黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华。你校开设了英语选修课——英语电影赏析（English Film Appreciation），现英语组针对这门选修课向同学们征集意见。请你根据以下内容用英语给你校英语教研组写一封信。

内容主要包括：

1. 说明你对该课的喜爱；

2. 赞赏该课的优点；

3. 对该课的内容或授课方式提出两点建议。

注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，校报英语“学生健康”专栏正在以“How to prevent myopia (近视)?”为主题开展征文活 动。请你写一篇文章投稿，谈谈你对如何预防近视的建议（至少两条）。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.标题可自拟；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假定你是李华，在澳大利亚学习一个月了，但是还是无法适应现在的生活。请给你的澳大利亚朋友 David写一封信，请他给你一些建议。内容包括：

1.饮食方面；

2.语言方面；

3.社交方面。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack打算出国旅行，但是对于去哪个国家犹豫不决。你听说之后，决定给他写一封邮件，劝说他到中国来。要点如下：

1.写信理由； 2. 中国旅行的优势； 3. 表达希望。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可以根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim 打算寒假出京旅游，发来邮件请你推荐一座中国历史文化名城。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1.你的推荐；2.推荐理由；3.食宿建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是李华，下个月要代表学校参加全市中学生英语演讲比赛，你已录制好模拟演讲视频，给外教Terry写封电邮，请他帮你纠正发音并提出修改建议。

注意： 1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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7．假定你是李华，美国交换生John刚来你校就读，但是他朋友很少，感觉非常孤独，希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说后决定用英语给他写一封信沟通一下。内容要点如下：

1.表示关心

2.就如何交朋友给出自己的建议

3.邀请John来家里做客

注意：词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

Dear John,

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Yours

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的朋友Michael要作为交流生代表参加学校即将举行的“中国传统文化知识大赛”，约你陪他一起练习并征求备赛建议。请你就此给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示同意；

2. 备赛建议；

3. 约定见面的时间和地点。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：中国传统文化知识大赛 the Traditional Chinese Culture Competition

Dear Michael,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，鉴于目前乘坐私家车上学的情况比较普遍，受校报编辑委托，为英语专栏写一封倡议书，号召同学们骑自行车上学。内容包括：

1.建议骑自行车上学；

2.骑自行车上学的好处；

3.骑自行车上学需要注意的问题。

注意：

1.词数不少于100词；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear schoolmates,

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10．你的好友Eric作为英国交换生在中国学习，即将回国，他想向他寄宿的家庭（host family）表达这一年来对他的照顾的感激，但不知该如何表示，向你求助。请你以Peter的名义写信，给他一些建议。

要点如下：

1. 写信的目的。

2. 具体的建议。

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

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Yours sincerely,

Peter

1．Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, in the class, we are exposed to different kinds of English films. It helps us improve both our English listening and speaking skills. Apart from that, it is the amazing stories of the heroes that attract me most, because they show us that a person can work hard to make a difference.

As a young student, I suggest that the teacher choose some more films that appeal to us teenagers, thus making the course more interesting. Besides, more activities should be included so that we can have more chances to practice our English.

I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I hope that the course will gain wide popularity among the students in our school.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给学校英语教研组写一封信，表达对英语选修课——英语电影赏析（English Film Appreciation）的意见。

【详解】词汇积累

喜欢：like→love

帮助：help→assist

建议：suggest→advise

有趣的：interesting→funny

2.句式拓展

原句：First, in the class, we are exposed to different kinds of English films. It helps us improve both our English listening and speaking skills.

拓展句：First, in the class, we are exposed to different kinds of English films, which helps us improve both our English listening and speaking skills.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Apart from that, it is the amazing stories of the heroes that attract me most, because they show us that a person can work hard to make a difference. (运用了强调句、原因状语从句及宾语从句)

[高分句型2] As a young student, I suggest that the teacher choose some more films that appeal to us teenagers, thus making the course more interesting. (suggest后宾语从句中运用了虚拟语气、that引导的定语从句以及现在分词作状语)

2．范文

How to prevent myopia?

Nowadays, there are more and more children suffering from myopia, which is mainly caused by excessive reading and close work. Over time this leads to permanent nearsightedness, even blindness. Here're some tips for us teenagers to prevent myopia.

First of all, allow the eyes to be rested. For example, after working for about 20 minutes, look away from one to two minutes, or close your eyes for 30 seconds to a minute. As reading when the distance changes continuously is harmful to the eyes, avoid reading books on vehicles. Since appropriate light holds the key to a good vision, always ensure a good light when reading or studying, even on daytime or nighttime. Finally, mind the gap from the eyes to the subjects when reading and writing. Only by doing these can we protect our eyes well.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生谈谈对如何预防近视的建议。

【详解】词汇积累

主要地：mainly→largely

引起：lead to→give rise to

预防：prevent→guard against

确保：ensure→make sure

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here're some tips for us teenagers to prevent myopia.

拓展句：Here're some tips that can help us teenagers prevent myopia.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Nowadays, there are more and more children suffering from myopia, which is mainly caused by excessive reading and close work. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] As reading when the distance changes continuously is harmful to the eyes, avoid reading books on vehicles. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)

3．Dear David,

I've been studying in Australia for a month, but I still can't adapt to the present life. So I am writing to you to give me some advice.

First, I want to know what food is good for me in Australia since I am not accustomed to the food here. Second, I would like to improve my spoken English, which is of vital importance to my life here. Last but not least, I am eager to make friends with the other students, but I don't know where to start. Can you give me some advice?

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给澳大利亚朋友 David写一封信，请他给你一些在澳大利亚学习期间适应生活的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适应：fit →adapt to

对……有好处：be beneficial to →be good for

习惯于：be used to →be accustomed to

重要：be important →be of vital importance

渴望做某事：desire to do sth. →be eager to do sth.

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am writing to you to give me some advice.

拓展句：I am writing to you in order that you can give me some advice.

原句：I am eager to make friends with the other students.

拓展句：I am eager to make friends with the other students who have the same interests with me.

【点睛】[高分句型1] First, I want to know what food is good for me in Australia since I am not accustomed to the food here. (运用了what引导的宾语从句及since引导的原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] Second, I would like to improve my spoken English, which is of vital importance to my life here.. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)

4．Dear Jack,

Hearing that you are planning to travel abroad but still hesitate about which country to go to, I'm writing to suggest you come to China.

As you know, China is a huge country with 56 ethnic groups, so one visit to China means different cultural experiences. Besides, China offers a variety of choices of wonderful food, which will satisfy not only your stomach but your eyes. When it comes to the transportation, China's well-developed roads and high-speed trains will make it easy for you to get around.

I'm looking forward to your coming!

【分析】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack写信，建议他来中国游玩。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 写信理由；

2. 中国旅行的优势；

3. 表达希望。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

plan to do sth.; a variety of; not only…but also…; when it comes to…; get around; make it easy for sb. to do sth.; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.Hearing that you are planning to travel abroad but still hesitate about which country to go to, I'm writing to suggest you come to China.

2.As you know, China is a huge country with 56 ethnic groups, so one visit to China means different cultural experiences.

3.Besides, China offers a variety of choices of wonderful food, which will satisfy not only your stomach but your eyes.

4.When it comes to the transportation, China's well-developed roads and high-speed trains will make it easy for you to get around.

5.I'm looking forward to your coming!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系： besides, not only…but (also)

2.表因果关系：so

3.表转折对比关系：but

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning to travel abroad but still hesitate about which country to go to, I'm writing to suggest you come to China. 句中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句。

[高分句型2] Besides, China offers a variety of choices of wonderful food, which will satisfy not only your stomach but your eyes.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型3]As you know, China is a huge country with 56 ethnic groups, so one visit to China means different cultural experiences.句中as引导非限制性定语从句。

5．Dear Jim,

I am so excited to learn that you are planning to travel to another city in China. After careful consideration, I recommend Xi’an to you.

Your journey to Xi’an will be one of ancient wonders. As the capital city for 13 dynasties, it is home to countless historic relics – the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Great Wild Goose Pagoda and many others. Xi’an is also a wonderland for you to explore the fascinating art and culture of the East.

If you decide to go there, you can choose a hotel near the Ancient City Wall, which provides both good views and convenient transportation. Besides, the bustling Snack Street is a must for tourists with its incredible variety of local snacks.

I am sure you will enjoy yourself in this historic city!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim回复邮件，推荐一座中国历史文化名城。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总-分-总法

要点：

1.你的推荐；

2.推荐理由；

3.食宿建议。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

plan to；recommend sth. to sb.；the capital city；countless historic relics；the Terra-cotta Warriors；the Great Wild Goose Pagoda；decide to；both…and；with its incredible variety of local snacks；enjoy oneself

第三步：连词成句

1. I am so excited to learn that you are planning to travel to another city in China.

2. After careful consideration, I recommend Xi’an to you.

3. Your journey to Xi’an will be one of ancient wonders.

4. As the capital city for 13 dynasties, it is home to countless historic relics – the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Great Wild Goose Pagoda and many others.

5. Xi’an is also a wonderland for you to explore the fascinating art and culture of the East.

6. If you decide to go there, you can choose a hotel near the Ancient City Wall, which provides both good views and convenient transportation.

7. The bustling Snack Street is a must for tourists with its incredible variety of local snacks.

8. I am sure you will enjoy yourself in this historic city!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1. 表文章结构顺序：After；

2.表并列补充关系：and；Besides；both…and；also；What is more, Furthermore（供参考）

3.表条件关系：if；

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am so excited to learn that you are planning to travel to another city in China.（使用了由that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2] If you decide to go there, you can choose a hotel near the Ancient City Wall, which provides both good views and convenient transportation.（使用了由if引导的状语从句和由which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3] I am sure you will enjoy yourself in this historic city!（使用了省略that引导的宾语从句）

6．Dear Mr. Terry,

How time fies! It's been a month since you went back home after a year's teaching us spoken English. How are you recently? I'm writing to ask you for help. I’m going to participate in an English speech contest on behalf of our school next month. I’ve practiced my speech in front of a video monitor but I find it still far from satisfaction.

      For a start, I’m not sure of the proper pronunciation and intonation of some English words. And then, I have some difficulty marking phrase breaks correctly, which impedes the rhythmic flow of speech greatly. Would you be so kind to spare some time to go through the videos attached and make some necessary corrections for me? In addition, I’m wondering whether you can help me with some modifications online at your convenience.

       I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。李华下个月要代表学校参加全市中学生英语演讲比赛，他已录制好模拟演讲视频，要求考生以李华的身份给外教Terry写封邮件，请他纠正发音并提出修改建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

要求：

1. 请他帮助纠正发音；

2. 提出修改建议。

第二步:列提纲

ask for help; participate in an English speech contest; on behalf of; practice the speech; far from satisfaction; be not sure of; pronunciation and intonation; have difficulty doing sth,; mark phrase breaks correctly; impede the rhythmic flow of speech; be so kind to; spare time to do sth.; go through the videos; make correctuons; help sb. with sth.; at your convenience; lend sb. a hand; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm writing to ask you for help.

2. I’m going to participate in an English speech contest on behalf of our school next month.

3. I’ve practiced my speech in front of a video monitor but I find it still far from satisfaction.

4. I’m not sure of the proper pronunciation and intonation of some English words.

5. I have some difficulty marking phrase breaks correctly, which impedes the rhythmic flow of speech greatly.

6. Would you be so kind to spare some time to go through the videos attached and make some necessary corrections for me?

7. In addition, I’m wondering whether you can help me with some modifications online at your convenience.

8. I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序：For a start; And then

2.表并列补充关系：In addition

3.表因果关系（供参考）：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] And then, I have some difficulty marking phrase breaks correctly, which impedes the rhythmic flow of speech greatly.(使用了非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] In addition, I’m wondering whether you can help me with some modifications online at your convenience.(使用了whether引导的宾语从句)

7．One possible version:

Dear John，

I am sorry to hear that you are lonely in this new school. Now I'd like to offer you some suggestions.

It’s normal for you to feel lonely because you are living in an entirely new environment. To adapt yourself to the unfamiliar surroundings, you'd better take an active part in class and after-school activities. What’s more, don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at. It's easier to make friends when you have similar interests with others. To be frank, I'd like to be your friend and I invite you to come to my house on Sunday.

I hope everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国交换生John写一封沟通信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 表示关心；

2. 就如何交朋友给出自己的建议;

3. 邀请John来家里做客。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be sorry to hear that；would like to; offer sb. some suggestions; It’s normal for sb to do; feel lonely; live in; adapt oneself to; take an active part in; after-school activities; be afraid to; had better do; be good at; It's easier to; make friends; have similar interests with sb.; to be frank; invite sb to do; be fine with; in the future

第三步：连词成句

1. I am sorry to hear that you are lonely in this new school.

2. Now I'd like to offer you some suggestions.

3. It’s normal for you to feel lonely because you are living in an entirely new environment.

4. To adapt yourself to the unfamiliar surroundings, you'd better take an active part in class and after-school activities.

5. Don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at. It's easier to make friends when you have similar interests with others.

6. It's easier to make friends when you have similar interests with others.

7. To be frank, I'd like to be your friend and I invite you to come to my house on Sunday.

8. I hope everything will be fine with you in the future.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：What’s more

2. 表因果关系：Because

3.文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last1. （供参考）

4.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1] To adapt yourself to the unfamiliar surroundings, you'd better take an active part in class and after-school activities.（to do不定式作目的状语）

[高分句型2] It's easier to make friends when you have similar interests with others.（由when引导的时间状语从句）

8．One possible version:

Dear Michael,

I’m more than delighted to learn that you are to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Competition. I’m willing to give you a hand and offer some practical suggestions at your request.

To begin with, it is necessary for you to consult some books concerning traditional Chinese culture, thus broadening your horizons and well equipping you for the coming competition. Secondly, why not watch some video clips? You are bound to get some inspiration from them as well.

As for when and where to meet, can we make it at 4：00 this Friday afternoon in your classroom? If it’s not convenient for you, please let me know what time is suitable for you in advance.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Michael写信，同意陪他一起练习，并给他一些备赛的建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 表示同意；

2. 备赛建议；

3. 约定见面的时间和地点。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

more than; participate in; be willing to do sth.; give sb. a hand; at one’s request; to begin with; be bound to; be suitable for; in advance; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.I’m more than delighted to learn that you are to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Competition.

2.I’m willing to give you a hand and offer some practical suggestions at your request.

3.To begin with, it is necessary for you to consult some books concerning traditional Chinese culture, thus broadening your horizons and well equipping you for the coming competition. 4.Secondly, why not watch some video clips?

5.You are bound to get some inspiration from them as well.

6.As for when and where to meet, can we make it at 4：00 this Friday afternoon in your classroom?

7.If it’s not convenient for you, please let me know what time is suitable for you in advance.

8.Looking forward to hearing from you.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：to begin with; Secondly

2.表因果关系：Thus

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to learn that you are to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Competition.句中that引导宾语从句。

[高分句型2] If it’s not convenient for you, please let me know what time is suitable for you in advance.句中if引导条件状语从句。

9．Dear Schoolmates,

With the development of modern society, it’s more and more common for students to go to school by car, which does do harm to our environment.I’m writing to advocate all the students to ride bikes to school.

As is known to all, riding bicycle is of great benefit to us.Therefore it is highly recommended that we ride bikes to school.Firstly, riding bicycles is a practical way to build up our physical strength and protect the environment.Secondly, parking a bicycle is easy and convenient, no matter how busy the traffic could be.Thirdly, the pressure of traffic in rush hours can be greatly relieved.While riding bikes, we must lay great emphasis on safety issues.Crossing the street, you must ride with great caution, and pay attention to vehicles as well as pedestrians.

Don't hesitate, everyone. Let’s ride to school.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生英语专栏写一封倡议书，号召同学们骑自行车上学。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.建议骑自行车上学；

2.骑自行车上学的好处；

3.骑自行车上学需要注意的问题。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

with the development of; by car; do harm to; advocate; highly recommended; build up; convenient; in rush hours; be of great benefit; with great caution; vehicles; hesitate

第三步：连词成句

1. With the development of modern society, it’s more and more common for students to go to school by car, which does do harm to our environment.

2. I’m writing to advocate all the students to ride bikes to school.

3. Therefore it is highly recommended that we ride bikes to school.

4. Firstly, riding bicycles is a practical way to build up our physical strength and protect the environment.

5. Secondly, parking a bicycle is easy and convenient, no matter how busy the traffic could be.

6. Thirdly, the pressure of traffic in rush hours can be greatly relieved.

7. While riding bikes, we must lay great emphasis on safety issues.

8. As is known to all, riding bicycle is of great benefit to us.

9. Crossing the street, you must ride with great caution, and pay attention to vehicles as well as pedestrians.

10. Don't hesitate, everyone.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly

2.表因果关系：Therefore

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] With the development of modern society, it’s more and more common for students to go to school by car, which does do harm to our environment. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] While riding bikes, we must lay great emphasis on safety issues. (运用了省略句)

10．Dear Eric,

Delighted to know that you will return home, I am writing this letter in response to the question in your last letter about how to express your gratitude towards your host family for their devotion to you.

Frankly speaking, it can be puzzling when it comes to expressing thanks in China, especially for a foreigner like you . However, there certainly exists a rule you should stick to, that is to express with sincerity. If I were you, I would prepare a special present for each of the family members with thanks note attached to it. More importantly, specific details about their acts of kindness should be included, which can definitely melt people’s hearts.

May you have a wonderful journey back home!

Yours Sincerely,

Peter.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的好友Eric作为英国交换生在中国学习，即将回国，他想向他寄宿的家庭表达这一年来对他的照顾的感激，但不知该如何表示，向你求助。要求考生以Peter的名义给他写一封建议信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 写信的目的。

2. 具体的建议。

3. 表达祝愿。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Delighted to do; return home; in response to; last; express; gratitude; host family; devotion;

Frankly speaking; puzzling; when it comes to doing; especially; However; certainly; exists; stick to; sincerity; prepare for; thanks note; attach; More importantly; specific details ; include; definitely melt.

第三步：连词成句

1.Delighted to know that you will return home, I am writing this letter in response to the question in your last letter about how to express your gratitude towards your host family for their devotion to you.

2.Frankly speaking, it can be puzzling when it comes to expressing thanks in China, especially for a foreigner like you.

3.However, there certainly exists a rule you should stick to, that is to express with sincerity.

4.If I were you, I would prepare a special present for each of the family members with thanks note attached to it.

5.More importantly, specific details about their acts of kindness should be included, which can definitely melt people’s hearts.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：Frankly speaking.

2.表并列补充关系：More importantly.

3.表转折对比关系：However.

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Delighted to know that you will return home, I am writing this letter in response to the question in your last letter about how to express your gratitude towards your host family for their devotion to you. (使用that引导宾语从句。)

[高分句型2] Frankly speaking, it can be puzzling when it comes to expressing thanks in China, especially for a foreigner like you. (使用when引导时间状语从句。)

[高分句型3] More importantly, specific details about their acts of kindness should be included, which can definitely melt people’s hearts.(使用which引导定语从句。)