黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共16页。

申请信
1．美国某中学举办英语暑假训练营，开设以下课程: cooking, swimming, giving first aid, playing football/basketball。
假定你是李华，请你写封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。内容包括:
1. 你感兴趣的一门课程；
2. 为什么想学这门课程；
3. 你期望从中学到什么。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
LiHua
2．假定你是李华，是我校高二（三）班的一名学生，我校将创办英语社团，现面向全体学生招收新成员，对此你很感兴趣，要写一封申请信，
要点：1 自我介绍
2.交代写信目的
3.介绍自我优势（列出 2—3点即可）
4.表达希望获准
要求：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数
提示词：招募 recruit  vt.      申请 apply  vt.
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假设你是高二学生李华，你从学校网站上得知你校的英语读书俱乐部想招募一名负责人，你很感兴趣。请你用英语给负责此项工作的外教Steven写一封申请信，内容包括：
1.说明写信意图；
2.陈述自己的优势。
注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Steven,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，暑假将至，双鸭山市第一中学模拟联合国社团（Model United Nations Club）将在假期招募新成员，组织培训并在8月1日举办一次模拟联合国大会（Model United Nations Conference）。作为该校高一学生的你想申请参加此次活动，请给指导教师Miss. Gao写信表达自己的愿望，要点应包括
1. 假期时间多，多参加活动可以丰富课余生活，加深和同学们的友谊
2. 模拟联合国活动能锻炼英语口语能力，写作能力，还能提升与人交流的能力
3. 多参加类似的活动对将来申请大学有帮助
注意内容可适当添加使行文连贯，字数100字左右
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5．假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：
1．个人情况：年龄，性别，一个北京的高中生
2．个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况
3．承诺：提供最佳服务
注意：1.词数在100 词左右
2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯
3.信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数
服务 service    承诺  promise    Winter Asian Games. 亚洲冬季运动会（简写WAG）         交流communicate   对… 熟悉  be familiar with sth
Dear Sir/Madam,
My Name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.____________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，从网上得知一美国中学正在招募中国中学生志愿者。本次招募旨在通过网络帮助美国学生体验中国春节。请用英语写一封电子邮件提出申请，内容包括：1.愿意参加；2.自身优势；3.计划与期望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．某中学生英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I Want To Smile”的英语短文。请依据下面提示用英语写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1.微笑的优点。
2.想对其微笑的人物（父母）以及理由。
3.对自己微笑的理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 短文必须包含全部的内容要点。要求观点明确，结构合理，行文连贯。
I Want To Smile
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8．假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；
参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；
希望获准。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。
Dear Sir or Madam,  
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                                                                              Yours sincerely,
                                                                                     Li Hua
9．第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行。现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据自己的情况写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.热爱体育；2.英语流利；3.性格外向开朗；有组织能力
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. ___________________________________________________________
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10．学校运动会将举行，学生会现在面向全校招募志愿者。假设你是李华，一名高中学生，你有意参加此项活动。请你给学校写一封申请信，根据以下要点简要陈述你应聘的理由。
1 .你的爱好：喜欢体育活动；……
2．你的特长：擅长英语；……
3．你的有利条件
4．其他理由：……
注意：1．词数100左右；  2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear sir,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly









1．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad to hear that your school will start an English Summer Camp which includes a variety of courses, such as cooking, swimming, giving first aid, playing football or basketball. I am interested in giving first aid and I am writing to sign up for the course.
I choose to attend the courses due to the fact that first aid is of great importance to people. If a person gets injured and needs medical care before a doctor can be called in, every second counts in saving life, in which case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives. Besides personally, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopefully, the course will help me to learn about how to deal with medical emergencies.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，报名参加美国某中学举办的英语暑假训练营其中一门课程的学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
各种各样的：a variety of=varieties of
重要：count→matter
应对：deal with=handle
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides personally, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopefully, the course will help me to learn about how to deal with medical emergencies.
拓展句：Besides personally, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research, for which the course is expected to help me to learn about how to deal with medical emergencies.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If a person gets injured and needs medical care before a doctor can be called in, every second counts in saving life, in which case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives.  (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I choose to attend the courses due to the fact that first aid is of great importance to people (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
2．Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Li Hua. It's my honour to send this letter to you.I am very interested in your English drama club when I saw your picture poster.And I would like to join the big family if you appove.I have many hobbies, such as English songs, films, playing football. By the way,I am the organization member in my class and I think they are my strength.My classmate like me very much and they all enjoy our class activities. I hope I can be in charge of the organization task in your club.And I will be a good member in this club.I would like to show myself and practise my self
And I also can make many friends by this way.
Hope you can give me the chance.Thank you very much. Waiting for your good news.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】李华是高二（三）班的一名学生，学校将创办英语社团，现面向全体学生招收新成员，李华对此很感兴趣，要求写一封申请信，要点：1 自我介绍 2.交代写信目的 3.介绍自我优势（列出 2—3点即可）4.表达希望获准。
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封申请信。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：It's my honour to……I would like to join…… in charge of, make many friends. show myself and practise my self.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I can be in charge of the organization task in your club.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Steven,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Two student. Having learned from our school’s website that you’re looking for a new leader for the English reading club, I’m quite interested in it.
First, I’m crazy about reading and I’ve read a large number of books since my childhood. Besides, I have a good command of English, and I’m able to read and write English articles without any difficulty. More importantly, I’m experieced in dealing with students, and I think I can attract more students to join us and fall in love with reading.
Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你从学校网站上得知你校的英语读书俱乐部想招募一名负责人，你很感兴趣。要求用英语写一封信给负责此项工作的外教Steven．内容包括：1.说明写信意图；2.陈述自己的优势。本文格式要符合信的要求．
【详解】本文为申请信。第一段描述在哪看到广告的以及所要应聘职位的名称。本文要写从学校网站得知英语读书俱乐部想招募一名负责人，你很感兴趣。第二段是自我介绍。介绍与你所应聘的工作有关的经验并证明你的能力如用have a good command of English，have read many books 等。最后一段讲述希望得到面试的事情并附上自己的联系方式。
【点睛】本文格式正确，结构完整。文章中运用了许多高级词汇如“be crazy about, have a good command of, more importantly, be experienced  in, deal with,  fall in love with”等及“顺序连词“first …, besides…, more importantly”使文章清晰简洁，一气呵成。文章句式较为灵活。第一段中的Having learned from our school’s website that you’re looking for a new leader for the English reading club, I’m quite interested in it.中有一个非谓语having learned…club作状语，及由that引导的宾语从句。第二段在陈述自己的优势时用顺序连词把由since引导的状语从句（, I’m crazy about reading and I’ve read a large number of books since my childhood.），和两由and连词的并列句完美地结合在一起，使本段的内容简单明了，字字如珠。最后一段只用一个被动语态完结本文。总之本文内容完整，结构紧凑，堪称好文。
4．Dear Miss Gao,
I’ve heard that the Model United Nations Club will take in new members this summer and hold a Model United Nations Conference after training on August 1st. I’m writing to sign up for it.
To start with, I am a student in Grade One and in summer holiday I have enough spare time to take part in this activity, through which I can enrich my holiday life and deepen the friendship with my schoolmates. In addition, Model United Nations makes it a chance for us to practice our oral English and also is of great help to our writing skills. Meanwhile, what I can also improve through the activity is the social abilities, which will benefit us a lot in the future. Last but not least, it is not only the academic knowledge but also the practical activities that should be paid attention to when we want to apply for a good university.
Everything taken into consideration, I am eager to get this opportunity and I would appreciate it if my application can be accepted.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给指导教师Mrs. Gao写信，申请加入双鸭山市第一中学模拟联合国社团，参加培训和8月1日举办的模拟联合国大会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：to start with → to begin with / first of all / in the first place
参加：take part in → participate in / join in
另外：in addition → additionally / furthermore / what’s more / on the other side
渴望：be eager to → long for / yearn for / be thirsty for
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In addition, Model United Nations makes it a chance for us to practice our oral English and also is of great help to our writing skills.
拓展句：Additionally, it is a good chance for us to participate in Model United Nations and practice our oral English, which is also do good to our writing ability.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To start with, I am a student in Grade One and in summer holiday I have enough spare time to take part in this activity, through which I can enrich my holiday life and deepen the friendship with my schoolmates.(运用了并列句和介词加which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Last but not least, it is not only the academic knowledge but also the practical activities that should be paid attention to when we want to apply for a good university.(运用了强调句和when引导的时间状语从句)
5．Dear Sir/Madam,
My Name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.
I’m a boy of seventeen years old, and I’m a high school student in Beijing, where the Winter Asian Games will start in. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. And, I have other virtues. I like sports and I’m familiar with Beijing. I’m good at communication and I’m always glad to help others. So, I think I’m suitable for serving the WAG.
Please allow me to be a volunteer for WAG, sir. I promise I will do my best to provide best service for WAG.
Thank you.
【详解】本文是书信类作文，要求用英文给亚洲冬季运动会写一封申请信，申请成为一名志愿者。文章的要点基本上都给了，考生要把要点全部写全，不能有遗漏。而且要适当的拓展内容。主要要点应包括：1．个人情况：年龄，性别，一个北京的高中生。2．个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况。3．承诺：提供最佳服务。在写作过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时切记使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。申请信文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
范文亮点：本篇范文简洁连贯，使用的句型上变化多样。范文有许多亮点：例如：1. 开门点题，写明写信的目的；2. I’m a boy of seventeen years old, and I’m a high school student in Beijing, where the Winter Asian Games will start in.并列连词and让句子层次分明，定语从句使句子更高级；3. 短语communicate with，familiar with，good at，suitable for等的使用是简单句不再乏味；4.最后一段言简意赅，直接明了。
6．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a senior high school student from China and happy to learn your school is recruiting volunteers to help your studens experience Chinese Spring Festival. I’m writing to see if I will be lucky enough to get involved in this activity.
I have leraned English for over ten years, which enables me to speak good English. In addition, I love to celebrate the spring festivals by making dumplings with my parents and pay new year’s visit to my friends. Also, I am good at using computers.
Sharing stories, customs and food pictures of our Spring Festival with your students should be great fun and I can’t wait to answer any questions about Chinese traditional festivals.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达考查提纲类作文。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写申请信，主要内容已给出包括1.愿意参加；2.自身优势；3.计划与期望。同时应注意，根据所给主要内容可以把文章分成三部分，围绕要点，可展开论述，同时应注意开头要表明自己是从网上得知一美国中学正在招募中国中学生志愿者。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多短语、连词和主从复合句，如：
1. be lucky enough to，enables me to ，be good at，can’t wait to do sth等高分短语词组的使用。
2.I’m writing to see if I will be lucky enough to get involved in this activity.if引导的宾语从句。
3.I have learned English for over ten years, which enables me to speak good English.which引导的定语从句。
4. 第二段中In addition、Also等连接词的使用，使得句子之间衔接流畅。
7．I want to smile
There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible
  First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
  In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略，故动笔前要认真阅读材料，组织写作内容，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作中注意从三个方面进行叙述，首先介绍微笑的优点，然后介绍想对其微笑的人物（父母）以及理由，最后介绍对自己微笑的理由。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力，在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息，不遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
       亮点说明：范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：条件状语从句If we smile at life…；状语从句的省略…whenever and wherever possible；原因状语从句…because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.；倒装句式…only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.等，语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰；同时范文还使用了很多固定短语not only…but also…；in return；bring me up；made great progress；In a word等，使作文内容更加充实；范文注意使用so，First，Then，In a wordA等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯，表达更加生动。
8．Dear sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I’d like to get this job.
For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I’ve been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.
Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                              Yours sincerely,
                                                                               Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：
    本文是写一封电子邮件，申请一个国际中学生家教组织面向中国招聘的兼职中文家教(tutor)。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。把提纲中的三点内容表述完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】    1.使用高级句型：包含定语从句以及现在分词做伴随状语的句子I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language；现在完成进行时I’ve been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English.2.使用了过渡词语：Besides等。3.使用了重要短语：happened to恰巧；be interested in对…感兴趣；be excellent at擅长； look forward to期待。
9．Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I am Li Hua, an 18–year-old boy who is build up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak English fluently, which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.
Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出；写作时可适当添加细节以使行文连贯，并注意使用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。
写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了同位语从句that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. 定语从句who is build up by doing sports regularly in my spare time.和which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble及which benefits me in communicating with strangers. 不定式表目的to apply to be one of the volunteers.并使用了so… that 句型，I would be grateful if...句型、not only…but also…句型。With a very good command of English,taken into account, Looking forward to等词汇及So,Besides,Meanwhile等连接词的使用让文章更流畅自如。
考点：考查提纲类写作。
【名师点睛】书面表达写作步骤：
书面表达一般分为三个过程：思维、组织、表达。先是思维，审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构，把要写的东西在脑中 思考，要对所给材料进行组织，把这些思维作出整理，使其条理、系统化，但这还是较粗糙的，可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误；最后才是表达，把组织过的材料仔细推敲，确定无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等。上述三个过程，最难的是第三个过程，需要我们有较好的语法知识，掌握一定数量的句型、习惯用语和熟练的写作技巧，这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来。总之，要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。平时要多分析范文，多读多背诵，学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感。
10．Dear sir,
I am glad to learn that the sports-meeting is approaching, I really expect to be one ofthem. I’m Li Hua, a senior three student from No.1 Middle School of Chong Qing. I believe I am fit for the volunteering work. Firstly, I am fond of sports, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on. In addition, I am good at spoken English, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with others. What’s more, I have enough time to serve as a volunteer. Above all, it will be a good chancefor me to make new friends. So I do hope you can take me into account.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇申请信，语言简练，要点明确，结构合理，文中使用高级句子。I am glad to learn that the sports-meeting  is  approaching,宾语从句用在句中；Firstly, I am fond of sports, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on动名词运用巧妙； I am good at spoken English, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with others. 非限制性定语从句恰到好处，同时句中还使用了形式宾语；So I do hope you can take me into account.句中的强调谓语堪称经典；另外，Firstly, In addition,  What’s more, Above all, So 为文章增色添彩。
考点：考查话题作文