黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike总说学习太忙而没有时间锻炼身体。最近天气变化无常，他生病了。请你给他写一封电子邮件，对他表示关心并建议他加强锻炼。要点如下：

1.对朋友表示关心；

2.加强锻炼的好处和建议；

3.表示祝愿。

注意：

(1)词数100左右；

(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，最近有很多关于溺水事件的报道，请你向校英文报投稿呼吁同学们珍爱生命，远离溺水。内容包括：

1.陈述现象；

2.提出建议；

3.发出呼吁。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华，你校国际部的交流生Tom给你发来电子邮件，说他在即将到来的考试前出现了忧虑、头痛、睡眠差等情况，请你给他发一封电子邮件提出你的建议，内容包括：

1．说明考试的目的；

2．为考试做好必要的准备；

3．注意健康饮食、运动和睡眠等。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．邮件开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Tom,

I have received your email saying that you are worried about the coming exam.

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李楠，你的澳大利亚Peter将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.到达时间;

2.合适的礼物;

3.餐桌礼仪。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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5．假设你是李华，你的好友 Mary 前不久随父母来了中国，她写信告诉你她觉得很无助， 想征求你的意见去更好地适应中国的高中生活。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件，给她提供一些建议。

1、表示安慰；

2、你的建议和理由；

3、表示祝愿。

注意：1、词数 80-100 词左右。

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，因此写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。

内容如下：

1.深表同情；

2.提出建议(至少三条建议，如参加学校社团活动、与朋友交流、做些户外活动等)并给出理由；

3.希望建议能有所帮助。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Bill,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Paul给你来信，他升入高中后，感觉学习压力很大，请你给他回封电子邮件，安慰他并给他提一些建议。要点如下：

1.寻求家人、老师和同学们的帮助；

2.参加社团，树立自信；

3.劳逸结合，多做运动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Paul,

Nice to have received your last letter.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假如你是高一学生李华，你校校门口在上学时间经常出现交通拥堵，给师生和路人带来很多不便。你校英文报就此向学生征集解决拥堵的良策。请按下列提示用英语写一封信，向校报投稿。

1.写信的目的。

2.分析学校门口拥堵的原因。

3.提出2-3点建议。

注意：词数100左右。

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9．假如你是李华，是一名高中生。因为担心同学们只顾上网而忽视了学习，学校关闭了教室里电脑的上网功能，同学们感到很郁闷。请你给校长写一封建议信。内容包括：

(1)说明教室里的电脑不能上网给同学们带来的不便；

(2)上网的必要性（查资料、看新闻等）；

(3)提出建议。

注意：

(1)词数80~100左右；

(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Headmaster,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Jack对全新的高中生活感到无所适从。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提出一些建议。邮件的内容包括：

1．学习方面；

2．人际关系方面；

3．其他方面。

注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数)；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in dealing with the new high school life.

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I hope you will find these ideas useful. All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Mike,

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill these days and I’m really concerned about your health.

You are always saying that you are so busy studying that you can’t spare any time for exercise. Actually, lack of exercise is harmful to your health. In my opinion, it will be beneficial to your health if you take exercise regularly, which can not only improve your physical health and immune system but also refresh your mind. As a result, your efficiency can be greatly raised.

I hope you can form the habit of taking exercise every day after you recover and wish you good health.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike写一封电子邮件，对他表示关心并建议他加强锻炼。

【详解】1.词汇积累

生病的：ill →sick

担心的：concerned → worried

事实上：actually →in fact

养成：form → develop

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：Actually, lack of exercise is harmful to your health.

拓展句：Actually, it is lack of exercise that is harmful to your health.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you have been ill these days and I’m really concerned about your health.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】In my opinion, it will be beneficial to your health if you take exercise regularly, which can not only improve your physical health and immune system but also refresh your mind.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

2．Dear fellow students,

Recently, there are many reports about drowning. It happened not only to children but also to adults, which is really heartbreaking. So I feel we all should learn to protect ourselves when in or around water.

Here is my advice: First of all, don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. Besides, we shouldn’t go swimming alone. We must find a companion. At the same time,we can’t swim without parents’ permission. What’s more, if we can’t swim,we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Cry out for help immediately.

Life is precious. We must value our lives and keep away from drowning.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，陈述最近有很多关于溺水事件报道的现象，向同学们提出建议，呼吁同学们珍爱生命，远离溺水。

【详解】1.词汇积累

学习：learn→study

建议：advice→suggestion

此外：besides→in addition

立刻：immediately→right away

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes.

拓展句：First of all, don’t swim in rivers or lakes which are strange.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 It happened not only to children but also to adults, which is really heartbreaking.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, if we can’t swim,we mustn’t get into the water to save a person.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

3．Dear Tom,

I have received your email saying that you are worried about the coming exam. It is common for most of us students, but I think we can get rid of it.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a wise attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Furthermore, study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. In addition, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

I hope my suggestions will meet with you approval.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件帮助Tom解决考前焦虑问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累（同义词）

常见的：common →ordinary

重要的：important →significant

除了：In addition → besides

建议：suggestion →advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a wise attitude towards exams.

拓展句：First of all, in my opinion, it’s important that we should have a wise attitude towards exams.

【点睛】【高分句型1】They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.（运用了部分倒装句）

4．Dear Peter,

 How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

 First of all, I suggest you arrive 5 to 10 minutes early, which is very common in traditional Chinese culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts, such as souvenirs from my own country. In addition, you should also pay attention to the table manners. For example, you shouldn’t stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, putting them on your plate is a wise choice.           

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me.

Yours,                                                                   

 Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的澳大利亚Peter将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗这一事情，回复邮件给他一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→ suggestions

提出： put forward → come up with

此外：In addition→ what’s more

注意：pay attention to→ focus on

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

拓展句：Because I learn that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I suggest you arrive 5 to 10 minutes early, which is very common in traditional Chinese culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts, such as souvenirs from my own country.（运用了if引导的虚拟语气用法。）

5．Dear Mary,

I’m sorry to learn that you have trouble adapting to your new senior school life in China, but it can be easily changed if you take advantage of my tips.

Firstly, to be confident to communicate with the locals, you should go all out to improve your Chinese. Secondly, I find it important for you to use all resources to make more friends, which can contribute to forgetting your loneliness. Thirdly, there are all kinds of activities in senior school, and you must have a positive attitude to them, because they will help to explore your potential and develop your confidence. I hope it can make a difference to you.

I believe that after a period of adaptation, you will have a good time in China. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Mary写一封电子邮件，对她在中国适应高中生活提供一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

得知：know→learn

建议：suggestion→tip

帮助：assist→help

希望：wish→hope

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thirdly, there are all kinds of activities in senior school, and you must have a positive attitude to them, because they will help to explore your potential and develop your confidence.

拓展句：Thirdly, there are all kinds of activities in senior school, which you must have a positive attitude to, because they will help to explore your potential and develop your confidence.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, to be confident to communicate with the locals, you should go all out to improve your Chinese.(运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)

【高分句型2】Secondly, I find it important for you to use all resources to make more friends, which can contribute to forgetting your loneliness. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

6．Dear Bill,

I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here. However, the situation is easy to change. Now, I’d like to give you some advice.

Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. Secondly, communicate with people who have the same interests with you. Maybe it can help you get rid of your loneliness. Thirdly, do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed. By doing all these things, you can get used to your school life and live happily.

Hope my advice can help you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学的美国学生Bill写一封回信，就他“无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷”一事给出相关建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对……感到困难：have trouble with→have difficulty with

建议：advice→suggestions/tips/recommendations

习惯于：get used to→get accustomed to

帮助某人：help sb.→give sb. a hand

2.句式拓展

简单句变成复合句

原句：Thirdly, do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed.

拓展句：Thirdly, do some outdoor activities which can make you relaxed.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Secondly, communicate with people who have the same interests with you. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

7．Dear Paul,

Nice to have received your last letter. I understand that you are under a lot of stress now. Here are some suggestions for you.

Firstly, I suggest you talk about your trouble with your parents, teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. Secondly, it is a great idea to join a club you are interested in, which will surely help you make new friends and build your confidence. In addition, doing more exercise in your spare time is a wonderful way to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

I hope my suggestions can be helpful and you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Paul回一封电子邮件，对于他感觉学习压力很大的问题表示安慰并给他提一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：stress→pressure

此外：in addition→what’s more

空闲时间：spare time→free time

开心地：happily→delightedly

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, I suggest you talk about your trouble with your parents, teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.

拓展句：Firstly, I suggest you talk about your trouble with your parents, teachers and classmates so that you can get help from them.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand that you are under a lot of stress now.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Secondly, it is a great idea to join a club you are interested in, which will surely help you make new friends and build your confidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】In addition, doing more exercise in your spare time is a wonderful way to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

8．Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 1. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.

With so many parents taking their children to school, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing a lot of inconvenience to us.

In order to avoid traffic jams, I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken. First, riding a bike or going to school on foot is a good choice, which not only helps to reduce traffic jams, but also build up students’ health. Second, private cars should not be allowed to park in front of the school gate.

I do hope my suggestions will be considered and the problem can be solved soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示用英语写一封信，就如何解决学校门口的拥堵向校报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

减少：reduce→decrease

建议：suggestion→advice

考虑：consider→take into consideration

解决：solve→work out

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With so many parents taking their children to school, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing a lot of inconvenience to us.

拓展句：As so many parents take their children to school, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing a lot of inconvenience to us.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, riding a bike or going to school on foot is a good choice, which not only helps to reduce traffic jams, but also build up students’ health.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I do hope my suggestions will be considered and the problem can be solved soon.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

9．Dear headmaster,

I’m writing to request you to allow us to surf the Internet in the computer classroom.

Without the Internet, we are unable to use the computer conveniently, which makes us very unpleasant because we can’t search for the information when we are in need of it.

As far as I am concerned, it would be beneficial for us if you allow us to surf the Internet. For one thing, we can search for answers to deal with some problems that we might encounter in our lives. For another, it is necessary for us to learn about the latest news. We will fail to connect the society, even the world if we cannot reach the Internet. Last but not least, we are not children anymore, so we have the ability to be responsible for our behavior. I promise we won’t utilize the Internet for unreasonable purposes.

I would appreciate it a lot if you can take my advice into consideration. I am looking forward to your final decision.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校长写一封建议信。内容包括：（1）说明教室里的电脑不能上网给同学们带来的不便；（2）上网的必要性（查资料、看新闻等）；（3）提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

要求：request→require

有益的：beneficial→helpful

必要的：necessary→essential

在我看来：as far as I am concerned→in my opinion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For another, it is necessary for us to learn about the latest news.

拓展句：For another, it is necessary that we learn about the latest news.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Without the Internet, we are unable to use the computer conveniently, which makes us very unpleasant because we can’t search for the information when we are in need of it. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，because引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] For one thing, we can search for answers to deal with some problems that we might encounter in our lives. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)

10．Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in dealing with the new high school life. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.

Firstly, we students must work hard at all the lessons and try our best to get good grades. Only in this way can we attend an ideal university. Secondly, we should get along well with our classmates and teachers, which will further help improve our social skills. Thirdly, we have to learn how to live our own lives. After all, we’ll have to live on our own in the near future.

I hope you will find these ideas useful. All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack对全新的高中生活感到无所适从。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

努力学习：work hard→study hard

尽最大努力：try our best to→do our utmost to

与……友好相处：get along well with→get on well with sb

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Thirdly, we have to learn how to live our own lives. After all, we’ll have to live on our own in the near future.

拓展句：Thirdly, we have to learn how to live our own lives, because we’ll have to live on our own in the near future.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Secondly, we should get along well with our classmates and teachers, which will further help improve our social skills. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Only in this way can we attend an ideal university. (运用了倒装句型)