12 交往相处 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

12 交往相处

2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

素材储备和写作指导

对中学生来讲，“交往相处" 这个话题的范围是有限的，因为学生还未全面踏人社会，关系网并不复杂，基本就是与父母、朋友、老师、亲戚、邻居等的交际，其内容无非是与人为善、以诚待人、互帮互助、 尊老爱幼等等。虽然如此，命题的形式却是富于变化的， 比如可以要求学生写记叙文来描写与某人的交往(属于事件描述类作文)，也可以要求学生写说明文来介绍或建议如何与人交往(属于该话题的变式作文)。下面，这两种形式我们都举例来谈- -谈。

实践案例1（记叙文形式）

题目

Write a composition in at least 60 words according 10 the given situation (根据所始境，写一篇字数不少于60个词的短文。)

Suppose you were mistaken by your parents. Can you briefly describe what happened And what did you do to make things right?

青少年与父母的日常交佳中往往会出现矛盾或误会。请你描写-段被父母误解的场景简要描述发生了什么，而你又是如何解决问题的。

审题

这篇材料作文以“与父母的交往”为主题，选材方面相对来说是容易的，毕竞中学生父母的交往是日常生活中的常见话题，比如，父母对你的某个决定不支持，父母对你的某行为不理解，父母干沙你交友，父母误解你不诚实，代沟太深沟通太少等等。学生只要选有把握的事件进行简要描述，交代清楚误解的发生经过、问题解决的方法就可以了。这里注意的是，前后经过写完后，文章不要匆匆收尾，而要有感情升华，即归纳总结一下应如与父母相处，写出经验之谈、意见建议等。

段落结构

根据题目要求，可以采用三段式的结构:

第一部分The 1st part

与父母相处可能会有误会产生。

My parents and I get along well with each other, but misunderstandings /problems / quarrels arise from time to time.

Like any other family, there are some problems between my parents and me sometimes.

第二部分The 2nd part

重点阐述你与父母发生了什么样的误解，而你又是如何解决的。

An unhappy accident happened in ..

When I... last week, there was a fight between my parents and me....

With  their support and my efforts, our problem was solved successfully.

第三部分The 3rd part

感情升华，提出建议。

A long a we listen to each other's opinion sincerely problems won't exist for a long time,

We should respect our parents all the time and our parents will also respect us,

核心语汇

get on/ along well with与....友好相处

generation gap代沟

.depend on / rely on依赖，依靠

force somebody to do something强迫某人做某事

 lead to misunderstanding导致误解

 be honest with .对...诚实

show respect to ...对......尊敬

be kind to..对...-友好

help/ trust/ encourage each other互相帮助/信任/鼓励

 take good care of好好照顾

deal with the relationship处理关系

had better (not) do ..最好(不)做...

share the same interest with...与......有共同的爱好

 offer help to ..主动提出帮助

 ask somebody for help向某人求助

turn to somebody (for help)向某人求助

complain to .. about ....向某人抱怨某事

参考句型

They always treat me like a little kid他们总是把我当小孩子对待。

They keep preventing me making decisions by myself他们总是不让我自己做决定。

They expect me to do everything as they have planned for me. 他们指望我按照他们为我制定的

计划来行事。

They are used to intervening in my daily life.他们习惯了干预我的日常生活。

 It is the best policy to .. (respect each other)......(互相尊重)是最好的策略。

It is respect that helps me gain this friendship.正是尊敬帮助我获得这份友谊。

 It is necessary 1essential to respect others.尊敬他人很必要。

The more respectful you are, the more respect you will earn to yourself.越尊敬他人， 越受人尊敬。

It is the best way to bridge the generation gap.这是消除代沟的最好办法。

习作

Things aren't always easy between parents and teenagers. I have the same problem too.Last Wednesday, my parents blamed me for staying up to play the computer games and intended to stop me using it. But actually, I was just trying to finish the task assigned by my computer programming lass. To solve the problem, I apologized to them first for making them worried Then I explained what I was busy with. I also promised them I would sleep as early as possible.

A family quarrel was avoided and I realize that to get on well with our parents, we should respect them and communicate with them more often.After ll what they do or say aims to do good to us.

点评:

这前习作的谋篇布局恰到好处。开篇说明与父母相处不易自己也有类似的烦信。中间段格精述自己的一次经历， 父母将我做的 “正事”误解为“不务正业”，紧接着就是学生非常聪明地解决了这一家庭矛盾。 最后通过这次事件，学生得出与父母相处的真谛是互相尊重、主动交流。内容完美、无可挑刷。语言方面并无太多华丽静菜，也无复杂甸型，但读起来非常流畅，是见其思路清晰、用词简洁地道。这也印证了作者的理念，中考作文的语言流畅、表达清晰是最重要的，如这篇文章会用考纲词汇和词组，会用blame 1 intend 1quarrel等少数几个非考纲的常见表达，足矣。

实践案例2 (说明文形式)

该话题的变式作文可能是由命题形式的多样化导致的，有很多模考作文并没有要求学生以记叙文形式来完成该话题，而是以写信、回复邮件、给出建议等形式写说明文。这时要注意的是，这种体裁形式下，学生写文章的对象就变了，不是描写自己的问题了，而是对他人的问题进行介绍或者建议，因此口吻也要作相应调整，以客观的、建议性的语言来完成文章，如advice somebody to do something, suggest somebody do something, my suggestions are as follows等等。以下面这篇一模作文为例。

题目

Nowadays, it's getting more and more important to get on well with others. What are your opinions about it? What are your good ways to get on well with others?

如今，与人和睦相处显得越来越重要了，你认为呢?请根据以上内容写-篇不少于60个词的短文，谈谈你对与人相处的看法并建议如何与人(你可以从你的父母、你的老师或者你的同学中任意选取一位)相处，并举例说明。

(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

以下要点仅供参考:

1. I think ht..I my opinion..
2. In a friendly way

习作

As a middle school student, I spend most of my daily life at school with my classmates.Among them, I think it's essential to get on well with my deskmate in particular.

I suggest showing respect all the time and encouraging each other to make progress together. For example, my deskmate and I are good friends. We always respect and support each other without telling any lies. Besides, we never hesitate to offer help to each other. He helps me with my physics while I teach him how to write English compositions.

I believe our friendship will last forever and be the most precious memory.

点评:

这箱习作能够不错地把握审题标准，先谈到了现代社会中与人相处的重要性，然后以学生的身份举例说明与同桌和睦相处很重要，并提出如何与其相处的建议:相互尊重和相互鼓励。语言方面，学生注意到了客观建设性的特点，如suggest doing ..另外他能正确使用动名词作主语，定语从句等，这些都是容易被忽视或不易掌握的知识点。这篇文章里的词汇亮点也颇多，比如essential/l hesitate 1 precious/ in particular等都是初三学生难得能运用在作文中的表达。

相关话题精彩范文

（一）

Helping Others Makes Me Happy

One day, when I was on my way home, there was an old man walking slowly in front of me. Then something unexpected happened.

The old man walked more and more slowly. While he walked around the corner, he fell down. I ran to him, and I was the only one there to help him. I couldn't move him by myself.

I looked around, but no one passed by. Just at that time, I found that my phone was in my pocket. I quickly took it out and called the doctors at 120 in a minute.The ambulance came soon. They thanked me for helping the old man.

I was so happy that I helped the old man saved his life .We all should do this when others are in trouble.

参考译文

帮助别人让我开心

发生了。一天， 我走在回家的路上， 有一位者人慢地在我前面走者。然后靠想不到的事情老人越走越慢，走过特角的时候，他掉倒了，我跑向他，我是那肌唯能带助他的人我自己无法最动他。我向四周看了看， 但是没有人经过，就在那时，我发现手机在我的口袋中，我迅速本出手机，马上报打120.牧护车很快就来了他们感重我帮助了这个老人。

我非常高兴自己帮助了这个老人，挽救了他的生命。当他人陷入困难的时候， 我们都应该这样做。

亮点词汇

 unexpected 出人意料的

around the corner在拐角处

 pass by经过

ambulance 救护车

save one's life挽救某人的生命

出彩句型

There is sb. Doing sth. 有某人正在做某事。

I was the only one there to....我是那里唯一一个.....

 I found that..我发现.....

thanked . for.....为了.. ....感谢......

1 was so happy that.我非常高兴.....

We ll should do this when others are in trouble.当他人陪入困难的时候，我们都应该这样做。

高分点评

本文描写的是帮助一个摔倒的老人的过程，条理清断，叙述完整，突出了作者机智、热心的一面， 是一筒较为成功的叙事文章。 文章来尾还进行了点题，呼吁人们要对有困难|的人施以援手，提升了文章的境界。文章的句子虽看似平淡，但其间点级着精彩的短语，值得细细品读。

（二）

A Rubbish Accident

Last Saturday morning, I went to the park with my parents. When we were walking around, we saw a boy eating a banana. After a while, he just threw the skin of the banana on the ground. Just as we were going to pick it up, a man slipped on the banana skin. He was badly hurt and couldn't move. We called the hospital at once. Luckily, the man became better after the treatment of the doctors.

It was really bad of the boy to throw the rubbish everywhere. It not only does harm to the environment, but also might hurt others. Everyone must say no to this behavior, and works together to make our world a better place.

参考译文

一次垃圾事故

上个星期六早上，我和父母去了公园。我们正在四处逛着时，看见一个男孩正在吃香蕉。过了一会儿，他直接将香蕉皮扔到了地上。正当我们要过去捡起来时，有人踩在了香蕉皮上，滑倒了。他受伤很严重，躺在地上不能动了。我们马上打电话给医院。幸运的是，那个人在得到医生的治疗后好多了。

那个男孩到处扔垃圾的行为是非常思劣的。 这不仅会破坏环境，还可能伤害别人。每个人都要对这种行为说不，并且要共同努力，让我们的世界变得更好。

亮点词汇

walk around四处走动

pick... up ...检起来

slip 滑倒

treatment 治疗

throw the rubbish扔垃圾

出彩句型

We saw sb. doing sth.我们看见某人正在做某事。

After a while.. 过了一会......

Just as we were goin go...正当我们要做.....

It was really... of sb. to do sth. 某人做....是极.....

Everyone must say no t.... 每个人都应....说不。

高分点评

本文展示了公园里-一个男孩乱丢垃圾导致他人受伤的不文明行为，继而警醒人们要爱护环境，杜绝不文明行为。本文的主旨较为鲜明，贴合当今的社会风气，是一篇不错的启示性文章。值得一提的是， 文章的短语运用相当丰富，如"walk around"“pickup" "throw the rubbish"等，为文章增添了色彩。

相关话题满分作文必背

（一）

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)

1. 提示:假设你是张翔，你的朋友孙磊上周来信说，他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话，这使得他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理这事。请你给他写封信，提出一些建议并帮助他。

2.要求:建议不得少于两条。

3. Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考):

in trouble; be bad for; talk with; heart to heart; try one's best; after all; get on well with

范文

Dear Sun Lei,

I have heard from you and I know about your trouble. Your deskmate always finds some excuses to talk with you in class, which is bad for your study. My suggestions are as follows.

First, you should tell your deskmate your true feelings about talking in class. He is your friend and I think he will understand you and doesn't want to mess up your study on purpose. Second, you should care for him after class. Maybe he has some trouble in controlling himself, so you had better show more care to him and talk with him heart to heart in your spare time.

1 hope my suggestions will be useful and you guys will get on well with each other.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Xiang

（二）

In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic "What makes a good neighbor”. (以“怎样才是个好邻居”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不子评分。)

范文

What makes a good neighbor

As an old saying goes, a close neighbor is better than a brother far off. Therefore, it is lucky for us to have a good neighbor and also necessary for ourselves to be a good one.

First, a good neighbor should be respectful. We must show respect to each other all the time. For example, we should be kind and polite and we shouldn't intrude upon our neighbors' privacy. Second, a good neighbor should be considerate. TV program or pop music shouldn't be played out loud because it will disturb others. If necessary, we should give our neighbor a hand to take care of their pets or little kids when they are not at home.All in all, as long as we treat each other sincerely, we will live happily together.