山东省泰安市泰山区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

山东省泰安市泰山区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模英语试题

八、 写 作（共1题，满分25分）

“双减”政策实施后, 学生的作业负担减轻了, 作业呈现出多元化、个性化的特点。某 英文网站正在开展以“The Most Meaningful Homework”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李 华, 请用英语写一篇短文投稿, 介绍你完成过的最有意义的一次作业。谈谈你是如何完成这次作业的, 以及你有什么收获。

提示问题：

要求：

1. 内容应包含思维导图中的主要内容, 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；

3. 词数80～100词, 短文开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。

The Most Meaningful Homework

Our homework is quite different now because we have less but more meaningful homework than before. _____________________________________________________________________

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2022年山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模英语试题

八、 写 作（共1题，满分25分）

52．教育部发布“美育中考要在试点基础上尽快推广，力争全面实行美育中考”的新闻后，引起很多老师、学生及家长的关注。上周你班同学就“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”展开了相关讨论，同学们各抒己见。请你根据下面表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。

Last week, we discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模英语试题

八、 写 作（共1题，满分25分）

52. 近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你根据思维导图，结合实际，就如何培养劳动精神，以“How to Get Working Spirit”为题，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。

要求：1. 内容应包含思维导图中的主要内容，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；

3. 词数80~100词，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：指导方针guideline；劳动课a hardworking spirit class

How to Get Working Spirit

A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.

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答案：

2023年山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模英语试题

52．例文：

The Most Meaningful Homework

Our homework is quite different now because we have less but more meaningful homework than before. Let me tell you the most meaningful homework I have done.

As an English learner, I have to read a lot of articles and listen to many English materials to improve my English. But it is not very useful to improve my spoken English. Lack of courage, I am always too shy and nervous to talk with others. However, one day I needed to finish a project where I was asked to introduce my family in English and record my introduction in a video.

In order to finish my homework, I had to try my best. Slowly, I found that talking in front of others made me feel better and better. Finally, I can talk with others confidently. All these changes just because of a small video. How amazing!

I think I can always do something well if I want to. If I meet some trouble at present, I need to find out another useful and suitable way.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“最有意义的作业”展开；

②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；

③提示：内容提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当补充和发挥要点，并使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，以“告诉你我做过的最有意义的作业”引出下文；

第二步，按照要点提示，阐述自己做过的一次最有意义的作业，并注意阐述自己是如何完成的，注意突出其有意义的地方，以及注意时态的变化，应是一般过去时；

第三步，简单说明自己从中学到的内容，并总结。

[亮点词汇]

①lack of缺乏

②in order to为了

③try my best尽我最大能力

④in front of 在……前面

[高分句型]

①If I meet some trouble at present, I need to find out another useful and suitable way.（if引导的条件状语从句）

②However, one day I needed to finish a project where I was asked to introduce my family in English and record my introduction in a video.（一般过去时被动语态）

2022年山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模英语试题

52．例文

Last week, we discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art.

Some students think that it offers us more chances to study music and art. Therefore, we will pay more attention to them. Meanwhile, it can improve our art skills.

However, a few students disagree with it. If music and art are in the examination, there will be more subjects to prepare for, and it needs more time and energy. So students will feel too much pressure.

In my opinion, music and art should be in the entrance examination for high school. As we all know, art and music play an important role in our life, which can help us develop our interests and make our life more colorful. The most important thing is that we can relax ourselves by art and music in Grade 9.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”发表不同的观点。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为四段式：第一段已给出；第二段和第三段根据提示材料分别介绍同学们的看法；最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2021年山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模英语试题

52．例文：

How to Get Working Spirit

A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.

Firstly, we should have hardworking spirt classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.

In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍如何培养劳动精神。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍培养劳动精神的方法：上劳动课、参加实践活动、学做家务以及养成良好的劳动习惯；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。