14 写景素材储备与写作指导中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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14 写景素材储备与写作指导

2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

相关话题范文解析

假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线” (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。

1. 风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River)；

2. 聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks)；

3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess)；

4. 特色游览(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。

要求：1. 80词左右；

2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；内容上可适度发挥。

注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。

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【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、聚焦景观、休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【参考范文】

The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line

The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so on. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. 有一条著名的公路叫做滨河路，它沿着黄河行驶。句子which runs along the Yellow River.是由which引导的定语从句。

【高分句型二】

There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有很多休闲娱乐的地方，如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用there be结构来写。