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Module 1 模块话题满分范文必背-九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题（外研版）
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这是一份Module 1 模块话题满分范文必背-九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题（外研版），共16页。
Module1 Wonders of the world
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．（2023·江苏徐州·统考二模）最近网上流行这样一句话：要么旅行，要么读书，身体和灵魂总有一个在路上。旅行和读书一样重要，它是一种学习和体验，能给我们带来身心的愉悦。某青少年英文网站举办了一场主题为“A wonderful tour”的征文比赛。假如你是王平，你准备投稿参加这次比赛，内容包括：
1.分享一次你难忘的旅行经历及感受；
2.阐述旅行的好处（至少两点）
3.呼吁更多的同学外出旅行。
要求：1.100词左右，已给出的句子不记入总词数；
2.必须包括全部要点，但不能逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
3.文章不要提及真实的校名和人名。
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten thousand books. I love travelling. Last summer vacation, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten thousand books. I love travelling very much. Last summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. On the first day, we climbed the Great Wall. I felt tired but happy. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and enjoyed many beautiful works of art. I learned more about the history of Ming and Qing Dynasties. Then I tasted Beijing duck in Wangfujing Street. I really had a good time in Beijing.
I think travelling can open up our minds. We can meet all kinds of people and learn more about different cultures.
Dear guys, let’s go travelling and learn more about the world!
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：具体描述自己难忘的旅行经历；
第二步：阐述旅行给你带来的好处；
第三步：书写结语，呼吁更多同学出去旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time过得开心
②all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①I think travelling can open up our minds.（省略that的宾语从句；动名词作主语）
②Dear guys, let’s go travelling and learn more about the world!（祈使句）
2．（2022·湖南株洲·统考二模）“读万卷书，行万里路”旅途中有别样的风景和感悟。校报英语版正在举行题目为”Travel”的征文活动，假定你是李华，请写一篇文章投稿，要点如下：
（1）你的一次旅行经历；
（2）这次旅行的感悟；
（3）你接下来的旅行计划。
请注意：
（1）写作时不要抄题；
（2）词数90左右；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（4）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【答案】例文
Travel
It’s well-known that a thousand miles of travel is worth reading ten thousand books.
Last winter holiday, I made a trip to Sanya by plane. Sanya is a magic land of beautiful sights and coconut trees around the city. I enjoyed myself on the beach and watched the sunrise and sunset on the seaside. What’s more, I visited Tianyahaijiao. It’s said that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao. I saw the amazing sea world by diving.
Travelling is like a poem. We use our footprints to fill in every word and every sentence. I’m planning to Wenzhou this year to enjoy different sights.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在写作时注意时态的使用。介绍自己的经历时要用一般过去时；介绍自己的计划时要用一般将来时；段落之间的衔接得体，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用谚语“读万卷书，行万里路”引出要重点介绍的内容；
第二部，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的一次旅行经历，可以从时间、交通方式、旅途风景等方面描述；
第三步，书写结语。表达此次旅行的收获及接下来的旅行计划。
[亮点词汇]
①make a trip旅行
②a magic land of……神奇的地方
③enjoyed myself 玩得开心
④watch the sunrise and sunset观看日出和日落
⑤What’s more更多的是
⑥fill in填写
[高分句型]
①It’s well-known that a thousand miles of travel is worth reading ten thousand books.（“It’s well-known that+句子”句型）
②It’s said that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao.（“no visit to... is complete without a trip to...”句型）
③Travelling is like a poem.（比喻句）
3．（2023·山东济宁·统考一模）今年中考结束以后，李华计划和父母亲一块儿去爬泰山。他提前做好了一份攻略，请根据要点提示写一篇短文介绍一下他的这份攻略。
要点提示：
1. 他和父母亲一起坐客车去。
2. 准备一些吃的喝的。晚上泰山顶上很冷，为了看日出，他们每人准备一件厚衣服。
3. 7月2号下午5点出发，7点左右到达泰安市。
4. 他们先去宾馆，在宾馆吃完晚饭，休息。
5. 晚上10点左右开始爬泰山，沿路欣赏一下山上的风景。第二天凌晨4点左右到达山顶，等着看日出，然后排队坐缆车下山。在宾馆吃完早餐后休息，11点左右开始出发回家。
要求：
1. 字数100字左右。短文必须包含要点提示里的所有内容。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
参考词汇：
watch the sunrise 看日出 enjoy 欣赏 cable car 缆车
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【答案】例文
Li Hua is going to climb Mount Tai after the entrance exam for high school. He will go there with his parents by bus. He will prepare something to eat and drink. At the top of the mountain, it is very cold at night. In order to watch the sunrise, they each will prepare a thick clothes. They’ll leave at 5 p.m. on July 2nd and get to Taian at about 7 p.m. Firstly, they’ll get to the hotel and have dinner at the hotel. Then take a rest. They’ll begin to climb Mount Tai at about 10 p.m. They’ll enjoy the mountain scenery along the road. They’ll get to the top of the mountain at about 4 a.m. next day. They’ll wait to watch the sunrise. Then they’ll go down the mountain by the cable car. They’ll have a break after breakfast at the hotel. Then they’ll leave for home at about 11 a.m.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍李华的登山计划；
第二步，具体阐述这次登山的具体攻略，按照题目中所给时间顺序和提示，详写介绍旅行计划的内容。
[亮点词汇]
①In order to为了
②take a rest休息
[高分句型]
In order to watch the sunrise, they each will prepare a thick clothes.（动词不定式作目的状语）
4．（2023春·山西大同·九年级大同一中校考阶段练习）在很多人的年度计划中，“旅行”成为一个重要的项目。旅行不仅是一种休闲方式，也是提升自我的一种途径。旅行能够使我们开阔视野、体验不同文化、改善人际关系、学会解决问题……请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文，谈一谈自己的想法。
内容包括:
◆your opinion on traveling
◆the experience that you have had
◆the benefit（好处）you have got from it
要求:
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
Traveling is very important in our life. I think traveling is not only a way to relax, but also a way to improve myself. Traveling enables us to broaden our horizons, experience different cultures, improve interpersonal relationships, learn to solve problems and so on.
I have been to Thailand. Although I couldn’t speak Thai, I could tell the general meaning from people’s movements. I saw different local customs and cultural customs in Thailand. From this trip, I expanded my horizons and learned things that I could not learn at home.
I think traveling is really meaningful. I also suggest that everyone can go out to travel in their free time and see the beauty of the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你对旅行的看法；
第二步，介绍你曾经的旅行经历；
第三步，最后介绍你从中获得的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不但……而且……
②have been to去过
③cultural custom文化习俗
[高分句型]
①Although I couldn’t speak Thai, I could tell the general meaning from people’s movements.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②I expanded my horizons and learned things that I could not learn at home.（that引导的定语从句）
5．（2022秋·北京门头沟·九年级统考期末）“世界是一本书，而不旅行的人只读了其中的一页。”—— 奥古斯狄尼斯。
某英文网站正在开展以“我的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一次旅行，去了哪里，你看到了什么，做了什么，以及你的收获。
提示词语：stay, famous, unforgettable
提示问题：
●Where did you go?
●What did you see and what did you do?
●How did you feel?
My Journey
The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Journey
The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes. I went to the famous Beihai Park with my classmates this May and we had a great time.
We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing. We also took lots of pictures of the beautiful flowers in the gardens. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I’m looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给要点介绍你的一次旅行，注意不要遗漏“旅行的感受”的写作，适当增添细节，使得行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍去旅行的地方及时间；
第二步，具体介绍在旅行中看到了什么以及做了什么；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take lots of pictures拍很多照片
②look forward to期待
③climb up the hill爬上小山
④do exercises做锻炼
[高分句型]
①It was great to enjoy the views from the top.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing.（as引导时间状语从句）
二、话题作文
6．（2023·云南昆明·统考一模）My ________ Trip
提示：读万卷书，行万里路。旅途中，我们经历难忘的事，遇见可爱的人，感受醉人的景....请以“My ________ Trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你出游的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Unforgettable Trip
I have travelled a lot and I have many travel experiences. Let me tell you one of the most unforgettable experiences. Last summer vacation, I went to Qingdao by train. The weather was fine. It was always sunny. I enjoyed the fresh air there. First, I went to the seaside. The sea was as blue as the sky. It was really an enjoyable thing to take a bath in the sunshine on the beach. Then I also picked up a lot of colorful shells. After that I tasted the local famous food. I ate many things there, such as fish and prawns. What delicious food they are!
Travelling is like a poem. We use our footprints to fill in every word and every sentence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在写作时注意时态的使用。介绍自己的经历时要用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出要重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的一次旅行经历，可以从时间、交通方式、旅途风景等方面描述；
第三步，书写结语。表达此次旅行的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①most unforgettable experiences最难忘的经历
②as blue as the sky和天空一样蓝
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
What delicious food they are!（感叹句）
三、书信作文
7．（2023·江苏镇江·校联考一模）随着五一劳动假期的到来和疫情的开放，越来越多的人选择外出旅游放松自己。假如你是李华，看到某旅行社组织的两种旅游团的宣传。请用英语给旅行社写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种旅游团及理由，并对你选择的旅游团的活动提出建议。
May Day Tour
the Yangtze River Cultural Tour
Disneyland Tour
Time
May 1 — May 2
May 2 — May 3
Place
Nanjing
Shanghai
Activities
● Overlook the Yangtze River from a helicopter.● Take a boat trip on the Yangtze River.
● Listen to speeches on how to protect the Yangtze River.
● Try different kinds of rides, such as Space Mountain.● Watch a parade of Disney characters.
● Enjoy the beautiful fireworks show.
Cost
￥450 /per person
￥1050 /per person
(overlook: 俯瞰； helicopter: 直升机）
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种旅游团的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的旅游团活动说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文1
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tour because the tour will improve my knowledge of the longest river in China.
The Yangtze River Cultural Tour will take place in Nanjing. It lasts from May 1 to May 2. There, we can overlook the Yangtze River from a helicopter. Moreover, we will take a boat trip on the Yangtze River. We can also enjoy beautiful views along the Yangtze River. In the tour, we can listen to speeches on how to protect the Yangtze River, too. What’s more, the cost of the trip is 450 yuan per person.
I also have some advice for you. I hope more speeches about the history of the Yangtze River will be given. I am sure I will enjoy myself in the tour.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer Disneyland Tour because the tour will make me relaxed after a few months’ hard work.
The Tour will be in Shanghai. It lasts from May 2 to May 3. There, we can try different kinds of rides, such as Space Mountain. It will be very exciting. What makes me interested is that we can watch a parade of Disney characters. In the tour, we can also enjoy the beautiful fireworks show. Moreover, the cost of the trip is 1050 yuan per person.
I also have some advice for you. I hope we can have some time to do some shopping. I want to buy some gifts for my friends. I am sure I will have a fantastic time in Disneyland.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。选择你更想参与的一种旅游团并说明理由；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动、费用”几个方面重点介绍旅游团活动的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。提出建议表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行
②listen to speeches听演讲
③What’s more而且
④enjoy myself玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tour because the tour will improve my knowledge of the longest river in China. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I am sure I will enjoy myself in the tour.(宾语从句)
8．（2023春·贵州铜仁·九年级校考阶段练习）假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示：
1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigou National Park)；
2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京；
3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Forbidden City)，还去爬了长城；
4. 你们拍了许多照片；
5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(souvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Nancy
【答案】例文
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. It is a world-famous National Park in China. My parents and I flew to Beijing from New York on 26th July. We visited the Summer Palace, Tian’an men Square and the Forbidden City. We also climbed the Great Wall. We took a lot of beautiful photos. What’s more, we ate delicious food such as Beijing Roast Duck.
I bought some small souvenirs for you and I’m sure you will like them.
Yours
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去北京的旅行情况；
第二步，买了一些纪念品给对方，确定对方会喜欢的。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②a lot of许多
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you will like them.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2022春·四川眉山·九年级校联考期中）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题：Which places of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for?
提示词语：mountain, pay a visit, by plane, enjoy
要求：1.内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯；
3.100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air.
It’s really a nice place to visit. I am sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步，书信问候语；
第二步，介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色；
第三步，书信结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most famous mountains最著名的山脉之一
②lie in位于
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
① … in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. （when引导时间状语从句）
② It’s really a nice place to visit. （使用不定式作定语）
四、电子邮件
10．（2023春·九年级单元测试）假如你是王洁，你在美国的笔友John Black想到中国旅行，请根据提示给他发一封e-mail。词数80—100，并注意格式。
提示：
1. 北京是中国的首都，它历史悠久、名胜古迹不胜枚举。这里有万里长城、故宫（the Forbidden City）、颐和园（the Summer Palace）等。夏季和秋季是来北京旅游的最佳时节；
2. 夏季到大连、青岛的海滨冲浪（go surfing）是件乐事；
3. 还可以到海南，那里四季如春，可以旅游、潜水（go scuba diving），你一定会玩得很开心。
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【答案】例文
Dear John,
I’ve heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history and there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. Summer and autumn is the best time to come here. In summer, you can go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao, and the waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan, and the weather is always warm. No matter whether in summer or in winter, you can go scuba diving there. I think you’ll have a good time.
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Wang Jie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写电子邮件的缘由；
第二步，具体阐述中国一些旅游的著名城市及景点；
第三步，最后表达对John表示祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②want to do sth想要做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Summer and autumn is the best time to come here.（动词不定式作后置定语）
②I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.（省略that的宾语从句）
Module1 Wonders of the world
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．（2023·江苏徐州·统考二模）最近网上流行这样一句话：要么旅行，要么读书，身体和灵魂总有一个在路上。旅行和读书一样重要，它是一种学习和体验，能给我们带来身心的愉悦。某青少年英文网站举办了一场主题为“A wonderful tour”的征文比赛。假如你是王平，你准备投稿参加这次比赛，内容包括：
1.分享一次你难忘的旅行经历及感受；
2.阐述旅行的好处（至少两点）
3.呼吁更多的同学外出旅行。
要求：1.100词左右，已给出的句子不记入总词数；
2.必须包括全部要点，但不能逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
3.文章不要提及真实的校名和人名。
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten thousand books. I love travelling. Last summer vacation, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten thousand books. I love travelling very much. Last summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. On the first day, we climbed the Great Wall. I felt tired but happy. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and enjoyed many beautiful works of art. I learned more about the history of Ming and Qing Dynasties. Then I tasted Beijing duck in Wangfujing Street. I really had a good time in Beijing.
I think travelling can open up our minds. We can meet all kinds of people and learn more about different cultures.
Dear guys, let’s go travelling and learn more about the world!
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：具体描述自己难忘的旅行经历；
第二步：阐述旅行给你带来的好处；
第三步：书写结语，呼吁更多同学出去旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time过得开心
②all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①I think travelling can open up our minds.（省略that的宾语从句；动名词作主语）
②Dear guys, let’s go travelling and learn more about the world!（祈使句）
2．（2022·湖南株洲·统考二模）“读万卷书，行万里路”旅途中有别样的风景和感悟。校报英语版正在举行题目为”Travel”的征文活动，假定你是李华，请写一篇文章投稿，要点如下：
（1）你的一次旅行经历；
（2）这次旅行的感悟；
（3）你接下来的旅行计划。
请注意：
（1）写作时不要抄题；
（2）词数90左右；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（4）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【答案】例文
Travel
It’s well-known that a thousand miles of travel is worth reading ten thousand books.
Last winter holiday, I made a trip to Sanya by plane. Sanya is a magic land of beautiful sights and coconut trees around the city. I enjoyed myself on the beach and watched the sunrise and sunset on the seaside. What’s more, I visited Tianyahaijiao. It’s said that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao. I saw the amazing sea world by diving.
Travelling is like a poem. We use our footprints to fill in every word and every sentence. I’m planning to Wenzhou this year to enjoy different sights.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在写作时注意时态的使用。介绍自己的经历时要用一般过去时；介绍自己的计划时要用一般将来时；段落之间的衔接得体，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用谚语“读万卷书，行万里路”引出要重点介绍的内容；
第二部，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的一次旅行经历，可以从时间、交通方式、旅途风景等方面描述；
第三步，书写结语。表达此次旅行的收获及接下来的旅行计划。
[亮点词汇]
①make a trip旅行
②a magic land of……神奇的地方
③enjoyed myself 玩得开心
④watch the sunrise and sunset观看日出和日落
⑤What’s more更多的是
⑥fill in填写
[高分句型]
①It’s well-known that a thousand miles of travel is worth reading ten thousand books.（“It’s well-known that+句子”句型）
②It’s said that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao.（“no visit to... is complete without a trip to...”句型）
③Travelling is like a poem.（比喻句）
3．（2023·山东济宁·统考一模）今年中考结束以后，李华计划和父母亲一块儿去爬泰山。他提前做好了一份攻略，请根据要点提示写一篇短文介绍一下他的这份攻略。
要点提示：
1. 他和父母亲一起坐客车去。
2. 准备一些吃的喝的。晚上泰山顶上很冷，为了看日出，他们每人准备一件厚衣服。
3. 7月2号下午5点出发，7点左右到达泰安市。
4. 他们先去宾馆，在宾馆吃完晚饭，休息。
5. 晚上10点左右开始爬泰山，沿路欣赏一下山上的风景。第二天凌晨4点左右到达山顶，等着看日出，然后排队坐缆车下山。在宾馆吃完早餐后休息，11点左右开始出发回家。
要求：
1. 字数100字左右。短文必须包含要点提示里的所有内容。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
参考词汇：
watch the sunrise 看日出 enjoy 欣赏 cable car 缆车
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【答案】例文
Li Hua is going to climb Mount Tai after the entrance exam for high school. He will go there with his parents by bus. He will prepare something to eat and drink. At the top of the mountain, it is very cold at night. In order to watch the sunrise, they each will prepare a thick clothes. They’ll leave at 5 p.m. on July 2nd and get to Taian at about 7 p.m. Firstly, they’ll get to the hotel and have dinner at the hotel. Then take a rest. They’ll begin to climb Mount Tai at about 10 p.m. They’ll enjoy the mountain scenery along the road. They’ll get to the top of the mountain at about 4 a.m. next day. They’ll wait to watch the sunrise. Then they’ll go down the mountain by the cable car. They’ll have a break after breakfast at the hotel. Then they’ll leave for home at about 11 a.m.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍李华的登山计划；
第二步，具体阐述这次登山的具体攻略，按照题目中所给时间顺序和提示，详写介绍旅行计划的内容。
[亮点词汇]
①In order to为了
②take a rest休息
[高分句型]
In order to watch the sunrise, they each will prepare a thick clothes.（动词不定式作目的状语）
4．（2023春·山西大同·九年级大同一中校考阶段练习）在很多人的年度计划中，“旅行”成为一个重要的项目。旅行不仅是一种休闲方式，也是提升自我的一种途径。旅行能够使我们开阔视野、体验不同文化、改善人际关系、学会解决问题……请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文，谈一谈自己的想法。
内容包括:
◆your opinion on traveling
◆the experience that you have had
◆the benefit（好处）you have got from it
要求:
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
Traveling is very important in our life. I think traveling is not only a way to relax, but also a way to improve myself. Traveling enables us to broaden our horizons, experience different cultures, improve interpersonal relationships, learn to solve problems and so on.
I have been to Thailand. Although I couldn’t speak Thai, I could tell the general meaning from people’s movements. I saw different local customs and cultural customs in Thailand. From this trip, I expanded my horizons and learned things that I could not learn at home.
I think traveling is really meaningful. I also suggest that everyone can go out to travel in their free time and see the beauty of the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你对旅行的看法；
第二步，介绍你曾经的旅行经历；
第三步，最后介绍你从中获得的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不但……而且……
②have been to去过
③cultural custom文化习俗
[高分句型]
①Although I couldn’t speak Thai, I could tell the general meaning from people’s movements.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②I expanded my horizons and learned things that I could not learn at home.（that引导的定语从句）
5．（2022秋·北京门头沟·九年级统考期末）“世界是一本书，而不旅行的人只读了其中的一页。”—— 奥古斯狄尼斯。
某英文网站正在开展以“我的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一次旅行，去了哪里，你看到了什么，做了什么，以及你的收获。
提示词语：stay, famous, unforgettable
提示问题：
●Where did you go?
●What did you see and what did you do?
●How did you feel?
My Journey
The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Journey
The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes. I went to the famous Beihai Park with my classmates this May and we had a great time.
We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing. We also took lots of pictures of the beautiful flowers in the gardens. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I’m looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给要点介绍你的一次旅行，注意不要遗漏“旅行的感受”的写作，适当增添细节，使得行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍去旅行的地方及时间；
第二步，具体介绍在旅行中看到了什么以及做了什么；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take lots of pictures拍很多照片
②look forward to期待
③climb up the hill爬上小山
④do exercises做锻炼
[高分句型]
①It was great to enjoy the views from the top.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing.（as引导时间状语从句）
二、话题作文
6．（2023·云南昆明·统考一模）My ________ Trip
提示：读万卷书，行万里路。旅途中，我们经历难忘的事，遇见可爱的人，感受醉人的景....请以“My ________ Trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你出游的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Unforgettable Trip
I have travelled a lot and I have many travel experiences. Let me tell you one of the most unforgettable experiences. Last summer vacation, I went to Qingdao by train. The weather was fine. It was always sunny. I enjoyed the fresh air there. First, I went to the seaside. The sea was as blue as the sky. It was really an enjoyable thing to take a bath in the sunshine on the beach. Then I also picked up a lot of colorful shells. After that I tasted the local famous food. I ate many things there, such as fish and prawns. What delicious food they are!
Travelling is like a poem. We use our footprints to fill in every word and every sentence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在写作时注意时态的使用。介绍自己的经历时要用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出要重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的一次旅行经历，可以从时间、交通方式、旅途风景等方面描述；
第三步，书写结语。表达此次旅行的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①most unforgettable experiences最难忘的经历
②as blue as the sky和天空一样蓝
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
What delicious food they are!（感叹句）
三、书信作文
7．（2023·江苏镇江·校联考一模）随着五一劳动假期的到来和疫情的开放，越来越多的人选择外出旅游放松自己。假如你是李华，看到某旅行社组织的两种旅游团的宣传。请用英语给旅行社写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种旅游团及理由，并对你选择的旅游团的活动提出建议。
May Day Tour
the Yangtze River Cultural Tour
Disneyland Tour
Time
May 1 — May 2
May 2 — May 3
Place
Nanjing
Shanghai
Activities
● Overlook the Yangtze River from a helicopter.● Take a boat trip on the Yangtze River.
● Listen to speeches on how to protect the Yangtze River.
● Try different kinds of rides, such as Space Mountain.● Watch a parade of Disney characters.
● Enjoy the beautiful fireworks show.
Cost
￥450 /per person
￥1050 /per person
(overlook: 俯瞰； helicopter: 直升机）
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种旅游团的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的旅游团活动说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文1
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tour because the tour will improve my knowledge of the longest river in China.
The Yangtze River Cultural Tour will take place in Nanjing. It lasts from May 1 to May 2. There, we can overlook the Yangtze River from a helicopter. Moreover, we will take a boat trip on the Yangtze River. We can also enjoy beautiful views along the Yangtze River. In the tour, we can listen to speeches on how to protect the Yangtze River, too. What’s more, the cost of the trip is 450 yuan per person.
I also have some advice for you. I hope more speeches about the history of the Yangtze River will be given. I am sure I will enjoy myself in the tour.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer Disneyland Tour because the tour will make me relaxed after a few months’ hard work.
The Tour will be in Shanghai. It lasts from May 2 to May 3. There, we can try different kinds of rides, such as Space Mountain. It will be very exciting. What makes me interested is that we can watch a parade of Disney characters. In the tour, we can also enjoy the beautiful fireworks show. Moreover, the cost of the trip is 1050 yuan per person.
I also have some advice for you. I hope we can have some time to do some shopping. I want to buy some gifts for my friends. I am sure I will have a fantastic time in Disneyland.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。选择你更想参与的一种旅游团并说明理由；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动、费用”几个方面重点介绍旅游团活动的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。提出建议表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行
②listen to speeches听演讲
③What’s more而且
④enjoy myself玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tour because the tour will improve my knowledge of the longest river in China. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I am sure I will enjoy myself in the tour.(宾语从句)
8．（2023春·贵州铜仁·九年级校考阶段练习）假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示：
1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigou National Park)；
2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京；
3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Forbidden City)，还去爬了长城；
4. 你们拍了许多照片；
5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(souvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Nancy
【答案】例文
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. It is a world-famous National Park in China. My parents and I flew to Beijing from New York on 26th July. We visited the Summer Palace, Tian’an men Square and the Forbidden City. We also climbed the Great Wall. We took a lot of beautiful photos. What’s more, we ate delicious food such as Beijing Roast Duck.
I bought some small souvenirs for you and I’m sure you will like them.
Yours
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去北京的旅行情况；
第二步，买了一些纪念品给对方，确定对方会喜欢的。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②a lot of许多
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you will like them.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2022春·四川眉山·九年级校联考期中）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题：Which places of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for?
提示词语：mountain, pay a visit, by plane, enjoy
要求：1.内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯；
3.100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air.
It’s really a nice place to visit. I am sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步，书信问候语；
第二步，介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色；
第三步，书信结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most famous mountains最著名的山脉之一
②lie in位于
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
① … in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. （when引导时间状语从句）
② It’s really a nice place to visit. （使用不定式作定语）
四、电子邮件
10．（2023春·九年级单元测试）假如你是王洁，你在美国的笔友John Black想到中国旅行，请根据提示给他发一封e-mail。词数80—100，并注意格式。
提示：
1. 北京是中国的首都，它历史悠久、名胜古迹不胜枚举。这里有万里长城、故宫（the Forbidden City）、颐和园（the Summer Palace）等。夏季和秋季是来北京旅游的最佳时节；
2. 夏季到大连、青岛的海滨冲浪（go surfing）是件乐事；
3. 还可以到海南，那里四季如春，可以旅游、潜水（go scuba diving），你一定会玩得很开心。
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【答案】例文
Dear John,
I’ve heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history and there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. Summer and autumn is the best time to come here. In summer, you can go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao, and the waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan, and the weather is always warm. No matter whether in summer or in winter, you can go scuba diving there. I think you’ll have a good time.
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Wang Jie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写电子邮件的缘由；
第二步，具体阐述中国一些旅游的著名城市及景点；
第三步，最后表达对John表示祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②want to do sth想要做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Summer and autumn is the best time to come here.（动词不定式作后置定语）
②I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.（省略that的宾语从句）
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