广西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份广西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共20页。
建议信
1．假定你是李华，你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校”英语文化节”话剧(drama)比赛，请你给度假中的外教 Mr Hurst写一封电子邮件并附上节目排练录像(video of our rehearsal)，请他给予你相关的指导。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；   2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，得知你班英国交换生Jenny最近因学习压力大而情绪低落。请给她写一封 电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示关心；
2.提出缓解、释放压力的建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，计划在下个月与父母一起到伦敦旅游。请给你的英国笔友Martha写封邮件，内容包括：1. 旅游目的（体验不同文化，提高英语水平）；2. 请她介绍景点和风俗习惯等。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Martha,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．贵校英语话剧俱乐部即将排演英语话剧《百万英镑》，现面向全校同学征集活动方案的建议。假如你是李华，请你根据以下信息给英语话剧俱乐部提一些建议：
1. 建议选拔时间和地点：2020年6月28日；学校礼堂；
2. 建议选拔演员标准：
热爱戏剧表演，具有较好的英语口语表达能力，熟悉马克·吐温的小说《百万英镑》
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 参考词汇：礼堂auditorium；标准criteria；马克·吐温 Mark Twain
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike发来邮件，说因为新冠肺炎(COVID-19) 居家自我隔离(self-isolation)，情绪低落。为此，他向你寻求建议。请用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 你的看法和建议；
3. 表达信心。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华, 你的留学生朋友 Steven 打算在你市找一家中国餐馆庆祝生日｡为此, 他发邮件向你打听相关事宜｡请你用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝愿；
2. 推荐餐馆(地址､价格､菜肴等)；
3. 建议预订｡
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数｡
Dear Steven,
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Yours
Li Hua
7．最近有人建议缩短中小学暑期，增设 1—2 周春秋短假。假定你是李华，请给英国笔友 Jack 写一封邮件，了解英国有关情况，内容包括：
1. 建议内容；
2. 你的意见；
3. 询问英国是否有类似假期。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你得知你的朋友 Peter最近打算节食减肥。请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Otis对你校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛很感兴趣，但是他不知道是否该参加，因此给你写了一封邮件。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 建议参加；
2. 给出理由；
3. 表达期望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，你校交换生 George最近因为起床困难导致上课总是迟到，因此他写邮件来向你求助。请用英语给他回封邮件，给予他相应的建议，内容包括：
1. 养成早睡早起的习惯；
2. 适当地参加锻炼；
3. 要意识到按时上学的重要性。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua





1．Possible version 1:
Dear Mr. Hurst,
I am so sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation. I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice.
Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month, which is an important event in our school’s English Cultural Festival. With the attached video of our rehearsal, I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance. I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinions on our costumes, acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.
Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly. I hope you have a pleasant vacation despite my disturbing you.
Yours,
LiHua.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封请求指导建议信。你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校”英语文化节”话剧比赛，请你给度假中的外教 Mr Hurst写一封电子邮件并附上节目排练录像，请他给予你相关的指导。写作时首先进行道歉打扰外教度假，再说明写信目的，详细写出需要指导的内容，最后致谢。需侧重注意语气和词汇的选用。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分法
要求：
1. 词数100左右；   2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
disturb；on behalf of sb；Recently；prepare for；event；Drama Competition ；English Cultural Festival；attach；video of our rehearsal；guidance；appreciate；valued opinions；costumes；acting skills ；onstage light ；sound effects；adjustments。
第三步：连词成句
1. I am so sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation.
2. I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice.
3. Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month, which is an important event in our school’s English Cultural Festival.
4. I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance.
5. I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinions .
6. Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand…
4.表因果关系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表达流畅，使用了高级句式如：Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month, which is an important event in our school’s English Cultural Festival.这句话使用了which引导非限定性定语从句且主句部分的谓语使用了现在完成进行时；I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinions on our costumes, acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.这句话使用了if引导条件状语从句，为文章增加了亮点。同时运用较多的高档词汇，例如disturb；on behalf of sb；valued opinions；costumes；acting skills ；onstage light ；sound effects；adjustments等。范文内容符合题目要求，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范，是一篇值得参考的作文。
2．Dear Jenny,
I’m worried to learn that you are depressed because of the great pressure of recent study. Here are some tips for you to relieve it.
First of all, shift your focus. Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous. You should think about the progress you’ve made and build your self-confidence. Secondly, take some exercise. A saying goes that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Do some sports, and you'll feel relaxed all over. Last but not least, sleep well. Getting a good night's sleep, you'll be recharged and start over easily.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件给最近因学习压力大而情绪低落的英国交换生Jenny，关心她并给予意见。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表示关心；
2. 提出缓解、释放压力的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
because of；pay attention to；make progress；build one’s self-confidence；be helpful to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m worried to learn that you are depressed because of the great pressure of recent study.
2. Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous.
3. You should think about the progress you’ve made and build your self-confidence.
4. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如You should think about the progress you’ve made这句话中用了省略that/which引导的定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如pay attention to，make progress，build one’s self-confidence等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如First of all，Secondly和Last but not least。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．One possible version：
Dear Martha,
I have decided to visit London with my parents next month. I have always dreamed of having the opportunity to travel to London to experience different cultures. What’s more, I’m eager to improve my spoken English by communicating with native English speakers in person. Since I don’t know much about London, would you be kind enough to recommend some famous tourist attractions?
In order to better communicate with the local people and avoid embarrassment, I am in the hope that you can introduce some local customs, traditional food and shopping malls. Your advice will be key to the success of the trip. I’d appreciate it if you could give me such information.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给英国笔友写一封信，告诉她自己下个月要和父母一起去伦敦旅游及旅游目的，并请她介绍当地的景点和风俗习惯等。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一些句子需要用到现在完成时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式：第一段介绍自己的旅行计划和旅行目的；第二段请她介绍当地的景点和风俗习惯等；第三段表示期待收到她的回复。
要求：1. 向笔友介绍旅行计划
2. 向笔友介绍旅行目的
3. 请笔友介绍当地的景点和风俗习惯等
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
decide to do (决定做某事); dream of doing (梦想做某事); opportunity (机会); be eager to do (渴望做某事); communicate with sb. (与某人沟通); in person (亲自); recommend (推荐); in order to do (为了……); embarrassment (难堪); custom (习俗); appreciate (感激); look forward to (盼望)
第三步：连词成句
1. I have decided to visit London with my parents next month.
2. I have always dreamed of having the opportunity to travel to London to experience different cultures.
3. I’m eager to improve my spoken English by communicating with native English speakers in person.
4. Would you be kind enough to recommend some famous tourist attractions?
5. I am in the hope that you can introduce some local customs, traditional food and shopping malls.
6. I’d appreciate it if you could give me such information.
7. I’m looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more(本篇文章使用过); besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…;  some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
I’d appreciate it. 本句用来表达自己对笔友的感激。可以使用条件状语从句，再一次希望得到对方的建议并表达自己的感激之情。润色修改为：I’d appreciate it if you could give me such information.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：I’d appreciate it if you could give me such information.”，这句话为if引导的条件状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型，如：decide to do; be eager to do; look forward to等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇及短语，如opportunity; embarrassment; in person; appreciate等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
Having known that you are collecting suggestions on the selection for the drama the Million Pound Bank Note , I’m writing to offer some of my opinions, which are as follows.
To begin with, it is a good choice to hold the selection at the school auditorium on June 28, 2020, as teachers and students are available on Sunday. Besides, I strongly suggest that actors and actresses should meet the following criteria. Firstly, he or she should love dramatic performance. Secondly, he or she should have good English speaking skills. What's more, he or she should have read the short story written by Mark Twain and be familiar with the whole story.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信，给英语话剧俱乐部就即将排演英语话剧《百万英镑》提一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 建议选拔时间和地点：2020年6月28日；学校礼堂；
2. 建议选拔演员标准：热爱戏剧表演，具有较好的英语口语表达能力，熟悉马克·吐温的小说《百万英镑》。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
as follows；to begin with；at the school auditorium；meet the following criteria；dramatic performance；be familiar with；be helpful for
第三步：连词成句
1. Having known that you are collecting suggestions on the selection for the drama the Million Pound Bank Note, I’m writing to offer some of my opinions, which are as follows.
2. To begin with, it is a good choice to hold the selection at the school auditorium on June 28, 2020.
3. Besides, I strongly suggest that actors and actresses should meet the following criteria.
5. What's more, he or she should have read the short story written by Mark Twain and be familiar with the whole story.
6. Hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Having known that you are collecting suggestions on the selection for the drama the Million Pound Bank Note , I’m writing to offer some of my opinions, which are as follows.这句话运用了Having known that非谓语动词做伴随，且运用了定语从句，先行词为opinions，which在句中作主语引导从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Mike,
How is everything going with you?
It is quite understandable to feel down during such an increasingly challenging time. But staying at home is the best way to prevent you and your family from getting infected. Though self-isolation may at times be hard, it presents a perfect opportunity for you to slowdown, pause and reflect. In addition, you can set aside some regular time everyday to take exercise, which will help you cheer up and keep healthy.
I have strong belief that you and your country can get through the tough time and the good old days will return.
Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，帮助因为新冠肺炎居家自我隔离，情绪低落的英国朋友Mike。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一、二人称和第三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；
要点：
1. 表示理解；
2. 你的看法和建议；
3. 表达信心。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Understandable；feel down；increasingly；stay at home；prevent from；get infected；self-isolation；present；slowdown；set aside；regular time；take exercise；cheer up；keep healthy；belief；get through等
第三步：连词成句
1. How is everything going with you?
2. It is quite understandable to feel down during such an increasingly challenging time.
3. Staying at home is the best way to prevent you and your family from getting infected.
4. Though self-isolation may at times be hard, it presents a perfect opportunity for you to slowdown, pause and reflect.
5. You can set aside some regular time everyday to take exercise, which will help you cheer up and keep healthy.
6. I have strong belief that you and your country can get through the tough time and the good old days will return.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：In addition；and；
2.表转折对比关系：But；Though等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：It is quite understandable to feel down during such an increasingly challenging time.使用了it作形式主语；But staying at home is the best way to prevent you and your family from getting infected.使用了动名词做主语；Though self-isolation may at times be hard, it presents a perfect opportunity for you to slowdown, pause and reflect.使用了由though引导的让步状语从句；you can set aside some regular time everyday to take exercise, which will help you cheer up and keep healthy.使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句；I have strong belief that you and your country can get through the tough time and the good old days will return.使用了由that引导的同位语从句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Steven,
I'm glad to know your birthday is coming and I want to give you my sincere wishes and express “Happy birthday to you”.
In order to have a great birthday, it's necessary for you to find a suitable restaurant. Now, let me share one with you. There is a good restaurant near the city library, the price of which is cheaper compared with many other Chinese restaurants. More importantly, the dishes of it such as fish, beef and seasonal vegetables are very good. Some of my friends think they are delicious after eating there. Because there are many guests going to the restaurant, I suggest you book it in advance. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Steven 打算在你市找一家中国餐馆庆祝生日｡为此，他发邮件向你打听相关事宜｡请你用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：1. 表达祝愿；2. 推荐餐馆(地址､价格､菜肴等)；3. 建议预订｡
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：give you my sincere wishes（给你我真诚的祝福）；In order to have a great birthday（为了有一个伟大的生日）；a good restaurant near the city library（在市图书馆附近有一家很好的餐馆）；seasonal vegetables（时令蔬菜）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时句中使用高级句子。I'm glad to know your birthday is coming句中使用宾语从句；There is a good restaurant near the city library, the price of which is cheaper compared with many other Chinese restaurants.句中使用非限制性定语从句；Because there are many guests going to the restaurant, I suggest you book it in advance.句中使用原因状语从句。
7．Dear Jack，
How are you getting along these days? Recently some people have suggested we should shorten the summer vacation so that we can have a one or two weeks’ break in the middle of each term. It has become the topic of every school.
I think this is a good idea. The traditional two-month summer vacation is too long，so the students will feel boring. During one or two weeks' break in spring or autumn, the students not only can fully prepare for the coming schoolwork , but also can have more chances to have a travel with parents and appreciate the beauty of nature. What's more, the students can make use of the free time to study other things that they are really interested in. Do you have such breaks in the UK？Share your ideas with me, please.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求给你的笔友写一封信，询问英国关于增设短假的情况。
【详解】第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾，注意格式规范，整篇应用一般现在时。
第二步：根据提纲依次写出：建议的内容，你的建议，并且询问英国是否有类似假期。跟据写作要求，确定关键词组，如the summer vacation，have a break，have chances to，prepare for等等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词造句，连词成文，结构衔接得体，过渡词恰当运用，如What’s more等。
【点睛】第一段，开门见山，说出目的，清晰明确。
第二段，言简意赅地介绍建议的内容，你的建议，并且询问英国是否有类似假期。
第三段，表达期望，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。
文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如What's more, the students can make use of the free time to study other things that they are really interested in.本句是that引导的定语从句。
8．Dear Peter,
I hear you are going to be on a diet to lose weight. I quite understand you because you’re always complaining about being overweight. And the following are my opinions.
Undoubtedly, a proper diet can help you lose weight and enjoy a healthier life. However, an extremely strict diet can be harmful to your health. To efficiently lose weight, I think the best way is to take exercise regularly, which helps consume calories. If you burn more calories than you take in each day, you will lose weight. In addition, keeping a balanced diet is also important. Do remember not to eat too much for a meal.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信：假定你是李华，你得知你的朋友 Peter最近打算节食减肥。请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括：1.表示理解；2.你的建议。人称使用第一、第二人称，时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：on a diet to lose weight (节食减肥)；complaining about being overweight (抱怨增重)；a proper diet can help you lose weight (适当的饮食可以帮助你减肥)；be harmful to your health (对你的健康有害)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。I quite understand you because you’re always complaining about being overweight.句中使用原因状语从句；To efficiently lose weight, I think the best way is to take exercise regularly, which helps consume calories.句中使用动词不定式做目的状语，且which引导非限制性定语从句；If you burn more calories than you take in each day, you will lose weight.句中if引导条件状语从句；另外，Undoubtedly, However, In addition,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Otis,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held in our school. In my opinion, you should participate without any hesitation.
First of all, you are fond of Chinese songs and quite good at singing them and the competition allows you to show yourself on stage. Besides, through this competition, you will know your strengths and weaknesses so that you can make improvements on singing Chinese songs. In addition, you will meet many people like you, which helps you to make more friends and learn more about Chinese songs.
All in all I think you should seize the chance. I believe you will benefit a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作，要求考生写一封邮件，在邮件中写明：建议Otis参加你校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛；给出建议他参加的理由；表达你对他的期望。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：一般性应用文——书信（邮件）
格式：格式是书信，要写明写信的对象（即称呼）和写信人（即署名），正文前可适当添加问候语，还要有结尾语
要点：要包括三个要点——1. 知道Otis想参加学校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛很高兴，建议他参加；2. 给出建议他参加的理由；3. 表达你对他的期望。
结构：总分总法
第二步：列提纲（重点短语和词汇）
be interested in ; the Chinese Singing Contest ; participate ;on stage; strengths; weaknesses ;make improvements ; seize
第三步：连词成句
It’s great that you are interested in the Chinese Singing Contest .
I think you should participate.
You are fond of Chinese songs and quite good at singing them.
You will make improvements on singing Chinese songs.
You will meet many people like you. It can help you to make more friends and learn more about Chinese songs.
I am sure you will benefit .
第四步：连句成篇
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文格式正确，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了很多的语法结构和词汇：宾语从句和非谓语动词：I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held in our school.，状语从句：Besides, through this competition, you will know your strengths and weaknesses so that you can make improvements on singing Chinese songs.，定语从句：In addition, you will meet many people like you, which helps you to make more friends and learn more about Chinese songs.。文章中are interested in ，In my opinion，are fond of ，are good at ，on stage，through this competition等短语的使用，使文章更生动，具有朋友间交流通信的文风。这篇范文的另一亮点是：句与句间、段与段间的承接词First of all，Besides，In addition ，All in all，它们的使用使整篇文章的层次分明，条理清晰，结构流畅。非谓语动词的使用也使整篇文章的句法结构富于变化，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
10．Dear George,
I’m sorry to know you have been annoyed at getting up and being late to school recently. Here are some suggestions I want to offer you.
First of all, you should get into the habit of sleeping and getting up early. It is the most effective way to solve the problem. Second, taking exercise properly is necessary for you, because it helps you keep energetic and leads to getting up early. Finally, you have to realize the importance of getting school on time, and even get rid of the laziness inside yourself to keep active.
I hope my advice would be helpful to you and you can get over the problem soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你校交换生 George最近因为起床困难导致上课总是迟到，因此他写邮件来向你求助。请用英语给他回封邮件，给予他相应的建议，内容包括：
1. 养成早睡早起的习惯；
2. 适当地参加锻炼；
3. 要意识到按时上学的重要性。
第二，人称为第一人称|、第二人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，针对George最近因为起床困难导致上课总是迟到提出建议。第二段，1. 养成早睡早起的习惯；2. 适当地参加锻炼；3. 要意识到按时上学的重要性。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be annoyed at，get into the habit of， solve the problem
take exercise，realize the importance of，get rid of ,get over.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:because引导的原因状语从句Second, taking exercise properly is necessary for you, because it helps you keep energetic and leads to getting up early.省略that的宾语从句I’m sorry to know you have been annoyed at getting up and being late to school recently.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First of all，Second，Finally.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:because引导的原因状语从句Second, taking exercise properly is necessary for you, because it helps you keep energetic and leads to getting up early.省略that的宾语从句I’m sorry to know you have been annoyed at getting up and being late to school recently.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。