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陕西高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

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这是一份陕西高考英语写作分类训练：应用文，共15页。

应用文

1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack对中国倡导的德智体美劳“五育教育”中的美育很感兴趣，请你写一封电子邮件向他做一介绍。内容包括：

1. 你对美育的理解；

2. 你校美育开展情况；

3. 欢迎他来你校实地考察。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文的开头已为你写好。

3. 参考词汇：美育：aesthetic education 实地考察：on-site inspection

Dear Jack,

Nice to receive your email. Here let me give you a brief introduction to the aesthetic education in our school.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．你校英文网站“生活”专栏正在举行征文活动，主题是“Looking good，feeling good”。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.外表与健康哪个更重要；

2.青少年正确的审美观。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Looking good, feeling good

3．假定你是李华，你班英国交换生Peter回国前送了你一本英语写作指南作为留念。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：

1.表达思念；2.阅读收获；3.表示感激。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans，内容包括：

1. 交流的目的;

2. 告知相关事宜;

3. 征求意见。

部分“传统体育项目”名称(可选用)：

archery射箭; martial arts 武术; wrestling 摔跤; dragon boat races 赛龙舟; dragon dancing 舞龙; lion dancing 舞狮

注意：1. 词数100左右;2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Hans,

Yours

Li Hua

5．为了丰富学生的校园生活，你校近期开展了精彩纷呈的课外活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1. 活动的内容；

2. 活动的反响。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

6．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友William给你发电子邮件，询问你的春节假期过得怎么样。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1．介绍你的春节假期情况;

2．询问他澳大利亚的特色节日。

注意：

1．词数100左右;

2．开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear William,

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter发来邮件，想了解中国的茶文化常识。现在请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1. 中国茶文化简介；

2. 饮茶的好处。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

8．你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 活动当天的天气情况；

2. 比赛的过程与结果；

3. 你的感受。

注意：1. 短文长度100词左右；

2. 标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。

A Hill-climbing Competition

In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.

9．假定你是李华，日前参加了某国际中学生生存训练营，请你用英语为闭幕式写一篇发言稿，要点包括：

1.简述过程;

2.你的收获;

3.感谢组织者。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．在2020东京奥运会 (the 2020 Tokyo Olympics)上，中国运动健儿取得了优异的成绩。某中学生英文报社面向中学生征稿，请你谈谈你的心得体会。内容包括：

1. 运动健儿取得优异成绩的原因；

2. 你的感想。

注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数：不少于100词。

1．Dear Jack,

Nice to receive your email. Here let me give you a brief introduction to the aesthetic education in our school. In my opinion, aesthetic education means the education to cultivate students’ ability to recognize, love, and create beauty, which plays a great role in our school education. It can enrich the cultural and spiritual life of schools, stimulate students’ emotional experiences, help cultivate noble sentiments, improve socialist consciousness, and inspire students to strive for the realization of communist ideals and the creation of all beautiful things. In our daily life, our school often arranges students to go to nature so that they can fully experience the beauty of reality and art and cultivate their correct views on social beauty and their ability to feel it.

Welcome to have an on-site inspection.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Jack介绍中国倡导的德智体美劳“五育教育”中的美育。

【详解】1.词汇积累

培养：cultivate→develop

辨别：recognize→identify

角色：role→part

激励：stimulate→motivate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It can enrich the cultural and spiritual life of schools, stimulate students’ emotional experiences, help cultivate noble sentiments, improve socialist consciousness, and inspire students to strive for the realization of communist ideals and the creation of all beautiful things.

拓展句：It can enrich the cultural and spiritual life of schools, stimulate students’ emotional experiences, help cultivate noble sentiments, improve socialist consciousness, and inspire students to strive for the realization of communist ideals and the creation of all beautiful things, which can have an influence on students.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, aesthetic education means the education to cultivate students’ ability to recognize, love, and create beauty, which plays a great role in our school education. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】In our daily life, our school often arranges students to go to nature so that they can fully experience the beauty of reality and art and cultivate their correct views on social beauty and their ability to feel it.（运用了so that引导的结果状语从句）

2．范文

Looking good, feeling good

When it comes to the question which is more important, looking good or feeling good, my answer is that feeling good outweighs looking good.

Feeling good means having good physical and mental health, being happy, and having a positive outlook on life. For teenagers, for one thing, it can improve our confidence and self-esteem, and we can radiate positivity and happiness to those around us. For another thing, it is obvious that the combination of ambition and faith serves as another source of beauty.

In conclusion, while looking good matters, feeling good should always be our top choice. Only by pursuing feeling good rather than looking good can a teenager grasp the true meaning of beauty.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文网站“生活”专栏正在举行征文活动，主题是“Looking good，feeling good”。请你写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

积极的：positive→optimistic

担任：serve as→work as

重要的：important→vital

总之：in conclusion→in a word

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：For teenagers, for one thing, it can improve our confidence and self-esteem, and we can radiate positivity and happiness to those around us.

拓展句：For teenagers, for one thing, not only can it improve our confidence and self-esteem, but also we can radiate positivity and happiness to those around us.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When it comes to the question which is more important, looking good or feeling good, my answer is that feeling good outweighs looking good. (运用了that引导表语从句)

[高分句型2] For another thing, it is obvious that the combination of ambition and faith serves as another source of beauty. (运用了it作形式主语句型)

3．Dear Peter,

Is everything going well? It’s three months since you returned to England. I miss you very much.

The English Writing Guide you gave me is very beneficial to my English study. It contains abundant materials that I need most, which greatly broaden my horizons. Now I have become more interested in English and have improved a lot in expressing myself in oral and written English. Thanks to your kindness and consideration, I’ve made rapid progress in English study. I owe all my achievements to you.

I’m looking forward to meeting you again!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给回国的英国交换生Peter写一封电子邮件。向Peter表达思念和感激之情，并谈一谈阅读收获。

【详解】1.词汇积累

返回：return→go back

大量的：abundant→plentiful

开阔视野：broaden my horizons→expand my horizons

由于：thanks to→owing to

2.句式拓展

陈述句变倒装句

原句：Now I have become more interested in English and have improved a lot in expressing myself in oral and written English.

拓展句：Now not only have I become more interested in English, but also have improved a lot in expressing myself in oral and written English.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s three months since you returned to England.（运用了since引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】It contains abundant materials that I need most, which greatly broaden my horizons.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Hans,

I’m Li Hua. I’m so excited about our upcoming virtual lesson to introduce Traditional Sports Events. On behalf of my class, I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.

The lesson will serve as a channel for students to realize traditional sports are not only the essence of a culture but also the pride of a country. So for our part, we are considering introducing several typical sports activities, including martial arts, dragon boat races and so on. To achieve the best effect, interactive forms, such as presentations and live shows, will be adopted. As for the time and way, we’d like to have the lesson scheduled between April 3 and April 7, lasting 3 hours through an online conference application.

Does our proposal work well on your side? Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans，介绍交流的目的，告知相关事宜，征求意见。

【详解】1.词汇积累

代表：on behalf of→represent

提出：propose→put forward

考虑：consider→take into consideration

安排：schedule→arrange

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The lesson will serve as a channel for students to realize traditional sports are not only the essence of a culture but also the pride of a country.

拓展句：The lesson will serve as a channel through which students realize traditional sports are not only the essence of a culture but also the pride of a country.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The lesson will serve as a channel for students to realize traditional sports are not only the essence of a culture but also the pride of a country.（运用了不定式作后置定语和省略了that的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】 we’d like to have the lesson scheduled between April 3 and April 7, lasting 3 hours through an online conference application.（运用了过去分词作宾语补足语，现在分词作状语）

5．Students are under a lot of pressure as the midterms approach. To relieve stress and enrich campus life, our school held a variety of after-school activities. Everyone got involved in their favourite events after school. They played rope skipping, basketball, football, and other sports. Also, all kinds of shows were available at the student center, where they could learn about traditional Chinese culture. Furthermore, students could choose a school club to sharpen relevant skills.

As everyone was absorbed in these happy moments, these activities were of great benefit to all students, both physically and mentally. They anticipated more such activities in the coming days.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校近期开展的课外活动写一篇报道，内容包括：活动的内容和活动的反响。

【详解】1.词汇积累

临近：approach→ draw near

各种各样的：a variety of→ various

此外：furthermore→ additionally

大有好处：be of benefit→ be beneficial

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Everyone got involved in their favourite events after school. They played rope skipping, basketball, football, and other sports.

拓展句：Everyone got involved in their favourite events afterlschool, which includes rope skipping, basketball, football, and other sports.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To relieve stress and enrich campus life, our school held a variety of after-school activities.（运用了动词不定式作状语）

【高分句型2】Also, all kinds of shows were available at the student center, where they could learn about traditional Chinese culture.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）

6．Dear William,

How is it going? I am more than glad to have received your e-mail during the Chinese Spring Festival, which is one of the best wishes I’ve ever got. Now I will introduce something about my holiday.

As everyone knows, we Chinese students always have a long holiday to observe the Spring Festival. I took part in varieties of activities to celebrate the special holiday, such as enjoying lanterns and temple fairs. The festive atmosphere was so strong and hard to resist that I didn’t want to get back. It’s a pity that you couldn’t feel it in the flesh. By the way, would you please introduce some special festivals in your hometown to me?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚笔友William回电子邮件，告诉他你春节假期的情况，并询问澳大利亚的特色节日。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→pleased

庆祝：observe→celebrate

亲自：in the flesh→in person

参加：take part in→participate in

2.句式拓展

改为it作形式主语的主从复合句

原句：As everyone knows, we Chinese students always have a long holiday to observe the Spring Festival.

拓展句：It is known that we Chinese students always have a long holiday to observe the Spring Festival.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am more than glad to have received your e-mail during the Chinese Spring Festival, which is one of the best wishes I’ve ever got.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，先行词后the best wishes为省略了引导词that的定语从句）

【高分句型2】The festive atmosphere was so strong and hard to resist that I didn’t want to get back.（运用了so…that引导结果状语从句）

【高分句型3】It’s a pity that you couldn’t feel it in the flesh.（运用了that引导主语从句）

7．Dear Peter,

I’m very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese tea culture and I’m very happy to share something about it in reply to your last e-mail.

Chinese tea culture dates back to more than 4,000 years ago and drinking tea has gradually become an amazing tradition. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. What’s more, whenever friends or guests visit, it is necessary to make and serve tea to them.

I hope you have got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself? You will fall in love with it.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter写一封信介绍中国的茶文化。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

极好的：amazing→wonderful

相信：believe→be convinced

此外：what’s more→in addition

2.句式拓展

并列句变复合句

原句：Chinese tea culture dates back to more than 4,000 years ago and drinking tea has gradually become an amazing tradition.

拓展句：Chinese tea culture dates back to more than 4,000 years ago, since when drinking tea has gradually become an amazing tradition.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese tea culture and I’m very happy to share something about it in reply to your last e-mail.（运用了that引导宾语从句和and连接并列句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, whenever friends or guests visit, it is necessary to make and serve tea to them.（运用了whenever引导时间状语从句）

8．A Hill-climbing Competition

In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.

It was a sunny day. All students with joy gathered on the school gate first. Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. All the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up-ward. It was at about 10: 00 that we all reached the top of the hill. The top three students come from class one, four, and nine.

Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship.

【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份，为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文，向学校的英文报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

开心：joy→happiness

出发：set off→depart

失望的：disappointed→regretful

获得：receive→obtain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.

拓展句：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)

9．One possible version:

Dear friends,

I am honored to deliver a speech on the closing ceremony.

I had made full preparations for this camp before coming here. However, I still experienced some unexpected challenges, such as the difficulty in making myself understood and dealing with culture shock. With great patience, the organizers helped me out. Not only did I improve my oral English, but I learned a lot of survival skills. Most importantly. I have become more confident. So now I would like to express my thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp.

Thank you for listening.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为日前参加的某国际中学生生存训练营用英语写一篇闭幕式发言稿，简述训练过程以及活动的收获，并对组织者表示感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发表演讲：deliver a speech →make a speech

困难：difficulty →hardness

处理：deal with →cope with

表达：express → convey

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I am honored to deliver a speech on the closing ceremony.

拓展句：It’s an honor for me to deliver a speech on the closing ceremony..

【点睛】【高分句型1】However, I still experienced some unexpected challenges, such as the difficulty in making myself understood and dealing with culture shock.（运用了动名词作宾语）

【高分句型2】Not only did I improve my oral English, but I learned a lot of survival skills.（运用了倒装句）

10． Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world. We Chinese people are all proud of them.

As is known to us all, there are many hardships behind success. The Chinese athletes have been training hard all year round and overcome difficulty after difficulty. I think it is their diligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for our motherland.

As a student, I’ll follow their example, work hard to improve my study and try to make contributions to our country in the future.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中学生英文报社投稿，谈谈对中国运动健儿在2020东京奥运会上取得优异成绩的心得体会。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

优秀的：excellent→outstanding

为……感到自豪：be proud of→take pride in

克服：overcome→get over

为……作贡献：make contributions to→contribute to

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world.

拓展句：Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, leaving a great impression on the whole world.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I think it is their diligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for our motherland.（运用了强调句型）