陕西高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

应用文

1．假如你是李雷，为了激发学生的想象力，你们学校本月将举行一次以“My Future Life”为主题的征文比赛。请根据下列提示写一篇100词左右的短文。

1. 家庭 2. 工作 3. 业余生活

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2．假定你是李华，你计划暑假期间到澳大利亚旅行，请写一封E-mail向当地旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容应包括：

1.旅行信息（如景点等）；

2.当地特色（如食品等）；

3.注意事项。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir,

I’m Li Hua. I wonder if you could give me some information about

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是高三学生李华，受西安疫情形势影响，你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国，请你给此时处于焦虑中的他写一封英文慰问信。

要点如下：

1.对其表示关心和同情。

2.对其表示安慰并提供帮助。

3.表达愿望和祝福。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新冠疫情epidemic/novel Coronavirus

Dear Amy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华，你校英文报正在举行征文活动。请你以“Finding Joy in Laboring”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.劳动体验；

2.感受。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数不少于100。

Finding Joy in Laboring

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5．假定你是李华，你邻居的女儿每天中午都在家弹钢琴，给你的网课学习和生活带来了很大的困扰。请你给邻居Mrs. Li 写一封投诉信，内容要点包括：

1.说明困扰你的问题； 2. 投诉的原因；3. 解决问题的建议。

注意：

1.词数80字左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是李华，三周前你从网上买的一箱水果昨天才到货，且部分水果已经腐烂。请你就此向网店客服写邮件投诉，内容包括：

1.投诉问题；

2.解决方案；

3.期待回复。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100词左右。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，在一家商店购得一台劣质电脑，然后与营业员交涉，但营业员态度恶劣，不予受理。为此，你向经理写了一封投诉信。内容主要包括：

(1)自我介绍；

(2)投诉的原因

(3)希望换一台新的电视机，否则全额退款。

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．由于疫情，你校外籍教师Jim滞留英国，本学期不能继续给你代课，但是他很关心你的近况。请根据以下提示内容，给他写封电子邮件：

1.感谢他的关心，你们有新老师替代Jim；2.分享你的课余生活和学习状况；3.提醒老师注意防护。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.行文流畅，可适当增加细节；3.开头和结尾句已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your concerning about us, and

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Wish you all the best in your enterprise.

Yours,

Li Hua

9．针对高一学生听力不好的现状，高一学生会成立了“Happy Listening Club”，请你用英语写一篇文章，号召同学们积极参与，内容包括：

1. 活动时间、地点；

2. 活动内容（如：学唱英语歌曲、看英文电影、收听英语广播节目等）；

3. 号召报名参加。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

10．假定你是李华，现任你们学校的学生会主席。请你代表学生会写一份题目为“Build Up Your Health Actively”的倡议书，号召全校学生在课业之余坚持运动，养成健康的生活习惯。

注意：写作词数为80左右；

请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Build Up Your Health Actively

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Student Council

1．One possible version:

My Future Life

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life is bound to be very different then, which will be elegant and satisfying.

In the future, I will have a comfortable and grand house, in which there are all kinds of digital equipment and furniture. Above all, I desire to have a household robot cleaning the house, accompanying and obeying my parents in my home. In addition, I hope I will work for a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with the staff. In my free time, I will continue to take exercise, such as swimming,running and various ball games.

In a word,my future life will be richer and more colourful.

【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生写一篇征文，想象自己未来的生活，包括家庭、工作和业余生活。

【详解】1.词汇积累

必然：be bound to→ must do

各种各样：all kinds of → a variety of/ varieties of

渴望做某事：desire to do sth. → be anxious to do sth./be dying to do sth.

此外：in addition→ what’s more /besides

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Above all, I desire to have a household robot cleaning the house, accompanying and obeying my parents in my home.

拓展句：Above all, I desire to have a household robot which can help me clean the house, accompany and obey my parents in my home.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I think my life is bound to be very different then, which will be elegant and satisfying.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】In the future, I will have a comfortable and grand house, in which there are all kinds of digital equipment and furniture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

2．Dear Sir,

I’m Li Hua. I wonder if you could give me some information about my fantastic journey to Australia in summer.

Firstly, I wonder whether there is a tourist team and a professional guide leading us around the places of interest at a reasonable price. Besides, keen on eating, I anticipate that you could recommend the feature of local place to me. What’s more, it’s kind of you to tell me the situation of traffic and the weather during my travel in Australia.

Your early reply will be highly appreciated. And my great vacation, I can’t wait!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封E-mail向澳大利亚旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容应包括：1.旅行信息（如景点等）；2.当地特色（如食品等）；3.注意事项。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

旅程：journey→trip

另外：besides→moreover

期望：anticipate→expect

此外：what’s more→in addition

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

拓展句：I would appreciate it if you reply early.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, I wonder whether there is a tourist team and a professional guide leading us around the places of interest at a reasonable price. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, keen on eating, I anticipate that you could recommend the feature of local place to me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

3．Dear Amy,

Knowing that you are stuck in Xi’an and can’t return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere care for you.

Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown. You are supposed to remain calm and stay optimistic. Even though Xi’an is in bad condition due to the spreading novel Coronavirus, a large number of people are making every bit of their effort to fight the virus. Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes with us. Feel free to contact me, if you need any help.

With the joint effort of all the people, I’m sure the virus will be in control and our life will return to normal soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是高三学生李华，受西安疫情形势影响，你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国，请你给此时处于焦虑中的他写一封英文慰问信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

因为：because of/due to→thanks to

度过：pull through→get through

积极的：optimistic→positive

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown.

拓展句：After I thought about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are stuck in Xi’an and can’t return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere care for you. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes with us. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)

4．                                                                            Finding Joy in Laboring

Do you do chores around the house or school very often? As for me, laboring work is more than that. I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.

Last July I took part in a farm-work programme in the suburbs. Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under the hot sun and what “every grain on the plate comes from hard work” really meant.

Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Finding Joy in Laboring”为题写一篇短文，介绍自己的劳动体验和感受。

【详解】1.词汇积累

做家务：do chores→do housework

就我而言：as for me→as far as I’m concerned

参加：take part in→participate in

使人疲劳的：tiring→weary

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.

拓展句：As soon as I arrived at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句，句子为部分倒装形式）

5．One possible version:

Dear Mrs. Li,

I’m Li Hua, a neighbor living next to your house. I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the noise your daughter has been making recently.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is that it is at noon every day that your daughter practices playing the piano, which greatly affects both my life and online study. For one thing, as a high school senior, I’m engaged in making preparations for College Entrance Examination. Therefore, the noise makes it hard for me to concentrate on my study. For another, although occasionally the music your daughter plays sounds wonderful it disturbs me and I find it difficult to get enough sleep.

I sincerely hope that your daughter can adjust the time and place of practicing. I would appreciate it if you could solve the problem as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给邻居Mrs. Li 写一封投诉信，投诉邻居的女儿每天中午都在家弹钢琴，给自己的网课学习和生活带来了很大的困扰，并给出解决问题的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

因此：therefore→thus

集中于：concentrate on→focus on

尽管：although→though

解决：solve→work out

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For one thing, as a high school senior, I’m engaged in making preparations for College Entrance Examination.

拓展句：For one thing, since I’m a high school senior, I’m engaged in making preparations for College Entrance Examination.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason for my dissatisfaction is that it is at noon every day that your daughter practices playing the piano, which greatly affects both my life and online study.（运用了that引导的表语从句、强调句型和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】For another, although occasionally the music your daughter plays sounds wonderful it disturbs me and I find it difficult to get enough sleep.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）

【高分句型3】I sincerely hope that your daughter can adjust the time and place of practicing.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

6．Dear Sir/Madam,

 I am one of your customers. I ordered a box of fruit from your online store three weeks ago, but I didn’t receive it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, some fruits were rotten. I am sorry to have received such poor service and I believe I have the right to ask you to deal with this problem.

 I hope that you either return my money or deliver another box of fruit to me. In addition, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.

 Looking forward to your reply!

 Sincerely yours,

 Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向网店客服写邮件投诉三周前从网上买来的水果中部分已经腐烂的事情，内容包括：1.投诉问题；2.解决方案；3.期待回复。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

处理：cope with →deal with

腐烂的：rotten→decayed

得到：receive→get

另外：in addition→what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：And much to my disappointment, some fruits were rotten

拓展句：what disappointed me is that some fruits were rotten.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to have received such poor service and I believe I have the right to ask you to deal with this problem. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)

[高分句型2] I hope that you either return my money or deliver another box of fruits to me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

7．Dear manager,

I am Li Hua, one of your customers. I am writing to lodge a complaint about the poor quality of your product. The experience in your shop is a bitter disappointment to me.

For one thing, the computer I bought the other day from your company turned out to be a fake, which ruined your good reputation. For another, when I went to your shop for an explanation, the salesperson behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear to my requirement.

It is required that I should get a replacement, or I should receive a full refund. Thank you for your attention and I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Lihua

【导语】本文是一篇投诉信，李华购买了一台劣质电视机，向服务员申请售后，但遭到服务员的粗劣对待，就此事向经理写一封投诉信。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

购买：buy→ purchase

摧毁：ruin→ destroy

替换：replacement→ substitution

回复：reply→ response

2. 句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：The experience in your shop is a bitter disappointment to me.

拓展句：It is the experience in your shop that is a bitter disappointment to me.

【点睛】[高分句型1] For one thing, the computer I bought the other day from your company turned out to be a fake, which ruined your good reputation. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] For another, when I went to your shop for an explanation, the salesperson behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear to my requirement. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

8．Dear Jim,

Thank you for your concerning about us, and I am more than willing to tell my present life to you.

As you could not return to our school because of the Covid-19, we have a substitute teacher, who is as devoted and helpful as you. And to my satisfaction, I can adapt myself to the new teaching method soon. Every day, I concentrate my attention on what is taught in class. Then after class, I am always occupied with my schoolwork and make rapid progress in the academic courses. Besides, I also participate in a variety of activities, such as playing ball games and doing voluntary work, from which I not only build up my strength but also gain much social experience. In a word, I am living a rich and colorful life.

Anyway, I still desire to express my thanks to you and sincerely hope you take protective measures to protect yourself against the virus all the time.

Wish you all the best in your enterprise.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外籍教师Jim写封邮件，表示对他给予你的关心的感谢并分享你的课余生活和学习状况，最后提醒他注意防护。

【详解】1.词汇积累

返回：return→go back

集中注意力于：concentrate one’s attention on→focus one’s attention on

此外：besides→what’s more

参加：participate in→take part in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Then after class, I am always occupied with my schoolwork and make rapid progress in the academic courses.

拓展句：Then after class, I am always so occupied with my schoolwork that I make rapid progress in the academic courses.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As you could not return to our school because of the Covid-19, we have a substitute teacher, who is as devoted and helpful as you.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句和who引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Every day, I concentrate my attention on what is taught in class.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型3】Besides, I also participate in a variety of activities, such as playing ball games and doing voluntary work, from which I not only build up my strength but also gain much social experience.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)

9． Do you have problems in English listening? Or do you want to communicate with schoolmates who are good at English? Why not join our Happy listening Club?

Our club aims to help Senior 1 students learn to take a positive attitude towards the problems they meet with when listening to English, so that they can keep up spirit to face the challenges of English learning.

Firstly, we will organize colorful activities, such as learning to sing songs, watching movies and listening to radios. All of them are in form of English. Secondly, discussion will often be held, where you can exchange and share each other’s listening experience and explore efficient listening methods.

Activities will be fixed on Saturday afternoon. There are two ways you can join our club: fill out an application form in the Students’ Union or register at the campus website.

Don’t hesitate, and it’ll be great fun!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。针对高一学生听力不好的现状，高一学生会成立了“Happy Listening Club”，请你用英语写一篇文章，号召同学们积极参与。

【详解】1.词汇积累

擅长：be good at→do well in

目的是：aim to do sth.→be aimed at

方法：method→approach

安排：fix→arrange

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, we will organize colorful activities, such as learning to sing songs, watching movies and listening to radios.

拓展句：Firstly, we will organize colorful activities, where students can learn to sing songs, watch movies and listen to radios.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Our club aims to help Senior 1 students learn to take a positive attitude towards the problems they meet with when listening to English, so that they can keep up spirit to face the challenges of English learning.（运用了省略了关系代词的定语从句，so that引导状语从句）

【高分句型2】Secondly, discussion will often be held, where you can exchange and share each other’s listening experience and explore efficient listening methods.（运用了where引导定语从句）

10．One possible version：

Build Up Your Health Actively

As we all know, keeping healthy is very important to everyone. Recently our school has been calling on us to take exercise for our physical and mental health.

First of all, we should make full use of our time in the morning and the breaks between classes. Of course, we can do exercises on the way to and from school too. Secondly, we should exercise by doing different kinds of sports, such as running, jumping and basketball, etc. Finally, no matter what kind of sports you choose, stick to it.

Student Council

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一份题目为“Build Up Your Health Actively”的倡议书，号召全校学生在课业之余坚持运动，养成健康的生活习惯。

【详解】1.词汇积累

健康的：healthy→fit

呼吁：call on=appeal to

选择：choose→select

坚持：stick to=hold on

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, we should make full use of our time in the morning and the breaks between classes.

拓展句：First of all, what we should do is to make full use of our time in the morning and the breaks between classes.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

As we all know, keeping healthy is very important to everyone.(As引导非限制性定语从句和动名词短语作主语)

[高分句型2]

Finally, no matter what kind of sports you choose, stick to it.(no matter what引导让步状语从句)