河北高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份河北高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假设你是李华，假如你是李华，在英国某中学就读，第二节等内容，欢迎下载使用。
申请信1．假设你是李华。你在居住的小区看到一则启示：随着新型冠状病毒疫情的发展，小区正在招募社区志愿者，请你写一封申请信，申请加入社区的志愿者工作。要求：1. 乐于助人。2. 善于交流。3. 知道一些基础防护措施。注意: 1.字数在80-100词左右。2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。提示词：新型冠状病毒：2019-nCoV；基础防护措施：measures of protectionDear Sir/madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，你校的广播站正在招收英文编辑（editor），你对此很感兴趣。请给校相关负责人Chris写封邮件申请该职位。内容包括：1. 写邮件目的；2. 陈述个人优势；3. 表达期望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李华，在英国某中学就读。你校准备举办以”多彩世界文化”为主题的活动周。请给学生会主席Tom写封信，申请成为志愿者。信的内容如下:1.个人优势:英语、性格等;2.参加目的:1): 宣传中国、了解世界;2)锻炼自我。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Tom,I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，得知2019青少年模拟联合国大会（ Model United Nations）现面向高中生征集志愿者，请根据要求写一封申请信。要求如下：1. 组织能力、沟通能力强；2. 英语基础好；3. 有责任感，对国际事务怀有热情。注意：80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，你校将要接待一个英国中学生交流团，现在正招聘志愿者，请根据 以下题示写信应聘，内容包括:1. 英语表达能力；  2.相关经验；   3. 应聘目的。注意:1.词数100左右；  2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，一名高中生，你校校园网需要招收英文网络编辑（the Web editor），请根据以下提示，用英语向外教主编Chris申请这一职位。1.关心时事(current affairs)，对新闻工作(journalism)感兴趣；2.有做校刊记者的工作经历；3.擅长英语，曾获英语写作大赛一等奖；注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Chris,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，你对《纽约时报》(New York Times)上一则某外语培训中心招聘中文教师的广告非常感兴趣，请你给该培训中心写一封自荐信。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:雇用，聘任hire申请:apply for普通话:Mandarin外语培训中心:Foreign Language Learning CenterDear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．第二节：书面表达61. 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope SchoolDear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two._______________________________________________________________________________­_______________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua9．假如你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在张家口举办一个以滑雪为主题的冬令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封邮件申请参加，内容须包括：1.自我介绍（包括英语能力，兴趣爱好等）2.参加意图（介绍中国，了解其他国家）3.希望获准。要求：1. 词数100词左右；2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，2020年奥运会将要在日本东京举办，现在正在全球招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据以下要点提示用英语给组委会写一封申请信。要点提示：1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历（高中）；2.个人条件：英语好、爱好运动、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉当地情况；3.承诺：提供最佳服务。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Dear Sir./Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to apply to work as a volunteer for the Tokyo Olympic Games._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua            1．Dear Sir/madam,I'm Li Hua.In my community, I saw an inspiration: with the development of novel coronavirus outbreak, the community is recruiting community volunteers.I want to apply for volunteer work in the community.Firstly, I am loving and helpful.Secondly, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others.Last but not least, I know some basic precautions that will go a long way in getting the job done.In short, I meet all the requirements of volunteer work, and I really want to help control the epidemic.I sincerely hope that my dream will come true.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信：假设你是李华。你在居住的小区看到一则启示：随着新型冠状病毒疫情的发展，小区正在招募社区志愿者，请你写一封申请信，申请加入社区的志愿者工作。要求：1. 乐于助人。2. 善于交流。3. 知道一些基础防护措施。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：with the development of（随着……的发展）；novel coronavirus outbreak（新冠状病毒爆发）；recruiting community volunteers（招募社区志愿者）；good at communicating with others（善于与人沟通）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I want to apply for volunteer work in the community.句中动词不定式作宾语；I know some basic precautions that will go a long way in getting the job done.定语从句用在句中；I sincerely hope that my dream will come true.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；另外，Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least, In short,等的运用为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Chris,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I happened to see the advertisement that our broadcasting station is looking for an English editor. I’m writing to apply for this position.First of all, I’m confident that I’m qualified. I am so keen on the events of our school that I will update the news regularly. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I have no difficulty in editing articles in English. Furthermore, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better..If chosen, I’ll be devoted to the job. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求以李华的身份写一封申请邮件。【详解】根据所提供材料，我们可以从以下几步来完成此书面表达。第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封申请信：假定你是李华，你校的广播站正在招收英文编辑（editor），你对此很感兴趣。请给校相关负责人Chris写封邮件申请该职位。内容包括：1. 写邮件目的；2. 陈述个人优势；3. 表达期望。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：see the advertisement that our broadcasting station is looking for an English editor.（看到广播站正在招收英文编辑的广告）；have a good command of English（有良好的英语能力）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。如名词性从句的使用：I happened to see the advertisement that our broadcasting station is looking for an English editor. 定语从句的使用：Furthermore, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.3．Dear David,I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.I am eager to be a member of it.To begin with, as an outgoing boy, I am good at communicating with others. Secondly, I can speak fluent English and express myself clearly. What’s more，through the activity, not only can I make more friends but build up my character. I think it’s my duty to be able to introduce China to other friends and my honor to understand other cultures at the same time. Hopefully, I can take part in the activity.Looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作，要求考生写一封书信，在信中写明：成为志愿者的个人优势：英语、性格等；参加“多彩世界文化”活动周目的1)宣传中国、了解世界；2)锻炼自我。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文——书信。要点：1.想做“多彩世界文化”活动周的志愿者；2.成为志愿者的个人优势：英语、性格等；3.参加“多彩世界文化”活动周目的：宣传中国、了解世界；锻炼自我。结构：总分总。第二步：列提纲一、框架1、信件一开始就开宗明义，说明知道学校的“多彩世界文化”活动周就要开始了，想当活动的志愿者。2、详细谈成为志愿者的优势：1）性格外向，善于和人交流；2）英语水平较高，口语流利；。3、参加“多彩世界文化”活动周的目的：1）宣传中国，2）了解世界，3）交朋友，锻炼自己。4、总结：希望能够成为志愿者。二、段落主题句The activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.I hope to be a member of it.I have many advantages .I want to make more friends and build up my character. I am able to introduce China to other friends and understand other cultures . I can take part in the activity.第三步：展开用说明法将主题句展开。第四步： 润色修改【点睛】范文格式正确，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了很多的语法结构和词汇：倒装句：What’s more，through the activity, not only can I make more friends but build up my character.，宾语从句：I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.，非谓语动词：To begin with, as an outgoing boy, I am good at communicating with others.和I am eager to be a member of it.等，这篇范文的另一亮点是：句子间的承接词，Secondly，What’s more，它们的使用使整篇文章的层次分明，条理清晰，结构流畅。形式主语I think it’s my duty to be able to introduce China to other friends and my honor to understand other cultures at the same time.的应用使句法结构具有变化，介词短语as an outgoing boy, through the activity等的使用也给文章增色，完全达到了预期的写作目的。4．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in Model United Nations.Being monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer and improves my communication skills. Having been learning English for years, I hope I can get the job to put it into practice. Besides, I’m responsible and enthusiastic about international affairs, which will help me cooperate well in a team.I’d appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，按照要求写一封申请信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。假定你是李华，得知2019青少年模拟联合国大会（ Model United Nations）现面向高中生征集志愿者，请根据要求写一封申请信。要求如下：1. 组织能力、沟通能力强；2. 英语基础好；3. 有责任感，对国际事务怀有热情。人称为第一人称。时态以一般现在时为主。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，点明写信的目的。第二段，文章的三大要点。第三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: responsible负责的；enthusiastic热心的；cooperate合作；apply to do申请；put… into practice把…付诸实践等。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接；注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了一些亮点短语：responsible；enthusiastic；cooperate；apply to do；put… into practice；look forward to等。以及一些较为高级的句式: Being monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer and improves my communication skills.使用了动名词做主语；Having been learning English for years, I hope I can get the job to put it into practice.使用了现在分词作状语；I’m responsible and enthusiastic about international affairs, which will help me cooperate well in a team.使用了非限制性定语从句。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。5．Dear Sir/Madam,I’ve learned that a team of students from England will visit our school and you are looking for volunteers to receive them. I feel excited to write you for the job. To be honest, I can talk in English fluently. I have just won first prize in the Spoken English Contest, so there is no doubt that I have any problem communicating with them. What’s more, I’ve got some experience of serving foreigners. In order to practice my speaking skills and get more experience, I’m eager to be accepted. If you take my request into consideration, I’ll be more than grateful and happy.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一封应聘信。题干中给出了写作时需要涵盖的三个要点，但是每个要点还需要同学们根据自己的学习及生活经验适当发挥。【详解】第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。这封信主要是你作为李华，申请英国中学生交流团的志愿者，所以时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）looking for volunteers to do sth.（寻找志愿者做某事）；feel excited to do sth.（很激动做某事）； the Spoken English Contest（英语演讲比赛）；there is no doubt…（毫无疑问……）；have…problem (in) doing sth.（在……方面有问题）；some experience of serving foreigners（服务外国人的经验）；eager to do sth.（渴望做某事）；take… into consideration（考虑……）等。第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了that引导的宾语从句与and引导的并列句；第四句使用了so引导的并列句；第七句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。此外本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如looking for volunteers to receive them；feel excited to write you for the job；the Spoken English Contest；there is no doubt that…；have any problem communicating with them；some experience of serving foreigners；eager to be accepted；take my request into consideration等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。6．Dear Chris:I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I happened to see the advertisement that our website is looking for an English editor. I’m writing to apply for this position.First of all, not only am I enthusiastic about current affairs, but also I take great interest in journalism. So I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. What’s more, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better. More importantly, I have a good command of English. I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school.In conclusion, I’m convinced that I am qualified for the job. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的求职信，要求考生把自己当成高中生李华，用英语写一封信，向外教主编Chris申请校园网中的英文网络编辑的职位。【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封求职信，要求考生用英语向外教主编Chris申请校园网中的英文网络编辑的职位。全文以一般现在时时和第一人称为主。第2步：组织要点。1.关心时事(current affairs)，对新闻工作(journalism)感兴趣；2.有做校刊记者的工作经历；3.擅长英语，曾获英语写作大赛一等奖；第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句。本文关键词为look for an English editor、apply for this position、take great interest in journalism、work as a reporter for our school newspaper、have a good command of English、get the first prize in the English Writing Competition等。写作时注意求职信的格式和惯用语。第4步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如first of all、what’s more、in conclusion 等；同时书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容涵盖了所有的要点，使用了较多的高级词汇，如：apply for this position、take great interest in journalism、have a good command of English；同时也使用了较多的高级句式。如部分倒装句not only am I enthusiastic about current affairs.非限制性定语从句I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.同位语从句I happened to see the advertisement that our website is looking for an English editor.7．Dear Sir or Madam,In answer to your advertisement in the “New York Times”, I would like to apply for the position of Chinese teacher in your Foreign Language Learning Center.Initially, as a native speaker, I can speak standard Mandarin. Meanwhile, I also have a good command of English, for I have been learning English for so many years. Moreover, I like being a teacher, having previous experience of English teaching working in a language training center. Last but not least, I’m outgoing and warm-hearted and can easily make friends with others, which is extremely essential to become an excellent teacher.Once hired, I would be very happy and I would devote myself to the job. Your consideration about my application would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你对《纽约时报》上一则某外语培训中心招聘中文教师的广告非常感兴趣，请你给该培训中心写一封自荐信。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如： New York Times（《纽约时报》）； hire（雇用，聘任）；apply for（申请）；Mandarin（普通话）；Foreign Language Learning Center（外语培训中心）；native speaker（以说普通话为母语的人）；outgoing and warm-hearted （外向且热心）；devote oneself to…（全身心投入…）第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。如：I’m outgoing and warm-hearted and can easily make friends with others, which is extremely essential to become an excellent teacher. 运用了非限定性定语从句修饰前面整个句子，进一步修饰补充，不仅完善了细节，也做到了高级句式的灵活转换运用。Your consideration about my application would be highly appreciated.运用抽象名词做主语，不仅更符合英语地道的表达，也做到了句式多样化，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。8．Dear Sir or Madam，       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．       I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．       My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，Li Hua【分析】本文是书信类作文。【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： As far as I am concerned据我所知，be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句， My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。9．Dear Sir or Madam,I ‘m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have read the announcement of the winter camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What’s more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your winter camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在张家口举办一个以滑雪为主题的冬令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封邮件申请参加。本文要点均已给出，总体难度不大。【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，要求考生给国际中学生组织写信，申请参加这个以滑雪为主题的冬令营。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第2步：组织要点。1.自我介绍（包括英语能力，兴趣爱好等）；2.参加意图（介绍中国，了解其他国家）；3.希望获准。第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为be interested in、take part in 、speak fluent English、tell students from other countries about China等；写作时要注意电子邮件的格式及惯用语。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰，时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，让整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如be interested in、take part in 、speak fluent English等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句J I have read the announcement of the winter camp that you have posted on the Internet；同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如what’s more等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。10．Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to apply to work as a volunteer for the Tokyo Olympic Games.I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I am good at English and I can communicate with foreign tourists in English fluently.I believe I can do a good job in the Games. First, I like sports and I know the place very well. Second, I get along well with others, which is especially important for a volunteer. Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李华名义用英语给组委会写一封申请信。【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求是假定你是李华，2020年奥运会将要在日本东京举办，现在正在全球招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据以下要点提示用英语给组委会写一封申请信。要点提示：1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历（高中）；2.个人条件：英语好、爱好运动、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉当地情况；3.承诺：提供最佳服务。其次选用正确的时态，然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一简较好的范文。这简短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：communicate with，get along well with，look forward to。还使用了定语从句Second, I get along well with others, which is especially important for a volunteer.和名词性从句Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。