【考前特训】06：友情亲情篇（人与社会）-2023年高考英语读后续写三大主题意境十大经典话题精选荟

【考前特训】06：友情亲情篇（人与社会）

-2023年高考英语读后续写三大主题意境十大经典话题精选荟萃

题源：

1．（2023·湖南长沙·高三专题练习）

2．（2023·浙江温州·高三阶段练习）

3．（2023·河北衡水·校联考模拟预测）

4．（2023·黑龙江大庆·统考三模）

5．（2023·山东·潍坊一中校联考模拟预测）

1．（2023·湖南长沙·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

On a train to Smithville, a man happened to sit down next to a young man no more than 17 years old. Because the boy was tense, the man wondered what could be worrying him. Whatever it was, the boy’s tension was clear.

The boy kept staring out of the window, paying no attention to anyone else on the train. The man opened up a book and started reading. Now and then, he would look up and see the boy’s face pressed against the window. He sensed that the boy was fighting to keep from crying.

Finally, the boy asked the man, “Do you know what time it is? And do you know when we are to arrive at Smithville?” The man gave the boy the time. Then the boy told the man the whole story of his life. “Four years ago,” he said, “I did something bad hurting my dad, so bad that I had to run away from home. I couldn’t face my father. So I left without even saying goodbye to him. Since then, I have worked here and there. I never stayed very long in one place. I’ve been pretty lonely. Until finally, I decided that I want to go back to my father and apologized to him.”

The man went on to ask, “Does your father know you’re coming?” And the boy responded, “He knows I’m coming, but I don’t know if he will be there. I sent him a letter. I didn’t know if he would still want me back. I wasn’t sure if he would forgive me. So in my letter, I told him that if he wanted me to come home, he could put a sign on a tree which is a few hundred yards before the railroad station in Smithville. I told him that I would look for a yellow ribbon(丝带)on one of the branches of that tree as the train passes. If there is a yellow ribbon on the tree, then I’ll get off. If not, then I’ll just keep on riding to wherever this train goes.” The two of them were now waiting for Smithville.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

Now involved, the man stopped reading and also stared at the window.

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A few moments later, the conductor came along and called out, “Next stop-Smithville.”

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【答案】Paragraph 1:

Now involved, the man stopped reading and also stared at the window. However, after a while, the boy’s face turned pale, seemingly feeling like sitting on pins and needles. The man noticed that and tried to comfort the boy. He said gently, “Don’t worry. Whatever happens, please remember that there is always light behind the clouds.” After hearing his words, the boy turned his head and looked at him. The man added, “I’m a father, too. Parents are always there and never let go of their children.” The boy nodded, eyes full of hope.

Paragraph 2:

A few moments later, the conductor came along and called out, “Next stop — Smithville.” The boy could not move. The man, however, looked as hard as he could. And then he saw it! He shouted so loud that all the people in the train turned around. “It’s there! Look! The tree is covered with yellow ribbons! Not just one there’s a whole bunch!” The father had every reason not to put up a yellow ribbon and yet he did.Only a father whose love is real could blanket the tree with yellow ribbons, each one of them proclaiming reconciliation.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了在开往史密斯维尔的火车上，一个男人注意到一个年青人显得很紧张。男人问年青人怎么了，年青人告诉男人四年前他做了伤害自己父亲的事，选择了离家出走。现在，年青人想回到父亲身边，他写信给父亲，如果父亲能原谅他的话，就在火车站附近的树上系上一条黄丝带。如果看到黄丝带，年青人就会下车。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“这时，这个男人停止了阅读，也盯着窗户。”可知，第一段可描写男人注意到男孩非常焦虑，于是开始安慰男孩。

②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，列车员走过来，大声喊道：‘下一站——史密斯维尔。’”可知，第二段可描写史密斯维尔站到了，男孩紧张得不能动弹，这时男人发现了树上挂满了黄丝带。

2.续写线索：男孩感到焦虑——男人安慰男孩——火车即将到站——发现满树的黄丝带

3.词汇激活

行为类

①停止：stop/cease

②注意到，察觉到：notice/observe

③大喊，大叫：shout/cry/yell

情绪类

①温柔地：gently/softly/tenderly

②希望，期盼：hope/expection

【点睛】[高分句型1] Whatever happens, please remember that there is always light behind the clouds.(运用了whatever引导让步状语从句和that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] He shouted so loud that all the people in the train turned around.(运用了that引导结果状语从句)

[高分句型3] Only a father whose love is real could blanket the tree with yellow ribbons, each one of them proclaiming reconciliation.(运用了whose引导定语从句和独立主格结构)

2．（2023·浙江温州·高三阶段练习）阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I put one last box into the back seat and closed the car door. It felt as if I were closing the door on my whole life. At first, I was excited when Mom told me she’d gotten a fantastic new job at an animal hospital. Then, because she always saves the bad news for last, she told me the really terrible part. The hospital wasn’t in our city; it was miles away in the middle of nowhere. And I’m definitely not a country girl.

I stood beside the car, taking a last look at our building. To most people, it probably just looked like any other old apartment house, but I loved every brick. Just then, I saw my best friends, Hana and Leo, come to see me off. While Hana played a cool riff(重复乐段)on her trumpet(小号), Leo sang, “We will miss you, Celia.” I hugged them tightly and jumped into the car fast so no one could see me tear up. As Mom drove away, I waved goodbye to my friends, my neighborhood, and my life.

We rode a while in silence, and I held my violin case for comfort. Leo, Hana, and I had been writing songs for our band, but that was all over now. “Don’t think of this as an ending,” Mom said, with her knack(技能)for reading my mind. “It’s an exciting beginning. It’s normal to be a bit anxious about unfamiliar things, but you don’t need to be afraid of them.” I kept silent and looked out the window as crowded, exciting city streets turned first into tasteless suburban shopping strips(商业街)and then into endless, boring trees and fields of corn. We finally arrived at our new home, a two-floored wooden farmhouse. Mom said I could go explore. Mom never let me go out alone in the city, so maybe a bit more freedom would be one consolation(慰藉)of living here.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Feeling that country life might turn out okay, I wondered off, taking my violin with me.

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I couldn’t resist, so I took out my violin and began to play along.

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【答案】Feeling that country life might turn out okay. I wandered off, taking my violin with me. Suddenly l heard something I wasn’t expecting-a beautiful, jazzy tune. I pushed through some corn only to come face-to-face with a cow. Then another hot jazz riff floated through the air. I turned around and saw a tall kid playing an old saxophone in a field of corn. His music was fantastic, and he didn’t dress the way I figured a country kid would. This guy was wearing clothes that made him look cool, like a famous performer.

I couldn’t resist, so I took out my violin and began to play along. The boy looked surprised, but he didn’t miss a beat. We played together, and by the end, a cow was tapping her tail to the rhythm. When we finished, we introduced ourselves to each other and became friends. We also decided to write songs together. I looked at my new friend, the cheerful cow and tall corn. I could feel my thoughts about country life already changing, and I had a feeling it would change a lot more.

【导语】本文以妈妈带我去乡下为线索展开。讲述了妈妈在偏远的郊外找到了一份工作，喜欢音乐的我不得不和我的好朋友分别，和妈妈一起去乡下。

【详解】1. 段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“我觉得乡村生活可能还不错，就带着我的小提琴走了出去。”可知，本段可以写走了出去之后，我先是听到了优美的乐曲，寻声而去，发现了演奏者以及他的牛。

②由第二段首句内容“我无法抗拒，于是我拿出我的小提琴，开始拉起来。”可知，本段可以写我和男孩一起演奏，我们成为朋友，一起创作，我也转变了对农村生活的态度。

2. 续写线索：着我的小提琴走了出去——听到了优美的乐曲——发现了演奏者以及他的牛——我加入演奏——我们成为朋友——我转变了对农村生活的态度

3. 词类激活

行为类

①认为：figure/think/consider

②结束：finish/complete

③决定：decide/make a decision

情绪类

①极好的：fantastic/fabulous/remarkable

②惊讶的：surprised/amazed/astonished

③令人开心的：cheerful/pleasant/enjoyable

【点睛】【高分句型1】 This guy was wearing clothes that made him look cool, like a famous performer. (运用了that引导的定语从句)

【高分句型1】When we finished, we introduced ourselves to each other and became friends. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

3．（2023·河北衡水·校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

13-year old William Preston is really a generous boy and he naturally seeks to help others. For example, in 2017, the community recognized William for his work to help local seniors. At that time, he fixed broken lawnmowers (剪草机) and provided yard work and cleanup help to elderly neighbors.

William’s mom, Krystal, has been adjusting to life as a newly divorced single mom. She now lives in Fernley with her three kids and three dogs. She has lost her job and is struggling to make ends meet. She thought of looking for better paid work in a different part of town. At the time, however, she did not have any reliable means of transportation and could not afford a car.

“At my low point, here comes my son,” Krystal Preston says, “Everybody goes through rough times in their life, but there’s good that can come from any situation as long as somebody with a heart does it.”

William overheard his mother telling someone how a car would solve most of her problems. He recognized the many sacrifices she made to provide for their family, and he felt an urgent need to pay her back and help her in some way. One day, William saw a video where a child earned money to buy his mom a car; at that moment, he decided that he would do the same thing.

He secretly made a plan to save enough money to purchase a car for his mother. He started working additional odd jobs around his neighborhood, such as yard work and lawn mowing.

One day, an advertisement on Facebook Marketplace caught his attention: A woman had listed her 1999 Chevrolet Metro for an inexpensive price. He quickly reached out to the seller and asked if he could possibly trade in his Xbox for the car, in addition to some cash he had saved. To William’s delighted surprise, after negotiating with the woman, she accepted his offer.

注意：

(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

William arranged for the seller to park the vehicle in his front yard to surprise his mother.

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Krystal was shocked when the seller told her the truth.

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【答案】One possible version:

William arranged for the seller to park the vehicle in his front yard to surprise his mother. Then he tricked his mother outside. Krystal felt confused when she first saw the car, and William explained that he had purchased the car for her. As expected, Krystal assumed her son was playing a practical joke, so she didn’t take any of his words seriously and laughed it off. “Yeah, right!” she said jokingly.

Krystal was shocked when the seller told her the truth. She nearly couldn’t believe it but tears already filled here eyes. “There’s no way.” she murmured. William hugged his mom tightly, comforting her, “You’re my mom and you have done a lot for me, so I want to help,” William assured her. Then the seller handed the car’s keys and paperwork to Krystal, who was still in a state of shock. Mother and son then excitedly got into the car and drove off together in their white 1999 Chevrolet Metro.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，威廉的妈妈克里斯托刚刚离婚，要努力维持生计，她想找一份薪水更高的工作。然而，当时她没有任何可靠的交通工具，也买不起汽车。当威廉知道了之后，为了给他母亲买一辆车，他开始在附近做一些零工。一天，当他了解到一位女士以低价出售她的车。他很快联系上了卖家，问是否可以用自己的Xbox和他存下的一些钱来交换这辆车。令威廉惊喜的是，她接受了他的提议。

【详解】1. 段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“威廉安排卖家把车停在他的前院，给他妈妈一个惊喜。”可知，本段可以写威廉给母亲惊喜的具体过程，以及母亲的疑惑。

②由第二段首句内容“当卖家告诉克里斯托真相时，她很震惊。”可知，本段可以写母亲相信了之后的震惊以及感动。

2.续写线索：威廉骗妈妈出来——妈妈看到车感到困惑——威廉告知真相——妈妈认为在开玩笑——卖家也说是真的——妈妈震惊，感动——开车离开

3. 词类激活

行为类

①欺骗：trick/cheat

②预料：expect/anticipate

③拥抱：hug/embrace

情绪类

①困惑的：confused/puzzled

②震惊的：shaocked/surprised/amazed/astonished

③兴奋的：excited/thrilled

【点睛】【高分句型1】Krystal felt confused when she first saw the car, and William explained that he had purchased the car for her. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型1】Then the seller handed the car’s keys and paperwork to Krystal, who was still in a state of shock. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)

4．（2023·黑龙江大庆·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was 400 meters from the finish line when my legs stopped working during the State cross-country race. In a moment faster than I could imagine, I watched my dreams crash helplessly to the ground. Lifting my face from the dirt, I looked up and saw my dad’s face.

I was the fastest runner on my team, and I was supposed to make it into the top fifteen. We had been working towards this race for three years. It was everything to me, and it was everything to my dad. He was a runner and was proud of my success in running.

He made it to every race, even flying home early from business trips to see me run. He pushed me. He cheered for me. He believed in me. We pounded miles and miles into our running shoes, marking with every step the path to greatness. It was a dream passed on from one generation to the next.

I’ll never forget that day. It was hotter than normal — too hot, I waited for the gun to fire. This was the day we had waited so long for. I glanced at the crowd; dozens of familiar faces from school came into my view. They had come for me. I saw my dad set his watch, worry and excitement appeared on his face. Adrenaline (肾上腺素) flowed through my body, and the race began.

For the first 2.5 miles, I felt great. I’d never been so ready for something. Determination focused my mind and guided my steps. As in all of my races, I didn’t star out in the front. I loved the feeling of passing people as my endurance (耐力) overtook their premature speed.

Without warning, my strength began to disappear. My lungs fought to take in enough air, and my feet became stuck. I still don’t know what happened in those last few moments. Neck and neck with my greatest competitors, I could see the finish line, but nothing I could do would make my legs hold my weight. They were as weak as cotton.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I watched in pain as runners rushed by me.

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My dad looked at me and said, “You could never disappoint me.”

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【答案】I watched in pain as runners rushed by me. Even though I knew my dreams of victory were destroyed, I had to finish the race. Voices, both foreign and familiar, cheered me on. My eyes searched the crowd for my dad. Although my coach and teammates rushed to me, offering encouragement, there was only one person I wanted to talk to. As he pushed his way to me, with tears and sweat streaming down my face, I whispered, “I’m so sorry, Dad. I disappointed you.”

My dad looked at me and said, “You could never disappoint me.” Trembling, I said, “But we worked so hard. What about our dream?” Reaching over for my hand, he said, “All that matters is that you did your best. Don’t you know you make my dream come true?” All of a sudden, the world became still. I adjusted my running shoes and began to run, eventually winning the second place. All along, I thought my dad was running after a dream. What I realized, though, was that he was running after me. To him, I made his best dream come true.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，作者回忆了一次难忘的赛跑经历。文章先描写了州际越野比赛中，作者在离终点线400米的地方体力不支的场景。在看到父亲的脸之后，作者回想了自己跑步的经历，跑步是父亲和自己共同的梦想，父亲一直支持着自己。接着，作者的思绪回到比赛，此次参赛作者满怀希望和斗志，父亲同样前来为他加油，但是作者失去力气无法继续跑下去。

【详解】1. 段落续写：

由第一段首句内容“我痛苦地看着赛跑者从我身边冲过。”可知，第一段可描写作者面对失败的感受，对父亲的愧疚的表现。

②由第二段首句内容“爸爸看着我说：‘你永远不会让我失望的。’”可知，第二段可描写作者与父亲的交流，之后比赛的情况以及感受。

2. 续写线索：痛苦——寻找父亲——对父亲表达愧疚——父亲鼓励——与父亲交流——完成比赛——感受

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①被摧毁：be destroyed/be destructed/be ruined/collapse

②搜寻：search for/look for/seek/hunt

③伸手：reach for/stretch out one’s hand

④调整：adjust/change/alter/modify

情绪类

①鼓励：cheer on/cheer up/encourage/boost

②失望：disappoint/make sb. disappointed/frustrate/let down

【点睛】[高分句型1]. Although my coach and teammates rushed to me, offering encouragement, there was only one person I wanted to talk to.（连词although引导让步状语从句，定语从句省略了关系代词）

[高分句型2]. What I realized, though, was that he was running after me.（连接代词what引导主语从句，连接词that引导表语从句）

5．（2023·山东·潍坊一中校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Seeing the United Parcel Truck pull into my driveway, I opened the garage door knowing that another package had arrived helping us with the Christmas in July Party we were putting together for the homeless children at a local charity.

As I stood watching the driver get the packages from the back of the truck, I saw Madison, my three-year-old granddaughter, picking weeds from the lawn. “These are for my mommy and daddy,” she replied, as she held out a hand full of worthless little weeds. I just smiled and nodded my head as I looked at her tight little closed fist.

The UPT driver walked into the garage and sat the two packages down on the wooden bench. He and I stood talking about the numerous baseball gloves, baseball bats, helmets and baseballs sitting about the room. I told him I had been raised in a Jacksonville, Florida orphanage and that during my entire childhood I never once owned anything of my own. I told him that these presents were for the children themselves and not for the orphanage.

After talking for a few minutes, the driver told me he had to leave. He waved and began walking back down the driveway. I turned around, locked garage door and began walking up onto the front porch. Just as I closed the gate, Madison came running up to where I was standing.

“My flowers, my flowers,” she screamed aloud. I soon realized that I had locked her weeds in the garage.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

“We’ll get them later,” I told her.

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I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate.

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【答案】One possible version:

“We’ll get them later,” I told her. I just did not want to walk back down the stairs and unlock the garage door for a bunch of worthless weeds. Putting my hand onto her small shoulder, I began directing her back into the house. She stood there with tears welling up in her eyes. “These flowers are specially for my mommy and daddy,” she sobbed. All of a sudden, I realized that those baseball gloves were like gold to those homeless children just as those weeds were beautiful flowers to my granddaughter.

I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. Then I walked down the three stairs, took out my keys and opened the garage door. Wearing a shining smile on her face, Madison ran past me, grabbing the little treasures she had picked moments before. “Thank you, grandma, I love you!” she said. I knelt down, looked through the green, now lifeless weeds and smiled as I saw the beauty of a dozen beautiful red roses reflecting in her eyes. As is often the case, something valueless to adults means a lot to children.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家为当地慈善机构的无家可归的孩子们举办的7月圣诞派对，孙女说她专门为父母准备了花，其实只是杂草。一开始作者并不重视孙女要打开车库门的请求，后来认识到了孙女的用心，非常感动。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我告诉她：‘我们一会儿再去拿。’”可知，第一段可描写孙女被拒绝后的伤心反应，作者的感悟和反应。

②由第二段首句内容“我转过身，走回门廊的尽头，打开了门。”可知，第二段可描写作者为孙女开门拿东西，认识到了一些对成年人来说毫无价值的东西对孩子来说却很重要。

2.续写线索：拒绝开车库门——孙女哭泣——感悟——打开库门——孙女开心——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①回去：walk back /go back

②开始：begin /start

③看见：see/spot

情绪类

①专门：specially / particularly

②美丽：beautiful /gorgeous

【点睛】[高分句型1] Putting my hand onto her small shoulder, I began directing her back into the house. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] All of a sudden, I realized that those baseball gloves were like gold to those homeless children just as those weeds were beautiful flowers to my granddaughter. (运用了that引导宾语从句)