河北省唐山市迁安市2021-2023年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达+

河北省唐山市迁安市

2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

XII. 书面表达（满分15分）

86. 假如你是学校英文网站的主编张明，负责Dialogue With Students专栏。你校学生李华由于痴迷网络，学习和生活受到很大影响，他上周发邮件向你求助。请根据下面提示写一封邮件，为他提供建议。

提示：(1) Control the time you spend on the Internet.

(2) Communicate more with families and friends.

(3) Develop other hobbies.

注意：（1）邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；

（2）邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Li Hua,

I’ve read your email carefully. __________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Zhang Ming

2022年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

十五、材料作文

86．三年来，因为疫情，我们经历过特殊的学习生活，有的居家隔离不能按时上学，有的被封控在学校不能回家。请你选择其中一种情况谈谈你的经历、感受和收获。

提示要点: (1) What did you do when you stayed at home/school

(2) How did you feel at that time

(3) What did you learn from this special experience

参考词汇: positive（乐观的）, self-disciplined（自律的）

注    意: (1) 短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选用。

(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

When I stay at _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

七、看图作文

56．请根据下面三幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文，记述你们学校上周六的志愿者活动。

注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：

2023年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

56．例文

Dear Li Hua,

I’ve read your email carefully. I’m sorry to hear of your problems. Here is my advice.

First, it’s important to cut down the time you spend on the Internet. I think half an hour every day is enough. Second, you’d better spend more time with your families and friends and communicate with them more. Third, you should develop some other hobbies to make your life more colorful. For example, you can read books or do some sports every day.

I hope my advice will be of some help and that you will have a better life.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，确保语句通顺，语法正确。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山表示自己的同情和难过；

第二步，根据提示具体阐述合适的建议；

第三步，最后做小结。

[亮点词汇]

①hear of听说

②cut down削减

③had better do最好做

④for example例如

[高分句型]

①First, it’s important to cut down the time you spend on the Internet.（省略that的定语从句）

②Third, you should develop some other hobbies to make your life more colorful.（动词不定式作目的状语）

2022年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

86．例文1

When I stayed at home, I tried my best to manage my time wisely. I spent most of my time studying. To keep healthy, I spend some time to do some exercise every day. On weekends, I usually read some books to relax myself. Besides, I helped mum do some housework. I felt comfortable and relaxed.

I learned to be more self-discipline during these days. It was not easy, But I made it. I also learned that we should do something meaningful to encourage ourselves when facing difficulties.

例文2

When I stayed at school, I studied and rested with our classmates, our school offers us many kinds of healthy food every day. What a pity that we can not go home on weekend as usual, some of my classmates missed their parents and felt sad. But our teacher cared for us, they often communicated with us after class. On weekends, we had many colorful activities, I think I didn’t feel lonely.

From this special experience, I learned to be positive and active when facing difficulties. I also learned that we can overcome any difficulty if we get together.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，写作时按说明文的格式来写。根据题目要求，在“居家学习”和“在校学习”两种情况中任选一种来写，要包括提示的三个要点内容。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态采用一般过去时。写作时承接短文开头，直接表明写的是“居家学习”还是“在校学习”，再按照提示的要点依次说明。叙述所做的事情这一部分应详写，感受可略写。第三部分写个人感悟时可结合“面对困难”和“克服困难”时应具备的精神品质这一方面展开说明。

2021年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

56．例文：

Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students took an active part in attending volunteer activities.

The students in Class One planted trees in the West Mountain in order to protect our environment. They tried their best to plant more trees. The students in Class Two picked up rubbish in our city park, so that many people could enjoy their stay there. The students in our class took care of old people in old people’s home. Some students danced for the old people, some students chatted with them, and other students cleaned the rooms for the old people.

It’s very meaningful to be a volunteer, and we will do more volunteer activities and help more people.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段叙述上周六我们学生参加了志愿者活动；第二段根据图片描述进行的志愿者活动；第三段描述自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述参加志愿者活动；用一般现在时描述感受；保证内容包含图片主要信息，适当发挥，条理清晰。