高考英语二轮复习专题五第一课写作模板与实战展示（Ⅰ）课件

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一、题型解读1．应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言实际应用能力，测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息、表达观点的能力，题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。2．文体包括书信(邮件)、新闻报道、日记、通知、发言(演讲)稿、倡议书、海报、说明书、网络发帖等。但近几年高考进一步拓展写作文体，更新试题呈现形式，设置更加贴近现实生活的英语交际任务情境，增强试题的开放性和灵活性。3．词数为80左右，满分15分。应用文通常给出提纲式要点，话题常与学生的校园生活息息相关。
三、赋分标准(一)应用文评分细则1．本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。2．评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度与合理性。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3．评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定所属档次，然后以相应档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4．评分注意事项。(1)词数少于60或多于100的，从总分中减去2分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美不同的拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以至影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次。
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
二、策略大营策略(一)　“包装”让词汇高端起来1．用词无重复原则——求雅变异写作时，应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语。恰当地使用同义词(组)不仅可以体现雅致的文彩，还有利于增强段落的统一性和连贯性。例如：(1)ld peple→the elderly/senir citizens 老人(2)a way t d sth.→an apprach t ding sth.做某事的方法(3)all kinds f→a variety f/varius/a wide range f各种各样的(4)finish→accmplish完成(5)hard/difficult→tugh/challenging困难的
(6)different→varius 不同的(7)free→available有空的(8)srry→upset 难过的(9)glad→pleased/delighted/cheerful/jyful 高兴的(10)inspire→spark 激发，鼓舞(11)be busy with→be absrbed in/be ccupied with/be engaged in忙于
[针对训练1]　同义词替换。1．In rder t enrich students' after­schl life，an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl，which inspires a grwing lve fr traditinal art.→In rder t enrich students' after­schl life，an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl，which ________ a grwing lve fr traditinal art. (2021·浙江卷满分作文)2．Due t COVID­19, it is difficult fr farmers t sell their prduce，making them very hpeless.→Due t COVID­19，it is ________ fr farmers t sell their prduce, making them very hpeless.
答案：1.sparks　2.tugh/challenging
2．词义具体化原则——生动贴切写作中尽量避免使用意义广泛、模棱两可的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。[针对训练2]　补全句子。1．Listening t sngs and watching mvies are gd fr imprving their spken English.→Listening t sngs and watching mvies ______________________ imprving their spken English.(2022·全国乙卷作文)2．I als gt a deeper impressin fr the rle that plants played in keeping the balance f ur ecsystem.→I als ____________________________________ fr the rle that plants played in maintaining the balance f ur ecsystem(2023·浙江卷)
答案：1.are beneficial t　2.gained a greater appreciatin
3．高年级词汇优先原则——新颖高级为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应尽量使用高年级阶段学到的词汇，而不用低年级阶段学到的词汇。[针对训练3]　同义词替换。1．We are suppsed t adpt a prper way t prtect us frm the terrible virus.→We are suppsed t adpt___________________________________________________________________________________________us frm the terrible virus.2．There is all kinds f lcal peras arund China，such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera.→There is____________________________lcal peras arund China，such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera.
答案：1.an apprpriate apprach t prtecting　2.a wide range f
4．短语优先原则——凑词增色用短语代替单词不仅会给文章增加亮点，而且用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。(1)形容词变短语的方法(f＋同根名词)。very imprtant/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→f vital/great imprtance/use/ value/ benefit/help(2)动词变短语的方法——替换升级。
(3)副词变短语的方法——同义短语替换。
[针对训练4]　词汇升级。1．I master English，which enables me t cmmunicate with freign friends well.→I_____________________________________________English，which enables me t cmmunicate with freign friends well.2．S，it is high time that we did all we can t affect the sustainable develpment f ceans greatly.→S，it is high time that we did all we can t __________________________ the sustainable develpment f ceans.(2022·全国甲卷作文)3．I fall int lve with English.→I ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________English.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
答案：1．have a gd cmmand f　2.make a huge difference t3．am fnd f/am interested in/am crazy abut/am addicted t
策略(二) “换装”让句子新颖起来换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。1．特殊句式，风景独好(1)运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为：①强调句型基本结构为“It＋is/was＋被强调部分＋that/wh＋句子其他部分”。②借助于助动词d/des/did对谓语动词进行强调。[针对训练5]　对加黑部分进行强调。1．In my memry，Yuth accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文)
2．He did nt knw what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．I expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文)
答案：1.In my memry，it is Yuth that accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl.2．It was nt until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.3．I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
(2)运用倒装句，以示强调。在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：①“nly＋状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。②nne、neither、nr、nt、never、hardly、little、seldm等否定词以及at n time、by n means等短语置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。③在结构中，当s/such...位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装。④as、thugh引起的倒装句。⑤表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。⑥nt nly位于句首，后接句子时，要求采用部分倒装结构，即将该句中谓语的一部分如助动词或情态动词或系动词倒装至主语之前。
[针对训练6]　句型转换。1．Ocean pllutin can be dramatically highlighted with everyne's invlvement.(用nly＋介词短语引起倒装)．→Only with everyne's invlvement_________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(2022·全国甲卷作文)2．Each pair can have a gd match and effectively cmmunicate with each ther in this way.→Only in this way ________________________________ a gd match and effectively cmmunicate with each ther.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
3．Mrever，it will nt nly imprve ur English cmmunicatin skills，but it will als build ur cnfidence.→Mrever，________________________ ur English cmmunicatin skills，but it will als build ur cnfidence.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)4．An ld temple which dates back t Ming Dynasty stands at the ft f the muntain.→At the ft f the muntain___________________________________________，which dates back t Ming Dynasty.5．Thrugh the exhibitin，yu can nt nly admire wnderful pictures，but als understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better.→Thrugh the exhibitin，nt nly______________________________，but als understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better.(2021·浙江卷满分作文)
答案：1.can cean pllutin be dramatically highlighted　2.can each pair have　3.nt nly will it imprve　4.stands an ld temple5．can yu admire wnderful pictures
(3)运用省略句，避免不必要的重复。[针对训练7]　句型转换。1．When I feel depressed，I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries.→__________________________________________，I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文)2．If it is pssible，avid ging t crwded public places such as cinemas，shpping malls，Internet bars and s n.→________________，avid ging t crwded public places such as cinemas，shpping malls，Internet bars and s n.
答案：1.When feeling depressed　2.If pssible
2．三大句式，编排巧妙(1)运用定语从句。[针对训练8]　句型转换。1．We all knw that Chinese fd has becme increasingly ppular arund the wrld.(用as进行转换)→_________________________________________________，Chinese fd hasbecme increasingly ppular arund the wrld.2．With the fire heating，the biling il suddenly splashed ut f the ht pan，and it scared me a lt.→With the fire heating，the biling il suddenly splashed ut f the ht pan，________________________．(2023·全国乙卷)
答案：1.As is knwn t us all　2.which scared me a lt
(2)运用名词性从句。[针对训练9]　补全句子。1．____________________________________________ (令他吃惊的)is that thelittle girl knws s many things.2．I have just fund__________________________________________________(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议)．3．Wrd came__________________________________________________________________________________(我们学校打算举行一次班会)whse tpic is related t Chinese traditinal custms.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
答案：1.What surprises him　2.that I have t attend an imprtant meeting that afternn　3.that ur schl is ging t hld a class meeting
(3)运用状语从句。[针对训练10]　补全句子。1．If nt，please let me knw _____________________________________(以便我们做出调整)accrdingly t suit yur schedule.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)2．_____________________________________________________(尽管我被拒绝了)，I still received sme great encuragement，which gives me cnfidence t be a writer.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文)
答案：1.s that/in rder that we can make adjustments2．Refused as/thugh I was/Althugh/Thugh/While I was refused
3．活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。[针对训练11]　 句型转换。1．As the cean pllutin is becming mre and mre serius，June 8th is fficially named by the United Natins as the Wrld Oceans Day，which is aimed at raising peple's awareness f cean cnservatin.→____________________________________________________________________________，June 8th is fficially named by the United Natins as the Wrld Oceans Day，which is aimed at raising peple's awareness f cean cnservatin. (2022·全国甲卷作文)
2．Last weekend，I participated in a“Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us”activity that was rganised by ur Students' Unin.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→Last weekend，I participated in a“Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us”activity ________________________________________．(2023·浙江卷)3．When we are faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the Internet，we can't tell the difference between the true and the false，which may be harmful t ur study and life.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________，we can't tellthe difference between the true and the false，which may be harmful t ur study and life.(2021·全国乙卷满分作文)
4．On the ther hand，nline learning itself has sme imperfectins，which makes it difficult fr us nt t be affected.→On the ther hand，nline learning itself has sme imperfectins，______________________________________________________________________________.(2021 · 全国乙卷满分作文)
答案：1.With the cean pllutin becming mre and mre serius2．rganised by ur Students' Unin3．Faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the Internet4．making it difficult fr us nt t be affected
4．适时感叹，必要强调[针对训练12]　补全句子。　_____________________________________________ (我们玩得多么开心啊)!Nt nly did it give us relaxatin，but als it gt us clser t nature.
答案：What a wnderful time we had
5．it句式表达技高一筹(1)It is/was＋形容词/名词＋'s necessary/imprtant/natural that sb.(shuld)某人做……是必要的/重要的/自然的It is likely that...有可能……It is(high/abut)time that＋主语＋did/shuld d...该是……的时候了It is/was n surprise/wnder that...……不足为奇It is a pity that...遗憾的是……
(2)It is/was＋过去分词＋ is widely believed/acknwledged that ...人们普遍相信/认为……It is knwn that...(＝What is knwn is we all knw，...)众所周知……It is strngly recmmended that...强烈建议……It is reprted/said/hped that...据报道/据说/人们希望……It is thught/cnsidered that...……被认为……，大家认为……
(3)It＋be＋名词＋(f/fr sb)t d sth.It's a great hnur fr sb t d sth.对某人来说做某事是一件非常荣幸的事情It's my great privilege t d sth.做某事是我的莫大荣幸(4)动词＋it＋其他。I'd appreciate it if...如果……我将感激不尽sb.hate(s)/dislike(s)/lve(s)/like(s)it when...某人讨厌/喜欢……
(5)it的其他相关句型：It ges withut saying that...毫无疑问/不言而喻……It takes(sb.)sme time/energy t d sth.做某事花费了(某人)一些时间/精力It is n use/gd ding sth.做某事没有用处/好处When it cmes t...当谈到……As sb.put(s) it ...正如某人所说的那样……It has been＋时间段＋since...自从……有多长时间了
It ccurs t/hits/strikes 某人突然想到……It seems/appears that...看起来似乎……(6)主语＋think/believe/feel/make/find＋it＋形容词/名词＋(f/fr sb.＋)t d sth.
[针对训练13]　补全句子/句型转换。1．________________________________________________________________(众所周知)，mre than tw­thirds f the Earth's surface is cvered by water.(2022·全国甲卷作文)2．I____________________________________________________________________________________________________________traditinal Chinese culture.我认为这是进一步了解中国传统文化的一个很好的机会。3．It is imprtant that everyne________________________________________________________________in a new envirnment.在新的环境中学会和他人相处对每个人都是重要的。
4．It is knwn that the Great Wall is ne f the Seven Wnders f the Ancient Wrld，which is lcated in Nrth China.→__________________________the Great Wall is ne f the Seven Wnders f the Ancient Wrld，which is lcated in Nrth China.(主语从句)→__________________，the Great Wall is ne f the Seven Wnders f the Ancient Wrld，which is lcated in Nrth China.(非限制性定语从句)
答案：1.As we all knw　2.cnsider it a wnderful pprtunity t further understand　3.shuld learn t get alng well with thers　4.What is knwn is that　As we all knw
策略(三) “改装”让细节丰满起来在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1．增加同位语或定语从句[针对训练14]　补全句子。1．I'm Li Hua，_____________________________________________________________(一个参加交流项目的中国学生)，and I'm studying in this schl.2．T begin with，the theme f the shw is Envirnment Prtectin，____________________________________________________(这不仅有意义，而且有趣)．
答案：1.a Chinese student n an exchange prgramme2．which will be nt nly meaningful but als interesting
2．列举具体的实例来补充说明[针对训练15]　 补全句子。1．I'll spend sme time staying with my parents，___________________________________________________________________________________________(和他们聊天，做一些家务)．2．In the past tw weeks，we have had the cultural cmmunicatin in many aspects，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(例如生活、学习、体育、文学、艺术等)。
答案：1.chatting with them and ding sme husewrk2．such as life，study，sprts，literature，arts and s n
3．添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容[针对训练16]　补全句子。1．I am mre than delighted t share sme details with yu.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣)，I am mre than delighted t share sme details with yu.2．I'm planning t take a part time jb in a freign cmpany.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (为了获得一些实践经验)，I'm planning t take a part­time jb in a freign cmpany.
答案：1.Knwing that yu are interested in ur Cherish Life activity2．In rder t get sme practical experience
4．内容适当具体化[针对训练17]　补全句子。1．I'm ging t d sme shpping in the supermarket.→I'm ging t d sme shpping___________________________________________________________________________________________________________(在超市里，直到下午5点才能回来)．2．The activity will be held in Classrm 501.→The activity will be held________________________________________________________________________________________ (4月11日的上午9时至10时)in Classrm 501.
答案：1.in the supermarket and wn't be back until 5 'clck in the afternn2．frm 9 a．m.t 10 a．m.n 11 April
5．表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等[针对训练18]　补全句子。1．I think it is a gd chance t appreciate lcal peras，________________________________________________________________________________________(这肯定能帮助你了解更多的中国文化)．2．We can set ut early___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(这样我们就可以有更多的时间来阅读和选择书了)．
答案：1.which will surely help yu learn mre abut Chinese culture2．s that we can have mre time t read and select bks
策略(四)　“化装”让语篇靓丽起来根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。1．表示“首先”的词语如first/firstly，first f all，t begin/start with等。①First f all，we must make full use f every 45­minute lessn.②T begin with，smking shuld be banned in public areas.
2．表示“其次”的词语如secnd/secndly，besides，in additin，what's mre，furthermre，mrever等。①Secndly，we shuld get up early t memrize idims and useful expressins.②What's mre，gd bks can help us t develp gd characters.③In additin，dctrs are highly respected in China and in great demand，especially highly qualified prfessinals.3．表示“最后”的词语如last/lastly，last but nt least，mst imprtantly等。①Last but nt least，health is als very significant fr us students.②Mst imprtantly，reading thse bks pened a windw fr me t anther wrld and gave me a new pint f view.
4．表示“总之”的词语如in shrt，in brief，in cnclusin，in a/ne wrd，t sum up，all in all，n the whle，in general等。In a wrd，success is imprtant，and s is failure，because it's the mther f success.
[针对训练19]　补全句子。1．______________(首先)，I brke the eggs and stirred them evenly under the guidance f my mther，and then I washed the tmates and sliced them.(2023·全国乙卷)2．______________(而且)，12% f the students chse t visit English­learning websites when enhancing English skill.(2022·全国乙卷作文)
答案：1.At first　2.What's mre
第一课　写作模板与实战展示(Ⅰ)
第一课　写作模板与实战展示(Ⅰ)(活动介绍/新闻报道、演讲/发言稿、通知与倡议书)(一)万能内化模板
(二)四步解题示范[典例]　你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Grwing Tgether，内容包括：1．短片内容：学校的发展；2．放映时间、地点；3．欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[写作示范]第一步：三审定题，列纲谋篇
第二步：斟词酌句，锁住要点
第三步：词句升级，升华助篇
答案：utstanding　relevant details　belved　nte　cmment　have/hld the belief ．which is abut the develpment f ur belved schl2．enjying the mvie，having a heated discussin　giving yur wn cmments
第四步：衔接润色，完美成篇衔接词：t begin with，besides，what's mre，afterwards，hpefully__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案： NticeBys and girls，Recently，an utstanding mvie will be shwn in ur campus.Here are sme relevant details abut it.T begin with，the name f the mvie is Grwing Tgether，which is abut the develpment f ur belved schl.Besides，please nte that it will be shwn in the library frm 2：00 t 4：00 p．m.n 9 June.What's mre，every ne f yu will be welcme t take part in it，enjying the mvie，having a heated discussin afterwards and giving yur wn cmments.I have the belief that yu will have a great time then.The Students' Unin
Writing 1(2023·湛江市普高二模)假定你是李华，请给你校外教Anna写一封邮件，邀请她主持下个月的英语演讲比赛，内容包括：1．比赛的地点、时间等；2．她需要做的事。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs，Li Hua
【参考答案】Dear Anna，I am writing this letter t ask if yu are willing t be the hst f the English speech cntest.The cntest is scheduled t be held in the schl lecture centre n the secnd weekend f next mnth.Yu are expected t give bth an pening speech and a clsing ne，and make sme brief cmments n the speakers.And f curse，yu need t intrduce ur judges briefly.I'd appreciate it if yu culd accept my invitatin.I am lking frward t yur early reply.Best wishes t yu.Yurs，Li Hua
Writing 2(2023·大湾区普高联考)五一劳动节快到了，学校开展了“我帮父母做家务”的活动。请你为校报英文专栏写一篇短文，介绍该活动的情况，要点包括：1．活动目的；2．活动内容；3．你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Helping My Parents D Husewrk__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】Helping My parents D HusewrkWith the apprach f the May Day Internatinal Labr Day，ur schl launched an activity f“Helping Parents D Husewrk”，aiming t cultivate a sense f respnsibility and gratitude in students.The activity invlved students taking n varius chres such as cleaning，cking，and laundry，thus giving parents sme well­deserved rest.Thrughut the week，students were encuraged t share their experiences and insights in class，prmting discussin and reflectin.Persnally，I find this activity bth educatinal and rewarding.It has taught me the imprtance f cntributing t the family and has deepened my appreciatin fr my parents' daily effrts.
Writing 3(2023·广东省汕头金山中学高三校模)某英语杂志开设“一周一成语”专栏，向外国读者介绍中国成语。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍中国成语“水滴石穿”。内容包括：1．解释字面意思；2．阐释道理；3．该成语对你产生的影响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数；4．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Here cmes the Weekly Chinese Idim—“shuǐ dī shí chuan”．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】Here cmes the Weekly Chinese Idim—“shuǐ dī shí chuan”．Literally，shuǐ means water，dī means dripping，and shí chun mean cutting thrugh a stne.The cmbinatin f the whle phrase“shuǐ dī shí chun”is equal t the saying in the west that cnstant dripping wears away a stne.Integrated int an idim，the fur characters demnstrate the pwer f perseverance and persistence，which will cntribute t achieving a challenging r seemingly unlikely bjective.This idim has a far­reaching impact n me，nt nly encuraging me t stick t my gal even in adversity with cntinuus effrts，but als cnvincing me that all the effrts are wrthwhile and will pay ff ne day.
Writing 4(2023·广东省佛山禅城区高三模拟)你校英语角将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Develp a Reading Habit”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1．养成阅读习惯的重要性；2．你的建议。注意：1.词数应为80左右；2．题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Develp a Reading HabitA reading habit is imprtant fr us.Undubtedly，reading helps t expand ur knwledge and understanding f the wrld._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________