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背诵积累区：背诵迁移 举一反三
一、必背单词
1.宽慰类形容词：
relieved adj. 感到放心的，感到宽慰的
safe adj. 安全的
secure adj. 安全的，稳妥的
regretful adj. 后悔的，遗憾的
2.宽慰类名词：
relief n. 宽慰，轻松
safety n. 安全；安全性
tensin n. 焦虑；紧张关系
anxiety n. 焦虑，忧虑
sadness n. 悲痛；使人悲伤的事
regret n. 懊悔，惋惜
shame n. 羞愧；羞耻心
pity n. 同情，怜悯；可惜的事
3.宽慰类动词：
relieve vt. 缓解；减轻
sigh vi. 叹气，叹息
breathe v. 呼吸
二、高频语块
1.feel a surge f relief 如释重负
2.t ne’s relief 使某人宽慰的是
3.a mixture f warmth and relief 既温暖又宽慰
4.with/ in relief 如释重负地；松了口气；欣慰地
5.breathe/sigh a sigh f relief/gasp with relief 松了口气
三、佳句赏析
1.A feeling f relief washed ver her. 她顿时如释重负。
2.I felt a huge surge f relief and happiness. 我如释重负，感到一阵欣慰。
3.Knwing he was safe was a lad ff my mind. 得知他平安以后，我心里如释重负。
4.Finally telling the truth was a great weight ff my shulders.最后讲了实话使我如释重负。
5. She sighed with relief that it was all ver. 事情总算全都过去了，她轻松地舒了一口气。
6.We all breathed a sigh f relief when he left.他走了以后，我们大家都如释重负地松了口气。
7.I nticed a release f tensin when he left the rm. 我注意到，他一走出房间大家都如释重负。
8.Knwing that they had arrived safely tk a lad ff my mind. 得知他们平安到达后我如释重负。
9."Ah, yu're here, " she said and let ut/gave a sigh f relief. “啊,你在这里,”她说道,如释重负地松了口气。
10.It was such a relief t hear that Marta was fund safe and well.听到玛尔塔安然无恙被找到，真是如释重负。
11.When he left, Karen fund herself heaving a huge sigh f relief.他离去后，卡伦发现自己如释重负，长舒了一口气。
12.It's a great weight ff my mind t knw that the building is finally finished. 得知那座建筑终于完工，令我如释重负。
13.He was relieved t see Jeannie reach the ther side f the river safely. 看到珍妮安全到达河对岸，他心头一块石头落了地。
14.It was a weight ff my mind knwing that ur finances were taken care f. 得知我们的资金问题已经解决，我心里顿时轻松了许多。
15.A huge burden was lifted frm my shulders when I tld my parents abut my prblem. 我把自己的问题告诉父母后，感到如释重负。
16.I'm s relieved that I dn't have t d the after-dinner speech - it's such a weight ff my mind! 饭后不必作演讲使我舒了一口长气——我终于放下了心头大石！
测试巩固区：分级测试 步步为赢
一、高频语块汉译英
1.如释重负
2.使某人宽慰的是
3.既温暖又宽慰
4.如释重负地；松了口气；欣慰地
5.松了口气
【参考答案】
1.feel a surge f relief 如释重负
2.t ne’s relief 使某人宽慰的是
3.a mixture f warmth and relief 既温暖又宽慰
4.with/ in relief 如释重负地；松了口气；欣慰地
5.breathe/sigh a sigh f relief/gasp with relief 松了口气
二、佳句赏析汉译英
1.她顿时如释重负。
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2.我如释重负，感到一阵欣慰。
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3.得知他平安以后，我心里如释重负。
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4.最后讲了实话使我如释重负。
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5.事情总算全都过去了，她轻松地舒了一口气。
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6.他走了以后，我们大家都如释重负地松了口气。
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7.我注意到，他一走出房间大家都如释重负。
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8.得知他们平安到达后我如释重负。
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9. “啊,你在这里,”她说道,如释重负地松了口气。
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10.听到玛尔塔安然无恙被找到，真是如释重负。
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11.他离去后，卡伦发现自己如释重负，长舒了一口气。
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12.得知那座建筑终于完工，令我如释重负。
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13.看到珍妮安全到达河对岸，他心头一块石头落了地。
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14.得知我们的资金问题已经解决，我心里顿时轻松了许多。
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15.我把自己的问题告诉父母后，感到如释重负。
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16.饭后不必作演讲使我舒了一口长气——我终于放下了心头大石！
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【参考答案】
1.A feeling f relief washed ver her. 她顿时如释重负。
2.I felt a huge surge f relief and happiness. 我如释重负，感到一阵欣慰。
3.Knwing he was safe was a lad ff my mind. 得知他平安以后，我心里如释重负。
4.Finally telling the truth was a great weight ff my shulders.最后讲了实话使我如释重负。
5. She sighed with relief that it was all ver. 事情总算全都过去了，她轻松地舒了一口气。
6.We all breathed a sigh f relief when he left.他走了以后，我们大家都如释重负地松了口气。
7.I nticed a release f tensin when he left the rm. 我注意到，他一走出房间大家都如释重负。
8.Knwing that they had arrived safely tk a lad ff my mind. 得知他们平安到达后我如释重负。
9."Ah, yu're here, " she said and let ut/gave a sigh f relief. “啊,你在这里,”她说道,如释重负地松了口气。
10.It was such a relief t hear that Marta was fund safe and well.听到玛尔塔安然无恙被找到，真是如释重负。
11.When he left, Karen fund herself heaving a huge sigh f relief.他离去后，卡伦发现自己如释重负，长舒了一口气。
12.It's a great weight ff my mind t knw that the building is finally finished. 得知那座建筑终于完工，令我如释重负。
13.He was relieved t see Jeannie reach the ther side f the river safely. 看到珍妮安全到达河对岸，他心头一块石头落了地。
14.It was a weight ff my mind knwing that ur finances were taken care f. 得知我们的资金问题已经解决，我心里顿时轻松了许多。
15.A huge burden was lifted frm my shulders when I tld my parents abut my prblem. 我把自己的问题告诉父母后，感到如释重负。
16.I'm s relieved that I dn't have t d the after-dinner speech - it's such a weight ff my mind! 饭后不必作演讲使我舒了一口长气——我终于放下了心头大石！
三、情感表达片段运用
Alice felt 1 (松了一口气) t see a car appraching. When the driver with a smile ffered a ride t her, 2 (她松了一口气). Alice thankfully gt in the car, and 3 (一种温暖和解脱交织的感觉涌上心头). Reaching her destinatin, 4 (Alice 松了一口气). Tears f appreciatin welled up in her eyes as she thanked the driver fr his help, but he just smiled warmly. 5 (她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖,相信处处都有好心人).
【参考答案】
Alice felt relieved t see a car appraching. When the driver with a smile ffered a ride t her, she gasped with relief. Alice thankfully gt in the car, and a mixture f warmth and relief flded ver her. Reaching her destinatin, Alice breathed a sigh f relief. Tears f appreciatin welled up in her eyes as she thanked the driver fr his help, but he just smiled warmly. She felt warm in the cld day, believing there was kindness in every crner.
四、情感表达语篇运用
1.（2023上·广东·高二校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Chasing a Dream
I will never frget that Nvember day. It was htter than nrmal — t ht. My thrat felt like a field f cttn, cracked with the summer heat, as I waited fr the gun t fire. This was the day we had waited s lng fr. I lked ut at the crwd; dzens f familiar faces flashed acrss my view. They had cme fr me. They were cunting n me. I saw my dad set his watch, with wrry and excitement n his face. Adrenaline (肾上腺素) pumped thrugh my bdy, and the race began.
Fr the first tw and a half miles, I felt great. I had never befre been s ready fr smething. The weeks leading up t the race were filled with strictly cntrlled practices and a strict diet. My friends hadn’t seen me in weeks, but they understd the sacrifice required t make my dream a reality.
My dad and I had been wrking twards this race fr three years. It was everything t me, and it was everything t my dad. He was a runner and was excited by my success in running. He made it t every race, even flying hme early frm business trips t see me run. I always listened fr his vice — telling me t relax my arms, calling ut my time. He pushed me. He cheered fr me. He believed in me. We spent cuntless hurs n the sandy canals. Breathing in the dust f the desert, the blssms (花簇) f the range trees, we made ur way acrss the city. We punded miles and miles int ur running shes, marking with every step the path t greatness.
But withut warning, when I was 200 yards away frm the finish line, my legs stpped wrking. My lungs fught t take in enugh air, and my feet transfrmed int cement (水泥) bricks. I still dn’t knw what happened in thse last few mments. Nthing I culd d wuld make them hld my weight. They were as weak as jelly.
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Even thugh I knew my dreams f victry were destryed, I had t finish the race.
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“I’m s srry I disappinted yu,” I whispered t Dad.
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Even thugh I knew my dreams f victry were destryed, I had t finish the race. With all f the strength left in me, I gt n my hands and knees and crawled withut stp fr a mment. Vices, bth freign and familiar, cheered me n. They gave me the curage t keep ging until the very end. Althugh my friends rushed t me, helping me get back n my feet and in the meantime cntinuusly ffering cmfrting wrds f encuragement, there was nly ne persn I wanted t talk t at that mment — my dear dad. My eyes searched the crwd fr him. Hwever, fear pulsed thrugh all my veins as he pushed his way t my side. N sner had he gt clse t me than tears spilled all ver my cheeks.
“I’m s srry I disappinted yu,” I whispered t Dad. He reached ut and gently wiped away my tears, his vice filled with lve and understanding. “My dear child, yu culd never disappint me. Smetimes these things just happen. All that matters is that yu did yur best. Dn’t yu knw that yu are my dream cme true?” His wrds brught a sense f cmfrt, and I realized that my dad’s supprt and lve were unwavering, regardless f the utcme. I had thught my dad was running after a prize. What I realized, thugh, was that he was running after me. T him, I was the greatest prize he had ever wn. It wasn’t lng befre I put n my running shes again t mark a new path fr my jurney.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和父亲很期待自己能在高中最后一年的越野赛跑上获得好成绩，不料在比赛过程中，作者突然体力耗尽，虽然作者最后尽力越过终点，但是却没获得好成绩，作者觉得让父亲和大家失望了，父亲却说只要尽力了，不会失望。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“尽管我知道我的胜利梦想破灭了，但我必须完成比赛。”以及第二段首句内容“‘对不起，让你失望了。’我低声对爸爸说。”可知，第一段可描写虽然不可能胜利，作者还是拼尽全力完成了比赛，及到达终点后大家的行动和作者找寻爸爸的行为。
②由第二段首句内容“‘对不起，让你失望了。’我低声对爸爸说。”可知，第二段可描写爸爸给作者的鼓励和作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：作者期待已久的比赛开始了——作者和自己的父亲已经为了这场比赛努力了三年——比赛一开始，作者感觉良好——作者不断努力，即将实现自己的梦想——在距离终点200码的时候，作者突然失去了所有的力量——作者明白自己胜利无望，但还是拼尽全力完成了比赛——作者觉得自己让父亲失望了，非常难过——可是，父亲却给了作者鼓励，作者决定继续努力
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想要做某事：want t d sth./wuld like t d sth.
②提供：ffer/prvide
③意识到：realize that/be aware that
情绪类
①害怕：fear/fright
②安慰：cmfrt/cnslatin
【点睛】【高分句型1】Althugh my friends rushed t me, helping me get back n my feet and in the meantime cntinuusly ffering cmfrting wrds f encuragement, there was nly ne persn I wanted t talk t at that mment — my dear dad. (运用了althugh引导的状语从句和省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Hwever, fear pulsed thrugh all my veins as he pushed his way t my side. (运用了as引导的状语从句)
2.（2023上·河南驻马店·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Smetimes, a kind wrd frm a stranger during a stressful mment can mean the wrld t smene. My daughter Rachel had severe ADHD (多动症) as a child and the mst embarrassing and trying mments were when we were ut in public. I wuld try t quickly get my shpping dne while trying my level best t avid a meltdwn when she was begging me fr a ty r candy bar.
My daughter has grwn int a wnderful yung wman nw. Mst peple wh hear my stries f her struggles grwing up dn’t believe me when they meet her. This is a prf f the saying, “It gets better,” because it really des. Thse ld memries f her extreme anger feel nt-s-distant when I encunter a child’s mirrr-image behavir in a stre. Mre ften than nt, I cntinue shpping, never stpping t ffer any kind f assistance r wrds f encuragement t the parent. Until recently.
Last week, I was shpping in ur lcal market. My daughter happened t be with me. As we were chsing what she needed, we heard the start f a child’s meltdwn that wuld last mre than fifteen minutes. I decided t walk ver t investigate the situatin, already picturing the scene in my mind. N dubt, the cries f the yung by culd be heard clear acrss the stre.
My daughter came up t me and said, “Mm! Is that what I sunded like when I was little?”
“Yes, Rachel, yu sunded just like that,” I replied.
Several mre minutes went by, and the by just wuldn’t stp. I arrived at the aisle (过道) t find a twenty-smething mther standing in the middle f the aisle calmly telling the by, “N.” She was nt ging t get whatever the by s desperately wanted. I knew she was ding an excellent jb f ignring his behavir while trying t remain calm during this trying situatin. Her eyes said everything that I had ever felt in thse mments. I’m sure she wuld als pass this tugh time in the end because “It gets better.” She needed sme encuragement at this mment and I happened t have the same experience, s I decided t share my stry.
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I walked ver t the mm.
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I knew she was grateful fr the kind wrds f a stranger.
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I walked ver t the mm. I smiled at her and calmly said t her, “Yu did the right thing. It gets better.” She lked at me, with a slightly relaxed expressin. Strangely, the by’s attentin immediately shifted t me and stpped crying fr what he s desperately wanted. Then I changed the tpic with the mther, and I quickly praised her by fr being handsme. The by quietly lked at us and listened t ur cnversatin.
I knew she was grateful fr the kind wrds f a stranger. I als felt relieved by the harmnius scene in frnt f me. My daughter als walked ver with a smile n her face. I pinted t my daughter and said t the mther, “This is my excellent daughter. Ha-ha! She used t be like yur by when she was yung! She always liked t create awkward and uncmfrtable scenes fr me when we were ut in public.” My wrds made the mther laugh. Althugh the by didn’t seem t understand ur cnversatin, he als laughed happily with us all!
【导语】本文以一句友善的话为线索展开，讲述了作者在商店遇到一个对着妈妈哭闹很久的小男孩，想起自己女儿小时候也曾因为严重的注意力缺陷多动症，让自己在公共场合造成尴尬的场景，所以去向那个处于困境的妈妈表达友善的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我走到那位妈妈身边。”可知，第一段可描写作者对那位妈妈表达友善，缓解尴尬场面。
②由第二段首句内容“我知道她很感激陌生人的友好话语。”可知，第二段可描写作者继续和那位妈妈及男孩互动让气氛欢乐起来。
2.续写线索：表达说——停止哭闹——安静——感谢——和谐快乐——大笑
3.词汇激活
行为类
①给她说：say t her/tell her
②停止：stp/quit
③制造：create/make
情绪类
①放松的：relaxed/eased
②快乐地：happily/merrily
【点睛】[高分句型1]Strangely, the by’s attentin immediately shifted t me and stpped crying fr what he s desperately wanted. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Althugh the by didn’t seem t understand ur cnversatin, he als laughed happily with us all (应用了althugh引导的让步状语从句)
3.（2023上·广东广州·高三华南师大附中校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。
I’ll admit it. I can be a cmplainer. After all, there’s s much in this life t cmplain abut: the dirty clthes that dn’t make it int the basket, that annying neighbr’s lud music, my husband’s shes spread ut at the frnt dr, rainy days, traffic...
Cmplaining is a habit I cultivated since childhd, a skill I develped thrugh the years. My parents didn’t seem t mind—they were great cmplainers, t—thugh I d recall sme eye-rlling and lng-drawn sighs frm friends and schlmates when I wuld vice my negative pinins. In fact, I can distinctly recall the exact mment when I first realized my cmplaining habit reached its expert level.
One day, as I reminded ray husband nce again t remve his bills frm the dining-rm table, put his shes away, and lwer that bthersme radi, he put up his hand.“Stp! Yu’re yur cmplaining. It’s driving me crazy.”
I lked at him blank-eyed.
He tk a deep breath. “Yu never hear me cmplaining, d yu?”
“Well,” I answered, “yu’re cmplaining abut my cmplaining, s actually, yes, I am hearing yu cmplain right nw.”
His eyes widened. A drp f sweat frmed his upper lip. Then he grabbed his car keys and ran ut f the dr.
Perhaps I’d gne t far, I thught. Maybe I really did cmplain t much. But, what t d abut it? After all, it had been a lifetime habit. And habits are hard t break.
I tk a break and sat dwn t think abut slutin. When I felt annyed, I culd lck myself in the bathrm and scream. N. The neighbrs wuld prbably hear me. Phne a friend? She prbably wuldn’t be a friend fr very lng. Then it hit me.
I’d been in the habit f keeping a jurnal fr mst f my life. It prvided a srt f timeline fr me，and I liked t review past entries ccasinally t review the path I had been n at that pint. Jurnaling kept me hnest with myself, and I liked it fr that reasn. Perhaps, I thugh, a cmplaint jurnal might be the answer I was seeking.
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That day, I decided t give it a try.
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Besides the imprved relatinship with my husband, I saw ther effects sn. .
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That day, I decided t give it a try. Withut hesitatin, I gt a pen in my hand and unladed all my dissatisfactin and disappintment abut my husband nt the paper. It felt s gd and relaxing t say exactly what was n my mind withut anyne judging me r my thughts. With the last wrd put dwn, I felt relieved as if a heavy weight had been lifted ff my shulder. Later, each time I fund myself feeling the urge t vice a petty irritatin, I prmised myself t write it in my cmplaint jurnal that evening. Gradually, withut fear f triggering a quarrel, my reserved husband pened up t me mre and ur relatinship gt better.
Besides the imprved relatinship with my husband, I saw ther effects sn. Old friendships became deeper, and new friendships appeared. Neighbrs became mre neighbrly. Overall, I started t just feel happier and less stressed. When I lked back n sme f my initial entries, I had t laugh ut lud. Sme f my cmplaints appeared truly ridiculus when read in hindsight Thse few mments’ when I culd sit dwn and free myself f whatever is bthering me made a big difference fr the better in my life. Reflecting n this experience, I firmly believed that with determinatin and smart appraches, I culd nt nly break a bad habit but als achieve anything.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章主要讲述了作者本人是一个惯性抱怨者，并且这一习惯是小时候就培养起来的。但是，通过写“抱怨日记”，她成功改变了这一习惯，变得更加积极和幸福。抱怨日记让她有了发泄的方式，也让她意识到她的一些抱怨是多余的，因此她开始更加快乐和不那么紧张。该经验让作者相信，只要有决心和巧妙地方法，就能改变坏习惯，并实现任何目标。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天，我决定试一试。”可知，第一段可描写作者尝试拿起笔把自己对丈夫的不满和失望都写在了纸上，同时描写作者写完之后的感受和变化。
②由第二段首句内容“除了改善与丈夫的关系，我很快就看到了其他效果。”可知，第二段可描写除了改善与丈夫之间的关系外，还可以描写用笔写出抱怨给作者在其他方面带来的变化如朋友关系，个人情绪以及个人生活等。同时还可以描述作者的最终感悟。
2.续写线索：尝试写下抱怨——如释重负——改善关系——敞开心扉——对生活的其他方面带来积极影响——最终感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①发现：find/discver
②.移除：lift ff/remve
③.困扰，打扰：bther/disturb
情绪类
①.恼怒：irritatin/anger/rage
②.感到开心：feel happier/feel mre delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]. With the last wrd put dwn, I felt relieved as if a heavy weight had been lifted ff my shulder. （运用了with的复合结构以及as if从句中的虚拟语气）
[高分句型2]. Thse few mments’ when I culd sit dwn and free myself f whatever is bthering me made a big difference fr the better in my life.（运用when引导定语从句以及whatever引导宾语从句）
4. （2023上·山东德州·高三统考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a beautiful sunny mrning in early summer when the wrld seemed full f sunlight and new green leaves. I was in a gd md as my parents had just given me $300 fr my daily expenses during the week that they wuld be away in Mexic t visit my mther’s sick grandfather. I was extremely verjyed, thinking hard abut the things I culd d with the mney. If I survived n bread and butter the whle week, I wuld have an unexpected windfall f 200 t buy the latest Kbe Bryant basketball shes! What a terrific idea!
As usual, the physical educatin class was thrilling. I felt mst at ease n the basketball curt. After playing several fierce games, I culd hardly catch my breath as I headed back twards the classrm, sweaty and exhausted. When I entered, I fund my classmates gathered arund Steven’s desk as he searched thrugh his bks and sme ther persnal items anxiusly. Steven had always been ppular. Nt nly was he intelligent and well-mannered, but he als came frm a well-ff family. And he shared everything he had with us.
Right away, I learned Steven had lst the mney he wuld dnate t a children’s welfare institute that afternn. Then I infrmed Miss Jnes, the class teacher. She rushed ver immediately and rganized a search arund the classrm. We std by ur desks and emptied the cntents f ur schlbags nt the desk fr inspectin.
It was my turn. As Miss Jnes tk ut the 300 frm my wallet, the class fell int a shck. I didn’t knw the amunt lst was exactly $300 until then. I kept prving my inncence, but in vain. Miss Jnes cnfiscated (没收) the 300 and decided I was getting kicked ut f the schl. I stayed hme alne the whle week, living nly n bread. I felt wrnged, angry, and lss f self-esteem.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally, my parents returned hme and talked with me.
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Miss Jnes had just accepted my parents’ advice when Steven came.
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Finally, my parents returned hme and talked with me. They patiently listened t my side f the stry, their understanding and supprt helping t bst my hurt feelings and self-esteem. I tld the whle stry f what happened, including the expensive misunderstanding, and the relief f sharing my tugh experience was clear in the rm. It was during this emtinal cnversatin that I heard abut Steven’s admissin, which wuld change the situatin.
Miss Jnes had just accepted my parents’ advice when Steven came. He genuinely lked srry, with a hint f regret in his eyes. T everyne’s relief, he cnfessed that he had fund the lst mney in his backpack. The immense relief and jy I felt were hard t put int wrds, shwing hw misunderstandings and hasty judgments can lead t serius prblems. Steven’s sincere aplgy and ur cllective understanding brught us clser as classmates, restring the warmth f ur friendship.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想用父母给的300美元生活并攒下200美元购买一双科比篮球鞋。但在一天体育课结束后，作者班上非常受欢迎的同学史蒂文说自己想要捐给儿童福利院的钱不见了，而数量正好是300美元，老师也在作者的书包里发现了300美元，但是作者怎么解释都没有用，不仅没收了作者的钱，还把作者赶出学校，作者感到非常生气，觉得自己失去了自尊。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最终，我的父母回到家了，并和我聊了聊。”可知，第一段可描写作者向父母倾诉自己被冤枉的过程，并且可以在该段最后一句提到史蒂文承认的事实，以引出后文的内容。
② 由第二段首句内容“琼斯小姐刚刚接受了我父母的建议，史蒂文就来了。”可知，第二段可描写真相大白，同学给作者真诚地道歉的经过以及作者的感受。
2.续写线索：想要攒钱买球鞋——被认为偷了钱——伤心地和父母倾诉——真相大白——感到宽慰和被理解，同学情谊加深
3.词汇激活
行为类
促进：bst/prmte/enhance
听说：hear abut/be infrmed f
导致：lead t/result in/due t
情绪类
遗憾：regret/pity
道歉： aplgy/say srry t
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was during this emtinal cnversatin that I heard abut Steven’s admissin, which wuld change the situatin.（强调句及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】T everyne’s relief, he cnfessed that he had fund the lst mney in his backpack.（that引导的宾语从句）