江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。
建议信1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lucy来信告诉你她在与父母相处的过程中遇到一些困难并希望你给她提出建议。请你用英语给她写一封回信，提出你的建议和理由。注意：1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，是某青少年杂志专栏的一名编辑。你收到一封来自读者Frank的邮件，他说他的父母整天忙于工作，对他不够关爱，他感到焦虑与孤独，向你寻求帮助。请你根据要点提示给Frank回一封电子邮件，提出你的建议。要点：1、真诚沟通，表达诉求2、理解父母，学会独立要求：1、词数100左右2、不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，你的好朋友Peter是初三学生。在最近的一次来信中Peter提到因为书写不够美观、整洁，在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想，这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给Peter回信并针对他的问题提出建议。内容包括：1.理解和安慰；2.你的建议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Peter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John写信告诉你，近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到了很大的影响，他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 提出2到3点建议 (1. 改变生活习惯，合理安排时间；2. ……)注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John,You told me in your letter that you were addicted to computer games recently._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Caroline对中国传统文化很感兴趣, 请你给她写一封信, 内容包括∶1. 提出学习建议(内容、途径等);2. 希望加强交流。注意∶1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua6．为了帮助中学生健康成长，新海高中英语报开辟了专栏。假设你是该专栏的编辑李华，收到一封署名为Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近来容易发脾气，使得正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Worried,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，是校报“Can I help you?”专栏编辑。阅读下面一封读者来信，给他回信。内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；   2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Hua,My roommates at my dorm isolate (孤立) me all the time. They have their own group chat and never talk to me. We have never had any real conflicts (冲突). I don’t know whether it’s because of different hobbies or my personality. Should I do something to change the situation?JiujiuDear Jiujiu,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Hua8．假如你是李华， 你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助，说进入高中后因为考试压力大，晚上常常难以入眠或半夜易醒，睡眠问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英请给他回一封信，主要内容包括：1. 表示理解和安慰；2. 提出至少2条建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jack,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua9．假设你是中学生李华，你的朋友Eric最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 提出建议并说明理由；3. 表达美好希望。Dear Eric,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，你的朋友Charles因小事和同学发生争执，关系闹僵了，他来信向你请教如何与同学和睦相处，请根据以下要点写一封建议信，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 如何解决该矛盾；3. 如何与同学和睦相处。注意：1. 写作词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Charles,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua                   1．Dear Lucy,How are you going these days? I heard that you have trouble getting along with your parents. I can offer some useful suggestions based on my own experience.First, you should understand your parents because they are busy with their work every day. Talk with your parents when it is convenient. Second, you need to do some activities together with your parents. This will make the relationship closer. Third, share your school life with your parents at dinner. It’s the best time for you to learn about each other’s life.I hope these will be helpful and you are sure to make a change and live with your parents happily.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Lucy写一封回信，对于她在与父母相处的过程中遇到的一些困难提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累做某事有困难：have trouble doing sth→have difficulty doing sth提供：offer→provide建议：suggestion→advice高兴地：happily→delightedly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Second, you need to do some activities together with your parents.拓展句：Second, what you need is to do some activities together with your parents.【点睛】【高分句型1】I heard that you have trouble getting along with your parents.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】First, you should understand your parents because they are busy with their work every day.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）2．One possible version:Dear Frank,I understand your feelings. You do need the support and love from your parents—after all, you are still a teenager. But don’t be unhappy. Try the following suggestions and see if they help. First, talk to your parents sincerely and tell them you are in need of their love, which can help you get rid of loneliness and stress. Second, try to understand your parents. Maybe it is a fact that they are busy with their work, or they have to work hard to support the family. More importantly, you are not a child any more and you should learn to be independent.I hope you’ll find my advice helpful. I wish you all the best.Yours’Li Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Frank回一封邮件，就父母对他不够关爱，他感到焦虑与孤独的情况给出自己的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice/tip理解：understand→comprehend忙于：be busy with→be occupied with有用的：helpful→useful2.句式拓展同义句转化原句： First, talk to your parents sincerely and tell them you are in need of their love, which can help you get rid of loneliness and stress.拓展句： First, talk to your parents sincerely, telling them you are in need of their love, which can help you get rid of loneliness and stress.【点睛】【高分句型1】First, talk to your parents sincerely and tell them you are in need of their love, which can help you get rid of loneliness and stress.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Maybe it is a fact that they are busy with their work, or they have to work hard to support the family. （运用了that引导主语从句）3．Dear Peter,I am really sorry to learn that you have been troubled by your poor handwriting, which causes you not to get good grades in your composition. I truly understand your situation and want to show you my concern. I have some suggestions for you.Firstly, why not improve your handwriting from now on? As a saying goes, it is better late than never. Secondly, it is highly suggested that you should buy a copybook and imitate every word in the book. Finally, turn to your classmates or teachers who are good at handwriting for advice.   I do hope my suggestions are of help to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的朋友Peter回封信安慰他，并给他在书写方面的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累困扰：be troubled by→be disturbed by首先：firstly→first of all提高：improve→enhance擅长：be good at→have a good command of2.句式拓展同义句原句：I truly understand your situation and want to show you my concern. 拓展句：Truly understanding your situation, I want to show you my concern. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, it is highly suggested that you should buy a copybook and imitate every word in the book.（运用了that引导主语从句）【高分句型2】Finally, turn to your classmates or teachers who are good at handwriting for advice.（运用了who引导定语从句）4．Dear John,You told me in your letter that you were addicted to computer games recently. I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health. Knowing you worry about it very much, I’m willing to give you some advice.Firstly, you should change your living habits and arrange your time reasonably, such as getting up and going to bed at a specific time so that you can form a good habit. Besides, you should do exercise regularly to strengthen your body. I do hope that you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John写信告诉你，近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到了很大的影响，他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。【详解】1. 词汇积累影响：effect→ influence 增强：build up→ strengthen摆脱：get out of→ get rid of期待：expect→ look forward to2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：Besides, you should do exercise regularly to strengthen your body.拓展句：Besides, it is important that you should do regular exercise to strengthen your body.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作hear的宾语和由which引导的定语从句）[高分句型2] Firstly, you should change your living habits and arrange your time reasonably, such as getting up and going to bed at a specific time so that you can form a good habit. （运用了由so that连接的结果状语从句）5．One possible version:Dear Caroline.Learning that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to offer you some advice on how to have a better understanding of it.Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, which can be reflected in various fields, such as ancient Chinese poetry, acupuncture, calligraphy, Tai Chi and so on. You can choose one to learn to gain deep insights into traditional Chinese culture. Engage yourself in all kinds of traditional culture activities if possible. If you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I will be glad to help you, as I have been practicing it these days. Also. you can turn to a local Confucius Institute for help. I believe you are bound to learn it well. Hope to strengthen cultural eschanges with you.Yours sincerely. Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学习中国传统文化的学习内容和学习途径，给英国笔友Caroline给出建议，并表达加强文化交流的愿望。【详解】1.词汇积累：对……感兴趣：be interested in → be crazy about一定会……：be bound to do → not fail to do相信：believe → be convinced that各种各样的：all kinds of → a wide range of2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Learning that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to offer you some advice on how to have a better understanding of it.拓展局：Knowing that you have a strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, I am more than glad to provide some tips on how to learn more about it.【点睛】【高分句型1】If you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I will be glad to help you, as I have been practicing it these days.（运用了If引导的田间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句）【高分句型2】Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, which can be reflected in various fields, such as ancient Chinese poetry, acupuncture, calligraphy, Tai Chi and so on.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，以及表达中华文化的acupuncture, calligraphy等词汇）6．Dear Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. What’s worse, this kind of symptom has affected your normal study and life. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to adjust yourself so that you can have a normal life. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting yourself. Second, go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为了帮助中学生健康成长，新海高中英语报开辟了专栏。假设你是该专栏的编辑李华，收到一封署名为Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近来容易发脾气，使得正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。【详解】1.词汇积累更糟糕的是：What’s worse→ Still worse建议：tips → suggestions首先：First→ First of all去除：get rid of→ cast off2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting yourself.拓展句：This is a good way in which you can let your anger out without hurting yourself.【点睛】【高分句型1】The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.（运用了that引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Second, go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）7．Dear Jiujiu,Sorry to know that you have unfriendly roommates. This is, unfortunately, a common situation in life when interacting with others. I know it can be difficult and awkward to take the initiative in talking with others. But, in life, it is often up to us to make the first move if we want to improve our relationships with others. What I suggest is this: Start with simple, small conversations when you see the right moment. Try to look for similarities you have in common and offer your opinion on how you relate. Knowing how to “break the ice” in this way is an essential social and life skill that is sure to help you in the years to come.If you have further trouble, don’t hesitate to write to me.Best wishes,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生阅读下面一封读者来信，给他回信。内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累不友好的：unfriendly→unamiable不幸地：unfortunately→unluckily建议：suggest→advise提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：What I suggest is this: Start with simple, small conversations when you see the right moment.拓展句：What I suggest is that you should start with simple, small conversations when you see the right moment.【点睛】[高分句型1] But, in life, it is often up to us to make the first move if we want to improve our relationships with others. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)[高分句型2] Knowing how to “break the ice” in this way is an essential social and life skill that is sure to help you in the years to come. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)8．Dear Jack,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting a good night’s sleep due to stress from exams. Don’t worry, as you are not alone. Try the following tips to see if they help.Firstly, you’d better make some changes in your lifestyle ranging from schedules to diets. Go to bed and wake around the same time each day and avoid drinks that may keep you from sleeping, such as coffee and tea. Additionally, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Remember, exams are just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Hence you don’t have to worry too much about the results. Hope my suggestions will be of use to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack回一封信，对于他最近遭遇的问题表示理解和安慰，并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累做某事有困难：have trouble doing→have difficulty doing由于：due to→because of此外：additionally→what’s more因此：hence→therefore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly, you’d better make some changes in your lifestyle ranging from schedules to diets.拓展句：Firstly, you’d better make some changes in your lifestyle which range from schedules to diets.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting a good night’s sleep due to stress from exams. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Don’t worry, as you are not alone.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）【高分句型3】Go to bed and wake around the same time each day and avoid drinks that may keep you from sleeping, such as coffee and tea.（运用了that引导的定语从句）9．Dear Eric,Knowing that you are having some trouble getting along with your parents, I’m terribly sorry and I’m writing to give you some practical suggestions.To begin with, if I were you, I would try to stand in their shoes and understand that they are just as stressed as I am. In that way, I will not lose my temper easily. Additionally, why not have a heart-to-heart talk with them and tell them your trouble? Because communication is always one of the most efficient ways. Above all, make something special for them and say “I love you”. I’m confident that they’ll be more than delighted when they see your small but creative gift.I sincerely hope you will have a better relationship with your parents. Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Eric写一封邮件，就如何改善与父母的关系提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累相处：get along with → get on with换位思考：stand in one’s shoes → put oneself in others’ position高兴的：delighted → pleased另外：additionally → in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Additionally, why not have a heart-to-heart talk with them and tell them your trouble? 拓展句：Additionally, why not have a heart-to-heart talk with them and tell them what is troubling you?【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, if I were you, I would try to stand in their shoes and understand that they are just as stressed as I am. （运用了if引导的虚拟条件句和that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】 I’m confident that they’ll be more than delighted when they see your small but creative gift.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）10．Dear Charles,I’m sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your classmate over small things. I can understand your feelings. Don’t worry. Here is some advice for you. The first thing you need to do is that you should calm down and communicate with your classmate to clear up the misunderstanding between you. What’s more, you had better learn to control your emotion, which will help you. In order to get on well with your classmates, you should be friendly to them and put yourself in others’ position. I hope the advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份，给你的朋友Charles一些建议，教他如何与同学和睦相处。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion冷静：calm down→cool down与……相处地好：get on well with→get along well with有帮助的：helpful→instrumental2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In order to get on well with your classmates, you should be friendly to them and put yourself in others’ position.拓展句：You should be friendly to your classmates and put yourself in others’ position so that you can get on well with them.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your classmate over small things. (运用了that引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】The first thing you need to do is that you should calm down and communicate with your classmate to clear up the misunderstanding between you. (运用省略关系代词引导的定语从句和that引导表语从句)