江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信说他准备参加学校组织的运动俱乐部，征求你的意见。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2. 谈谈好处； 3. 给出建议。注意：1. 词数80左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是李华，你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在中文学习上遇到了一些困难， 心情很沮丧。请你写封回信，内容包括:1.表示理解:2.提出建议(不少于2点) ;3.给予鼓励。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua3．假设你叫李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 表示理解和关心；2. 沉迷抖音的影响；3. 提出具体建议。要求：1. 词数100字左右；2. 可以适当增加细节；3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假如你是李华，你的学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书和文学类图书。请你用英语给图书馆张老师写一封信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。Dear Mr Zhang, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully,Li Hua5．假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary想加入社区志愿者协会，但她的父母担心这会影响她的学业，所以不同意她参加，为此她和父母产生了矛盾。请你给她写一封邮件。写作内容：1.表示理解；2.提出建议；3.表达希望。写作要求：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：社区community；志愿者协会volunteer associationDear Mary,I’m sorry to hear ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来信说上课总是打瞌睡从而影响了学习。请你写封回信，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.提出建议；3.希望建议有所帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Peter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假如你是某杂志健康栏目的主持人Mr. Helper，读者经常写邮件询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。邮件内容包括如下：1 健康的重要性； 2 保持健康的方法：科学饮食，多喝水，多吃蔬菜水果，保持饮食平衡；避免高脂肪、高糖食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。100字左右。Dear readers,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Mr. Helper8．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Tony在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.安慰朋友；2.提出改善家庭关系的建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。Dear Tony,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李江，你的笔友Peter来信说, 下周他要在课堂上作与“旅游业”主题相关的介绍展示，希望你能帮助他。你给他写封信, 内容包括以下几点：1. 发展旅游业的利弊；2. 你的看法。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter, Hearing that you are going to do a presentation on “tourism” in your class next week, I would like to share with you some relevant information. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I am hopeful that the above information is useful to you. Yours, Li Jiang10．假定你是李华, 正在伦敦做交换生。请给校文学杂志负责人Mr. Smith写封邮件, 建议 他开设中国文学专栏（column）。内容包括：1. 写邮件的目的；2. 设置该专栏的益处；3. 申请做该专栏的编辑。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________             1．Dear Tom,I’m glad to learn that you are going to participate in the sports club in your school. I think it is a good choice for you and also a good chance to show your talent in sport.There is no doubt that sport is good for our health. A person who takes exercise regularly will keep fit, so joining  the sports club is a good way to do exercise. what’s more, you will take exercise with your friends . By doing so,  you can be close to them . If you join the English club, prepare appropriate clothes and shoes. The most important thing is that you should stick to it all the time. I hope to see you gain a lot in the sports club.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求给考生英国朋友Tom写一封信，告诉他对于他参加英语俱乐部的意见。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in  →join in天赋：talent → gift保持健康：keep fit → keep healthy坚持：stick to → persist in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：what’s more, you will take exercise with your friends.拓展句：what’s more, you will take exercise with your friends who have the same interest with you.【点睛】【高分句型1】A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit, so joining  the sports club is a good way to do exercise.（运用了who引导的限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】The most important thing is that you should stick to it all the time. （运用了that引导的表语从句）2．Dear Sam,I’m sorry to hear you’ve encountered some setbacks in learning Chinese. I can totally relate to your feelings.In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language. Therefore, Chinese TV series and movies are highly recommended. Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.Cheer up! I’m positive you’ll rise to all the challenges as long as you find the proper ways.(85 words)Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就好友Sam谈到的因中文学习上遇到困难而心情沮丧这一问题给Sam回信并提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累遭遇：encounter→meet with/run into理解：relate to→understand作为、充当：serve as → work as动机，启发：motivation→inspiration2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： I can totally relate to your feelings.拓展句： I can totally relate to your feelings, as this case once happened to me and affected me a lot.【点睛】[高分句型1]In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language. （which引导非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限定性定语从句）3．Dear John,    Glad to receive your letter. I hear that you have been obsessed with TikTok recently, and I am sorry for that.First of all, I can understand your mood. TikTok is the hottest short video platform at the moment. There are many interesting video records on it, and many people are using it. But on the other hand, the dangers of indulging in TikTok for a long time are obvious. If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learning will also be greatly affected.     I suggest you balance your study and entertainment, and plan your time in a reasonable and balanced manner. Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给沉迷抖音不能自拔的好友John写信提供帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累沉迷于：be obsessed with→be addicted to明显的：obvious→evident不可避免地：inevitably→undeniably影响：affect→influence2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First of all, I can understand your mood. TikTok is the hottest short video platform at the moment. 拓展句：First of all, I can understand your mood, because TikTok is the hottest short video platform at the moment.【点睛】[高分句型1]If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learn will also be greatly affected.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)[高分句型2]Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.(运用了倒装结构)4．One possible version:Dear Mr Zhang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend a mother category of books— literature. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts, through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.I’ll be glad if you would consider my recommendation.Yours faithfully ,Li Hua【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生给图书馆张老师写一封信，推荐最需要购置的科普类图书和文学类图书，并分别说明推荐理由。【详解】1.词汇积累打算：be going to→be about to建议：suggestion→advice乐趣：fun→pleasure 建议：recommend→advise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts, through fascinating stories and language.拓展句：Classic works, which are written by masters, present great thoughts, through fascinating stories and language.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.（由that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】What we need most are popular science books.（由what引导的主语从句）【高分句型3】That is why I recommend a mother category of books— literature.（由why引导的表语从句）【高分句型4】I’ll be glad if you would consider my recommendation.（由if引导的条件状语从句）5．Dear Mary,I'm sorry to hear that your parents don't approve of your joining the volunteer association in your community, because they are concerned that it will influence your study. However, this problem can be solved with the following tips.To begin with, tell them you will do the voluntary work in your spare time, which won't affect your study. Besides, it's a good chance to communicate with more people, thus helping you accumulate social experience. Last but not least, it is important to improve your grade in school to make your parents believe your devotion.I hope my advice will be of some help to you. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的朋友Mary想加入社区志愿者协会，但她的父母担心这会影响她的学业，所以不同意她参加，为此她和父母产生了矛盾。请考生根据提示给她写一封邮件给出合理的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累赞成：approve of→agree with担心：be concerned that→be worried that空闲时间：spare time→free time献身，投入：devotion→commitment有帮助的：be of help→be helpful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Last but not least, it is important to improve your grade in school to make your parents believe your devotion.拓展句： Last but not least, what is important is to improve your grade in school to make your parents believe your devotion.【点睛】[高分句型1]I'm sorry to hear that your parents don't approve of your joining the volunteer association in your community, because they are concerned that it will influence your study. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2]To begin with, tell them you will do the voluntary work in your spare time, which won't affect your study. （运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型3]Besides, it's a good chance to communicate with more people, thus helping you accumulate social experience.（运用了现在分词作结果状语）[高分句型4]I hope my advice will be of some help to you.（运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句）6．Dear Peter,Knowing that you often feel sleepy in class and that it has affected your study, I'm writing to give you some advice on how to stay awake in class.Firstly, don't worry too much. Nodding off in class is common for students of any age. Secondly, being actively engaged, whether it's taking notes or joining in a classroom discussion, can help keep you from falling asleep. Finally, it's better to follow a set schedule of bedtime and wake-up time.I do hope that you will find my advice helpful.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封回信，关于你的朋友Peter说上课总是打瞌睡从而影响了学习，希望你给他一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累影响：affect→influence参加：join in →participate in太过担心：worry too much→concern too much阻止你睡觉：keep you from falling asleep→stop you from falling asleep2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Knowing that you often feel sleepy in class and that it has affected your study, I'm writing to give you some advice on how to stay awake in class.拓展句：Because I know you often feel sleepy in class and that it has affected your study, I'm writing to give you some advice on how to stay awake in class.【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, being actively engaged, whether it's taking notes or joining in a classroom discussion, can help keep you from falling asleep.（运用了whether...or…“无论……还是……”引导的让步状语从句，表示选择的范围。）【高分句型2】I do hope that you will find my advice helpful.（运用了do+动词原形，表示强调动作的强调句型。）7．Dear readers,It goes without saying that no pleasure can be tasted by a man without health. Health is far more important than anything else. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.How can we keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you to follow. To start with, we are supposed to have a healthy balanced diet such as eating more fruit and vegetables, avoiding food rich in sugar and fat, etc. Moreover, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as staying up late and smoking. Last but not least, we’d better exercise every day to build up our bodies. If you follow the suggestions given above, you will lead a healthy life.Yours sincerelyMr. Helper【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累获得：achieve→gain保持：keep→stay摆脱：get rid of=break away from破坏：damage→destroy2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To start with, we are supposed to have a healthy balanced diet such as eating more fruit and vegetables, avoiding food rich in sugar and fat, etc.拓展句：To start with, we are supposed to have a healthy balanced diet such as eating more fruit and vegetables, avoiding food rich in sugar and fat, etc, through which we can build up our body.【点睛】[高分句型1]Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.（what引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]If you follow the suggestions given above, you will lead a healthy life.（if引导条件状语从句）8．Dear Tony,I am sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I’ve had similar problems before. Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.First, let’s put ourselves in their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them. Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart, not a solution.So, what you need to do is tell them about this difference and put trust in them.I hope these suggestions will help. Looking forward to your reply.                                                                   Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友托尼回信，对朋友给予安慰，并就如何改善家庭关系向对方提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestions→advice明显的：obvious→apparent另外：besides→in addition信任某人：put trust in sb→believe in sb2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.拓展句：Here are my suggestions， which I hope  can help things get better soon.【点睛】【高分句型1】Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.（运用了that引导定语从句）【高分句型2】So, what you need to do is tell them about this difference and put trust in them.（运用了what引导主语从句）9．Dear Peter,Hearing that you are going to do a presentation on “tourism” in your class next week, I would like to share with you some relevant information. With tourism developing at a fast rate, we have come to realize that it is a double-edged sword, boosting the economy while damaging the environment. Being the lifeblood of the communities that depends entirely on it, tourism allows local service industries to grow consistently, which in turn, gives jobs to the local population, thus bringing more wealth to the surrounding communities. However, booming tourism isn't always a bed of roses. As a result of the flood of tourists, tourist attractions, where people used to live in harmony with nature, are impacted or even destroyed. What's worse, resources in those places are running out rapidly, posing a threat to the local plants and animals. In summary, it’s not a good choice to develop tourism at the expense of the environment. If everyone can be a sustainable tourist, we are sure to make a difference. I am hopeful that the above information is useful to you. Yours, Li Jiang【分析】本篇书面表达是书信，属于应用文。假定你是李江，你的笔友Peter来信说, 下周他要在课堂上作与“旅游业”主题相关的介绍展示，希望你能帮助他。你给他写封信, 内容包括以下几点：1. 发展旅游业的利弊；2. 你的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累随着旅游业的发展：with the development of tourism →with tourism developing意识到：be aware of →come to realize                依靠：rely on →depend on以……为代价：at the cost of→ at the expense of2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：However, booming tourism isn't always a bed of roses. As a result of the flood of tourists, tourist attractions, where people used to live in harmony with nature, are impacted or even destroyed.拓展句：However, booming tourism isn't always a bed of roses, as a result of which, tourist attractions, where people used to live in harmony with nature, are impacted or even destroyed.【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are going to do a presentation on “tourism” in your class next week, I would like to share with you some relevant information. (运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2] As a result of the flood of tourists, tourist attractions, where people used to live in harmony with nature, are impacted or even destroyed.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)10．One possible version:Dear Mr. Smith, I'm Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student. I'm writing to suggest setting a column for Chinese literature in our school literary magazine. Chinese literature, with its excellent works and diverse forms, has become a brilliant pearl on the world's literature stage. I believe this column will help students to learn more about Chinese literature, and add diversity to the content of our school literary magazine. As a lover of Chinese literature, I'd like to apply to be the editor and help make this column more beneficial. Thanks for your time and consideration. Yours sincerelyLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校文学杂志负责人Mr. Smith写封信，建议他开设中国文学专栏。【详解】1. 词汇积累会议：suggest→advise优秀的：excellent→outstanding各种各样的：diverse→varied有益的：beneficial→helpful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I'm writing to suggest setting a column for Chinese literature in our school literary magazine.拓展句：I'm writing to suggest that you set a column for Chinese literature in our school literary magazine.【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm writing to suggest setting a column for Chinese literature in our school literary magazine. （运用了动名词作宾语）[高分句型2]I believe this column will help students to learn more about Chinese literature, and add diversity to the content of our school literary magazine.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了引导词that）