河北高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份河北高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共17页。试卷主要包含了假设你是李华，打算明年出国留学等内容，欢迎下载使用。
申请信1．假定你是李华，今年10月你市将举办国际马拉松赛（International Marathon），目前正在招募志愿者。请用英语写封申请信，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结尾语已为你写好。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假设你是高中生李华，你校校园网招收英文网络编辑（web editor）,请根据以下提示，用英语向外籍主编Chris 申请这一职位。要点包括：1.关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；2.有做校刊记者的工作经历；3.擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Chris,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lihua3．假如你是来自英国的高三学生Tony, 爱好广泛，性格开朗，到中国某高中学习中文。该校流行音乐俱乐部正在招聘新成员，要求会某种乐器、嗓音好且有团队意识。你希望加入该俱乐部。请用英文写一篇申请信，要点如下。1.个人基本情况2.加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件3.自己的联系方式（电话:87654321；邮箱:tony303@hotmail.comDearSir/Madam，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Tony4．假如你是李华，现在是一名高中学生，在当地一份报纸上看到ABC公司一则招聘暑期兼职工作的广告。对此，你很有兴趣。按下列提纲写一篇应聘信。字数100-120字左右。1. 渴求工作的愿望2. 自身条件：2001年出生，明年高中毕业。3. 技能和经历：懂电脑有技术，英语口语水平较高，善于交往。4. 联系方式：电话13601869700，邮箱13601869700@.163.comNotes:1. 开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；2. 可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear sir/madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours trulyLi Hua5．假定你是李华，2018年冬奥会将要在韩国平昌举办，现在正在全球招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据以下要点提示用英语给组委会写一封申请信。要点提示：1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历（高中）2.个人条件：英语好、爱好运动、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉当地情况（有方向感）3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数），2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Sir./Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假定你是李华，邢台将要承办某一国际大型运动会，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按照要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：1.个人情况：高中生；2.个人条件：英语口语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉邢台；3.承诺：全心投入，提供最佳服务。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，你校学生会在全校招募志愿者，为即将在你校举行的国际教育论坛服务。请用英文写一封邮件申请参加。主要内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 希望获准。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With all my best regards.Yours sincerely,Li Hua8．假设你是李华，打算明年出国留学。请你根据以下要点提示，给你的美国笔友Lucy写一封电子邮件。1. 出国留学的打算（如在申请学位课程之前学习一年英语、住在寄宿家庭等）；2. 出国留学的原因；3. 期待与她见面。注意：1. 词数100 左右（开头已给，不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,How are you?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua9．假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；希望获准。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。Dear Sir or Madam,  _____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                                 Yours sincerely,                                                                                     Li Hua10．假设你是高中生李华，你校校园网招收英文网络编辑（web editor），请根据以下提示，用英语向外籍主编Chris申请这一职位。要点包括：1. 关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；2. 有做校刊记者的工作经历；3. 擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Chris,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua                 1．Dear Sir/Madam,Knowing from the newspaper that the International Marathon will be held in our city in October and that some volunteers are recruited,I am writing to apply for being a volunteer.Compared with others,I think that I have good reasons to recommend myself the following advantages.First,having learned English for more than ten years,I can communicate with native speakers fluently.Besides,I am not only familiar with our city but also willing to offer my service in my spare time.More importantly,I have some working experience as a volunteer,so I know how to get along well with foreign guests.I am sure I’ll be qualified to be a volunteer.I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。今年10月将举办国际马拉松赛，正在招募志愿者。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为国际马拉松志愿者。信中要介绍写信的目的；个人优势；以及希望获准。【详解】1.词汇积累招募：recruited→ needed首先：first→ first of all此外：besides → what’s more提供：give→ grant/offer2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Knowing from the newspaper that the International Marathon will be held in our city in October and that some volunteers are recruited, I am writing to apply for being a volunteer.拓展句：Because I know from the newspaper that the International Marathon will be held in our city in October and that some volunteers are recruited, I am writing to apply for being a volunteer.【点睛】【高分句型1】Compared with others, I think that I have good reasons to recommend myself the following advantages.（运用了过去分词作状语和that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】First, having learned English for more than ten years, I can communicate with native speakers fluently.（运用了现在分词作状语）2．Dear Chris,I’m writing to apply to be a web editor, which I saw advertised on our school website. I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. I’m good at English. Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school. In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求考生把自己当成李华，校园网要招收英文网络编辑（web editor）, 请考生用英语向外籍主编Chris写信申请这一职位。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。【详解】第1步：审题。本文是一封信，李华向外籍主编Chris写信申请英文网络编辑职位。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第2步：组织要点。1.关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；2.有做校刊记者的工作经历；3.擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为apply to be …、care about current affairs and take great interest in journalism、get the first prize in the English Writing Competition 等，写作时注意书信的格式和惯用语。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了图表中所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如current affairs、journalism、due to 等；也尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句which I saw advertised on our school website.同时文章运用了一些串联成分，如in addition等；这些串联成分把各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。3．Dear Sir/ Madam,I’m Tony, a senior 3 student from England. I have many interests, especially music. I am good at playing the guitar. I also love singing pop songs and people tell me my voice sounds beautiful. In addition, I have a strong team spirit. I want to improve my spoken Chinese by joining the club. When there is an activity, I will be more than happy to serve as the host, which, I believe, can strengthen will my skills and improve my abilities. What’s more, I believe that I can make many Chinese friends there.I would appreciate it if you could allow to join the club. Please e-mail me on tony303@hotmail.com or call me at 87654321.Yours sincerelyTony【分析】本文为应用说明文。根据所提供的材料信息，写一封申请信，申请加入校流行音乐俱乐部。写作要点：个人基本情况；加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件；自己的联系方式。写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。【详解】本文内容完整，文中运用了大量的高级词汇和高级句式。以单句为主，长短句相结合，复杂句与简单句相结合。复杂句中运用了定语从句，状语从句和宾语从句，同时还有常见句式和祈使句的运用，句式比较灵活。文章一开头用几个简单句介绍了自己的基本情况。接着用顺序连词In addition，…和What's more，…叙述加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件。本段中运用了许多高级词汇如“in addition（除…还），have a strong team spirit （有强烈的团队精神），join the club（参加俱乐部），serve as （充当，作为），strengthen one's skills （增强某人的技能），improve one's abilities（增强某人的能力）”。复杂句When there is an activity, I will be more than happy to serve as the host, which, I believe, can strengthen will my skills and improve my abilities.中含有一个由when引导的状语从句和由which引导的定语从句。宾语从句I believe that I can make many Chinese friends there.最后部分作一个高分句型I would appreciate it if you can allow me to join the club及一个祈使句交待了自己的联系方式：电话、邮箱等。文章流畅，一气呵成。4．Dear sir/madam,I am writing to you to show my keen interest in the part-time job during summer vacation in your company which you recently advertised in the local newspaper. I strongly believe I meet the qualification listed in your advertisement.I was born in June, 2001 and am going to graduate from school. I’m good at comnunicating with others and have the ability to use computer. Besides, I can speak English fluently and won the Oral English contest. I believe I am quite qualified for the position.I’m available for an interview anytime at your convenience. You can contact me at 13601869700 or email at 13601869700@163.Com for further information. Thanks for your favorable consideration.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours trulyLi Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封应聘暑期兼职工作的求职信。【详解】1.词汇积累此外：besides→ what’s more能力：ability→capacity相当：quite→rather职位：position→post2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I strongly believe I meet the qualification listed in your advertisement.拓展句：I strongly believe I meet the qualification that you listed in your advertisement.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to you to show my keen interest in the part-time job during summer vacation in your company which you recently advertised in the local newspaper.（使用了which引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】I strongly believe I meet the qualification listed in your advertisement.（使用了过去分词作定语）5．Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to apply to work as a volunteer for the winter Olympic Games. I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English fluently. I believe I can do a good job in the Games. First, I like sports and I know the place very well. Second, I get along well with others, which is especially useful for a volunteer. Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games. Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：考查半开放性短文写作。本文只是给出部分的文字提示，考生可以用身边某个人的具体的信息填入文字所要求的内容，需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【亮点说明】本文是一封申请信，给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。文章内容齐全，符合提示要求，语言简练，文中使用高级句子。I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English fluently.文中使用并列句；I believe I can do a good job in the Games.省略that的宾语从句；I get along well with others, which is especially useful for a volunteer. which引导非限制性定语从句；I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. Whenever引导时间状语从句；My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.动词不定式做目的状语。6．Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua. I hear the next International Games will be held in our city, and I’d like to work as a volunteer for the games.I am a Senior Two student from a key school of Xing Tai. I have such good spoken English that I can communicate fluently with foreigners. Besides, I am a sports fan and on fire for basketball. In my spare time, I always try some voluntary jobs to enrich my extracurricular life. Thankfully, all these experiences help to shape my characters to be out-going, ready to help and easy to get along with. As a Shang Rao local, I will spare no effort to be a good host and make it my responsibility to introduce my hometown to the visitors.I think I am well fit for serving the Games. If I am allowed to be a volunteer, I promise to fulfill my duty and do my part. Wish a success of the Games! Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。邢台将要承办某一国际大型运动会，现在正在招募志愿者，考生希望成为其中一员。请按照要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.个人情况：高中生；2.个人条件：英语口语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉邢台；3.承诺：全心投入，提供最佳服务。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）work as，communicate fluently with，on fire,in my spare time,shape my characters,get along with.spare no effort to do sth.第三步：连词成句1.I am a Senior Two student from a key school of Xing Tai. 2.I have such good spoken English that I can communicate fluently with foreigners.3. Besides, I am a sports fan and on fire for basketball. In my spare time, I always try some voluntary jobs to enrich my extracurricular life.4. Thankfully, all these experiences help to shape my characters to be out-going, ready to help and easy to get along with. As a Shang Rao local, I will spare no effort to be a good host and make it my responsibility to introduce my hometown to the visitors.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系： Besides 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] I have such good spoken English that I can communicate fluently with foreigners.such …that引导的结果状语从句。[高分句型2] If I am allowed to be a volunteer, I promise to fulfill my duty and do my part.if引导的条件状语从句。7．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to apply for the opportunity of being a volunteer you have advertised. In my opinion, voluntary work can not only help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also can help the visitors from all over the world to know better about our school.I am good at English. In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. Furthermore, my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. I’m looking forward to hearing from you in the future.With all my best regards.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封邮件。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.写信目的；2.自我介绍；3.希望获准。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: In my opinion依我看来，be good at擅长。还使用了定语从句In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。8．Dear Lucy,How are you？    I’ve decided to study abroad next year. Before applying for a degree course, I will first spend a year focusing on my English, which I think is beneficial to my further study. Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment, I’d like to live with a host family, which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture. As for the main reason why I want to study abroad, the academic benefits come first. Secondly, it will allow me to become independent while studying abroad, because I will have to do everything on my own. I am looking forward to seeing you then. And I hope you can give me some advice on what I should prepare in advance. Thank you!Yours sincerely, Li Hua【详解】此文为提纲类作文。人称可用第一人称，时态可用一般将来时和一般现在时结合。此文的要点有：1. 出国留学的打算（如在申请学位课程之前学习一年英语、住在寄宿家庭等）；2. 出国留学的原因；3. 期待与她见面。亮点分析：高级表达：applying for a degree course，focusing on， is beneficial to my further study，instead of living in student accommodation，live with a host family ，give me the chance to learn more about the new culture，academic benefits使用高级句式：I will first spend a year focusing on my English, which I think is beneficial to my further study.（非限定性定语从句）Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment, I’d like to live with a host family, which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture.（分词结构，非限定性定语从句）As for the main reason why I want to study abroad,（定语从句）it will allow me to become independent while studying abroad, because I will have to do everything on my own. （省略，原因状语从句）9．Dear sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I’d like to get this job.For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I’ve been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.Looking forward to your reply!                                                                              Yours sincerely,                                                                               Li Hua【详解】试题分析：    本文是写一封电子邮件，申请一个国际中学生家教组织面向中国招聘的兼职中文家教(tutor)。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。把提纲中的三点内容表述完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。【亮点说明】    1.使用高级句型：包含定语从句以及现在分词做伴随状语的句子I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language；现在完成进行时I’ve been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English.2.使用了过渡词语：Besides等。3.使用了重要短语：happened to恰巧；be interested in对…感兴趣；be excellent at擅长； look forward to期待。10．Dear Chris,I’m writing to apply to be a web editor, which I saw advertised on our school website. I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. I’m good at English. Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school. In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hu【详解】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【亮点说明】本文是一封求职信，要点齐全，结构合理，文中使用高级句子。which I saw advertised on our school website，这是非限制性的定语从句。运用了原因状语从句，because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism。连接词的使用也非常合理，如In addition。【名师点睛】书面表达写作步骤：书面表达一般分为三个过程：思维、组织、表达。先是思维，审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构，把要写的东西在脑中 思考，要对所给材料进行组织，把这些思维作出整理，使其条理、系统化，但这还是较粗糙的，可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误；最后才是表达，把组织过的材料仔细推敲，确定无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓一 致，时态呼应，用词贴切等。上述三个过程，最难的是第三个过程，需 要我们有较好的语法知识，掌握一定数量的句型，习惯用语，熟练的写作技巧，这样才能写 出通顺生动的文章来。总之，要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。平时要多分析范文，多读多背诵，学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感。考点：考查提纲类写作