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2023高考英语二轮专题复习与测试专题五第一课写作模板与实战展示Ⅰ活动介绍新闻报道等课件
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这是一份2023高考英语二轮专题复习与测试专题五第一课写作模板与实战展示Ⅰ活动介绍新闻报道等课件,共60页。PPT课件主要包含了命题探究目标定向,专题五 应用文写作,命题透视,续上表,专题支招高效备考,案例现场,实战突破胜券在握,课堂新体验等内容,欢迎下载使用。
一、题型解读1.应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言实际应用能力,测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息、表达观点的能力,题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。2.文体包括书信(邮件)、新闻报道、日记、通知、发言(演讲)稿、倡议书、海报、说明书、网络发帖等。但近几年高考进一步拓展写作文体,更新试题呈现形式,设置更加贴近现实生活的英语交际任务情境,增强试题的开放性和灵活性。3.词数为80左右,满分15分。应用文通常给出提纲式要点,话题常与学生的校园生活息息相关。
三、赋分标准(一)应用文评分细则1.本题总分为15分,分五个档次进行评分。2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为:(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度与合理性。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时,先根据作答的整体情况初步确定所属档次,然后以相应档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次,最后给分。
4.评分注意事项。(1)词数少于60或多于100的,从总分中减去2分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英美不同的拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差,以至影响交际的,将分数降低一个档次。
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
“冤屈的”四档作文(得分9分)Dear Tm,I am very delighted t hear frm yu.Yu asked me abut the physical exercise in ur schl and the fllwing infrmatin may help yu knw mre abut it.T begin with,a new stadium has been built up,and it has becme the new landmark in ur schl.Mrever,with the stadium set up,many kinds f sprts events are able t be held,f which Pingpng,ftball and running cmpetitins are very ppular.As fr me,I'm interested in basketball.I sincerely invite yu t cme t ur schl and see fr yurself.Yurs,Li Hua
“体面的”五档作文(得分14分)Dear Tm,I am mre than delighted t hear frm yu.Yu asked me abut the physical exercise in ur schl and,I think,the fllwing infrmatin may help yu have a better understanding f it.T begin with,a new stadium has been built up,which has becme the new landmark in ur schl.Mrever,the stadium set up,a wide range f sprts events are able t be held,f which Pingpng,ftball as well as running cmpetitins enjy great ppularity.As fr me,I'm interested in basketball.I sincerely invite yu t cme t ur schl and see fr yurself.Yurs,Li Hua
专家点评1.左栏作文用词准确,分段合理,且使用了with复合结构和 f which引导的非限制性定语从句等,是一篇相当不错的作文。2.右栏升级后的作文,语言更地道、更自然流畅,可谓妙笔生花,技高一筹。(1)词汇的提升有五处,特别是have a better understanding f、a wide range f 及 enjy great ppularity的使用会令阅卷老师赞叹作者深厚的语言功底,同时也提升了得分档次。(2)句式的提升有三处,插入语Ⅰthink,which引导的定语从句,以及独立主格the stadium set up 的使用,都恰到好处,相对于左栏的作文有了大幅度的提升
二、策略大营策略(一) “包装”让词汇高端起来1.用词无重复原则——求雅变异写作时,应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语。恰当地使用同义词(组)不仅可以体现雅致的文彩,还有利于增强段落的统一性和连贯性。例如:(1)ld peple→the elderly/senir citizens 老人(2)a way t d sth.→an apprach t ding sth.做某事的方法(3)all kinds f→a variety f/varius/a wide range f各种各样的(4)finish→accmplish完成(5)hard/difficult→tugh/challenging困难的
(6)different→varius 不同的(7)free→available有空的(8)srry→upset 难过的(9)glad→pleased/delighted/cheerful/jyful高兴的(10)inspire→spark 激发,鼓舞(11)be busy with→be absrbed in/be ccupied with/be engaged in忙于
[针对训练1] 同义词替换。1.In rder t enrich students' afterschl life,an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl,which inspires a grwing lve fr traditinal art.→In rder t enrich students' afterschl life,an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl,which a grwing lve fr traditinal art. (2021·浙江卷满分作文)2.Due t COVID19, it is difficult fr farmers t sell their prduce,making them very hpeless.→Due t COVID19,it is fr farmers t sell their prduce, making them very hpeless.
答案:1.sparks 2.tugh/challenging
2.词义具体化原则——生动贴切写作中尽量避免使用意义广泛、模棱两可的词,而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。[针对训练2] 补全句子。1.Listening t sngs and watching mvies are gd fr imprving their spken English.→Listening t sngs and watching mvies imprving their spken English.(2022·全国乙卷作文)2.The whle curse was extremely difficult.→The whle curse was extremely difficult, (尤其是靠近山的地方,狭窄而不平).(2020·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)
答案:1.are beneficial t2.especially the part near the muntain,narrw and rugh
3.高年级词汇优先原则——新颖高级为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,应尽量使用高年级阶段学到的词汇,而不用低年级阶段学到的词汇。[针对训练3] 同义词替换。1.We are suppsed t adpt a prper way t prtect us frm the terrible virus.→We are suppsed t adpt______________________________________________________________________________________us frm the terrible is all kinds f lcal peras arund China,such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera.→There is lcal peras arund China,such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera.
答案:1.an apprpriate apprach t prtecting 2.a wide range f
4.短语优先原则——凑词增色用短语代替单词不仅会给文章增加亮点,而且用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。(1)形容词变短语的方法(f+同根名词)。very imprtant/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→f vital/great imprtance/use/ value/benefit/help(2)动词变短语的方法——替换升级。
(3)副词变短语的方法——同义短语替换。
[针对训练4] 词汇升级。1.I master English,which enables me t cmmunicate with freign friends well.→I_______________________________________________English,whichenables me t cmmunicate with freign friends ,it is high time that we did all we can t affect the sustainable develpment f ceans greatly.→S,it is high time that we did all we can t the sustainable develpment f ceans.(2022·全国甲卷作文)3.I'm very delighted t learn that yu take great interest in the Spring Festival.→I'm delighted t learn that yu take great interest in the Spring Festival.(2021·北京高考满分作文)
答案:1.have a gd cmmand f 2.make a huge difference t 3.mre than
策略(二) “换装”让句子新颖起来换用句式时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。1.特殊句式,风景独好(1)运用强调句:强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分,它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为:①强调句型基本结构为“It+is/was+被强调部分+that/wh+句子其他部分”。②借助于助动词d/des/did对谓语动词进行强调。
[针对训练5] 对加黑部分进行强调。1.In my memry,Yuth accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl.→__________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)2.He did nt knw what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.I expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.→__________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)
答案:1.In my memry,it is Yuth that accmpanies me thrugh my whle high was nt until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.3.I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
(2)运用倒装句,以示强调。在写作中,倒装句应用比较广泛,涉及的句型也比较多,包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有:①“nly+状语”置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。②nne、neither、nr、nt、never、hardly、little、seldm等否定词以及at n time、by n means等短语置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。③在结构中,当s/such...位于句首时,其后的句子用部分倒装。④as、thugh引起的倒装句。⑤表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时,句子用全部倒装。
[针对训练6] 句型转换。1.Ocean pllutin can be dramatically highlighted with everyne's invlvement.(用nly+介词短语引起倒装).→Only with everyne's invlvement_________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(2022·全国甲卷作文)2.We had hardly arrived at the farm when we saw many ranges hanging frm the branches.→Hardly at the farm when we saw many ranges hanging frm the branches.(2020·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)
3.She is s patient with each student that we all like her.→S patient with each student we all like her.(2020·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)4.An ld temple which dates back t Ming Dynasty stands at the ft f the muntain.→At the ft f the muntain__________________________________________,which dates back t Ming Dynasty.
5.Thrugh the exhibitin,yu can nt nly admire wnderful pictures,but als understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better.→Thrugh the exhibitin,nt nly ,but als understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better.(2021·浙江高考满分作文)
答案:1.can cean pllutin be dramatically highlighted 2.had we arrived 3.is she that 4.stands an ld temple5.can yu admire wnderful pictures
(3)运用省略句,避免不必要的重复。[针对训练7] 句型转换。1.When I feel depressed,I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries.→_____________________________________________________,I ftenchse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries.(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)2.If it is pssible,avid ging t crwded public places such as cinemas,shpping malls,Internet bars and s n.→ ,avid ging t crwded public places such as cinemas,shpping malls,Internet bars and s n.
答案:1.When feeling depressed 2.If pssible
2.三大句式,编排巧妙(1)运用定语从句。[针对训练8] 句型转换。1.We all knw that Chinese fd has becme increasingly ppular arund the wrld.(用as进行转换)→________________________________________________,Chinese fd hasbecme increasingly ppular arund the students frm twenty classes participated in the race and amng them thirty were girls.→Ninety students frm twenty classes participated in the race,_______________ thirty were girls.(2020·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)
答案:1.As is knwn t us all 2.amng whm
(2)运用名词性从句。[针对训练9] 补全句子。1.___________________________________________(令他吃惊的)is that thelittle girl knws s many things.2.I have just fund___________________________________________________(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议) came________________________________________________________ (我们学校打算举行一次班会)whse tpic is related t Chinese traditinal custms.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
答案:1.What surprises him 2.that I have t attend an imprtant meeting that afternn 3.that ur schl is ging t hld a class meeting
(3)运用状语从句。[针对训练10] 补全句子。1.__________________________________________________________________(随着世界变成一个地球村),English is getting mre and mre (尽管我被拒绝了),I still received sme great encuragement,which gives me cnfidence t be a writer.(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)
答案:1.As the wrld is becming a glbal village2.Refused as/thugh I was/Althugh/Thugh/While I was refused
3.活用非谓语,让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句,提升表达档次,使句子凝练高端。[针对训练11] 句型转换。1.As the cean pllutin is becming mre and mre serius,June 8th is fficially named by the United Natins as the Wrld Oceans Day,which is aimed at raising peple's awareness f cean cnservatin.→_________________________________________________________________ ,June 8th is fficially named by the United Natins as the Wrld Oceans Day,which is aimed at raising peple's awareness f cean cnservatin.(2022·全国甲卷作文)
2.She walked ut f the lab and many students fllwed her.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→She walked ut f the lab, we are faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the Internet,we can't tell the difference between the true and the false,which may be harmful t ur study and life.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,we can't tellthe difference between the true and the false,which may be harmful t ur study and life.(2021·全国乙卷满分作文)
4.On the ther hand,nline learning itself has sme imperfectins,which makes it difficult fr us nt t be affected.→On the ther hand,nline learning itself has sme imperfectins,______________________________________________________________________________.(2021 · 全国乙卷满分作文)
答案:1.With the cean pllutin becming mre and mre serius2.fllwed by many students3.Faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the Internet4.making it difficult fr us nt t be affected
4.适时感叹,必要强调[针对训练12] 补全句子。____________________________________________(我们玩得多么开心啊)!Nt nly did it give us relaxatin,but als it gt us clser t nature.(2020·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)
答案:What a wnderful time we had
5.it句式表达技高一筹(1)It is/was+形容词/名词+'s necessary/imprtant/natural that sb.(shuld)某人做……是必要的/重要的/自然的It is likely that...有可能……It is(high/abut)time that+主语+did/shuld d...该是……的时候了It is/was n surprise/wnder that...……不足为奇It is a pity that...遗憾的是……
(2)It is/was+过去分词+ is widely believed/acknwledged that ...人们普遍相信/认为……It is knwn that...(=What is knwn is we all knw,...)众所周知……It is strngly recmmended that...强烈建议……It is reprted/said/hped that...据报道/据说/人们希望……It is thught/cnsidered that...……被认为……,大家认为……
(3)It+be+名词+(f/fr sb)t d sth.It's a great hnur fr sb t d sth.对某人来说做某事是一件非常荣幸的事情It's my great privilege t d sth.做某事是我的莫大荣幸(4)动词+it+其他。I'd appreciate it if...如果……我将感激不尽sb.hate(s)/dislike(s)/lve(s)/like(s)it when...某人讨厌/喜欢……
(5)it的其他相关句型:It ges withut saying that...毫无疑问/不言而喻……It takes(sb.)sme time/energy t d sth.做某事花费了(某人)一些时间/精力It is n use/gd ding sth.做某事没有用处/好处When it cmes t...当谈到……As sb.put(s) it ...正如某人所说的那样……It has been+时间段+since...自从……有多长时间了
It ccurs t/hits/strikes 某人突然想到……It seems/appears that...看起来似乎……
(6)主语+think/believe/feel/make/find+it+形容词/名词+(f/fr sb.+)t d sth.[针对训练13] 补全句子/句型转换。1.__________________________________________________________________(众所周知),mre than twthirds f the Earth's surface is cvered by water.(2022·全国甲卷作文)
2.I______________________________________________________________________________________________________________traditinal Chinese culture.我认为这是进一步了解中国传统文化的一个很好的机会。3.It is imprtant that everyne__________________________________________ in a new envirnment.在新的环境中学会和他人相处对每个人都是重要的。4.It is knwn that the Great Wall is ne f the Seven Wnders f the Ancient Wrld,which is lcated in Nrth China.→ the Great Wall is ne f the Seven Wnders f the Ancient Wrld,which is lcated in Nrth China.(主语从句)→ ,the Great Wall is ne f the Seven Wnders f the Ancient Wrld,which is lcated in Nrth China.(非限制性定语从句)
答案:1.As we all knw 2.cnsider it a wnderful pprtunity t further understand 3.shuld learn t get alng well with thers 4.What is knwn is that As we all knw
策略(三) “改装”让细节丰满起来在英语写作中,适当增加细节内容,能使习作流畅、丰满,达到应有的表达效果。1.增加同位语或定语从句[针对训练14] 补全句子。1.I'm Li Hua,______________________________________________________(一个参加交流项目的中国学生),and I'm studying in this begin with,the theme f the shw is Envirnment Prtectin,___________(这不仅有意义,而且有趣).
答案:1.a Chinese student n an exchange prgramme2.which will be nt nly meaningful but als interesting
2.列举具体的实例来补充说明[针对训练15] 补全句子。1.I'll spend sme time staying with my parents,_______________________________________________________________________________________________(和他们聊天,做一些家务) the past tw weeks,we have had the cultural cmmunicatin in many aspects,___________________________________________________________________(例如生活、学习、体育、文学、艺术等).
答案:1.chatting with them and ding sme husewrk2.such as life,study,sprts,literature,arts and s n
3.添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容[针对训练16] 补全句子。1.I am mre than delighted t share sme details with yu.→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣),I am mre than delighted t share sme details with yu.2.I'm planning t take a part time jb in a freign cmpany.→___________________________________________________________________________________________________________(为了获得一些实践经验),I'm planning t take a parttime jb in a freign cmpany.
答案:1.Knwing that yu are interested in ur Cherish Life activity2.In rder t get sme practical experience
4.内容适当具体化[针对训练17] 补全句子。1.I'm ging t d sme shpping in the supermarket.→I'm ging t d sme shpping___________________________________________________________________________________________________________(在超市里,直到下午5点才能回来) activity will be held in Classrm 501.→The activity will be held_______________________________________________________________________________________(4月11日的上午9时至10时)in Classrm 501.
答案:1.in the supermarket and wn't be back until 5 'clck in the afternn2.frm 9 10 11 April
5.表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等[针对训练18] 补全句子。1.I think it is a gd chance t appreciate lcal peras,________________________________________________________________________________________(这肯定能帮助你了解更多的中国文化) can set ut early__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(这样我们就可以有更多的时间来阅读和选择书了).
答案:1.which will surely help yu learn mre abut Chinese culture2.s that we can have mre time t read and select bks
策略(四) “化装”让语篇靓丽起来根据行文或段落需要,在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语,使文章浑然一体。1.表示“首先”的词语如first/firstly,first f all,t begin/start with等。①First f all,we must make full use f every 45minute lessn.②T begin with,smking shuld be banned in public areas.
2.表示“其次”的词语如secnd/secndly,besides,in additin,what's mre,furthermre,mrever等。①Secndly,we shuld get up early t memrize idims and useful expressins.②What's mre,gd bks can help us t develp gd characters.③In additin,dctrs are highly respected in China and in great demand,especially highly qualified prfessinals.
3.表示“最后”的词语如last/lastly,last but nt least,mst imprtantly等。①Last but nt least,health is als very significant fr us students.②Mst imprtantly,reading thse bks pened a windw fr me t anther wrld and gave me a new pint f view.4.表示“总之”的词语如in shrt,in brief,in cnclusin,in a/ne wrd,t sum up,all in all,n the whle,in general等。In a wrd,success is imprtant,and s is failure,because it's the mther f success.
[针对训练19] 补全句子。1. (首先),as smart nline learners,we can make full use f the mst extensive educatinal resurces t braden the hrizn.2. (而且),12% f the students chse t visit Englishlearning websites when enhancing English skill.(2022·全国乙卷作文)
答案:1.First f all 2.What's mre
第一课 写作模板与实战展示(Ⅰ)(活动介绍/新闻报道、演讲/发言稿、通知与倡议书)(一)万能内化模板
(二)四步解题示范[典例] 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Grwing Tgether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[写作示范]第一步:三审定题,列纲谋篇
第二步:斟词酌句,锁住要点
第三步:词句升级,升华助篇
词汇提升方法:普通→高级示例:interesting → _____________ sme infrmatin → _____________ wn → _____________ remember → _____________ pinin → _____________ believe → _____________
答案:utstanding relevant details belved nte cmment have/hld the belief that...
句子整合方法:简单→复杂,主动→被动示例:1.The name f the mvie is Grwing Tgether.It is abut the develpment f ur wn schl.→The name f the mvie is Grwing Tgether,____________________________________________________________________________.(用定语从句改写)2.Everybdy,yu will be welcme t take part in it.Please enjy the mvie.Then yu shuld have a heated discussin and give yur wn pinins.
→Every ne f yu will be welcme t take part in it,______________________afterwards and____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(用动词ing形式改写)
答案:1.which is abut the develpment f ur belved schl 2.enjying the mvie,having a heated discussin giving yur wn cmments
第四步:衔接润色,完美成篇 衔接词:t begin with,besides,what's mre,afterwards,hpefully____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案:NticeBys and girls,Recently,an utstanding mvie will be shwn in ur campus.Here are sme relevant details abut it.T begin with,the name f the mvie is Grwing Tgether,which is abut the develpment f ur belved schl.Besides,please nte that it will be shwn in the library frm 2:00 t 4:00 9 June.What's mre,every ne f yu will be welcme t take part in it,enjying the mvie,having a heated discussin afterwards and giving yur wn cmments.I have the belief that yu will have a great time then.The Students' Unin
Writing 1假定你是李华。为丰富校园文化生活,激励同学们为追逐梦想而努力,上周日你校举办了“我们都是追梦人”征文比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动具体情况;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。参考词汇:追梦人dream chaser______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】T enrich us students' schl life as well as inspire us t chase ur dreams,ur schl held a writing cntest whse theme was“We are all dream chasers”last Sunday.The majrity f the students tk part in the cntest and submitted their entries,in which participants lked frward t their bright future and expressed their determinatin t make cntributins t ur cuntry in the new era.The cntest has helped us t build cnfidence in pursuing ur dreams and turned ut t be bth meaningful and successful.
Writing 2假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了帮助英国交换生更好地了解中国文化、提高全体学生的文化意识,学生会将举办一个“中国文化日”活动,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知,内容包括:1.活动的目的;2.活动的时间、地点、内容、对象等;3.期待加入。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Ntice______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】NticeIn rder t make the exchange students have a better understanding f Chinese culture and develp everyne's cultural awareness,the Students' Unin will rganize a Chinese culture festival n the afternn f Octber 9th,which will be held in the schl hall.Here are sme relevant details abut it.T begin with,varius activities will be arranged t let all the students experience traditinal Chinese culture,such as paper cutting,kung fu and Chinese calligraphy.What's mre,yu will be welcme t enjy Peking Opera perfrmed by ur students.Wish yu wuld like the activities and jin us.The Students' Unin
Writing 3假定你是李华,正在准备明天英语课堂的“一分钟演讲”,你打算讲述一个邻居家庭,内容包括:1.家庭简介;2.生活幸福。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。A Neighburing Family______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】A Neighburing FamilyHell,everyne,tday I want t talk abut my gd neighburing family.There are five members in their family,the parents,the grandparents and a sn,wh is abut my age.The parents wrk hard and have distinguished careers.The sn,a gd friend f mine,is ne f the tp students in ur schl.The grandparents are at hme ding husewrk.All f them always wear a warm smile n their face,because they are cnfident abut their life and wrk,as well as the future.They are having a happy life.
Writing 4假定你是李华,你校学生学习压力大,缺乏体育锻炼。请你代表学生会,围绕“Sprts and Study”这一主题,在校英文报上发出倡议,内容包括:1.倡议的原因和目的;2.倡议的具体内容。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________S let's take actin frm nw n,fr urselves,fr ur cuntry!The Students' Unin
【参考范文】 Dear friends,Nwadays,mre and mre students devte all the spare time t studying due t heavy schl wrk and lack physical exercise,which has a bad impact n ur health.In rder t prmte ur awareness f health and relieve us f the stress,we had better d smething as fllws.First,running will make a big difference.Additinally,taking an active part in varius sprts ranging frm playing basketball t kicking shuttlecck will bth make us strnger and mre energetic.Mst imprtantly,we shuld take an active part in the mrning exercises and PE classes.S let's take actin frm nw n,fr urselves,fr ur cuntry!The Students' Unin
第二课 写作模板与实战展示(Ⅱ)(感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、介绍信与投诉信)(一)万能内化模板
(二)四步解题示范[典例] 假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请你写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友William参加,内容包括:1.活动时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear William,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
词汇提升方法:普通→高级示例:cming → ___________ have → ___________ be interested in → ___________ take part in → ___________ arrange → ___________
答案:appraching/upcming hld take interest in participate in schedule
句子整合方法:简单→复杂,主动→被动示例:1.We will have a Music Festival in ur schl.→A Music Festival in ur schl.(变被动语态)2.It's arranged that it will be held n the playgrund frm 5 8 Sunday.→ ,it will be held n the playgrund frm 5 8 Sunday.(非限制性定语从句)
3.We can sit n the grass/playgrund t enjy the delicius fd and wnderful perfrmances.→ the grass/playgrund,we can happily enjy the delicius fd and wnderful perfrmances.(分词短语作状语)
答案:1.will be held 2.As scheduled 3.Sitting/Seated n
第四步:衔接润色,完美成篇Dear William,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear William,A Music Festival will be held in ur schl.Since yu take much interest in music,I am writing t invite yu t participate in the festival with me.As scheduled,it will be held n the playgrund frm 5 p.m. t 8 p.m. next Sunday. At that time,seated n the grass,we can happy enjy the delicius fd and wnderful perfrmances.Furthermre,we als expect t see yu n the stage. And I'd be mre than delighted if yu culd cme and share this jyful mment with me.Hpefully yu can take this invitatin int cnsideratin.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
Writing 1假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的校园英语戏剧节。请用英语写一则书面通知,向全校各班级征集节目,内容包括:1.举办时间、地点等;2.节目要求。注意:1.词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Ntice__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students' UninJanuary 11th,2022
【参考范文】NticeT aruse students' awareness f prmting traditinal Chinese culture and develp their interest in learning English,we'll hld an English drama festival in ur schl at 2:00 pm n April 30th at the Cncert Hall.As t the requirements,the theme shuld be related t traditinal Chinese culture. Besides,each perfrmance shuld be limited t 10 minutes.Each class is welcme t sign up fr the festival befre this weekend.Fr mre infrmatin,please cntact us in ur ffice.Students' UninJanuary 11th,2022
Writing 2正值你校举办科技节,校英语报特开设“My Future Inventin”专栏,面向学生征稿。请你根据以下要点写一篇稿件:1.发明的名称;2.发明的功能;3.对发明的未来的展望。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。My Future Inventin__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】My Future InventinMy little inventin has a cl name,Flying Skatebard.As the name suggests,it can fly.Its appearance is almst the same as ur rdinary skatebards.Yu can chse either the gliding mde r the flying mde. Just press the buttn and tell yur bard where yu are ging,and it will plan yur rute and take yu t yur destinatin safe and sund.Dn't wrry abut the energy. As lng as the sun shines,the skatebard can be charged autmatically.I believe my green inventin will gain in ppularity.When yu fly,yu will admire unusual views.N traffic jam.N carbn dixide emissins.
Writing 3假定你是李华,现在是北京大学大一新生,高三时在李老师的帮助下,英语进步很大,为表示感谢,给李老师写一封感谢信。要点如下:1.梦想成真,考上理想大学;2.因为李老师的辅导和鼓励,英语由差变好;3.对老师的祝福。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Li,With the deepest appreciatin,I'm writing t yu t_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Mr Li,With the deepest appreciatin,I'm writing t yu t express my gratitude fr yur kind help with my English.Withut yur help,I wuld nt be a student f Beijing University.I still remember the days when yu taught me English in Grade 3.Yu were very patient with me and set aside sme time t teach me after class.Under yur guidance,I made great prgress in English and wn the first prize in the English cntest.Withut yur encuragement,I wuldn't have realized my dream.Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.Wish yu healthy and lead a happy life!Yurs,Li Hua
Writing 4假定你是中学生李华,你的外教Miss White要求你们周一下午去听一个关于英国历史文化的讲座,你因故不能参加。请你给Miss White写一封道歉信,要点如下:1.表示歉意;2.说明理由;3.其他。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Miss White,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Miss White,I'm Li Hua,deeply srry fr nt being able t attend yur lecture abut English histry next Mnday afternn.I'm writing t express my aplgy.I am t participate in my finalrund English Speech Cntest n the same day,fr which I have prepared fr a lng time.Persnally,I'm desperate t achieve a preferable result.There is n dubt that the lecture abut English histry interests me mst and I will try hard t make up.Wuld it be pssible fr me t have my classmates take ntes fr my later use.I aplgize again and please excuse me.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
第三课 写作模板与实战展示(Ⅲ)(建议信、申请信、告知信、求助信与询问信)(一)万能内化模板
(二)四步解题示范[典例] 你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条路线可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给出一些建议。请你给他回一封信,内容包括:1.你建议的路线;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,I'm pleased t hear that yu want t ask fr my suggestins n__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
词汇提升方法:普通→高级示例:sure → _____________ suggest → _____________ surprising → _____________ knw well abut → _____________ have a gd time → _____________
答案:cnvinced recmmend amazing have a better understanding f enjy neself
句子整合方法:简单→复杂,主动→被动示例:1.As we knw,Yangtze River,the mther river f Chinese civilizatin,is the lngest river in China and the third lngest river in the wrld.(用主语从句,nt als...句型改写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.I strngly advise yu t chse this ne.Frm it,yu can have a better understanding f China and Chinese histry.(用词汇升级+定语从句改写)___________________________________________________________________
答案:1.What is well knwn t us is that Yangtze River is nt nly the lngest river in China and the third lngest river in the wrld but als the mther river f Chinese civilizatin.2.I strngly recmmend that yu chse“Trip t the Yangtze River”,frm which yu can have a better understanding f China and Chinese histry.
第四步:衔接润色,完美成篇Dear Jim,I'm pleased t hear that yu want t ask fr my suggestins n_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Jim,I'm pleased t hear that yu want t ask fr my suggestins n hw t chse a better ne frm the tw rutes“Trip t the Yangtze River”and“Trip t Munt Tai”.Here are my pinins.What is well knwn t us is that Yangtze River is nt nly the lngest river in China and the third lngest river in the wrld but als the mther river f Chinese civilizatin.Therefre,I strngly recmmend that yu chse“Trip t the Yangtze River”,frm which yu can have a better understanding f China and Chinese histry.In additin,the scenery alng the river is amazing.Thus,I'm sure yu are eager t cme here t make a secnd trip.
In cnclusin,I am cnvinced that the trip alng the Yangtze River is a better chice. I hpe yu will enjy yurself!Yurs,Li Hua
Writing 1假定你是李华,你校交换生Daniel回国前向你询问可以给父母带什么中国特色礼物。请你给他回一封电子邮件,要点如下:1.推荐礼物;2.说明原因;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右,开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数;2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Daniel,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Daniel,Learning yu're cnsidering what suvenirs with Chinese quality yu shuld bear fr yur parents,I'm writing t give yu sme suggestins.Tw gifts are strngly recmmended.One chice is qipa made f Chinese silk. Qipa is ne typical Chinese cstumes fr wmen,making it a perfect gift fr yur mther.Anther ptin is Chinese knts,which have a lng histry and a symblic meaning.Peple in China use them fr decratin n clthing r in rms t express gd wishes.I hpe the abve tips can be helpful.Send my best regards t yur family and wish yu a happy jurney.Yurs,Li Hua
Writing 2假定你是李华,正在Clumbia University求学,想利用暑假时间在肯德基(KFC)当一名服务生。请你给店长Steven写一封申请信,内容包括:1.自我介绍;2.申请的理由;3.联系方式。注意:1.词数 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Steven,I am Li Hua,a student frm Clumbia University.I am writing t apply t be a waiter in yur KFC t earn sme pcket mney during this summer vacatin.I am utging and can get alng well with my clleagues and custmers.I wrked in a restaurant last summer and earned much related experience.Abve all,I am a quick learner,which can enable me t adapt t my jb as sn as pssible.I will highly appreciated it if my applicatin is taken int accunt.Please cntact me by 123456@ faithfully,Li Hua
Writing 3假定你是李华,请代表学校给外教Frank写一封电子邮件,邀请他做有关英文原著阅读的讲座。要点如下:1.发出邀请;2.说明讲座要求(书目推荐、阅读建议等);3.表达感谢。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.参考词汇:英文原著阅读English riginal reading;3.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Frank,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Frank,I am writing t invite yu t give us a lecture n English riginal reading n behalf f ur schl.As scheduled,the lecture is t be held at 3:00 this Saturday afternn in the lecture hall.Yu are suppsed t recmmend a list f bks that are suitable fr students whse reading ability is nt s gd.In additin,yu are expected t give sme suggestins n hw t read effectively,which will help students imprve their reading interest and enthusiasm.We'd appreciate it if yu culd accept ur invitatin.If yu have ther questins,please dn't hesitate t cntact me.Yurs,Li Hua
Writing 4假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Jack打算暑假期间来中国体验生活,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐内容;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,Knwing that yu are cming t China fr the summer vacatin,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hpefully,yu will find yur trip rewarding and have a great time in China!Yurs,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Jack,Knwing that yu are cming t China fr the summer vacatin,I am mre than excited t say “warm welcme” and can't wait t meet yu at the airprt with my pen arms!T make yur trip mre wrthwhile,I'd like t make sme recmmendatins. T begin with,I suggest yu start yur hliday in Beijing,a tp pririty fr any traveller t China because yu can fully experience the charm f Chinese histry and civilizatin there.Besides,the high speed train,which is fast,safe and cmfrtable,is a transprtatin means yu can't miss.When ding shpping,yu are recmmended t use mbile payments like Wechat Pay r Ali Pay due t the great cnvenience they ffer.
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