湖南高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是李华，有位喜欢宅在家里的名叫Chris的网友在网上吐槽，觉得友谊可有可无。请你给他写一封邮件，并建议如何做，内容如下：

1. 交朋友的好处；

2. 应交什么样的人做朋友；

3. 如何与朋友相处。

注意：

①词数 80 词左右；

②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假设你是 Edward Li，你就本校的学生日常阅读情况进行了调查，请就调查结果给学校图书馆长写一封添置阅读书籍的建议信，内容包括：

1.关于我校学生目前常读的课外阅读书籍的介绍；

2.建议购买不少于两类课外阅读书籍并说明理由；

3.对你建议购买类型的书籍举例说明。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80 左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡上相应位置作答。

Dear Librarian,

I’ve made a survey about what books we students are reading and am writing to recommend two types of books that I think the library should buy.

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Yours faithfully,

Edward Li

3．假定你是Teens杂志社“悄悄话(Secret Words)”的栏目编辑David，刚收到李华的一封求助信(信件内容附后)。请阅信后给他回一封信。内容包含：

1.感谢对方的信任，并表明写信目的；

2.肯定对方的优点，并回应他的困惑；

3、表达希望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

I’m Li Hua, a faithful reader of Teens. I’m writing to ask you for help.

I’m under psychological pressure now. To be honest, I’m a motivated boy, so I always expect myself to be perfect in every aspect. But the truth is that I can’t always satisfy myself or meet others’ expectations. I feel so tired and helpless. What should I do next? Can you help me?

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens.

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Yours sincerely,

David

4．假定你是新华中学高一学生李华，你的朋友小明给你来信，表示对高中生活很茫然，并且跟父母关系也很紧张，无法适应新的阶段。请你给他写一封回信，提出相关建议。内容包括：

1. 对高中生活的建议；

2. 与父母相处的方法；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意:1. 字数80词左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Xiao Ming,

I am sorry to hear that......

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5．假设你是李华，你的好朋友Linda最近因为肥胖问题(obesity)而遭到同学的笑，为此她感到非常苦恼，所以写信向你求助。请你用英语给她写一封回信。要点提示：

1. 鼓励她找回自信；

2. 给她提供几个减肥小妙招；

3. 希望她尽快摆脱烦恼。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Dear Linda.

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你的朋友Robert在email中向你倾诉，他在家上网课期间与父母在作息时间与手机使用等方面产生了矛盾。请给他回信。要点：

1.安慰他；

2.提出一些建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Robert，

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane将来中国做一年的交换生，她写信向你寻求尽快适应中国中学校园的建议。请你用英语给她回一封电子邮件，提出至少两点建议。

注意：1. 词数：80词左右；2. 可适当增加细节。

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8．假设你是李华，你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试(HSK)未能通过。请你写一封信给他，内容包括：

1. 表示安慰和鼓励；

2. 提出今后学习汉语的建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，最近你收到了你的朋友Lucy的来信，诉说自己和父母在她的学习问题上经常容易发生争吵。请给她回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示理解；

2.给出建议；

3.安慰对方。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假设你是李华，是学校心理社的社长。你收到了高一同学Tom的求助信。他在信中向你诉说进入高中以来，学习压力很大，不知道怎么办。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容如下：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；

2.提出建议并说明理由；

3.表达期待。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Tom,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

1．Dear Chris,

Learning that you think it not necessary to make friends, I’m writing to talk about friendship with you.

Generally speaking, we can become happier and wiser through friendship and share joy and sadness with true friends. To get sincere friendship, we’d better make friends with those who aren’t only honest and kind but also responsible and enthusiastic. At the same time, it is strongly suggested that we should be loyal to friends and help each other in need.

I sincerely hope my advice will be of help to you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生讲述友谊是什么并建议交什么样的朋友。

【详解】1.词汇积累

知道：learn→know

总的来说：generally speaking→in general

建议：suggest→advise

有帮助的：be of help→be helpful

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：To get sincere friendship, we’d better make friends with those who aren’t only honest and kind but also responsible and enthusiastic.

拓展句：To gain true friendship, we should look for people who are honest, kind, responsible, and passionate.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you think it not necessary to make friends, I’m writing to talk about friendship with you.(由that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】To get sincere friendship, we’d better make friends with those who aren’t only honest and kind but also responsible and enthusiastic.(由who引导的限制性定语从句)

2．One possible version：

Dear Librarian,

I ‘ve made a survey about what books we students are reading and am writing to recommend two types of books that I think the library should buy. My survey shows that students read more fantasy books and less others than we expect. I propose two types of books .

The first type is fantasy novels. I think the library needs more fantasy novels because they are very popular with students. One example of good fantasy novels for the library would be The Lord of the Rings series and the Harry Potter series.

The second type to recommend is biographies. Although they are one of the least popular types of books, students should be encouraged to read more of them. Good biographies like Abraham Lincoln will inspire students to study harder and reach their goals. In addition, biographies of contemporary figures, like Steve Jobs, would also do.

Look forward to reading more of the library’s fantasy novels and biographies soon.

Yours faithfully,

Edward Li

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是 Edward Li，你就本校的学生日常阅读情况进行了调查，请就调查结果给学校图书馆长写一封添置阅读书籍的建议信，内容包括：关于我校学生目前常读的课外阅读书籍的介绍；建议购买不少于两类课外阅读书籍并说明理由；对你建议购买类型的书籍举例说明。

【详解】1.词汇积累

实现目标：reach their goals→realize their goals

此外：in addition→ besides → what’s more

推荐，介绍：recommend→introduce

喜欢：be fond of→like

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In addition, biographies of contemporary figures, like Steve Jobs, would also do.

拓展句：In addition, biographies of contemporary figures, who include Steve Jobs, would also do.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I ‘ve made a survey about what books we students are reading and am writing to recommend two types of books that I think the library should buy.（运用了what引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Although they are one of the least popular types of books, students should be encouraged to read more of them.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）

3．Dear Li Hua,

I'm glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens. As an editor in the column of Secret Words, I'm thankful for your trust. I'm writing to give you my humble opinions.

Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad. Instead, it's a valuable virtue you should stick to. But don't be too hard on yourself or too critical about yourself. Things do not always take place as planned. What you should do is just try your best. Process is far more important than outcome.

I wish my opinions above would be helpful to you. Keep in touch!

Yours sincerely,

David

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是Teens杂志社“悄悄话(Secret Words)”的栏目编辑David，刚收到李华的一封求助信(信件内容附后)。请阅信后给他回一封信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

感谢的：thankful→grateful

如同计划的：as planned→as scheduled

有帮助的：be helpful→be of help

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：But don't be too hard on yourself or too critical about yourself. Things do not always take place as planned.

拓展句：But don't be too hard on yourself or too critical about yourself because things do not always take place as planned.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad. (运用了动名词作主语)

【高分句型2】 What you should do is just try your best. (运用了what引导主语从句和不带to的不定式作表语)

【高分句型3】I wish my opinions above would be helpful to you.（运用了虚拟语气）

4．Dear Xiao Ming,

I feel sorry to hear that you can’t fit into the new environment. I think you are not alone and here are some suggestions for reference.

First, you should bear in mind that in senior high school, independent study counts and you should form good study habits, such as taking notes in class, reviewing lessons in time. Moreover, it’s completely normal to feel under great pressure, which you think your parents can’t understand. The best way to solve it is healthy and regular communication with them, which helps to contribute to a good relationship. Last but not least, it’s better to keep a positive mind.

Hope these suggestions are helpful and you will adapt to the new stage as soon as possible.

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是新华中学高一学生李华，你的朋友小明给你来信，表示对高中生活很茫然，并且跟父母关系也很紧张，无法适应新的阶段。请你给他写一封回信，提出相关建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适应：fit into/ adapt to→adjust to

建议：suggestion→advice

有益的：helpful→useful

此外：moreover→besides

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Hope these suggestions are helpful and you will adapt to the new stage as soon as possible.

拓展句：Not only do I hope these suggestions are helpful, but also you will adapt to the new stage as soon as possible.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I feel sorry to hear that you can’t fit into the new environment. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] The best way to solve it is healthy and regular communication with them, which helps to contribute to a good relationship. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

5．Dear Linda,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset at being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity. But I think it’s unnecessary for you to care about that.

In my opinion, you are great as you are. After all, it is what you are rather than how you look that counts. On the other hand, I have some advice for you if you want to lose some weight. Firstly, change your eating habits and keep a balanced diet, which will help prevent diseases. Secondly, take exercise regularly, which is a good way for you to get rid of your obesity. Thirdly, make sure you get enough sleep.

If you follow my advice, you are sure to look nice and feel good. I hope you can get out of trouble soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于英语中的应用文写作。要求考生写一封信给好朋友Linda，帮助她摆脱肥胖问题带来的烦恼。

【详解】1.词汇积累

苦恼的：upset→ distressed

因为：because of→ on account of

首先：firstly → first of all

确保：make sure→ ensure

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset at being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity．

拓展句：I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset at being laughed at by your classmates because you are obese．

【点睛】【高分句型1】On the other hand, I have some advice for you if you want to lose some weight.（运用了if引导的状语从句）

【高分句型2】Firstly, change your eating habits and keep a balanced diet, which will help prevent diseases.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

6．Dear Robert,

I understand your feelings. As you mentioned in the email, you have trouble in getting along with your parents now. Try these pieces of advice and see if they help improve your relationship.

First, talk to your parents and work out a new timetable that you are both satisfied with. Second, spending too much time on the cellphone is really harmful to you. If you always want to check your cellphone, you can’t focus on your study. So cut down the time on your cellphone. In addition, put yourself in your parents’ shoes and try to understand what they do. I know it isn’t easy, but you must be patient.

Everything will turn out all right, I promise.

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的朋友Robert在email中向你倾诉，他在家上网课期间与父母在作息时间与手机使用等方面产生了矛盾。请给他回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

……有困难：have trouble in→have difficulty in

集中于：focus on→concentrate on

此外：in addition→besides

制定：work out→schedule

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I know it isn’t easy, but you must be patient.

拓展句：Although it isn’t easy, you must be patient.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As you mentioned in the email, you have trouble in getting along with your parents now. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] If you always want to check your cellphone, you can’t focus on your study. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)

7．Dear Jane,

I’m delighted to know that you are coming to China and spending one year as an exchanging student. As for how to adapt yourself to Chinese campus life. I have some suggestions.

Firstly, you are expected to work hard at Chinese, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about China, and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. I believe by doing this, you will be adapted to your new life soon.

How I wish these suggestions could be very useful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生以李华的身份，给笔友Jane在中国做交换生期间就如何适应中国校园生活提出相应的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→grateful

参加：take part in→participate in

种类：kind→variety

2. 句型拓展

同义句转换

简单句：They can help you to know more about China, and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness.

同义句：Not only can friends help you to know more about China, but also they can help you to forget your loneliness.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m delighted to know that you are coming to China and spending one year as an exchanging student.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Firstly, you are expected to work hard at Chinese, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

8．参考范文

Dear David,

I’m sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.

As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. Meanwhile, you may as well read more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.

Hopefully, my suggestions will be of some help and wish you good luck.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给没能通过汉语水平考试的澳洲朋友David写一封信给，表示安慰和鼓励，同时就如何学习汉语提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

惊讶的：amazed→astonished

就个人而言：personally→as far as I am concerned

重要：count→matter

无论如何：anyhow→in any case

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.

拓展句：Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese, which is encouraging.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，for引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

9．Dear Lucy,

I’m more than sorry to hear that your parents and you often quarrel about your study. Don’t worry too much about it. I’m writing to give you some suggestions.

First, you should understand that it is because your parents care about you that they pay much attention to you and your study. Besides, you should look for a time to talk about the problems in your study calmly and patiently. And then you can solve them. What’s the most important is that all of you should have a good mood and mentality, which can create a relaxing environment for you to do any things.                                                                                                               

Hope everything is going well. Look forward to hearing your good news.

   Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给Lucy写一封建议信，帮助她解决她和父母在她的学习问题上经常容易发生争吵的事情。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非常：more than→very

建议：suggestion→tip/advice

关注：pay attention to→fix attention on

此外：Besides→What’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, you should look for a time to talk about the problems in your study calmly and patiently. And then you can solve them.

拓展句：Besides, you should look for a time to talk about the problems in your study calmly and patiently, which you can solve then.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m more than sorry to hear that your parents and you often quarrel about your study.(由that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】First, you should understand that it is because your parents care about you that they pay much attention to you and your study.(由that引导的宾语从句，because引导的状语从句和强调句型)

【高分句型3】What’s the most important is that all of you should have a good mood and mentality, which can create a relaxing environment for you to do any things.(由What引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

10．One possible version:

Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having so much pressure at the moment, but there is no need to worry as nobody can avoid such troubles in life and what matters most is how we deal with them. My suggestions are as follows.

First of all, you need to reflect on your study to find the problems. What’s more, it’s better to ask your teachers for help who would help you analyze the problems rationally and give you some professional guidance. Last but not least, stay in a good state. Talk to the ones you trust to relieve your stress and always hold the belief that all the setbacks are temporary. Only through self-belief, hard work and perseverance can we achieve our final goal.

Hopefully, my suggestions will help you out. Wish you a happy life and a good performance in your study.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给高一同学Tom写封信，对他进入高中以后学习压力很大这件事表示理解并给予安慰，提出建议并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：pressure→stress

建议：suggestion→advice

坚持不懈：perseverance→persistence

另外：what’s more→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hopefully, my suggestions will help you out.

拓展句：I hope that my suggestions will help you out.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to know that you’re having so much pressure at the moment, but there is no need to worry as nobody can avoid such troubles in life and what matters most is how we deal with them. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，what引导的主语从句和how引导的表语从句)

[高分句型2] What’s more, it’s better to ask your teachers for help who would help you analyze the problems rationally and give you some professional guidance. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)