





【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 12 课时4 Writing 讲义
展开Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected
Writing | Write a story about your lucky or unlucky day and tell your story to a partner or the class My lucky/unlucky day I will always remember the date... This was the luckiest/unluckiest day of life... When I woke up that morning... Later that day,... I couldn’t believe... Then/After that... Finally... I think... What a lucky/an unlucky day! |
知识点01 思路点拨
本单元主要谈论过去的事情或经历。写作时一般直接交代时间、地点、人物、事件等,然后详细叙述事情发生的原因、经过和结果。要求能够正确使用一般过去时和过去完成时,合理运用顺叙、倒叙和插叙等记叙方法,条理清楚。
内容:记叙幸运或不幸的一天
文体:记叙文
时态:以一般过去时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
知识点02 必背单词组和句型
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
let my parents down 让我父母失望
feel like doing 想要做
stay up until 1:00 熬夜到 1 点
decide to do 决定做
look forward to doing 盼望做
the alarm clock doesn’t go off 闹钟没有响
get up late 起床晚
by the time... 到…时候
by the end of... 到…为止
rush to the bus stop/ hurry to the bus station 赶到车站
rush to school 急忙去上学
get to school 到达学校
be late for school 上学迟到
I didn't even brush my teeth or wash my face.我甚至没有刷牙也没有洗脸。
What a lucky day ! 多么幸运的一天!
By the time I got outside,the bus had already left.当我出来时,公汽已经走了。
By the time I walked into the classroom,the teacher had started teaching already.当我走进教室时,老师已经开始讲课了。
When I got there,I found that he had fooled me. 当我到那儿时,我发现他愚弄了我。
知识点03 提纲
列提纲 | 写句子 | |
“我”的不幸的一天 | 点明主题 | I will always remember the date September 11, 2022.It was the unluckiest day of my life. |
事情经过 | 1)I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7: 10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. 2)By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school. 3)Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9: 10. I was late for class. 4)When the teacher asked for my homework,I found I had left it at home. | |
总结 | What a bad day it was! |
知识点04 范文
I will always remember the date September 11, 2022.It was the unluckiest day of my life.
I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7: 10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school.Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9: 10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework,I found I had left it at home.
What a bad day it was!
我将永远记得2022年9月11日,那是我一生中最不幸的一天。
今天早上我起晚了,因为我的闹钟没有响。当我醒来时,已经是7点10分了。所以我很快洗了脸,没吃早饭就跑到了公共汽车站。我到那里时,校车已经开走了。我错过了。所以我不得不步行上学。最后,当我到达学校时,已经是9点10分了。我上课迟到了。当老师要我做作业时,我发现我把作业忘在家里了。
多么糟糕的一天啊!
范文点评
1.思路分析: 本文按时间顺序got up late this morning...7∶10.....By the time I got there,...when I got to school..When the teacher asked for my homework讲述今天发生过不愉快的事情,文字表达清楚,内容完整连贯。
2.高分亮点∶短语∶get up late;wash my face quickly;run to the bus stop without breakfast; be late for class.; ask for; leave it at home
句型∶原因状语从句I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off;
时间状语从句By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone;
宾语从句When the teacher asked for my homework,I found I had left it at home;
感叹句What a bad day it was!
题组A 基础过关练
(2018·云南昆明·中考真题)书面表达
A small thing
提示:请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文,叙述一件你经历过的小事。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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在我们的日常生活中,总会有一些意外的事情发生,或是幸运或是不幸,这些事情都将成为我们难忘的经历。请描述你难忘的一次经历。词数100左右。
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题组B 能力提升练
(2022·新疆)初中生活即将结束,静坐在考场中的你,回想三年的学习和生活,一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆,请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如:1.一次难忘的旅行
2.一次难忘的比赛
3.一次难忘的志愿服务
……
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,内容详实,语法正确,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名:
3.词数:80-120,开头已给出,开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…
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(2019·山东青岛·中考真题)人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……。请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文。 内容包括:
1. 第一次……的整个过程;
2. 你的感受。
要求:
1. 词数:80-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
题组C 培优拔尖练
假如你是李华,请根据下面的内容提示,写一篇文章来描述你的一次尴尬经历。
内容提示:
1.上周日你去参加你朋友王俊的生日聚会,你决定买一张CD送给他作为生日礼物;
2.付款时,你发现自己没带钱包;
3.你匆忙赶回家,结果发现把钥匙锁在房间里了;
4.已经十一点半了,你只好空手去了王俊家。
要求:
1.词数80左右;
2.参照以上内容提示,可适当发挥。
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假如你是李华,请你根据下表中的内容提示写一篇短文,描述一下发生在你身上的这些意外事件。词数100左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。
Something unexpected | Results |
父母很早出门上班 | 睡过头了 |
到公共汽车站时车已开走了 | 上学迟到 |
忘带家庭作业 | 回家取的路上被电动车撞伤 |
提示词汇: fetch去取来;electric bicycle电动车;have a pain in arm(s) 胳膊疼Today was a really unlucky day for me. I stayed up late last night because of an exciting soccer match. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What an unlucky day I had today!
