江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。
建议信1．假定你是李华，由于疫情(epidemic)，你的美国朋友Tom正在上网课，他在邮件中向你询问如何提高上网课的效率。请你用英语给他写封回信，就如何提高网课效率提些建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李华，你昨天收到好友Tom的来信，他说自己上了高中以后遇到诸多学习和生活问题：很郁闷、孤独；学习压力大；作业完不成；上课听不懂等想辍学。请你给他提些建议提供帮助。要点：⒈和同学友好相处，多交友，多参加课外活动。⒉找到适当的放松方式。⒊努力学习，课前做好准备。   注意：⒈字数100左右；⒉可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；⒊可紧扣主题适当发挥。辍学drop out of school________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是学校心理社社长苏华，收到高一新生Henry的来信，向你倾诉进入高中后对学习感到十分迷茫，不知该如何设定并实现学习目标。请你用英文写一封回信，给他提供建议，帮助他走出困境。写作内容：1.给予安慰；2.提出建议；3.适当鼓励。写作要求：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Henry,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school and at a loss how to set goals. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Su Hua4．假如你是李华，你经常看到很多同学不吃早饭，导致对健康和学习效率产生了不良影响。请你给某报社编辑用英语写一封信，反映这类现象并提出你的建议。主要内容包括：1.写信原因及目的；2.提出建议并说明理由；3.提出希望。注意：1.词数100左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Editor,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David来邮件说他最近总是失眠，为此感到非常苦恼。请你给他回一封邮件，就如何改善失眠提出建议。注意：写作词数应为100左右。参考词汇：insomnia 失眠Dear David,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假定你是李华，你以前的初中同学杨林向你抱怨英语太难学了，他上周的英语考试又不及格。请你给他写封邮件，给他一些鼓励和建议，内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议；3. 给予鼓励。注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸/卡的相应位置作答。Dear Yang Lin,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，学校英文报在组织有关自我保护的征文活动，请你就写一份建议信，建议同学们重视地震知识和技能。内容包括：1. 人们忽视地震知识的现象；2. 重视地震逃生知识的意义；3. 掌握地震逃生技能的途径。注意：写作词数应为80左右；请在答题卡的相应位置作答。8．假定你是李华，你校的太极倶乐部将举行以“中国太极”为主题的抖音短视频创作竞赛，来自美国的交换生Tom准备参赛并写信向你求助。请给他写封回信，内容包括：（1）写信的目的；（2）短视频创作方法与内容；（3）表示祝愿。注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：短视频short video  抖音Tik TokDear Tom,Glad to receive your letter. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信说他准备参加学校组织的运动俱乐部，征求你的意见。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2. 谈谈好处； 3. 给出建议。注意：1. 词数80左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华，你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在中文学习上遇到了一些困难， 心情很沮丧。请你写封回信，内容包括:1.表示理解:2.提出建议(不少于2点) ;3.给予鼓励。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua             1．One Possible VersionDear Tom,Knowing that you need to take online courses because of the pandemic, I’m writing to offer some useful suggestions on how to improve your study efficiency. To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. In addition, it is a good idea to make a study schedule, so that you can make better use of your time. Last but not least, why not keep a frequent communication with your teachers and classmates even though you can not meet them face to face. The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of time.Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you. Take good care of yourself during the pandemic.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因疫情而在上网课的美国朋友Tom写信，就如何提高网课效率提些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累 因为：because of →owing to应该：be supposed to →ought to集中于：focus on→concentrate on更好地利用：make better use of→take full advantage of2.句式拓展 同义句转换原句：The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of time.拓展句：If you communicate more with them, you will have less problem, which can save a lot of time.【点睛】[高分句型1]To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. （运用了动名词做主语）2．Dear Tom,I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life. However, the situation is very easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.First of all, you should be friendly to anyone who you meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities. That can make you happy. Secondly, Why not choose some proper ways to relax? In my opinion, taking exercise, watching TV or playing computer games can help you relax yourself. Thirdly, I agree that you should study hard and have a good preparation for every class so that you can understand the teacher.I hope that you will find these tips useful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你昨天收到好友Tom的来信，他说自己上了高中以后遇到诸多学习和生活问题：很郁闷、孤独；学习压力大；作业完不成；上课听不懂等想辍学。请你给他提些建议提供帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice/tip首先：at first→first of all参加：join in→take part in有益的：beneficial→useful2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities. That can make you happy.拓展句：And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities, which can make you happy.【点睛】[高分句型1] I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] First of all, you should be friendly to anyone who you meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. (运用了who引导定语从句)3．Dear Henry,I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble fitting in your new school and at a loss how to set goals. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps these tips will be helpful.Firstly, it’s better to set goals based on your abilities instead of pushing yourself too much. Next, if I were you, I would break big goals down into smaller ones, which will be easier to reach. What matters most is to stick to your goals and work hard towards them once they are set.You may find achieving goals difficult, but as long as you stay positive and confident, you are sure to make it in the end!Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Su Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就高一新生Henry“进入高中后对学习感到十分迷茫，不知该如何设定并实现学习目标”的问题，给他写回信，提供建议，帮助他走出困境。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion/advice→tip目标：target→goal事关紧要：count→matter坚持：insist on→stick to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly, it’s better to set goals based on your abilities instead of pushing yourself too much.拓展句：Firstly, it’s better to set goals that are based on your abilities instead of pushing yourself too much.【点睛】【高分句型1】Next, if I were you, I would break big goals down into smaller ones, which will be easier to reach. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】What matters most is to stick to your goals and work hard towards them once they are set. (运用了What引导的主语从句)4．Dear Editor， I’m writing to tell you that I often find many classmates skip breakfast, which has a negative effect on their health and study efficiency. To solve the problem, I’d like to share my suggestions. Firstly, we should attach great importance to having breakfast. If we miss breakfast, we may feel weak and can’t concentrate in class. In addition, we’d better have a healthy and well-balanced breakfast containing whole grains, eggs, milk, fruits or vegetables, which can provide the energy we need every day. I do hope that my suggestions will be of help. Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就同学不吃早饭而导致对健康和学习效率产生了不良影响这一事，给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这类现象并提出你的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累影响：effectin→fluence建议：suggestion→advice首先：firstly→first of all聚精会神：concentrate→focus2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly, we should attach great importance to having breakfast.拓展句：Firstly, we should attach great importance to having breakfast, which can help us replenish the calories our body needs in the morning.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that I often find many classmates skip breakfast, which has a negative effect on their health and study efficiency. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】In addition, we’d better have a healthy and well-balanced breakfast containing whole grains, eggs, milk, fruits or vegetables, which can provide the energy we need every day. (运用了现在分词作后置定语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)5．Dear David,I am sorry to hear that you have a problem with insomnia. To help you out, I’d like to offer you some advice.First, it’s vital to form a healthy bedtime habit. You’d better not watch films for a long time or listen to music that excites you. Besides, keeping a balanced diet plays an important role in your good sleep. A cup of milk before bed may help you sleep sound through the whole night. More importantly, it’s a good idea to hold a positive attitude towards life instead of being anxious frequently.I hope my advice is worth taking and will benefit you.Yours,                                                                                             Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友David回一封邮件，就如何改善他最近失眠的状况提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累提供某人某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.至关重要的：vital→crucial此外：besides→in addition建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First, it’s vital to form a healthy bedtime habit.拓展句：First, that you need form a healthy bedtime habit is vital.【点睛】[高分句型1] You’d better not watch films for a long time or listen to music that excites you. (运用了that引导的限定性定语从句)[高分句型2 Besides, keeping a balanced diet plays an important role in your good sleep. (运用了动名词作主语)6．Dear Yang Lin,I’m sorry to hear that you failed in English exam again and I can understand your feelings. Now I’m writing to give you some advice.Firstly, you should listen attentively in class and take notes. If you have any problem, turn to your teacher. Besides, a large vocabulary is a must, which helps you read more smoothly. Last but not least, I suggest you read some English stories for it can help develop your thinking.As the saying goes, “practice makes perfect”. I believe you can make progress in English as long as you put time and efforts into it. (100 words)Best wishes!Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给初中同学杨林写一封建议信，对他上周英语考试不及格表示理解，给出学习英语的建议并进行鼓励。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion专心地：attentively→intently此外：Besides→What’s more进步：progress→advance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m sorry to hear that you failed in English exam again and I can understand your feelings. 拓展句：Hearing that you failed in English exam again, I feel sorry and I can understand your feelings.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, a large vocabulary is a must, which helps you read more smoothly.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】I believe you can make progress in English as long as you put time and efforts into it.（运用了省略连接词的宾语从句和as long as引导的状语从句）7．Dear classmates,Earthquakes are natural disasters that result in severe consequences. Unfortunately, people often fail to prepare themselves with necessary skills, thinking an earthquake only a theoretical possibility in their places. However, nothing is impossible. Good preparations can save life. Therefore, I strongly advise everyone to equip ourselves with life-saving skills. The earlier the better. To do so, we must first learn enough about it. More importantly, earthquake drills should be held regularly to reduce this natural force’s damage. Earthquakes may happen any time. Let’s take actions immediately.                                                                                                                                                                               Yours,                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校英文报组织的有关自我保护的征文活动写一份建议信，建议同学们重视地震知识和技能。内容包括：人们忽视地震知识的现象；重视地震逃生知识的意义；掌握地震逃生技能的途径。【详解】1.词汇积累导致：result in→lead to不幸运的是：unfortunately→unluckily因此：therefore→consequently定期：regularly→on a regular basis 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Therefore, I strongly advise everyone to equip ourselves with life-saving skills.拓展句：Therefore, I strongly advise everyone to equip ourselves with life-saving skills, which are really important.【点睛】[高分句型1] Earthquakes are natural disasters that result in severe consequences. (运用了that引导的限定性定语从句)[高分句型2] Unfortunately, people often fail to prepare themselves with necessary skills, thinking an earthquake only a theoretical possibility in their places. (运用了非谓语动词作状语)8．Dear Tom,Glad to receive your letter. Here are some suggestions on making a short video of Chinese tai chi on Tik Tok.To begin with, you’d better pay more attention to the important factors of video-making like sound and visual special effects, which can contribute to your short video’s success. As for its content, it would be good to introduce some key aspects of tai chi like its origin, styles and moves, even the Chinese culture behind it.Hopefully, my advice will be of use to you. Wish you good luck!Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。美国的交换生Tom准备参加抖音短视频创作竞赛并写信求助，要求考生给他回信提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→delighted 首先：to begin with→at first建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hopefully, my advice will be of use to you.拓展句：I hope that my advice will be of use to you.【点睛】【高分句型】Here are some suggestions on making a short video of Chinese tai chi on Tik Tok.（运用了倒装句型）【高分句型】To begin with, you’d better pay more attention to the important factors of video-making like sound and visual special effects, which can contribute to your short video’s success.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）9．Dear Tom,I’m glad to learn that you are going to participate in the sports club in your school. I think it is a good choice for you and also a good chance to show your talent in sport.There is no doubt that sport is good for our health. A person who takes exercise regularly will keep fit, so joining  the sports club is a good way to do exercise. what’s more, you will take exercise with your friends . By doing so,  you can be close to them . If you join the English club, prepare appropriate clothes and shoes. The most important thing is that you should stick to it all the time. I hope to see you gain a lot in the sports club.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求给考生英国朋友Tom写一封信，告诉他对于他参加英语俱乐部的意见。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in  →join in天赋：talent → gift保持健康：keep fit → keep healthy坚持：stick to → persist in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：what’s more, you will take exercise with your friends.拓展句：what’s more, you will take exercise with your friends who have the same interest with you.【点睛】【高分句型1】A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit, so joining  the sports club is a good way to do exercise.（运用了who引导的限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】The most important thing is that you should stick to it all the time. （运用了that引导的表语从句）10．Dear Sam,I’m sorry to hear you’ve encountered some setbacks in learning Chinese. I can totally relate to your feelings.In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language. Therefore, Chinese TV series and movies are highly recommended. Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.Cheer up! I’m positive you’ll rise to all the challenges as long as you find the proper ways.(85 words)Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就好友Sam谈到的因中文学习上遇到困难而心情沮丧这一问题给Sam回信并提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累遭遇：encounter→meet with/run into理解：relate to→understand作为、充当：serve as → work as动机，启发：motivation→inspiration2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： I can totally relate to your feelings.拓展句： I can totally relate to your feelings, as this case once happened to me and affected me a lot.【点睛】[高分句型1]In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language. （which引导非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限定性定语从句）