初中英语中考复习 12 交往相处 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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素材储备和写作指导
对中学生来讲，“交往相处" 这个话题的范围是有限的，因为学生还未全面踏人社会，关系网并不复杂，基本就是与父母、朋友、老师、亲戚、邻居等的交际，其内容无非是与人为善、以诚待人、互帮互助、 尊老爱幼等等。虽然如此，命题的形式却是富于变化的， 比如可以要求学生写记叙文来描写与某人的交往(属于事件描述类作文)，也可以要求学生写说明文来介绍或建议如何与人交往(属于该话题的变式作文)。下面，这两种形式我们都举例来谈- -谈。
实践案例1（记叙文形式）
题目
Write a cmpsitin in at least 60 wrds accrding 10 the given situatin (根据所始境，写一篇字数不少于60个词的短文。)
Suppse yu were mistaken by yur parents. Can yu briefly describe what happened And what did yu d t make things right?
青少年与父母的日常交佳中往往会出现矛盾或误会。请你描写-段被父母误解的场景简要描述发生了什么，而你又是如何解决问题的。
审题
这篇材料作文以“与父母的交往”为主题，选材方面相对来说是容易的，毕竞中学生父母的交往是日常生活中的常见话题，比如，父母对你的某个决定不支持，父母对你的某行为不理解，父母干沙你交友，父母误解你不诚实，代沟太深沟通太少等等。学生只要选有把握的事件进行简要描述，交代清楚误解的发生经过、问题解决的方法就可以了。这里注意的是，前后经过写完后，文章不要匆匆收尾，而要有感情升华，即归纳总结一下应如与父母相处，写出经验之谈、意见建议等。
段落结构
根据题目要求，可以采用三段式的结构:
第一部分The 1st part
与父母相处可能会有误会产生。
My parents and I get alng well with each ther, but misunderstandings /prblems / quarrels arise frm time t time.
Like any ther family, there are sme prblems between my parents and me smetimes.
第二部分The 2nd part
重点阐述你与父母发生了什么样的误解，而你又是如何解决的。
An unhappy accident happened in ..
When I... last week, there was a fight between my parents and
With their supprt and my effrts, ur prblem was slved successfully.
第三部分The 3rd part
感情升华，提出建议。
A lng a we listen t each ther's pinin sincerely prblems wn't exist fr a lng time,
We shuld respect ur parents all the time and ur parents will als respect us,
核心语汇
get n/ alng well with与友好相处
generatin gap代沟
.depend n / rely n依赖，依靠
frce smebdy t d smething强迫某人做某事
lead t misunderstanding导致误解
be hnest with .对...诚实
shw respect t ...对尊敬
be kind t..对友好
help/ trust/ encurage each ther互相帮助/信任/鼓励
take gd care f好好照顾
deal with the relatinship处理关系
had better (nt) d ..最好(不)做...
share the same interest with...与有共同的爱好
ffer help t ..主动提出帮助
ask smebdy fr help向某人求助
turn t smebdy (fr help)向某人求助
cmplain t .. abut 向某人抱怨某事
参考句型
They always treat me like a little kid他们总是把我当小孩子对待。
They keep preventing me making decisins by myself他们总是不让我自己做决定。
They expect me t d everything as they have planned fr me. 他们指望我按照他们为我制定的
计划来行事。
They are used t intervening in my daily life.他们习惯了干预我的日常生活。
It is the best plicy t .. (respect each ther)(互相尊重)是最好的策略。
It is respect that helps me gain this friendship.正是尊敬帮助我获得这份友谊。
It is necessary 1essential t respect thers.尊敬他人很必要。
The mre respectful yu are, the mre respect yu will earn t yurself.越尊敬他人， 越受人尊敬。
It is the best way t bridge the generatin gap.这是消除代沟的最好办法。
习作
Things aren't always easy between parents and teenagers. I have the same prblem t.Last Wednesday, my parents blamed me fr staying up t play the cmputer games and intended t stp me using it. But actually, I was just trying t finish the task assigned by my cmputer prgramming lass. T slve the prblem, I aplgized t them first fr making them wrried Then I explained what I was busy with. I als prmised them I wuld sleep as early as pssible.
A family quarrel was avided and I realize that t get n well with ur parents, we shuld respect them and cmmunicate with them mre ften.After ll what they d r say aims t d gd t us.
点评:
这前习作的谋篇布局恰到好处。开篇说明与父母相处不易自己也有类似的烦信。中间段格精述自己的一次经历， 父母将我做的 “正事”误解为“不务正业”，紧接着就是学生非常聪明地解决了这一家庭矛盾。 最后通过这次事件，学生得出与父母相处的真谛是互相尊重、主动交流。内容完美、无可挑刷。语言方面并无太多华丽静菜，也无复杂甸型，但读起来非常流畅，是见其思路清晰、用词简洁地道。这也印证了作者的理念，中考作文的语言流畅、表达清晰是最重要的，如这篇文章会用考纲词汇和词组，会用blame 1 intend 1quarrel等少数几个非考纲的常见表达，足矣。
实践案例2 (说明文形式)
该话题的变式作文可能是由命题形式的多样化导致的，有很多模考作文并没有要求学生以记叙文形式来完成该话题，而是以写信、回复邮件、给出建议等形式写说明文。这时要注意的是，这种体裁形式下，学生写文章的对象就变了，不是描写自己的问题了，而是对他人的问题进行介绍或者建议，因此口吻也要作相应调整，以客观的、建议性的语言来完成文章，如advice smebdy t d smething, suggest smebdy d smething, my suggestins are as fllws等等。以下面这篇一模作文为例。
题目
Nwadays, it's getting mre and mre imprtant t get n well with thers. What are yur pinins abut it? What are yur gd ways t get n well with thers?
如今，与人和睦相处显得越来越重要了，你认为呢?请根据以上内容写-篇不少于60个词的短文，谈谈你对与人相处的看法并建议如何与人(你可以从你的父母、你的老师或者你的同学中任意选取一位)相处，并举例说明。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
以下要点仅供参考:
I think ht..I my pinin..
In a friendly way
习作
As a middle schl student, I spend mst f my daily life at schl with my classmates.Amng them, I think it's essential t get n well with my deskmate in particular.
I suggest shwing respect all the time and encuraging each ther t make prgress tgether. Fr example, my deskmate and I are gd friends. We always respect and supprt each ther withut telling any lies. Besides, we never hesitate t ffer help t each ther. He helps me with my physics while I teach him hw t write English cmpsitins.
I believe ur friendship will last frever and be the mst precius memry.
点评:
这箱习作能够不错地把握审题标准，先谈到了现代社会中与人相处的重要性，然后以学生的身份举例说明与同桌和睦相处很重要，并提出如何与其相处的建议:相互尊重和相互鼓励。语言方面，学生注意到了客观建设性的特点，如suggest ding ..另外他能正确使用动名词作主语，定语从句等，这些都是容易被忽视或不易掌握的知识点。这篇文章里的词汇亮点也颇多，比如essential/l hesitate 1 precius/ in particular等都是初三学生难得能运用在作文中的表达。
相关话题精彩范文
（一）
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
One day, when I was n my way hme, there was an ld man walking slwly in frnt f me. Then smething unexpected happened.
The ld man walked mre and mre slwly. While he walked arund the crner, he fell dwn. I ran t him, and I was the nly ne there t help him. I culdn't mve him by myself.
I lked arund, but n ne passed by. Just at that time, I fund that my phne was in my pcket. I quickly tk it ut and called the dctrs at 120 in a minute.The ambulance came sn. They thanked me fr helping the ld man.
I was s happy that I helped the ld man saved his life .We all shuld d this when thers are in truble.
参考译文
帮助别人让我开心
发生了。一天， 我走在回家的路上， 有一位者人慢地在我前面走者。然后靠想不到的事情老人越走越慢，走过特角的时候，他掉倒了，我跑向他，我是那肌唯能带助他的人我自己无法最动他。我向四周看了看， 但是没有人经过，就在那时，我发现手机在我的口袋中，我迅速本出手机，马上报打120.牧护车很快就来了他们感重我帮助了这个老人。
我非常高兴自己帮助了这个老人，挽救了他的生命。当他人陷入困难的时候， 我们都应该这样做。
亮点词汇
unexpected 出人意料的
arund the crner在拐角处
pass by经过
ambulance 救护车
save ne's life挽救某人的生命
出彩句型
There is sb. Ding sth. 有某人正在做某事。
I was the nly ne there 我是那里唯一一个
I fund that..我发现
thanked . 为了.. 感谢
1 was s happy that.我非常高兴
We ll shuld d this when thers are in truble.当他人陪入困难的时候，我们都应该这样做。
高分点评
本文描写的是帮助一个摔倒的老人的过程，条理清断，叙述完整，突出了作者机智、热心的一面， 是一筒较为成功的叙事文章。 文章来尾还进行了点题，呼吁人们要对有困难|的人施以援手，提升了文章的境界。文章的句子虽看似平淡，但其间点级着精彩的短语，值得细细品读。
（二）
A Rubbish Accident
Last Saturday mrning, I went t the park with my parents. When we were walking arund, we saw a by eating a banana. After a while, he just threw the skin f the banana n the grund. Just as we were ging t pick it up, a man slipped n the banana skin. He was badly hurt and culdn't mve. We called the hspital at nce. Luckily, the man became better after the treatment f the dctrs.
It was really bad f the by t thrw the rubbish everywhere. It nt nly des harm t the envirnment, but als might hurt thers. Everyne must say n t this behavir, and wrks tgether t make ur wrld a better place.
参考译文
一次垃圾事故
上个星期六早上，我和父母去了公园。我们正在四处逛着时，看见一个男孩正在吃香蕉。过了一会儿，他直接将香蕉皮扔到了地上。正当我们要过去捡起来时，有人踩在了香蕉皮上，滑倒了。他受伤很严重，躺在地上不能动了。我们马上打电话给医院。幸运的是，那个人在得到医生的治疗后好多了。
那个男孩到处扔垃圾的行为是非常思劣的。 这不仅会破坏环境，还可能伤害别人。每个人都要对这种行为说不，并且要共同努力，让我们的世界变得更好。
亮点词汇
walk arund四处走动
pick... up ...检起来
slip 滑倒
treatment 治疗
thrw the rubbish扔垃圾
出彩句型
We saw sb. ding sth.我们看见某人正在做某事。
After a while.. 过了一会
Just as we were gin g...正当我们要做
It was really... f sb. t d sth. 某人做是极
Everyne must say n 每个人都应说不。
高分点评
本文展示了公园里-一个男孩乱丢垃圾导致他人受伤的不文明行为，继而警醒人们要爱护环境，杜绝不文明行为。本文的主旨较为鲜明，贴合当今的社会风气，是一篇不错的启示性文章。值得一提的是， 文章的短语运用相当丰富，如"walk arund"“pickup" "thrw the rubbish"等，为文章增添了色彩。
相关话题满分作文必背
（一）
Write a letter in at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)
1. 提示:假设你是张翔，你的朋友孙磊上周来信说，他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话，这使得他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理这事。请你给他写封信，提出一些建议并帮助他。
2.要求:建议不得少于两条。
3. Phrases fr reference (以下短语仅供参考):
in truble; be bad fr; talk with; heart t heart; try ne's best; after all; get n well with
范文
Dear Sun Lei,
I have heard frm yu and I knw abut yur truble. Yur deskmate always finds sme excuses t talk with yu in class, which is bad fr yur study. My suggestins are as fllws.
First, yu shuld tell yur deskmate yur true feelings abut talking in class. He is yur friend and I think he will understand yu and desn't want t mess up yur study n purpse. Secnd, yu shuld care fr him after class. Maybe he has sme truble in cntrlling himself, s yu had better shw mre care t him and talk with him heart t heart in yur spare time.
1 hpe my suggestins will be useful and yu guys will get n well with each ther.
Sincerely yurs,
Zhang Xiang
（二）
In 60 t 120 wrds, write abut the tpic "What makes a gd neighbr”. (以“怎样才是个好邻居”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不子评分。)
范文
What makes a gd neighbr
As an ld saying ges, a clse neighbr is better than a brther far ff. Therefre, it is lucky fr us t have a gd neighbr and als necessary fr urselves t be a gd ne.
First, a gd neighbr shuld be respectful. We must shw respect t each ther all the time. Fr example, we shuld be kind and plite and we shuldn't intrude upn ur neighbrs' privacy. Secnd, a gd neighbr shuld be cnsiderate. TV prgram r pp music shuldn't be played ut lud because it will disturb thers. If necessary, we shuld give ur neighbr a hand t take care f their pets r little kids when they are nt at hme.All in all, as lng as we treat each ther sincerely, we will live happily tgether.