河北省唐山市滦州市2021-2023年三年中考一模英语解析版试题分类汇编：书面表达

河北省唐山市滦州市2021-2023年三年中考一模英语解析版试题分类汇编

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2023年河北省唐山市滦州市中考一模英语试题

87．请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。

内容提示：1. What can you see in the picture?

2. Who do you think is right?

要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示的内容，可适当发挥。

（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

（3）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

I can see two students are doing homework in the picture. The girl… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2022年河北省唐山市滦州市中考一模英语试题

86．2022年2月，北京成功举办了冬奥会。为确保冬奥会的成功举办，我国采取一系列强有力的环保措施。环保作为一项长期利国利民的工作，我们应该在日常生活中时时从我做起，尽我们的责任和义务。请你根据下图提示，并结合自己的生活实际，写一篇 How to Protect the Environment 为题的文章，谈谈我们可以怎样去做，以保护环境。

要求：

（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

（2）内容要点所有提示必须全部用上，并适当发挥；

（3）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

（4）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

How to Protect the EnvironmentThe earth is our......

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2021年河北省唐山市滦州市中考一模英语试题

56．公共交通工具是方便大家出行的，人人都要做到文明乘车。但是仍然存在一些不文明的现象。请仔细观察下列图片，并根据所给的提示和要求写一篇短文。

提示：①What can you see in the picture?

②What do you think about these?

要求：①短文须包括所有提示的内容，可适当发挥。

②短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

③词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

提示词： public transportation公共交通工具

In the picture, we can see

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2023年河北省唐山市滦州市中考一模英语试题

87．例文：

I can see two students are doing homework in the picture. The girl finds the homework too difficult and wants to ask the phone for help. But the boy tries to stop him from doing that. He thinks it is bad for her.

In my opinion, the girl isn’t supposed to use the phone to finish her homework. Homework is the duty of students and we need to finish it independently. If we can’t work out some problems, we can discuss them with our classmates. But if we often ask the phone for help, we would rely on it. It’s bad for our study.

【详解】

[总体分析]

题材：本文是一篇议论文写作，为看图作文；

时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；

提示：观点已给出，写作时注意结构清晰；适当添加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接开头。描写图片内容，引出主题；

第二步，详细描述自己的观点。

[亮点词汇]

①ask sb for help请求帮助

②try to do sth尝试做某事

③stop sb from doing阻止某人做某事

④be supposed to do应该做某事

⑤duty职责

⑥independently独立地

⑦work out解决

⑧discuss with与某人讨论某事

⑨rely on依赖

[高分句型]

①I can see two students are doing homework in the picture.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句跟在see后，其中that已省略）

②He thinks it is bad for her. （宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句跟在thinks后，其中that已省略；句型：it is+形容词+for sb）

③If we can’t work out some problems, we can discuss them with our classmates.（状语从句：由if引导条件状语从句）

④But if we often ask the phone for help, we would rely on it. （状语从句：由if引导条件状语从句）

2022年河北省唐山市滦州市中考一模英语试题

86．例文：

How to Protect the Environment

The earth is our home which is of great importance for all of us. We are supposed to protect the environment to protect our earth. My thoughts are as follows.

To start with, we can put the rubbish into the dustbin in our everyday life. Then, there is no doubt that it is necessary to plant more trees. What’s more, as students, we also can volunteer to clean the city or village to protect the environment. Last but not least, we are expected to go to school by bikes or on foot instead of driving cars.

Let’s protect the environment from now on.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；要求根据表格内容对保护环境展开描述。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点；其次应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。

2021年河北省唐山市滦州市中考一模英语试题

56．【答案】    In the picture, we can see three people taking public transportation. One of them was lying down on a public seat sleeping.  A man is eating and throwing rubbish everywhere. Another man is putting up advertisements on the wall of a bus. I think the behavior of these people is very impolite.

First of all, it's necessary for us to behave properly in public. Also, we should protect our environment. We mustn't throw rubbish away, and we shouldn't put up advertisements everywhere. When we meet this in daily life, we should stop others from doing so. Finally, let's call on everyone to behave better in public. If everyone obeys the rules in public, then our world will become better.

【知识点】看图写话

【解析】【分析】这是一篇看图作文。要求仔细观察图片内容，结合提示要点写一篇短文，呼吁大家乘坐公共交通工具要文明；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。本文可采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真观察图片，根据提示要求，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

【点评】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。固定短语的正确运用是本文的亮点。比如lie down；put up；in public；经典语句有：First of all, it's necessary for us to behave properly in public. 及If everyone obeys the rules in public, then our world will become better.也为本文起到画龙点睛的作用。