2024届湖北省华师附中高三5月适应性考试英语试题 作文讲评课件

这是一份2024届湖北省华师附中高三5月适应性考试英语试题 作文讲评课件，共19页。PPT课件主要包含了应用文，读后续写， ，三个问题，段首句，情节梳理等内容，欢迎下载使用。
体裁：信件：活动报道/演讲/投稿/倡议/通知/图表： 写作对象： 不熟悉:需要自我介绍 需要客气客气语言要正式frmal 熟悉：问候：回信：是否需要回信
I’m writing t ...
I’m Li Hua, wh is ... / I’m Li Hua, a student
I feel greatly hnred t ... I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ...
Hw is everything ging? / I hpe this email finds yu well.
Knwing I have received yur letter where yu mentined...
假定你是校乐团负责人李华，你校学生乐团Yuth Orchestra受邀将参加在英国举办的国际中学生音乐节，并演奏中国民乐，请给主办机构写一封邮件，内容包括：1.询问各项安排；2.表达期待。Dear rganizing cmmittee, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yurs,Li Hua
体裁：询问信：写作对象： 主办机构不熟悉:需要自我介绍 需要客气客气语言要正式frmal需要回信：Which is better?
I’m writing t enquire/inquire mre details abut this event.
I’m Li Hua wh is in charge f Yuth Orchestra.
I feel greatly hnred t be invited t participate in the up-cming Internatinal High Schl Music Festival.
Lking frward t yur early reply.I wuld appreciate it if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
I’m Li Hua wh is in charge f Yuth Orchestra. Feeling greatly hnred t be invited t participate in the up-cming Internatinal High Schl Music Festival，I’m writing t enquire mre details abut this event. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
有点干，再加一句客气话
I’m Li Hua wh is in charge f Yuth Orchestra. Feeling greatly hnred t be invited t participate in the up-cming Internatinal High Schl Music Festival，I’m writing t enquire mre details abut this event. We are truly lking frward t this precius pprtunity t share ur music with glbal audience. And I wuld appreciate it if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
如果你被邀请去演奏中国民乐，你想问哪些安排？
时间，地点乐器很多，运输和存放
I’m Li Hua wh is in charge f Yuth Orchestra. Feeling greatly hnred t be invited t participate in the up-cming Internatinal High Schl Music Festival，I’m writing t enquire mre details abut this event. We are truly lking frward t this precius pprtunity t share ur music with a glbalaudience. And I wuld appreciate it if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
First f all, time and place, specific scheduleIn additin, musical instruments, transprtatin and space
这样我们就能提前做好准备
First f all, culd yu prvide relevant details abut ur perfrmance schedule, particularly the time and venue, with which full preparatins can be made in advance. In additin, since perfrming Chinese flk music invlves varius Chinese traditinal instruments that require special care, I’d like t knw the arrangements regarding transprtatin and accmmdatin.
Dear rganizing cmmittee, I’m Li Hua wh is in charge f Yuth Orchestra. Feeling greatly hnred t be invited t participate in the up-cming Internatinal High Schl Music Festival，I’m writing t enquire mre details abut this event. First f all, culd yu prvide relevant details abut ur perfrmance schedule, particularly the time and venue, with which full preparatins can be made in advance. In additin, since perfrming Chinese flk music invlves varius Chinese traditinal instruments that require special care, I’d like t knw the arrangements regarding transprtatin and accmmdatin. We are truly lking frward t this precius pprtunity t share ur music with glbal audience. And I wuld appreciate it if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience. Yurs,Li Hua
I jumped int my mther’s car, shut the dr and pured ut my recent truble. “Jenny is playing her mind games again. Training is less tiring than dealing with her and her feelings,” I cmplained.Jenny and I were c-captains f ur crss-cuntry team. We’d been training fr the cming turnament(锦标赛) fr weeks: stretching, running, and making the seven f us int a team. Jenny, with exceptinal running talent, always had a way t get ahead f her cmpetitrs n the curse. She als helped all f us run faster and cheered us n. It seemed that she was anticipating the final shw. Hwever, this week, her attitude shifted. She kept making excuses nt t run with the team, frm aching legs t headaches. I had t beg her, telling her repeatedly that the team culdn’t d withut her. It went n all day and I was wrn ut. What’s her deal? Mm pulled int ur driveway, and turned tward me, “Well, I knw a little abut Jenny. She and her little brther have been tgether in fster care(寄养家庭).
S clse were they that every time they mved, Jenny wuld say that as lng as they were tgether, they had a family.” My heart sank as Mm cntinued, “Jenny’s stepfather(继父) came fr her brther this week, with gifts, hugs and big plans fr their future. But Jenny wasn’t even part f his big plans.” My chest felt tight. “Pr Jenny, nt t have a family.” I was clse t tears. My mther patted my knee. “That’s it, hney. Yu gt it.” And I did. I decided that I shuld d smething. I prpsed that we rganize a team gathering befre the turnament. Each member was t write a heartfelt message fr every teammate and prepare a special gift fr the ne they felt mst cnnected t. I made sure that Jenny wuld cme. It tk sme persuading, thugh. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the team gathering began, there was tensin in the air. _________________ The day f the turnament arrived. __________________________________
1. Wh ?2. What prblem?3. Wh and hw t slve the prblem?
I, truble, wrn ut, heart sank, chest tight, clse t tears, team gathering, heartfelt message, special gift.Jenny, running talent, helped & cheered us, nt t run, nt have a family, need persuading, mther, explained Jenny’s prblem
1. Wh are they?
2. What is the prblem?
Jenny:nt t run, nt have a family.I: need Jenny’s help t win the turnament.need t cheer Jenny up and let her have a and hw t slve the prblem?I: team gathering, heartfelt message, special gift, encuraging wrds, team is family. (一般情况下，解决方法在原文已经给出，续写时，顺着写完即可，不要自己凭空想一个解决方法)Jenny: decided t run, wn the turnament.
Paragraph 1:As the team gathering began, there was tensin in the air.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:The day f the turnament arrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As the team gathering began, there was tensin in the air.层次1： 层次2： 层次3： The day f the turnament arrived.
主要情节：I wrte heartfelt message, special gift, encuraging wrds, team is family. Jenny: decided t run, wn the turnament.
接着“tensin”写，Jenny还是很难过，低着头。我径直走到Jenny前，递上我的礼物—一张团队合照。
看到照片上队员们快乐的笑脸，以及背面的heartfelt message “T ur captain, yu are ...” Jenny终于抬起头，眼泪流下来。
其他队员也互相送了礼物，说了encuraging wrds, 最后，Jenny坚定地说“Let’s make it tgether, as a team!”
The day f the turnament arrived.层次1：层次2：层次3：
主要情节：I wrte heartfelt message, special gift, encuraging wrds, team is family. Jenny: decided t run, wn the turnament.
比赛过程: 脸上带着坚定，Jenny展现了她exceptinal running talent, 带领我们冲过终点线，观众席传来了雷鸣般的掌声。
听到我们获得第一名的消息，我们全队队员紧紧拥抱在了一起。
此刻，我感受到，we were mre than a team—we were a family，where everyne was lved and valued.
As the team gathering began, there was tensin in the air. Jenny还是很难过，低着头。我径直走到Jenny前，递上我的礼物—一张团队合照。看到照片上队员们快乐的笑脸，以及背面的heartfelt message “T ur captain, yu are the lighthuse fr us. We can’t g n withut yu.” Jenny终于抬起头，眼泪流下来。其他队员也互相送了礼物，说了encuraging wrds, 最后，Jenny坚定地说“Let’s make it tgether, as a team!”The day f the turnament arrived. 脸上带着坚定，Jenny展现了她exceptinal running talent, 带领我们冲过终点线，观众席传来了雷鸣般的掌声。听到我们获得第一名的消息，我们全队队员紧紧拥抱在了一起。此刻，我感受到，we were mre than a team—we were a family，where everyne was lved and valued.