读后续写 四脚天使 a fourlegged guardian angle 讲评课件-2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

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Hw much d yu knw abut Great Dane?
大丹犬曾被欧洲王室及贵族饲养头大而窄长，毛呈黄褐、虎斑、蓝色，黑色和黑白花色等外表高贵优雅，体型大，肌肉丰满，强壮有力
What qualities d dgs have accrding t cmmen sense?
vigilant 警觉的
friendly 友好的
Language Accumulatin
1. Snw had just melted ff the grund that April day at ur huse in Regina Beach, Saskatchewan. I had just cleaned up the pl in preparatin fr selling the huse. The year befre, I had lst my jb with the prvincial gvernment, and nw ur financial situatin was grim. In despair, I had finally put the hme n the market, and a real estate agent was due t shw up later that day. Even wrse, I wuld have t give up my belved Great Dane (大丹犬), Brigitte, because I culd n lnger affrd the cst f feeding it. The thught f lsing the dg and ur beautiful hme was almst mre than I culd bear.
2. Deep in despair, I sat typing up resumes and cver letters. Out f the crner f my eye I culd see my thirteen-mnth-ld sn, Frrest, as he lay n the carpet, playing near ur big, gentle nanny-dg, Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant t be in this family and she turned ut t be a perfect cmpanin.
type v.打字 resume 简历
be meant t be/d sth.注定是...注定做...
3. Brigitte came t ur huse n Christmas eve when the drbell rang and I was sure sme f my Christmas packages had arrived. I ran t the dr and swung it pen, but n ne was there. I sensed smething and lked dwn, nly t find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, lking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was n way that she culd have rung the drbell by herself, was there? Perhaps, smene had fund the puppy smewhere and left her there, and then rang the drbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I wuld welcme an additinal family member and take care f her.
There is n way that...不可能...
4. Thinking f these, I culdn’t help heaving a sigh and went straight back t wrk. Hwever, I hadn’t typed mre than tw sentences when Brigitte began barking furiusly and running back and frth t the sliding glass dr verlking ur pl.5. I raced t see what was happening and nticed that the sliding dr was slightly pen. Suddenly, I realized Frrest was nwhere t be seen. In panic, I pened the dr and ran utside. Para 1: There I was surprised t see Brigitte, wh was terrified f water, dive int the pl.Para 2: Finally, the dctr said Frrest was all right and culd be released frm hspital.
heave v. 发出（叹息）
be nwhere t be seen 无处可见
be admitted int hspital 住院
Reading——浅层信息理解
体裁：人称：主体时态：主题语境：
IBrigitteFrrest
cleaned up the pl in preparatin fr selling the huse
April day n Christmas eve
I lst my jbOur financial situatin was grim
Reading——深层信息理解——理清故事发展线索Hw
Snw had just melted ff the grund that April day at ur huse in Regina Beach, Saskatchewan. I had just cleaned up the pl in preparatin fr selling the huse. The year befre, I had lst my jb with the prvincial gvernment, and nw ur financial situatin was grim. In despair, I had finally put the hme n the market, and a real estate agent was due t shw up later that day. Even wrse, I wuld have t give up my belved Great Dane（大丹犬）,Brigitte, because I culd n lnger affrd the cst f feeding it. The thught f lsing the dg and ur beautiful hme was almst mre than I culd bear. Deep in despair, I sat typing up resumes and cver letters. Out f the cmer f my eye I culd see my thirteen-mnth-ld sn, Frrest, as he lay n the carpet, playing near ur big, gentle nanny-dg, Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant t be in this family and she turned ut t be a perfect cmpanin. Brigitte came t ur huse n Christmas eve when the drbell rang and I was sure sme f my Christmas packages had arrived. I ran t the dr and swung it pen, but n ne was there. I sensed smething and lked dwn, nly t find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, lking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was n way that she culd have rung the drbell by herself, was there? Perhaps, smene had fund the puppy smewhere and left her there, and then rang the drbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I wuld welcme an additinal family member and take care f her. Thinking f these, I culdn’t help heaving a sigh and went straight back t wrk. Hwever, I hadn’t typed mre than tw sentences when Brigitte began barking furiusly and running back and frth t the sliding glass dr verlking ur pl. I raced t see what was happening and nticed that the sliding dr was slightly pen. Suddenly, I realized Frrest was nwhere t be seen. In panic, I pened the dr and ran utside.
Para1: April Day
Para2-3: On Christmas Eve
Para4-5: Went back t wrk
(1) Snw had just melted ff the grund that April day at ur huse in Regina Beach, Saskatchewan. I had just cleaned up the pl in preparatin fr selling the huse. The year befre, I had lst my jb with the prvincial gvernment, and nw ur financial situatin was grim. In despair, I had finally put the hme n the market, and a real estate agent was due t shw up later that day. Even wrse, I wuld have t give up my belved Great Dane（大丹犬）,Brigitte, because I culd n lnger affrd the cst f feeding it. The thught f lsing the dg and ur beautiful hme was almst mre than I culd bear. (2) Deep in despair, I sat typing up resumes and cver letters. Out f the cmer f my eye I culd see my thirteen-mnth-ld sn, Frrest, as he lay n the carpet, playing near ur big, gentle nanny-dg, Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant t be in this family and she turned ut t be a perfect cmpanin. (3) Brigitte came t ur huse n Christmas eve when the drbell rang and I was sure sme f my Christmas packages had arrived. I ran t the dr and swung it pen, but n ne was there. I sensed smething and lked dwn, nly t find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, lking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was n way that she culd have rung the drbell by herself, was there? Perhaps, smene had fund the puppy smewhere and left her there, and then rang the drbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I wuld welcme an additinal family member and take care f her. (4) Thinking f these, I culdn’t help heaving a sigh and went straight back t wrk. Hwever, I hadn’t typed mre than tw sentences when Brigitte began barking furiusly and running back and frth t the sliding glass dr verlking ur pl. (5) I raced t see what was happening and nticed that the sliding dr was slightly pen. Suddenly, I realized Frrest was nwhere t be seen. In panic, I pened the dr and ran utside.
P1: I wuld mve hme and give up Brigitte due t financial situatin.
P2: My sn, Frrest, played and interacted with Brigitte.
P3: Recalling the rigin f Brigitte with much length f the writing.
P4-P5: Leading us t cntinue the reasn why the dg wasn’t given up.
Reading——Basic Infrmatin——Characters (wh)
the Christmas Witch
Anthny, Christmas Witch’s sn, wh died in the war
I, a 14-year-ld by, wh delivered papers
Reading——Basic Infrmatin——Setting (when、where)
a dark, freezing March mrning
the last huse f the Christmas Witch
Reading——Basic Infrmatin——Plt (what、why、hw)
What: Christmas Witch left her Christmas decratins up all year lng.Why: Her sn, Anthny, died in the war.
the cntinuatin writing cntent
Reading——Structure
③ My first day f delivery was a dark, freezing March mrning. The sky was just turning pink as I apprached the last huse n my f the Christmas Witch. I tipted up the prch steps and placed the newspaper by the dr. Then I quickly turned arund. And just then I slipped, and fell dwn the stairs. I sprained my ankle, unable t walk.④ The light was n. The dr pened. Smene came ut. It was the Christmas Witch.⑤ “Dear me,” said she. “Are yu all right? ” Speechless, I pinted at my ankle. “Cme in; make sure yu're kay.” She smiled, nt a wicked-witch smile, but a nice smile, like she was cncerned. I had n chice. Hlding her hand, I gt int her huse and was placed in a chair." Relax. "She hurried int the kitchen and returned a mment later, handing me a cup f ht tea. “I call yur parents.” she said.⑥ I tld her my mther's number as she dialed. She gt thrugh, tld my mther everything and turned, “Yur mther will be here shrtly.” “Thank yu, Mrs. Wright.” “Yu're welcme." She sat dwn acrss frm me, smiling. “Yu dn't have t call me Mrs. Wright; yu can call me Christmas Witch.”⑦ I was a bit embarrassed. “It's alright.” She smiled. “I hear what peple say. It desn't matter.” “Yu d have lts f decratins,” I said. “I think it's pretty,” she replied. I said, “Peple think it's... weird.” “They dn't understand why I leave up my decratins,” she respnded.⑧ Like mst teenagers, I just blurted ut the next questin. “Why?”
① Every kid in my neighbrhd knew abut the Christmas Witch. She was an elderly wman wh left her Christmas decratins up all year lng: a twinkling tree in the living rm, a plastic wreath（花环）n the frnt dr, ② I was tld the decratins were meant t get kids clser t the huse s the Christmas Witch culd take them. I prmised myself I wuld never g near that place. But when I turned furteen, I gt a newspaper rute and discvered I'd have t deliver papers t the Christmas Witch. But my mther just advised me nt t wrry.
Para. 1-2: Backgrund infrmatin
Para. 3-8: The develpment f the stry
Befre meeting Christmas Witch
After meeting Christmas Witch
Reading——Detailed Infrmatin
Every kid in my neighbrhd knew abut the Christmas Witch. She was an elderly wman wh left her Christmas decratins up all year lng: a twinkling tree in the living rm, a plastic wreath（花环）n the frnt dr, was tld the decratins were meant t get kids clser t the huse s the Christmas Witch culd take them. I prmised myself I wuld never g near that place. But when I turned furteen, I gt a newspaper rute and discvered I’d have t deliver papers t the Christmas Witch. But my mther just advised me nt t wrry.
What was my attitude t Christmas Witch accrding t the backgrund infrmatin?Scared/Frightened.
What can yu learn frm this passive vice （被动语态）?
Thse awful infrmatin was just heard frm thers but nt learnt by myself.
My first day f delivery was a dark, freezing March mrning. The sky was just turning pink as I apprached the last huse n my f the Christmas Witch. I tipted up the prch steps and placed the newspaper by the dr. Then I quickly turned arund. And just then I slipped, and fell dwn the stairs. I sprained my ankle, unable t walk.
What can we infer frm it abut the authr’s feeling ?Upset/unwilling.What can we infer frm the mvements “tipted up”, “quickly turned arund”?I wanted t escape the huse f Christmas Witch.I didn’t want t meet Christmas Witch.
The light was n. The dr pened. Smene came ut. It was the Christmas Witch.“Dear me,” said she. “Are yu all right? ” Speechless, I pinted at my ankle. “Cme in; make sure yu’re kay.” She smiled, nt a wicked-witch smile, but a nice smile, like she was cncerned. I had n chice. Hlding her hand, I gt int her huse and was placed in a chair. “Relax.” She hurried int the kitchen and returned a mment later, handing me a cup f ht tea. “I call yur parents.” she said.I tld her my mther’s number as she dialed. She gt thrugh, tld my mther everything and turned, “Yur mther will be here shrtly.” “Thank yu, Mrs. Wright.” “Yu’re welcme.” She sat dwn acrss frm me, smiling. “Yu dn’t have t call me Mrs. Wright; yu can call me Christmas Witch.”I was a bit embarrassed. “It’s alright.” She smiled. “I hear what peple say. It desn’t matter.” “Yu d have lts f decratins,” I said. “I think it’s pretty,” she replied. I said, “Peple think it’s... weird.” “They dn’t understand why I leave up my decratins,” she respnded.Like mst teenagers, I just blurted ut the next questin. “Why?”
What kind f the persn was Christmas Witch?
Why didn’t I call her Christmas Witch?
I changed my mind abut her.
weird(怪异的), wicked(邪恶的)
cnsiderate, kind-hearted, apprachable(平易近人的)
Reading——Plt and Emtin
I knew abut the Christmas Witch.
I had t deliver papers t her huse.
I fell dwn the stairs and sprained my ankle, unable t walk when delivering papers t her hme.
I gt int her huse and was placed in a chair.
I blurted ut the next questin, “Why?”
scared frightened
unwilling upset
anxius wrried
embarrassedrelaxed
Rising Actin
Falling Actin
Paragraph 1:“It was because f my sn, Anthny, wh died in the war,” said Mrs. Wright.
Paragraph 2:The drbell rang and my mther arrived.
Stry Muntain
What’s the real reasn fr leaving her Christmas decratins up all year lng?
Predict the Plt
Paragraph 1: “It was because f my sn, Anthny, wh died in the war,” said Mrs. Wright.Hw and When did Anthney die?Hw was her sn cnnected with the Christmas?After knwing the reasn, what was my ractin?
Paragraph 2: The drbell rang and my mther arrived.What did my mther d r say t Mrs. Wright?What did I d r say t Mrs. Wright?What did I learn frm the incident?
Based n these tw sentences, ask yurself sme questins t help yu design the plt.
If I were authr, I wuld...
Design the Plt(A Pssible Versin)
Paragraph 1: “It was because f my sn, Anthny, wh died in the war,” said Mrs. Wright.Hw and When did Anthney die?1. Anthney was scheduled t cme hme befre Christmas.2. But three days later after the New Year Eve. Anthney was killed in a helicpter crash.Hw was her sn cnnected with the Christmas?1. My by called me n New Year’s Eve, telling me t leave up the Christmas decratins.2. And even thugh I knew it didn’t change anything, I wuldn’t take dwn thse decratins, even after all these years.After knwing the reasn, what was my ractin?Mrs. Wright wasn’t a witch, she was a sad and lnely mther struggling with a terrible lss.
Design the Plt
Paragraph 2: The drbell rang and my mther arrived.What did my mther d r say t Mrs. Wright?1. My mther expressed her heartfelt gratitude t Mrs. Wright and said Gdbye. 2. Accmpnied by my mther, I went hme.What did I d r say t Mrs. Wright?1. Since then, whenever I delivered newspaper t Mrs. Wright, she smiled, saying hw much she enjyed my visit.2. Funny, I didn’t think her as the Christmas Witch any mre. Instead, I regarded her as a kindhearted mther like my mm.What did I learn frm the incident?Returning hme, I prmised that I wuld never judge a persn befre I knew the truth.
主题升华：少一点评判，多一点理解他人
Hw can we express shck?
T shw, nt t tell
T Shw, Nt t Tell——震惊
I her, with astnishment. 我惊呆了，直瞪着她。I with shck.我呆若木鸡。I was shcked .我的震惊之情难以言表。Translate: Anthney的去世让我震惊得喘不过气来。The shck f Anthney’s death tk my breath away.
facial expressin
bdy language
T Shw, Nt t Tell——后悔内疚
I felt s ashamed that I culd feel .我如此羞愧，以至于觉得自己的脸在发烧。I felt s guilty that she culd feel .我如此羞愧，以至于觉得血液往脸上涌。S ashamed did I feel that .我羞愧得几乎要哭出来了。
my face burning
the bld rushing t my face
I was clse t tears
七个“不”1. 不增加人物2. 不增加旁支情节3. 不用过多对话4. 不用负能量结局5. 不在文末设置悬念6. 不偏离原文主题7. 不违背逻辑常理
三大原则1. 原文一致原则2. 曲折性原则3. 正能量原则
Rewrite r plish the first paragraph
HmewrkRewrite and plish the secnd paragraph