2024届高考英语一轮复习-满分攻略第3步 词汇比他人亮——赢高分课件
展开层级十一 吸引眼球的亮点词汇高考阅卷通常在1分钟内阅完一篇习作,由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳,大众化的词汇只能让阅卷老师感到越来越困乏。但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇,则会让阅卷老师眼前一亮、精神一振,作文增分提档自在情理之中。1.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云写作时,恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷·书面表达)If yu are free this Sunday,yu are expected t have a wnderful talk with us frm 5 p.m.t 6 p.m.this Sunday.→If yu are available this Sunday,yu are expected t have a wnderful talk with us frm 5 p.m.t 6 p.m.this Sunday.
②(2021·天津卷·书面表达)I'm busy with my lessns nw,fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin,which is very imprtant t me,is near.→I'm ccupied with my lessns nw,fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin,which is f great imprtance t me,is arund the crner.
2.更新换代,避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是高级用法。①The team will hld many activities,sme f which will appeal t yu,including many matches.→The team will hld a range f activities,sme f which will appeal t yu,including quite a few matches.②We've built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we've als built a library where the ld playgrund used t be.→We've cnstructed a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we've als set up a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
3.单词短语,巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先,应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动,可以“一词传神”。①Knwing that yu like classical music,I'd like t invite yu t jin me and welcme yu t shw yur perfrmance.→Knwing that yu are fnd f classical music,I'd like t invite yu t jin me and welcme yu t shw yur perfrmance.②(经典高考题)I've decided t teach yu Tang Petry in Rm 101 Building 1 at 8 a.m. n Wednesday,which will last tw hurs.→I've made up my mind t teach yu Tang Petry in Rm 101 Building 1 at 8 a.m. n Wednesday,which will last tw hurs.
4.高级替代,低级淘汰为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,应避免反复使用初中阶段学过的词汇,尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.I'm sure yu will have a great time.→I hpe my advice will be beneficial t yu.I'm sure yu will have a great time.②Secnd,I am trying my best t acquire the essential knwledge and skills cncerning my psitin.→Secnd,I am sparing n effrt t acquire the essential knwledge and skills cncerning my psitin.
[对点训练] 请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷·满分作文)I'd be very glad if yu culd cme and share yur experience with us.___________________2.(2021·全国甲卷·书面表达)Furthermre,guzheng is very imprtant t Chinese flk music.________________________________3.(2021·天津卷3月·书面表达)All in all,Beijing has a kind f pwer that makes us feel the lng histry f Chinese culture ver 5,000 years._________
mre than delighted
f great imprtance/significance
4.(经典高考题)But if he's ut there every day and playing hard,yu shuld praise his effrt regardless f whether his team wins r lses._______________5.(2020·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)In additin,I can intrduce the Chinese paintings in detail and give help t anyne wh is in need.__________6.(经典高考题)The training schedule,apart frm regular training,includes jining in varius activities,such as participating in sme natinal cmpetitins.____________
are suppsed t
a variety f
7.(经典高考题)S,please spend sme time taking a brief lk at the histryf the Tang Dynasty,which will help yu prepare fr yur class._______________________________8.In rder t get a better understanding f Tang Petry,I advise yu t learn sme brief histry f the Tang Dynasty in advance._______9.(经典高考题)The craftsmen will shw visitrs hw t cut paper int different shapes n the spt.__________________10.(经典高考题)Our class thught f the idea t make better use f used materials._____________
Therefre;make preparatins fr
varius/a range f
came up with
层级十二 巧妙衔接,流畅行文过渡 高考阅卷老师说:缺乏衔接过渡的文章,就好比一串断了线的珍珠,每个词句虽光彩夺目,拿出来却七零八落,不堪受用。要想成就美文,不仅需要高级词汇,还需穿珠之线,这个线就是衔接过渡。[起]——创造良好开端表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头,用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有:first,firstly,first f all,at first,in the first place,abve all,t begin/start with,tday,nw,nwadays,at present,currently,recently,generally speaking,accrding t等。
①(2020·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)T begin with,althugh he is ld,he stepped frward t Wuhan.首先,虽然他已经老了,但还是前往了武汉。②(2022·全国甲卷·书面表达)First f all,what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins.首先,我们可以做的是重视我们的日常活动。
[承]——顺势承上启下表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有:secnd/secndly,als,besides,in additin,sn afterwards,after that,what's mre,furthermre,mrever,what's wrse,still less,t make matters wrse,wrse still,fr example,in ther wrds,especially,particularly,bviusly,meanwhile,at the same time等。
①(2021·全国乙卷·书面表达)Secnd,it is wise t take a shrt break after learning fr 30 minutes.其次,在学习30分钟后休息一下是明智的。②(2020·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)Meanwhile,I cmpeted with my friends t see wh picked mre.期间,我和朋友比赛看谁摘的多。
[转]——巧妙转折过度表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有:but,yet,hwever,while,therwise,r (else),n the cntrary,n the ther hand,cntrary t,in any case,thugh,althugh,as,even if/thugh,despite,in spite f,regardless f等。①(2020·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)Althugh it was ht,everyne had a great time there.尽管天非常热,但每个人都非常开心。②(2020·浙江卷·读后续写)We ran as quickly as we culd.Hwever,the bear caught up with us in secnds.我们尽可能快地跑。然而,熊在几秒钟内赶上了我们。
[合]——完美结束全文表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容,引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有:finally,last but nt least,in shrt,in brief,in cnclusin,in a/ne wrd,t sum up,all in all,n the whle,in general等。①(2021·全国乙卷·书面表达)In cnclusin,nly by being smart nline learners can we truly enjy the benefits f mdern technlgy.总之,只有通过成为聪明的网络学习者,我们才能真正享受现代技术的好处。②(2022·全国甲卷·书面表达)All in all,it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting cean.总之,现在是我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。
[对点训练] 用过渡性词汇完成句子1.(2021·浙江卷)Fr yur visit here,we have arranged a variety f activities._______________________________________ (首先,我们计划参观我们的校园),during which yu can enjy the lvely view f the lake behind the main teaching building.__________ (之后),we will hld an exchange meeting abut cultural differences between New Zealand and China._______ (最后),a Peking Opera perfrmance will be given if time permits.
First,a tur f ur campus is scheduled
2.(2021·全国乙卷)As we knw,_______________ (一方面),learning nline is a flexible way that we can have access t knwledge whenever and wherever pssible._________________,(另一方面)there are many shared and free learning resurces.3.(2020·全国卷Ⅰ)__________________________________ (首先,不用说),he is gd at English,fr he has lived in Detrit fr half a year as an exchange student.____________ (此外),n ne can deny he gets alng well with all ur classmates,enjy a harmnius interpersnal relatinship and is always ready t help thers.____________________________ (最后但同样重要的是),he has a lt f life experience,cnsidering that he has been serving as vice-mnitr fr many years.Hpefully,I culd becme an utstanding persn like Li Hua.
n the ne hand
On the ther hand
First and fremst,needless t say
Additinally
Last but certainly nt least
4.__________________________ (首先),I'm a big fan f traditinal Chinese paintings._________ (因此),I am capable f ffering visitrs detailed explanatins n the stries f famus Chinese painters.5._________________________________________ (总之),success is imprtant,and s is failure,because it's the mther f success.
First f all/T begin with
In a wrd/In cnclusin/In shrt/In brief
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