2024届北京东城区高三英语一模书面表达讲评课件

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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1．活动内容；2．你的任务。
写作目的：写作背景：写作对象：写作内容：
Wrld Earth Day；学校举办活动
要点1>要点2要点1：我们学校组织的与plastic相关的具体可实行的活动要点2：与活动相关联的我的任务！
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
作文中不要有任何圈、方框等标记，分段直接开头空5个字母。作文写15行，第一段3行以内，最后一段2行，详写要点6-7行，略写要点3-4行。
Schl activities:give lectures n the severity f plastic pllutin d experiments n degrading plastics in ur schl’s science labhld a wrkshp t recycle plastic bags and use them t make handmade decratins.pick up plastic bags n campusLinking expressins: as fr my task/jb; as a ….,my task/jb is : the leader/ the president f the students unin/ lab assistant/ ne f the rganizers/ the representative f…
Dear Jim, Hw is everything ging? As yu knw, the theme f the Wrld Earth Day 2024 is “Planet vs. Plastics”. Our schl is rganizing an event t raise students’ awareness f plastic pllutin and inspire us t make a difference.The event will feature sme activities like presentatins by envirnmental experts and discussins abut the impact f plastic pllutin n ur planet. The highlight f the event will be a hands-n wrkshp. T help with it, I will g t the nearby neighbrhd with my classmates t cllect plastic waste, which will be creatively made int artwrks in the wrkshp. After that, we will give them back t the neighbrs.I am eager fr the event. Wait fr my pictures!Yurs,Li Hua
暴露问题VS - debate，tw partsPl - plantJim - invite内容过于宽泛,不可行，详略不得当- 目的，时间，地点要点之间的内在逻辑，和主题的相关度和可操作性时态人称
要点齐全详略得当语言准确句式多样表达得体条理清晰行文连贯优秀
刘凯老师解析：内容完整、丰富，与主题相关度高；语言有少许错误，条理清晰、行文连贯，有一定的交际。二档上
刘凯老师解析：内容完整，与活动主题基本相关，句式略显单一。及格
独家范文赏析1：I hpe this email finds yu well. I'm delighted t hear frm yu regarding ur schl's upcming activities related t Wrld Earth Day, with this year's theme being "Planet vs. Plastics".The activities will include educatinal wrkshps n plastic pllutin, beach clean-up campaigns, and seminars n sustainable living practices. My assigned task is t crdinate the recycling prgram at ur schl and raise awareness abut the imprtance f reducing plastic waste.I'm excited abut the pprtunity t cntribute t such a meaningful cause and make a psitive impact n ur envirnment.Lking frward t sharing mre updates with yu sn.
独家范文赏析2：I'm glad t receive yur email inquiring abut ur schl's event themed "Planet vs. Plastics" fr this year's Wrld Earth Day.The event will be a vibrant ne, filled with varius activities aimed at raising awareness abut the harmful effects f plastics n ur planet. We will have infrmative lectures n the envirnmental impact f plastics, interactive wrkshps where students can learn abut sustainable alternatives, and a recycling drive t encurage everyne t reduce their plastic waste.As fr my rle, I have been assigned the task f rganizing the recycling drive. This invlves crdinating with different classes t cllect plastic waste, arranging fr its prper dispsal, and prmting the imprtance f recycling amng my peers. I believe this experience will nt nly help me gain valuable rganizing skills but als deepen my understanding f the imprtance f prtecting ur planet.I'm lking frward t participating in this meaningful event and hpe yu can jin us if pssible.