them .”
（6）My Dg
I have a dg. My dg name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white cat. DuDu has tw big eyes and tw small ears. It has ne shrt muth. My dg is smart. I like my dg. D yu like it?
高分仿写训练：
（7）My Gd Friend
Zhang Ying is my gd friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 f Tianjia Primary Schl. She’s a mdel student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, t. She ften helps teachers and yung students at schl. She is gd at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and s n. She has a lt f hbbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening t music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, t. But she desn’t like playing basketball, ftball, table tennis r vlleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend f mine. I like playing with her. We always wrk tgether and help each ther.
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（8）My new teacher
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strng. He has a big muth, tw big ears, tw big eyes and a nt t big and nt t small nse. He ften wears a black new shirt and brwn pants, with tw big shes。
My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Tday, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is s funny. Wh is he? He’s a Mr. Zhu .
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（9）Birthday
My birthday is n Sunday. My parents are ging t have a birthday party at hme. I invite my friends t cme t the party.
At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture bks, pens.
They sing Happy Birthday t me. My mther makes a big cake fr me. I cut the cake int small pieces and give them ut. we sing and dance.
We have a gd time at the party.
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范文精读：
（10）Animals
I like animals very much. I have a dg, It’s my favurite animal. It’s white, It lks like a snw ball. It has tw big eyes and ears. But its nse and muth are very small. It’s very naughty.
It ften stares at my fd when I have a meal. When I’m hme it fllws me all the time.
When I d my hmewrk, it ften sits beside quietly, but smetimes runs arund me and shuts: wm wm.
I like my dg very much.
（11）My Study
My study is big. It’s abut 20㎡. The walls are white and the flr is dark yellw. The lights n the wall are very beautiful. There is a big windw n the wall. The windw curtains are yellw and light green.
In frnt f the wall, there is my desk. There is a telephne, a glbe and sme bks n the desk. There is a pian n the right f the desk. It’s my favrite present frm my parents when I was nine years ld.
On the left f the desk, there is a bkshelf. There are many bks n the shelf. Sme are strybks. Sme are picture bks. Sme are cartn bks. Sme are music bks.
There are sme English bks, t. On the shelf, there is a Snpy and a Blue Cat. I like them very much!
In the evening r at the weekends, I d my hmewrk and play the pian in my study. I can read all kinds f bks, t. In my study, I can gain much knwledge. I like my study. What abut yu?
（12）Learning Freign Language
I lve learning freign languages. Especially English because English is the mst widely spken language in the wrld, it is used by cuntries all ver the wrld. Fr example, if yu want t find a nice jb, yu prbably need t be gd at English, and when yu surf n the Internet, yu'll see many dialgues and keywrds in English. If yu dn't knw them, then yu'll have t spend a lt f time lking them up in an English dictinary. Therefre we must try harder t learn English and imprve ur English, and we culd learn mre besides.
Nw, I'm a junir high student, I try t read magazine articles in English everyday. In fact, learning English is lts f fun. It's rather like learning Chinese. Just pen yur muth and say smething in English r read lts f achievement. All in all, it's useful fr everyne t learn English.
（13）My gd habits
In the mrning. First, I get up. Next, I brush my teeth. Then, I wash my face. After that, I have breakfast. At last, I g t schl.
In the evening. First, I finish my hmewrk. Next, I have dinner. Then, I pack my schlbag. After that, hang up my clthes. At last, I g t bed.
（14）I lve my bedrm
I have a bedrm .It is nt big , but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedrm . A yellw dg is n the bed .Every night,I sleep with it . Next t the bed, there is a desk. A bear lamp is n the desk .I like the bear lamp. It's cute. I like t d hmewrk under the lamp every evening. I have a new cmputer in my bedrm .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are als several beautiful pictures n the wall.
I like my bedrm. D yu like it?
(15)D yu like me?
Hell! Everyne. I’m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Lk! I’m very lvely. My eyes are red. My ears are lng. My hair is white. My tail is shrt. I like carrts very much. I have a gd friend. She’s my little master. Her name is Zhu Xun. We always play games tgether. I like her very much and she likes me, t.
(16)My Pencil-bx
I have a gd friend. Her name is Pencil-bx. She is a very beautiful girl. Lk! There is a picture n her face. It’s a picture f flwers. Her cat is blue and yellw. There are sme pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stmach. Frm Mnday t Friday, I g t schl with her. When I want t cpy r write the new wrds, I pen her muth and take ut the pencil frm her stmach. She helps me a lt. And I like her very much.
(17)Wh am I?
Hell! My name is Feifei. My mther is very beautiful. My father is very handsme. S I’m very lvely. Lk! My cat is white. My eyes are blue. I have a lng tail. Fish is my favrite fd. I like mice t. Guess! Wh am I?
(18)My Mther(我的妈妈)
My mther is a beautiful wman.She is 38 years ld.She is an engineer.She likes singing and she can sing very well.She als likes reading,her favurite bk is HARRY POTTER.Althugh she hasn't any mney,I lve her very much.Because she is my mther.And she lves me,t.This is my mther.
(19)我想成为校长(I want t be a headmaster)
I want t be a headmaster when I grw up. I think that’s a gd jb. My schl is in the frest. It’s very beautiful. I g t wrk by Benz at eight ’clck in the mrning. The teachers in my schl are kind and patient. The female teachers in my schl are gd lking and yung. The male teachers are handsme and strng. They are all hardwrking s they get gd salary. The children in my schl have three classes in the mrning. In the afternn, they play and pick up mushrms r strawberries in the frest. They have n hmewrk. They are very happy! At fur ’clck in the afternn, I g hme with kinds f mushrms and fruits in my Benz. They are fr my dinner.
课后作业：
(20)我最喜爱的照片(My favurite pht)
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附
小学英语写作必看，50句经典谚语
1. 眼见为实。Seeing is believing.
2. 人生短暂，学艺无穷。Art is lng, life is shrt.
3. 三思而后行。 Lk befre yu leap.
4. 有其父，必有其子。Like father,like sn.
5. 再晚也不算迟。Better late than never.
6. 条条大路通罗马。All rads lead t Rme.
7. 并非闪光的都是金子。All that glitters is nt gld.
8. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。As yu sw,s shall yu reap.
9. 物以类聚。Birds f a feather flck tgether.
10. 不劳无获。N pain,n gain.
11. 入乡随俗。When in Rme,d as the Rmans d.
12. 那恰是我所喜欢的。It's my cup f tea.
13. 一日一苹果，医生远离我。An apple a day keeps the dctr away.
14. 患难见真情。A friend in meed is a friend indeed.
15. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。A yung idler; an ld beggar.
16. 熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.
17. 一分耕耘，一分收获。N sweet withut sweat.
18. 时间就是金钱。Time is mney.
19. 欲速则不达。Haste makes waste.
20. 说起来容易做起来难。Easier said than dne.
21. 人各有所好。Every man has his taste.
22. 物极必反。Extremes meet.
23. 活到老学到老。Live and learn.
24. 事出必有因。Nthing cmes f nthing.
25. 隔墙有耳。Walls have ears.
26. 失败是成功之母。Failure is the mther f success.
27. 江山易改，本性难移。A lepard can nt change his spts.
28. 冰冻三尺非一日之寒。Rme is nt built in a day.
29. 得饶人处且饶人。Frgive thers whenever yu can.
30. 爱乌及乌。Lve me ,lve my dg.
31. 活到老，学到老。Live and learn.
32. 礼尚往来。Give and take.
33. 知足者常乐。Cntent is happiness.
34. 言出必行。 S said, s dne.
35. 光阴似箭。Time flies.
36. 爱屋及乌。Lve me，lve my dg.
37. 既来之则安之。Take things as they cme.
38. 有志者事竟成。Where there is a will,there is a way.
39. 时间就是生命。Time is life.
40. 团结就是力量。Unity is strength.
41. 一切皆有可能！Nthing is impssible!
42. 让我们自己做。Let’s d it by urselves.
43. 记住：面带微笑。Remember: Keep smile n yur face.
44. 好书如挚友。A gd bk is a gd friend.
45. 良好的开端是成功的一半。A gd beginning is half dne.
46. 覆水难收。Dn’t cry ver spilt milk.
47. 不要泄露秘密。Dn’t put the cat ut f the bag.
48. 三个和尚没水吃。Everybdy’s business is nbdy’s business.
49. 今日事，今日毕。Dn’t put ff till tmrrw what shuld be dne tday.
50. 知识就是力量。Knwledge is pwer.
教案课题
小学六年级 书面表达
教师姓名
学生姓名
上课日期
学科
英语
适用年级
教材版本
学习目标
1. 理解和掌握小学作文技巧
2. 专题训练高分作文
3. 仿写满分作文
重难点
重点： 写好每一个句子
难点： 写好每一篇作文
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