江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．和睦的家庭有利于孩子的个性发展和家人的身心健康。请你根据表格中的信息和自身的感受，以How we can build up a harmonious(和谐的) family为题用英语写一篇短文。主要特征：充满温暖、爱心和欢笑；相互关爱、尊重和理解；主要益处：孩子乐观向上；父母更健康快乐；父母该怎么做：尊重信任孩子……(至少两点)；你该怎么做：……；……(至少两点)。注意：1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数150左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.短文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。How we can build up a harmonious familyA harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李华，你的学校里来了一位英国交换生保罗。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大，请你给他写封信，提些建议。(80词左右)【写作内容】保持自信：有问题向老师、同学寻求帮助；积极加入学校社团，发挥自身潜力；多运动，缓解压力；以及其他合理建议。Paul,I know that you are under great pressure,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua3．假设你是李华,你的好朋友李红前不久随父母去了美国,她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活,感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.学好英语,从而增加和别人交流的机会;2.多交一些朋友,友情会使她忘记孤独;3.积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加有趣。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节。 Dear Li Hong,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假如你是某个电台青少年节目的主持人Simon，有个叫Rebecca 的女孩因为受到父母的过度保护而苦恼，给你写信求助。请你根据下面提示给她写一封回信。信中包含以下内容：1 表示理解；2 提供一些建议；3 表示希望和祝福。注意:  100词左右。可以增加适当细节，开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Rebecca ,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Simon5．假设你是李华，你的朋友彼得在中国留学，但是他很难适应，写信向你求助，请按以下写作要点给他回信。1.表示难过；2.提出合理化建议；3.提出希望。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是李华，你的英国网友Linda最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。要点如下： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并给出理由。注意：词数120左右_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华。你的笔友晓东是某学校一名高一学生。最近他来信说不知道如何学好高中英语，感到苦恼。请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议。建议内容如下：1．尽力用英语交流，不要怕犯错误。2．坚持每天早晚朗读英语。3．多读英文报纸，看英文电影。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Xiao Dong，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua8．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友John在与父母相处的过程中遇到一些困惑，沟通出现问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助。请根据以下要点给他写一封信：1.安慰John；2.提出建议；3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。9．假设你是李华，你的好友杨洋前不久和父母一起去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很难过。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封建议信。1．学好英语，从而有更多和别人交流的机会；2．多交一些朋友，友情不会让人孤独；3．积极参加各种活动。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计人总词数。Dear Yang Yang,Thank you for writing to me.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my advice will be useful to you. I’m looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter是高一年级的学生，他进入高中后，不知道如何适应高中生活，请给他写一封建议信，要点如下：1、多与老师沟通交流；2、积极参与班级活动；3、与志趣相投的同学交朋友。注意：1、词数80左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                1．                                                                                                        How we can build up a harmonious familyA harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.Having a harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. A harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and laughter, where parents and children will show love, respect and concern for each other. Besides, despite the fact that generation gap may exist between them, parents and children always try to understand each other better through communication. Actually, building a harmonious family can both benefit parents and children. A child is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic while parents will live a more healthy and happy life in such a family.It is up to family members to help build such a family. Parents should set a good example to their children in their daily life. Moreover, to build a good relationship between them, parents are supposed to trust their children and often communicate with them. As for children, we should also put ourselves in our parents’ position and understand our parents. Besides, we should be considerate and try to share their burdens by doing something we can do in our daily life.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以How we can build up a harmonious family为题用英语写一篇短文。【详解】1.词汇积累开心的：happy→cheerful充满：be filled with→be full of重要的：important→essential此外：in addition→besides/moreover2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：It is up to family members to help build such a family. Parents should set a good example to their children in their daily life.拓展句：It is up to family members to help build such a family, who should set a good example to their children in their daily life.【点睛】[高分句型1] Having a harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. (运用了动名词作主语)[高分句型2] Moreover, to build a good relationship between them, parents are supposed to trust their children and often communicate with them. (运用了不定式作目的状语)2．Paul,I know that you are under great pressure. I definitely understand how you feel. And I want to offer you some advice that can be helpful.First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for you to have a positive attitude towards study and keep confident. If you have any questions, you can turn to your teacher and classmates for help. Besides, you should participate in school clubs in which you can develop your potential. At last, you'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise so that you can keep yourselves relaxed and then concentrate on study．In this way can you avoid suffering from the pressure of study.I hope my suggestions are of use to you. Best wishes!                                                                                                                                                                   Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生保罗在中国学习压力大，要求考生给他写封建议信提供相关帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in→take part in建议：advice→ suggestion向某人求助：ask sb for help →turn to sb for help专注：focus on→ pay attention to/ concentrate on2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, you should participate in your school clubs. You can develop your potential at your school clubs.拓展句：Besides, you should participate in school clubs where you can develop your potential.【点睛】【高分句型1】And I want to offer you some advice that can be helpful.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】If you have any questions, you can turn to your teacher and classmates for help..（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）3．Dear Li Hong,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my suggestions. My suggestions are as follows: Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more chances to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take part in all kinds of activities,which will help to make life more interesting. I believe by doing this, you will be happier with your new life soon.I hope these suggestions can be very useful to you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华,你的好朋友李红前不久随父母去了美国,她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活,感到很孤独。请考生根据要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累适应：adapt to→ get used to建议：suggestion→ advice机会：chance →opportunity参加：take part in→ attend2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：I believe by doing this, you will be happier with your new life soon.拓展句：I believe if you do so, you will be happier with your new life soon.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more chances to communicate with others.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting..（运用了if引导的条件状语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句）4．Dear Rebecca,I can understand your feelings. But don’t be upset, because parents can be overprotective. After all, it’s their job to protect you from being hurt. Here are my tips for you.To begin with, tell your parents what your idea is about their protective behaviour. Secondly, show your parents how sponsible you can be. Let them know when you need their help and when you don’t. Most importantly, put yourself in your parents’ shoes and try to understand what they do. I know it isn’t easy, but you must be patient.I hope you’ll take my suggestions into consideration. I'm sure everything will turn out all right.Yours,Simon【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生作为某个电台青少年节目的主持人Simon给有个叫Rebecca 的女孩写一封回信，回复她因为受到父母的过度保护而苦恼向你的求助。【详解】1.    词汇积累难过：sad →upset建议：advice →tips首先：Firstly →To begin with看法：opinion = idea2.句式拓展简单句变为复合句原句：Here are my tips for you.拓展句：Here are my tips which are of great help to you .【点睛】[高分句型1] But don’t be upset, because parents can be overprotective. 这句话运用了because引导的原因状语从句。[高分句型2] I hope you’ll take my suggestions into consideration.这句话运用了宾语从句。5．Dear Peter,Sorry to hear that you find it hard to adjust to living and studying in China, I'd like to offer you some practical suggestions.First of all, you'd better take it easy. This being the first time that you have been in a foreign country, it's natural for you to have trouble settling in. I strongly recommend that you communicate more with your classmates, which will not only improve your spoken Chinese, but also help you fit in with them. What's more, studying in China can have your horizon broadened and give you a chance to experience abundant traditional Chinese culture.As far as I am concerned, keep it up, and you are bound to love China.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在中国留学的朋友写一封信，给出建议帮他适应留学生活。【详解】词汇积累适应：adjust to→adapt to建议：suggestion→advice做……有困难：have trouble doing sth.→have difficulty/problems doing sth.机会：chance=opportunity2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：This being the first time that you have been in a foreign country, it's natural for you to have trouble settling in.拓展句：Because this is the first time that you have been in a foreign country, it's natural for you to have trouble settling in.【点睛】[高分句型1] I strongly recommend that you communicate more with your classmates, which will not only improve your spoken Chinese, but also help you fit in with them.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和not only…but also句式）[高分句型2] This being the first time that you have been in a foreign country, it's natural for you to have trouble settling in.（运用了独立主格结构作原因状语）6．Dear Linda,I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.Here are some tips for you. First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around you. Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.I hope my advice will be useful.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友Linda写一封回信，关于她在中国学习所遇到的困难给与安慰并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累实际上：in fact→actually忧虑的：worried→anxious建议：advice→tip参加：join in→take part in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Here are some tips for you.拓展句：Here are some tips for you that I think will be helpful.【点睛】[高分句型1] First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句)[高分句型2] Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)7．Dear Xiao Dong，I'm sorry you are having trouble in learning English in senior high school. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.Firstly, why not try to communicate with others in English? If you do so, you will feel confident gradually. Also, don't be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes. Secondly, you should keep on reading aloud English sentences every morning and evening. That way, you'll learn many important expressions. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you read more English newspapers and watch English movies.I hope you'll find these ideas useful.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友晓东写封信，提出学好高中英语的建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累建议：tip→advice有用的：useful→helpful在......方面有困难：have trouble in→have difficulty in坚持做：keep on doing→stick to doing2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Secondly, you should keep on reading aloud English sentences every morning and evening. That way, you'll learn many important expressions.拓展句：Secondly, you should keep on reading aloud English sentences every morning and evening, in which way, you'll learn many important expressions.【点睛】[高分句型1] Also, don't be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句，动名词作宾语)[高分句型2] Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you read more English newspapers and watch English movies. (运用了if引导的主语从句)8．Dear Leo,I am sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I’ve had similar problems before. I can offer some useful suggestions based on my own experience. First, let’s put ourselves in their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them. When we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart, not a solution. Therefore, what you need is to tell them about this difference and believe them. I hope these suggestions will make a difference to you.Best,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友John写一封信，帮助解决他与父母相处的过程中遇到一些困惑。【详解】1.词汇积累给予：offer →give建议：suggestion →advice阻止某人做某事：prevent sb. from doing sth. →keep/stop sb. from doing sth.希望：hope →wish2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I can offer some useful suggestions based on my own experience.拓展句：I can offer some useful suggestions which are based on my own experience.【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, what you need is to tell them about this difference and believe them. (运用了what引导的主语从句)[高分句型2] I hope these suggestions will make a difference to you. (运用了省略连接词that引导的宾语从句)9．Dear Yang Yang,Thank you for writing to me. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to your new school life in America. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to face this situation.Firstly, it is very important for you to work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, it can be a good idea to make some friends with your classmates. They can help you forget your loneliness and solve some of your problems. Thirdly, it also helps to join in various activities, which will make your life more interesting. I hope my advice will be useful to you. I’m looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给很不适应美国校园生活、感到很难过的好友杨洋写封建议信，就其面对的问题，提供相关建议。【详解】1.词汇积累适应：get accustomed to→get used to建议：suggestion→advice机会：chance→opportunity参与：take part in→join in2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Secondly, it can be a good idea to make some friends with your classmates. They can help you forget your loneliness and solve some of your problems.拓展句：Secondly, it can be a good idea to make some friends with your classmates, who can help you forget your loneliness and solve some of your problems.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, it is very important for you to work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Thirdly, it also helps to join in various activities, which will make your life more interesting. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)10．One possible version:Dear Peter, I’m sorry to know that you have trouble adapting yourself to senior high school. I’m writing to offer some suggestions.First of all, you should communicate with your teachers as often as possible and tell them the difficulties you meet. What’s more, it is better for you to take an active part in different kinds of activities held by class. More importantly, it would be a good idea if you make some friends with common interests. If you do this, you can share happiness and sadness with them, and they can also help you get rid of loneliness at high school.I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于书信应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter，就如何适应高中生活给他写一封建议信。【详解】1.词汇积累给与/提供：give→offer谈话/交流：talk with→communicate with问题/困难：problem→difficulty而且：besides→what’s more2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’s more, it is better for you to take an active part in different kinds of activities held by class.拓展句：What’s more, it is better for you to take an active part in different kinds of activities which are held by class.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to know that you have trouble adapting yourself to senior high school. (很遗憾得知你在高中生活中有困难。)句中“that”引导宾语从句。[高分句型2] First of all, you should communicate with your teachers as often as possible and tell them the difficulties you meet . (首先，你应该尽可能多地和你的老师交流，告诉他们你遇到的困难。)该句中“you meet”为省略关系词的定语从句，先行词为之前名词“the difficulties”，在从句中作动词“meet”的宾语。[高分句型3] If you do this, you can share happiness and sadness with them, and they can also help you get rid of loneliness at high school.(如果你这样做，你可以与他们分享快乐和悲伤，他们也可以帮助你摆脱高中的孤独。)该句中“if”引导条件状语从句，且使用并列连词“and”连接两个并列句。