河北高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份河北高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共15页。试卷主要包含了进入大学后的设想，书面表达等内容，欢迎下载使用。
申请信1．假定你是高三学生李华，从网上获悉某国际青少年志愿者组织正在全球招募暑期志愿者。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。主要内容如下：1.写信目的；2.自我介绍；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数l00左右；2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With all my best regards.Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假设你是李华，一名高三学生，在网络上看到一所国外大学的招生信息 (admission information)，该大学对中国学生开设30多个专业，你对此非常感兴趣，打算用英语撰写一份个人申请，主要内容包括：1．想申请的专业；2．个人优势；3．进入大学后的设想。注意：1.词数：100左右；2．书信格式已给出；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely，Li Hua3．世界动物保护协会（World Society for the Protection of Animals）正面向全球招募中学生志愿者。假设你是新华中学高三学生李华，有意参加该组织。请根据以下内容要点，用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信。内容要点：★简要自我介绍；★申请的理由（热爱动物、参加过保护动物的社会实践活动等）；★你的打算。注意：1. 词数100左右。书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 请在答题卡上做答。Dear Sir or Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua4．阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。EIL International English Summer CampVolunteer Wanted EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”.Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travelCampers: Students from different countriesCamp site: Mount Wuyi, FujianTime: July 26-August 9Application deadline: July 15. 2008 If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org [写作内容]假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要求如下：对夏令营主题的理解；根据招聘要求自我介绍；参加夏令营的目的。注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数100左右。Dear sir,I’m Li Hua from Fujian. I am looking forward to your early reply.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua5．书面表达假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。6．假如你是李华，你在网上看到你所在城市的一个英语培训中心拟招收暑期助教，请根据以下要点写一封英语申请信。内容包括：1.申请原因；2.自我优势（口语能力，组织能力，沟通能力）；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：助教 teaching assistantDear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，你准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学，需要填写 UCAS(Universities and Colleges Admissions Service) 申请材料。请按照提示完成你的个人自荐信息。1告知你选择的专业并说明理由；2介绍自己的业余爱好及特长。注意：词数100左右。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir／Madam，After careful consideration and investigation,       Yours sincerely,Li Hua8．假如你是一名高中生李华，你校校园网需要招收英文网络编辑（web editor），请根据以下提示，用英语向外籍主编Chris申请这一职位。1. 关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；2. 有做校刊记者的工作经历；3. 擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．书面表达假定你是李华，中国青年志愿者网（China Youth Volunteers/CYV）计划在6月30日前向全国各大院校及社会各界招募1000名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自我推荐信。要点如下：1. 个人情况：年龄：18； 性别：男； 出身医学世家。2. 个人优势：掌握基本急救知识，有救援经验，身体素质好。3. 目的：帮助有需要的人；回报社会。注意：可以适当增加细节使文章连贯。词数：100左右。Dear Sir/Madam,_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________  Yours truly,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中的一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：个人情况：年龄，性别，学历个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：120词左右生词：申请 apply (v.) application (n.) 志愿者 volunteerDear sir/madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua            1．Planning Is Good. But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.     I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【详解】试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语apply for申请；in one’s opinion在某人看来；contribute to有助于；look forward to 盼望着；In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.这个句子运用到部分倒装；In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.这个句子运用到in which引导的定语从句；考点： 提纲类作文2．Dear_Sir_or_Madam，I have recently noticed the admission information of your university on the Internet.I'm writing to apply for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students.For one thing，I do well in English and it will be easy for me to complete the courses in your university.For another，I have been the monitor during my school years，which has promoted my organizing ability.Having organized a few school activities successfully，I'm determined to be a manager as my dream job.Therefore，my plan is to join the Students' Union and participate in some meaningful social activities to learn some advanced management experience.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours_Sincerely，Li_Hua【详解】试题分析：本篇文章要求写一篇个人申请，根据提示信息来写。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。for one thing, for another的使用是文章层次分明，一目了然。which has promoted my organizing ability.非限制性定语从句，又给文章增加了亮点。本文还使用了大量短语，如do well in擅长于，determined to do决定做某事。连词therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。考点：考查提纲作文3．Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. I'm a Senior 3 student at Xinhua High School. And I am eager to join your organization and I will try my best to call on others to protect animals.I think I am qualified for the job, because I like animals very much and I have been calling on people around me to show mercy to animals. If I have the opportunity to work with you, I will do everything I can to raise people’s awareness of animal protection such as making speeches in my school and posting on the Internet. I strongly hope I can join your organization and make a great contribution to animals. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给正面向全球招募中学生志愿者的世界动物保护协会写一封申请信，申请参加该组织。【详解】1.词汇积累渴望做某事：desire to do sth.→be eager to do sth.尽力做某事：do one’s utmost to do sth.→try one’s best to do sth.号召：appeal to→call on机会：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：My name is Li Hua. I'm a Senior 3 student at Xinhua High School. And I am eager to join your organization and I will try my best to call on others to protect animals.拓展句：My name is Li Hua, a Senior 3 student at Xinhua High School, who is eager to join your organization and will try his best to call on others to protect animals.【点睛】【高分句型1】If I have the opportunity to work with you, I will do everything I can to raise people’s awareness of animal protection such as making speeches in my school and posting on the Internet. (运用了If引导的条件状语从句和省略that引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】I strongly hope I can join your organization and make a great contribution to animals. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)4．Dear sir,I’m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua【详解】本文是申请信，根据夏令营的详细内容及招聘的具体要求，详细说明自己的具体情况及兴趣爱好，以此表达清楚自己的原因。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, 形式宾语I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. 形式主语It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. 使用了一些固定词组，如For one thing, For another thing,等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply.  And I’d be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。6．Dear Sir/Madam，I'm glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I'm writing to apply for the position.In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself. Devoted to learning English for years, I think I'm equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English. Besides, being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer, which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently. Most importantly, many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent”, and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperating well in a team.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】考查提纲类作文。【详解】本文要求考生以李华的身份申请成为某一英语培训中心暑期助教。本文的要点均已经给出，要点有3点，但考生不要逐句翻译，要使用考生自己熟悉的句式和短语，文章使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。本文要点完整，结构合理，写作技巧娴熟，能熟练地运用多种加分技能。   【点睛】本文要点完整，结构合理，写作技巧娴熟，能熟练地运用多种加分技能。文章中广泛使用多个高级词汇，如apply for，seize this opportunity，be devoted to，be  equal to…，be capable of，contribute to…等；运用了顺序连接词如Besides等，同时文章中还使用了较多的高级语法结构。本文中大量使用非谓语，文中的非谓语做状语有三处：Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position；In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize to…。和Devoted to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English. 非谓语做主语being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organize。以及并列句：Most importantly, many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent”, and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperating well in a team此外，复合句运用的也很多，如定语从句.... which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently；代词it的在复合句中的特殊用法I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．这些技巧的使用让文章加分不少。7．One possible version:Dear Sir／Madam，After careful consideration and investigation, I think your college is an ideal place for my college education, where I want to major in English literature. I’m obsessed with English literature due to its long history and a long list of world-famous writers. I’m sure I can get along well with it because English is my favourite subject in high school, which will be helpful for my further study in college.As to hobbies, I’m a keen basketball fan and I play a lot of it at school. What’s more, I’m crazy about rock music and my dream is to found a rock group. I hope my dream will come true in college.I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的2个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时说明情况，以第一人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。8．One possible version:Dear Chris,I’m writing to apply to be a web editor, which I saw advertised on our school website. I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. I’m good at English. Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school. In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：假如你是高中生李华。你校的校报急需一名英语编辑，要求应聘者关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；有做校刊记者的工作经历；擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子：I’m writing to apply to be a web editor, which I saw advertised on our school website.宾语从句；I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs 原因状语从句，In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better. 主语从句，apply to 申请，take great interest in对...有很大兴趣， due to 由于，be good at 擅长，got the first prize in得一等奖， In addition 除外，look forward to 期待做...考点：考查求职自荐信类的话题作文9．Dear Sir/Madam:My name is Li Hua, a boy at the age of 18. I feel honored to write to you and promote myself as a volunteer of CYV to get across the common sense of first aid. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors. What’s more, it is the abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the wounded that guarantees me to be of help, when it comes to tough situations. Last but not the least, I am in good condition, due to the constant exercises and body building. On the whole, I am qualified to be a volunteer. I hope to help out people in need and reward our society as soon as possible. Looking forwards to your earliest reply.  Yours truly,Li Hua【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。10．Dear sir/madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am an active boy of 22 years old,majoring at the English in PekingUniversity.Now I am in the grade of two.Except my studying time,I always take part in sports activities,such as football,basketball and so on.Besides,I can get along well with my classmates and friends,which I think will be helpful when I am doing my volunteer work.The last but not least,I am so familiar with the local situation that will be easier for me to finish my mission.I promise if I become the member of the volunteer team,I would offer the service of  the highest quality.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward for your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】申请信，首先要陈述写信夫人目的，提出申请；第二，简述自己的学历、背景及可能提供的能力范围，表示有能力进一步提供力所能的服务；第三，表示感激，希望得到回复。【亮点说明】这是一篇正式语体的申请信，第一段，提出申请；第二段简述自身情况及学历、背景，本段条理较清晰，besides，last but not least的使用使结构更加清晰，将要求一一列举，而且使用了多种句式和大量短语，比如非定语从句的使用Besides,I can get along well with my classmates and friends,which I think will be helpful when I am doing my volunteer work以及短语take part in、 get along well with、 am so familiar with ；结尾段表示感激，希望得到回复。考点：考查书信类短文写作。