2023届高考英语二轮复习广西高考英语书信写作训练题作业含答案

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习广西高考英语书信写作训练题作业含答案，共22页。
书信写作1．假定你是李华，今天是你的17岁生日。你收到了你的英国笔友Peter的祝贺信，请你写一封回信。内容包括：1.询问近况；2.表示感谢；3.畅想未来。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，收到美国好友Peter发来的邮件。他称赞中国举办的冬奥会，表示非常喜欢吉祥物冰墩墩，并希望你分享对冬奥会的感想。请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.表达感谢；2.对冬奥会的感想；3.许诺寄去冰墩墩。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：吉祥物 mascot   冰墩墩 Bing Dwen DwenDear Peter,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假定你是班长李华, 你班排练《百万英镑》时得到了外教Mr. Brown 的大力帮助。请你给他写一封信, 内容包括：1. 表达谢意;2. 列举外教所提供的具体帮助。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是李华，你们学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下：1. 成长与收获；2. 表达感恩；3. 继续努力。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear dad and mom,How time flies!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours loving boy,Li Hua5．假如你是李华，昨天你参加了朋友John在家里举行的生日聚会，今天你决定给他写一封感谢信。要点如下，可适当增加细节，词数100词左右。要点：1.John的父母及朋友对你很友好；2.蛋糕很好吃，饭菜可口；3.聚会很有趣，你很开心。Dear John,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假定你是李华，最近你读了一篇有关“亡灵节（Day of the Dead）”的报道，感到非常困惑：为什么本该十分悲伤的“亡灵节”在墨西哥却变成了狂欢节？“亡灵节”是不是墨西哥版的“万圣节”？请你给墨西哥的好友Alice写一封邮件，内容包括：1.告知写信的原因；2.道出你的困惑；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结束语已为你写好。Dear Alice，___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，昨天在大学的英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名。请你给外教Smith 先生写一封邮件，感谢他在高中时给你英语的指导。内容包括：1.介绍获奖情况2.对方曾给予的帮助（至少两点）注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李华，你上周日在学校不小心扭伤了左脚。多亏了外教Peter学过这方面的急救知识，对你进行了急救。请你用英语给Peter写一封感谢信，内容包括：1. 当时扭伤的情况；2. Peter如何对你进行急救（叫救护车、冷敷、包扎）；3. 表达感激之情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。Dear Peter,My name is Li Hua, who was assisted by you last Sunday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes to you. Yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，一所新西兰学校向你校图书馆捐赠了一批电子英文书籍。请你代表学生会写一封感谢信，要点如下：1. 表示感谢；2. 对书籍的评价；3. 如何利用。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________         参考答案1．Dear Peter,Thank you for writing to me on my birthday and giving me great encouragement.’ Time is flying. I wish everything has gone well with you. Do you still play table tennis every day?With the arrival of 17 years old, I entered the second stage of senior high school. As you know, my ideal is to be admitted to Beijing Foreign Studies University in the future. I believe I will realize this dream before long and have an opportunity to learn English literature.Thanks again and wish to keep frequent contact with you, because you are my best friend all the time.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于在17岁生日那天，收到了你的英国笔友Peter的祝贺信这一情况，写一封回信表示感谢。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：Thank→ Appreciate机会：opportunity → chance联系：contact→ connection进展顺利：go well→ run smoothly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thank you for writing to me on my birthday and giving me great encouragement.拓展句：Thank you for writing to me on my birthday, which give me great encouragement.【点睛】[高分句型1]With the arrival of 17 years old, I entered the second stage of senior high school.（运用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。）[高分句型2]Thanks again and wish to keep frequent contact with you, because you are my best friend all the time.（运用了连词because引导的原因状语从句。）2．Dear Peter,I greatly appreciate your attention and high praise for the Winter Olympics held in China.Knowing you’re very fond of the cute mascot Bing Dwen Dwen, I’m happy to inform you I have managed to get one, which I promise will reach you soon.The Winter Olympics have deeply struck me. The advanced technology and unique culture presented at the opening ceremony have strengthened my national pride, Absorbed in ice and snow events for days. I’ve fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible. Furthermore, the athletes’ competitive spirit will always inspire me to meet future challenges.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。由于美国好友Peter发来的邮件称赞冬奥会，要求考生作为李华给美国好友Peter写封信，表达感谢、书写对冬奥会的感想以及许诺寄去冰墩墩。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：happy→delighted告知：inform→notify增强：strengthen→intensify此外：furthermore→moreover 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The advanced technology and unique culture presented at the opening ceremony have strengthened my national pride.拓展句：The advanced technology and unique culture which were presented at the opening ceremony have strengthened my national pride.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you’re very fond of the cute mascot Bing Dwen Dwen, I’m happy to inform you I have managed to get one, which I promise will reach you soon.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Absorbed in ice and snow events for days, I’ve fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible.(运用了过去分词作状语)3．One possible version:Dear Mr. Brown, I'm writing, on behalf of our class, to express our gratitude for your help with the presentation of The Million Pound Bank Note last week. Thanks to your help, our performance has turned out to be an amazing success. It's really kind of you to have spent so much time teaching us the various stage techniques and preparing the make-ups. Your guidance has made us much more confident in acting in front of the big audience. Most important of all, your help has fueled our love for English drama. Many thanks for your time and support again!Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写信，为班级在排练《百万英镑》时得到的外教Mr. Brown 的大力帮助表示感谢。【详解】1.词汇积累感激：gratitude→appreciation帮助：help→assistance令人惊讶的：amazing→astonishing技巧：technique→ skill2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thanks to your help, our performance has turned out to be an amazing success. 拓展句：Because you helped us now and then, our performance has turned out to be an amazing success.【点睛】[高分句型1]I'm writing, on behalf of our class, to express our gratitude for your help with the presentation of The Million Pound Bank Note last week.（动词不定式作目的状语）[高分句型2]It's really kind of you to have spent so much time teaching us the various stage techniques and preparing the make-ups.（it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）4．Dear dad and mom,How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you.During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement. I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me.Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation.Love you forever!Yours loving boy,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你们学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母。【详解】1.词汇积累表达：express→convey感激：appreciation→gratitude鼓励：encourage→inspire追求：go after→pursue2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me.拓展句：I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me because I have learned that to be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before.【点睛】[高分句型1] Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. (运用了what引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)5．Dear John,I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for inviting me to your birthday party. I had a great time there.I really enjoyed meeting your family as well as your friends. Your parents and friends were kind. The cake that your father bought was delicious, and the dishes that your mother made were a lot more delicious. I didn't know some of your friends, but they were all friendly to me. I also enjoyed the movie you showed and the games you prepared. They were quite interesting and relaxing.Many thanks for all the things you have done for me, which made me have an unforgettable experience at your party.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友John写一封感谢信，表示参加John的生日宴玩得很开心。【详解】词汇积累表达：show→express真诚的：true→sincere感谢：thanks→gratitude喜爱：like→enjoy句式拓展原句：Your father bought the cake. The cake was delicious. Your mother made the dishes. The dishes were a lot more delicious.拓展句：The cake that your father bought was delicious, and the dishes that your mother made were a lot more delicious.【点睛】[高分句型1] I also enjoyed the movie you showed and the games you prepared. (运用了省略that的定语从句，that在定语从句做宾语)[高分句型2] Many thanks for all the things you have done for me, which made me have an unforgettable experience at your party.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)6．One possible version：Dear Alice,How are you doing these days？Yesterday, I read a report on one of the most important festivals in Mexico: Day of the Dead. We have a similar festival in China, which is called Qingming. On that day, we also send foods to the dead. But it is celebrated in a totally different way. I cannot help wondering whether Day of the Dead is just another kind of Halloween in Mexico or why it is celebrated in such a happy atmosphere. Please tell me more about the celebrations.Thanks a lot！Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给墨西哥的好友Alice写一封邮件，告知写信原因并说明自己对“亡灵节（Day of the Dead）”的困惑。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant完全地：totally→completely快乐的：happy→delighted告诉：tell sb. sth.=inform sb. of sth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yesterday, I read a report on one of the most important festivals in Mexico: Day of the Dead.拓展句：Yesterday, I read a report which is related to one of the most important festivals in Mexico: Day of the Dead.【点睛】[高分句型1]We have a similar festival in China, which is called Qingming.（which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]I cannot help wondering whether Day of the Dead is just another kind of Halloween in Mexico or why it is celebrated in such a happy atmosphere.（whether引导宾语从句）7．One possible version：Dear Mr. Smith, I'm Li Hua, your former student who currently study in Peking University. I am writing to express my great appreciation for your help in my high school.Recently, I won the first prize in an English speech contest. Besides, freshman as I am, I work as a journalist in the English newspaper of our school. I owe a great deal to you. I still remember how unconfident I was when speaking English. It was your help and encouragement that lit me up when I was confronted with difficulties. Moreover, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Had it not been for your assistance, I couldn't have made such great progress.Words fail to convey my endless appreciation to you in this letter. Thank you again. May you stay forever young and have all the joy.Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Smith 先生写一封邮件, 感谢他在高中时给你英语的指导,告诉他昨天在大学的英语演讲比赛中你荣获第一名。内容包括：1.介绍获奖情况2.对方曾给予的帮助（至少两点）【详解】词汇积累现在：now→currently此外：besides→moreover/furthermore/additionally面对：be faced with→be confronted with感谢：thanks→appreciation句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Words fail to convey my endless appreciation to you in this letter.拓展句：Words fail me when I want to convey my endless appreciation to you in this letter.【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, freshman as I am, I work as a journalist in the English newspaper of our school. ( as引导让步状语从句，部分倒装)[高分句型2] It was your help and encouragement that lit me up when I was confronted with difficulties.(运用了强调句型)[高分句型3] Had it not been for your assistance, I couldn't have made such great progress.(虚拟语气；if引导的虚拟条件句，省略if，部分倒装)8．One possible version:Dear Peter,My name is Li Hua, who was assisted by you last Sunday. I am writing to thank you for helping me out at schoolLast Sunday, unfortunately, my left foot got injured in the class. Luckily, you just learned first aid. First, you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came. Besides, you put my foot in a comfortable position. Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice, and carefully applied the ice to the injury. Lastly, you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage. Now I have got well again. Thanks again for your help. Best wishes to you. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给Peter写一封感谢信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 当时扭伤的情况；2. Peter如何对你进行急救（叫救护车、冷敷、包扎）；3. 表达感激之情。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）thank sb. for…；help…out…；get injured；first aid；apply…to…；cover…with…；get well第三步：连词成句1. I am writing to thank you for helping me out at school2. Last Sunday, unfortunately, my left foot got injured in the class. 3. Luckily, you just learned first aid. 4. First, you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came. 5. Besides, you put my foot in a comfortable position. 6. Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice, and carefully applied the ice to the injury. 7. Lastly, you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）                                                               1.使用表文章结构顺序的衔接词: First,Lastly.2.使用表并列补充关系的衔接词:Besides.连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to thank you for helping me out at school.(动词不定式作目的状语) [高分句型2] First, you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came.(before引导时间状语从句)                                                                         9．Dear headmaster,We have already received the e-English books donated by your school. On behalf of the student union of our school, I would like to show great thanks to your donation. The content of the books is rich, active and colorful, which is suitable for high school students to read. Next, we will upload these materials to the electronic database of the school library, and make full use of them. Well encourage the students to read carefully through their mobile phones. By reading, students can learn about your customs and social background, and at the same time improve their English reading ability.Thank you for your great generosity again!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按照题目要求写一封感谢信。写作内容要囊括题目要求的细节和要点，在表达上需侧重注意语气和词汇的选用。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分总法要求：1. 表示感谢；2. 对书籍的评价；3. 如何利用。4. 词数100左右；第二步：列提纲（重点词组）receive; the e-English books; donate; On behalf of; the student union ; donation; content ; rich; active; colorful; suitable for; upload ; materials ; electronic database ; make full use of; encourage ; customs ; social background; at the same time; improve ; reading ability; generosity等等。第三步：连词成句1. We have already received the e-English books donated by your school.2. On behalf of the student union of our school, I would like to show great thanks to your donation.3. The content of the books is rich, active and colorful, which is suitable for high school students to read.4. Next, we will upload these materials to the electronic database of the school library, and make full use of them.5. Well encourage the students to read carefully through their mobile phones.6. By reading, students can learn about your customs and social background, and at the same time improve their English reading ability.第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly, next…Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand…4.表因果关系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰第五步：润色修改。【点睛】文章内容丰富，表达恰当，态度真挚，行文流畅。准确地使用了较多高级表达，如：The content of the books is rich, active and colorful, which is suitable for high school students to read.这句使用了which引导非限定性定语从句；We have already received the e-English books donated by your school.这句话使用了过去分词作后置定语等；同时运用高档词汇，例如receive; the e-English books donate; On behalf of; the student union ; suitable for; electronic database ; make full use of; encourage ; customs ; social background; generosity.等，为文章增添了色彩。范文内容符合题目要求，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范，是一篇值得参考的作文。10．Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。