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江苏地区2023学年九年级一模备考真题汇编-作文专练（20篇）Ⅰ
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江苏地区2023学年九年级一模备考真题汇编-作文专练（20篇）Ⅰ
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022·江苏无锡·校考一模）“紧紧抓住梦想，因为一旦梦想消亡，生活就像折断翅膀的小鸟。”兰斯顿的这首《梦想》一定激励过你。人要有目标、有理想，并坚定地追求自己的梦想，这样人生才有意义。某英文报正在举行题为“My dream”的征文活动，请根据以下问题，写一篇英语短文向该报投稿。
提示: 1. What is your dream?
2. What makes you have the dream? Give three reasons.
3. What are you going to do to realize your dream? Present two plans.
注意:（1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。
My dream
If dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that can never fly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．（2023·江苏宿迁·泗阳致远中学校考一模）英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
A survey on mobile phonesShould we bring mobile phones to school?
Choice
YES £
NO £
Reasons
1.contact with parents
2.…
1.use in a wrong way
2....
Advice
Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think …
Though mobile phones can’t be used in school, I hope ..
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Should we bring mobile phones to school?
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2023·江苏淮安·校考一模）春季是游园的大好时节。然而，一些游客的不文明行为让美丽的景色大打折扣。请根据要点就此写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的观点。
要点：
1.描写公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动。
2.请列举三个不文明游园的行为。
3.提出文明游园的建议或希望。
注意：
1.总词数 80-100。
2.文章中不得出现真实的个人信息。
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4．（2023·江苏无锡·统考一模）David是一个患有先天性疾病的孩子，他没办法像别的孩子一样正常的跑跳，也不能进行长途远足活动。最近学校发生了一些事情，他很担心害怕，于是想向老师写一封信寻找帮助。请根据提示帮他写一封信。
when I was having PE, my coach let me choose run or not….
I wanted to run but I couldn’t ......
be afraid others will laugh at….
My coach was angry …..
What I thought….
was disability
Lost heart
Even don’t want to go to school
……
What I did…
I tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease…..
Dear Mr Li, I am
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5．（2023·江苏宿迁·统考一模）法国作家雨果说：“进步是目的，理想是标准”。回首两年多的初中时光，你一定取得了不少的进步，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Progress I’ve Made”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。
要求：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
The Progress I’ve Made
Looking back on the past two years, I have made great progress.
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6．（2023·江苏徐州·校考一模）2021年已经成为过去，这一年许多人陪你度过。是谁理解你、信任你？是谁助你勇敢前行？是谁逆境中安抚你？拥有的都是幸运，我们应该心存感恩。请根据下面图示并结合你的成长体会，写一篇题为“My thanks”的短文表达你的感激之情和对他们的祝福。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
My thanks
The year 2021 has passed. A lot of lovely people were with me. I really want to show many thanks to them for their company in 2021.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2018·江苏南通·校联考一模）书面表达
“美丽中国”是我国生态文明建设的第一目标，时下，一些地区污染严重，作为中学生，我们应该做什么来保护环境呢？请你以Building a beautiful China为题，用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家立刻行动起来，保护我们的环境。
现状
空气污染，水质恶化
措施
绿色出行；节约水电；循环利用；（再自拟一点）
展望
……（请自拟至少一点内容）
注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.把表格中所示内容表达完整，可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
3.句式规范，字迹工整。文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名等信息。
Building a beautiful China
As we know the environment around us is getting worse and worse. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
8．（2018·江苏盐城·校联考一模）书面表达
初中的生活，虽短暂，但却是美好的。还有两个月，同学们即将奔赴中考的考场，此时此刻，相信大家一定有很多话要说……假如你是阳光中学的初三学生Nancy，学校将为初一同学举办主题为“What to learn in junior high school?'’的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
What to learn in junior high school
How to study
How to get along with others
…
master effective methods …develop good habits…
respect teachersbe friendly to classmate
…
要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
（提示：master effective methods 掌握有效的方法：preview(预习)；think more；review）
Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in junior high school．
Thank you for listening!
9．（2018·江苏无锡·校联考一模）为了纪念汶川大地震十周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes in Wenchuan”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：
1.十年前我搬到这以来，就一直住在这儿
2.地震如此强烈，大楼倒塌，大量受难者生活在为生命安全担忧中，别无选择只能离开
3.政府努力帮助人们重建，鼓励人们不灰心
4.我们满足于现在的生活；学会与自然和谐共处；很值得一游
5.我希望...
Great changes in Wenchuan
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in Wenchuan over the past ten years.
10．（2018·江苏盐城·校联考一模）发展中的中国，使我们的生活变得越来越好．请根据下面提示，以 "Changes around us" 为题用英语写一篇短文．
要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
2．短文需要包括所有要点，并适当发挥．
3．词数不少于 100 词 （文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
Changes around us
Great changes have taken place in our life around us
11．（2019·江苏盐城·统考一模）作为一名初三学生，你即将毕业。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对于初三生活的体会和对学弟学妹的建议。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Junior school always considered as the most meaning period of one's life. As a Junior 3 student would like to give you some suggestions on how to live happily is Junior 3.
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12．（2022·江苏盐城·统考一模）人要有目标、有理想，并坚定地追求自己的梦想。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My dream”的征文活动。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What is your dream?
2. What makes you have the dream?
3. How will you realize your dream?
注意事项：
（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。My dream
If dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that can never fly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2023·江苏无锡·校考一模）假设你是李华，你所在的阳光小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
One possible version:
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
14．（2022·江苏淮安·校考一模）岁月静好，不过是有人替你负重前行。面对新冠病毒疫情，没有人能够置身事外。在我们为“逆行者”点赞的同时，我们也要做好自己的分内事并承担一些责任。请以“Live a safe and colourful life”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容必须包括以下要点。
如何自我保护
1.在家时：保持室内卫生，……
2.在外：戴口罩，……
如何度过空闲时间
1.发展兴趣爱好（至少两种及其好处）
2.当志愿者（计划做的事）
注意：
1、文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。Live a safe and colourful life
Since COVID-19 broke out again, many people have to stay at home in their free time to protect themselves as well as others. As a result, I also need to plan my life well to make it safe and colourful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、看图作文
15．（2018·江苏南京·校联考一模）
Every child loves his mother. When we grow up, we should still respect our mother and try our best to care for her. Read the two pictures and write a passage about them. Your writing should include the following:
1. To describe the two pictures.
2. To tell us your opinion about the two pictures.
3. To tell us what you want to do for your mother now and in the future.
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。
四、书信作文
16．（2023·江苏徐州·统考一模）假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。
When and where did you buy the mobile phone?
What’s wrong with the mobile phone?
How would you like to solve the problem?
注意事项：
1．信件必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2．词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
提示词汇： 质量 quality 电池 battery
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17．（2019·江苏淮安·校联考一模）假如你是Jane, 现就读于第一中学，在临近初三毕业时，你想给你的父母写一封信，简要汇报一下你的初中三年的学校生活。不少于100词, 内容必须包括以下表格中的要点：
你的收获
1. 学到了很多知识，提高了学习技能
2. 从课本中了解了许多名人的事迹（举例2个）
3......
你的问题
感到有压力, 1......
2......
你的想法
1. 感谢......
2. 打算......
注意：1.文中不得出现真实人名，单位名或地名2.信件开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。
相关词汇：improve 提高 stressed 有压力的
Dear Dad and Mum,
I will graduate from No. 1 Middle School. Now I want to tell you something about my school life in the past three years.
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Yours sincerely,
Jane
五、讲稿
18．（2023·江苏无锡·江苏省锡山高级中学实验学校校考一模）伟大音乐家贝多芬说：“涓滴之水终可以磨损大石，不是由于它力量强大，而是由于昼夜不舍的滴坠。”坚持做好一件事情，成就更好自己，请根据下图提示，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.省略号部分必须用适当信息补充完整；
3.词数在100个左右，短文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息：
参考词汇：call on号召
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
19．（2023·江苏无锡·无锡市天一实验学校校考一模）Now we have learned a lot about the role models（榜样）. It is their own core abilities（核心能力）that make them able to serve the country. What core abilities do you need in the future? Why? What will you do to improve these abilities? You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please choose ONE core ability to write an English draft for it.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
20．（2022·江苏盐城·校考一模）水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing”为题，根据提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加毕业典礼的心得分享活动。
﹡What do you always keep doing ?
﹡Why do you keep doing that?
...
注意：1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息；
3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
参考答案：
1．例文：
My dream
If dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly. I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.
I am outgoing and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to the society. Children are the future of the nation. Education is a basic human right and it’s important in the development of children, communities, and countries.
To achieve my dream, first I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about education and other subjects. I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills is important for a teacher.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述自己的梦想，讲述有此梦想的原因，并讲述为了实现梦想自己的计划。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一、三人称为主，讲述自己梦想的缘由和实现梦想的计划，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
2．例文
Should we bring mobile phones to school?
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school?
Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it’s convenient for parents to contact us. When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.
Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can’t focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.
In my opinion, I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won’t turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。
3．例文
Spring is a good time to visit parks. There are a lot of colorful flowers and birds in the trees. People often go to parks to enjoy the beauty of the spring. They can do many things in parks, such as having picnics, taking photos, doing sports and so on.
However, the uncivilized behaviors of some tourists have become a hot topic. For example, someone likes talking and laughing loudly while enjoying the scenery; someone drops litter everywhere after having picnics in the parks; someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property.
It’s everyone’s duty to protect the parks. I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those bad habits. When we are traveling in the parks, we should obey the rules and take care of the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中提出游园的建议或希望，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动；
第二步，列举三个不文明的游园行为：大声喧哗、随地乱扔垃圾和踩踏草坪；
第三步，提出文明游园的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of大量，大量的
②and so on等等
③take care of注意
④pay attention to注意，留心
[高分句型]
①Someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property.（while引导的时间状语从句）
②I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those bad habits.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
③When we are traveling in the parks, we should obey the rules and take care of the environment.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear Mr Li,
I am worried about something in school these days. So I am asking you for some help.
When I was having PE, my coach let me choose run or not, I wanted to run but I couldn’t because of my disease, with which I couldn’t run or jump like other children. And because of that, I am afraid others will laugh at me. My coach was angry with my behavior.
I am so nervous these days. I think of my disability and I almost lose heart. What’s worse, I even don’t want to go to school.
I always tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease. But I really can’t run or jump. Can you give me some advice? What should I do?
Best wishes,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，格式为书信；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：文章要点给出了主要的提示，考生应注意围绕要点适当发挥，同时注意时态的正确性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，需要寻求帮助；
第二步，说明所遇到的事情，以及自己不能跑步的原因，并且说明因为这个事情自己的内心想法和教练的生气；
第三步，表示自己的处境，不想被别人发现自己的疾病，需要老师给出建议，并注意最后的书信格式。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about sth担心某事
②ask for help寻求帮助
③because of由于
④lose heart灰心丧气
[高分句型]
①I always tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②I wanted to run but I couldn’t because of my disease, with which I couldn’t run or jump like other children.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．One possible version:
The Progress I’ve Made
Looking back on the past two years, I have made great progress.
First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“Future”部分，需要自我发挥，描述自己对未来的展望。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题：回望过去两年，取得的进步很大；
第二步，具体描写自己在生活、学习方面取得的进步；
第三步，描写自己对未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
① make great progress 取得很大的进步
② each other 互相
③ not ... any longer 不再
④ do some housework 做家务
⑤ take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
① With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on.（learn to do sth.学会做某事；such as表示列举）
② Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.（and连接的并列句）
6．例文
My thanks
The year 2021 has passed. A lot of lovely people were with me. I really want to show many thanks to them for their company in 2021.
First, I want to thank my family. They looked after me well day after day. When I didn’t do well in schoolwork, they understood me and encouraged me to keep trying.
Also, I must say thanks to my friends. They not only shared their joy with me but also listened to my problems when I felt blue.
What’s more, I must give my thanks to my teachers. They always set a good example for us. They were willing to help me work out my problems. When I was absent from school, they spent extra time helping me.
Last, I would also say thanks to myself. Life is like a race. I hope to go to my ideal senior high school this year and I will never give up. I believe I can have my dream come true.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My thanks”为题，结合提示的图片进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别从对家人、对朋友、对老师以及对自己四个方面进行感谢。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．Building a Beautiful China
As we know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. While the human beings make us of the resources on the earth, they don’t protect them very well. As a result, water pollution and air pollution are becoming more and more serious. So as a middle school student, we should take good actions to protect our environment. The actions are as follows:
Firstly, we can choose walk or go around by bicycle rather than by car. Secondly, we should make good use of water and electricity. For example, we can use the washing water for plants. Thirdly, we ought to recycle things such as plastic bags, wasted batteries, and bottles as another way for life use. Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the small details. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn off the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbooks and so on.
We hope that every person will be more concerned about protecting environment. Only if everyone takes actions can the earth be more beautiful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文为一篇演讲稿，，要求学生根据表格内容进行发言，属于半开放性写作，时态主要采用一般现在时。
2.例文点评：本文采用三段式，首段，描述地球的现状，污染越来越严重，呼吁学生采取行动；第二段，主要是我们学生可以做什么事，从日常小事出发。最后，再次提出倡议，只有每个人都付出行动，地球才会变得更好。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as a result；more and more；take actions；rather than；turn off；be concerned about；
句型：while引导时间状语从句；that引导定语从句；only位于句首，主句倒装。
【点睛】本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
8．Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in junior high school．
In the past three years, I have learned a lot. Firstly, we have learned to study efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we have learned how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we took part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述你初中三年所学到的东西，包括如何学习以及如何与其他人相处等。注意时态的准确使用，切记不要遗漏要点。并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：learn to do, used to do, to do表示目的，be of importance, get involved in, 疑问词+to do, take part in, build up, in addition, personally以及finally等。
高分句型：Developing a good habit is also of importance中，动名词Developing a good habit作主语，谓语动词用单数；It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to do sth以及review后接what引导的宾语从句（what had been taught after class）。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如learn to do, used to do, to do表示目的，be of importance, get involved in, 疑问词+to do, take part in, build up，动名词作主语谓语动词用单数以及宾语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如in addition, personally以及finally等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．Great changes in Wenchuan
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in Wenchuan over the past ten years.
I have been living here since ten years ago. I survived the big earthquake in 2008. I’ll never forget that day. The earthquake was so strong that the building collapsed. So many victims were living in fear for their lives and they had no choice but to leave. Luckily, our government tried to help us rebuild our home and encouraged us not to lose heart.
Now Wenchuan has changed a lot. A number of new beautiful buildings have been built. The roads are wide and smooth. We are content with life as it is. Also, we have learnt to live in harmony with nature. Wenchuan has become more beautiful, so it is well worth a visit. I hope I can do more to build my hometown and my motherland.
【详解】题干解读：这篇短文要求描写汶川十年来的变化，是一篇给材料作文。审题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先介绍十年前的地震带来的严重后果；然后介绍重建家园后，汶川的变化；最后提出自己的希望。题目中给出了汉语提示，学生们可以此为提纲，组织语言，丰富细节，串联成文。短文应以一般过去时和现在完成时为主来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先内容完整，结构清晰。采用三段式，每段有独立的主题，叙述条理，主次分明。其次短文时态、人称符合表达需要，语言得体，用词准确，符合英语的语法规范。句式结构完整，以简单句结构为主，穿插使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等。
高分亮点：
短语：in fear for；lose heart；a lot；a number of；be content with；as it is；in harmony with；be well worth。
句型：The earthquake was so strong that the building collapsed. ；So many victims were living in fear for their lives and they had no choice but to leave.；Also, we have learnt to live in harmony with nature. ；Wenchuan has become more beautiful, so it is well worth a visit. ；I hope I can do more to build my hometown and my motherland.。
10．Changes around us
Great changes have taken place in our life for years.
Now there are tall buildings everywhere. People have also changed their diet. Fruit and vegetables are their favourite. In their free time, they like doing sports and travelling around. In the past, People went out mostly on foot. But now each family has a car and the roads are wide and clean. So it is very convenient to go out.
Now people pay more and more attention to study. Many people realize the importance of knowledge. They encourage their children to read more books and develop their teamwork skills. They would buy most things online instead of in the shop or market. This helps people save a lot of time.
In a word, people live better than before.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求写身边的变化，属于记叙文写作。本文开篇点题Great changes have taken place in our life for years；然后从饮食、出行和学习等方面做对比描述变化；最后总结点题people live better than before。
2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构。以一般现在时为主，主要用第三人称展开叙述，描写细致，内容充实，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
短语：take place, in life, in their free time, do sports, travel around, in the past, on foot, be convenient to, go out, more and more, instead of.
句型：So it is very convenient to go out.（固定句型）
They like doing sports and travelling around.（并列结构）
People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life.（宾语从句）
In a word, people live better than before.（比较级结构）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
11．How to be happy in Junior 3
Junior school is always considered as the most meaningful period of one’s life. As a Junior 3 student, I would like to give you some suggestions on how to live happily in Junior 3.
Firstly, it’s important to be in good health. You’d better eat healthily. Fresh vegetables and fruit are good choices. Also, having enough sleep can keep you healthy. Moreover, you should take part in sports actively.
Secondly, you should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Make a list of homework you need to do and manage your time carefully. Then you can spare some time for your hobbies to relax.
Thirdly, true friendship will be of great help to you. You can share your happiness with your friends. You can go to them any time when something worries you. You can ask your friends for advice if you are in need.
In a word, I hope you will have a good time in Junior 3 and achieve both happiness and success.
【分析】本文要根据提示，写自己的在初三体会和给学弟学妹的建议。题目给出较多的提示内容，学生需要将提示的短语组成句子，将句子组成篇章。
【详解】首段写出文章主旨：我会给大家一些建议。第二、三、四段分别是给出的建议：保持健康，多参加体育活动，保持学习和爱好的平衡，交真心的朋友，必要的时候可以向他们寻求建议。最后，希望大家能够在初三过的愉快。文章具有条理性，运用firstly，secondly和thirdly等连词，使文章层次分明，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．One possible version:
My dream
If dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly. I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.
I am outgoing and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to society. Children are the future of the nation. Education is a basic human right and it’s important in the development of children, communities, and countries.
To achieve my dream, first I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about education and other subjects. I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills are important for a teacher.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给的问题提示介绍自己的梦想，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出“我的梦想是……”；
第二步，介绍是什么让你有梦想，以及如何实现梦想；
第三步，书写结语。表示相信梦想会实现。
[亮点词汇]
①gain knowledge and skills获得知识和技能
②be useful to对……有用
③in the development of在……的发展中
④communicate with和……沟通
[高分句型]
①I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.（that引导的定语从句）
②If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to society.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills are important for a teacher.（because引导的原因状语从句）
13．例文
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.
In my family, we respect each other and everyone enjoys equal rights. We often communicate with our family members to encourage and support each other.
In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When someone has problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.
It is important for us to live a green life. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. Besides, we usually ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars. We try our best to protect the environment.
What’s more, my family members like doing volunteer work. We often take an active part in charity work to help people in need.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选，要适当进行发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文用第一人称进行写作，时态用一般现在时；正文内容主要从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和志愿者活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由。检查时注意是否遗漏要点，语言表达是否符合英文习惯。
14．例文
Live a safe and colourful life
Since COVID-19 broke out again, many people have to stay at home in their free time to protect themselves as well as others. As a result, I also need to plan my life well to make it safe and colourful.
To protect ourselves, we should seldom go out. When we have to go out, we must wear face masks. When we stay at home, we must keep the room clean and tidy.
Besides, we should do what is interesting and meaningful to make our life colorful. First, we should know how to spend our spare time. So we should learn some new skills. For example, we can learn how to take photos or learn a new language. Maybe it is challenging at first. But it will benefit us a lot. Second, we should know something about art and enjoy different art forms. Last but not the least, we should often do some sports. Because health is the most important to all of us.
I hope everybody can have a safe and colorful life and enjoy every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的材料，以“Live a safe and colourful life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下在疫情期间，你是如何自我保护和度过空闲时间的。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；第一段承接短文开头；其次介绍如何自我保护；第三是介绍如何度过空闲时间；最后是祝愿。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
15．例文
In the first picture, four young people are celebrating Mother’s Day. They are happily taking photos, while their mother looks lonely. In the second picture, the old woman sits alone at home. From the two pictures, we know the old woman's children seldom spend time with her except some get−together days. In daily life, the young ignore the elder’s inner feelings. Therefore, we should pay more attention to the elder's inner feelings. When we grow up, we’d better have more communication with our mother. We are expected to spend more time with our mother. We can go shopping, cook dinner or watch TV with her. All in all, we should respect our mother and try our best to take good care of her.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，描述两幅图并发表自己的看法。谈论一下现在、将来想为自己的妈妈做些什么。
2.例文点评：例文时态采用一般现在时为主，分别描述两幅图并表达观点。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：taking photos；at home；inner feelings；pay more attention to；have more communication with sb.；go shopping；all in all；take good care of。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；be expected to do sth.；we’d better do sth.。
16．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
Two weeks ago, I ordered a mobile phone from your online shop. However, the quality of this mobile phone is not up to standard.
First of all, its battery can last for half a day at most. I think it should last at least a whole day. Also, there is something wrong with its screen. From time to time, I can’t see what is on the screen.
I’m not satisfied with this mobile phone at all. I regret buying a mobile phone like this. I would like to get my money back.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏三个问题提示中涉及的内容，写信反映自己遇到的问题并希望得到解决。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的；
第二步，介绍具体有什么不满的；
第二步，期望得到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①complain about 抱怨
②first of all 首先
③at most 至多
④be satisfied with 对……很满意
⑤regret doing sth. 后悔做了某事
[高分句型]
①I think it should last at least a whole day.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, there is something wrong with its screen. （There be句型）
17．Dear Dad and Mum,
I will graduate from No. 1 Middle School. Now I want to tell you something about my school life in the past three years.
I have learned a lot of knowledge and have improved my study skills. I have learned about many famous people from my books. Spud’s story makes me know I should never give up when I have difficulty doing something. Hepburn helped many poor children in different parts of the world. I will learn from them. I have made many good friends and get on well with them.
However, I feel stressed sometimes. I have so much homework every day that I have no time for my hobbies. I can’t get enough sleep.
Anyway, I thank you for your help. I plan to study harder to get a good result.
Yours sincerely,
Jane
【详解】这是一篇书信，首先应注意英文书信的格式。信的内容包括三部分：你的收获，你的问题，你的想法。你的收获包括“学到了很多知识”，“提高了学习技能从课本中了解了许多名人的事迹（举例2个）”，另包含一个自由表达的要点；你的问题即你的心理问题、学习问题等；你的想法即你心中的感激之情和你对未来的打算。作文时态为现在时，人称为第一人称；写作中需注意语法正确，上下文衔接自然、连贯。
【高分句型一】Spud’s story makes me know I should never give up when I have difficulty doing something. Spud的故事让我明白，当我做事有困难时不应该放弃。I should never give up when I have difficulty doing something.为宾语从句，when I have difficulty doing something为状语从句，have difficulty doing sth.做某事有困难。
【高分句型二】I have so much homework every day that I have no time for my hobbies.我每天作业如此多，以至于我没有时间花在我的爱好上。so…that…如此……以至于……。
18．例文：
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am. I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I read with my friends. Honestly speaking, reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person.
Keeping reading helps me open my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出提示，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中关于“坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己”的相关内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点，句子语法要正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“演讲”来直接引出重点介绍的话题，表明“我”坚持的事情是每天阅读；
第二步，具体描述演讲内容。从“坚持阅读的理由、阅读带来的影响等”几个方面介绍“我”每天坚持阅读的原因及益处；
第三步，书写结语。表达感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech演讲
②keep doing坚持做某事
③no matter不管
④share ... with与……分享
⑤not only ... but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals.（what引导的主语从句）
②That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am.（why引导的表语从句）
③The more I read, the wiser I will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级）
19．例文
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. I think sports are the core abilities that we should have.
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. We should spend more time doing sports to keep healthy and improve our immunity.
We students should relax ourselves often. We need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day. On the weekend, it is better for us to go out and do some outdoor activities with our friends. It is good for our body and mind.
I think it is very important to do sports. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and try his best to keep healthy.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇应用文，图示给出了四种核心能力，包括：终身学习能力、时间管理能力、运动能力和沟通能力，还可以自由发挥，选择一种能力展开文章。需要指明哪种能力，如何做去改善这种能力。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第一段点名要写的能力，第二段介绍重要性，第三段介绍如何改善能力，最后总结。文章多用建议类型的句型或者情态动词，注意观点明确，上下文连贯。
20．例文
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that knowledge may be acquired through many ways, and the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broadens their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival. Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，讲述自己坚持做的事是阅读；第二段介绍为什么一直坚持阅读；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写
江苏地区2023学年九年级一模备考真题汇编-作文专练（20篇）Ⅰ
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022·江苏无锡·校考一模）“紧紧抓住梦想，因为一旦梦想消亡，生活就像折断翅膀的小鸟。”兰斯顿的这首《梦想》一定激励过你。人要有目标、有理想，并坚定地追求自己的梦想，这样人生才有意义。某英文报正在举行题为“My dream”的征文活动，请根据以下问题，写一篇英语短文向该报投稿。
提示: 1. What is your dream?
2. What makes you have the dream? Give three reasons.
3. What are you going to do to realize your dream? Present two plans.
注意:（1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。
My dream
If dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that can never fly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．（2023·江苏宿迁·泗阳致远中学校考一模）英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
A survey on mobile phonesShould we bring mobile phones to school?
Choice
YES £
NO £
Reasons
1.contact with parents
2.…
1.use in a wrong way
2....
Advice
Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think …
Though mobile phones can’t be used in school, I hope ..
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Should we bring mobile phones to school?
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2023·江苏淮安·校考一模）春季是游园的大好时节。然而，一些游客的不文明行为让美丽的景色大打折扣。请根据要点就此写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的观点。
要点：
1.描写公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动。
2.请列举三个不文明游园的行为。
3.提出文明游园的建议或希望。
注意：
1.总词数 80-100。
2.文章中不得出现真实的个人信息。
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4．（2023·江苏无锡·统考一模）David是一个患有先天性疾病的孩子，他没办法像别的孩子一样正常的跑跳，也不能进行长途远足活动。最近学校发生了一些事情，他很担心害怕，于是想向老师写一封信寻找帮助。请根据提示帮他写一封信。
when I was having PE, my coach let me choose run or not….
I wanted to run but I couldn’t ......
be afraid others will laugh at….
My coach was angry …..
What I thought….
was disability
Lost heart
Even don’t want to go to school
……
What I did…
I tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease…..
Dear Mr Li, I am
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5．（2023·江苏宿迁·统考一模）法国作家雨果说：“进步是目的，理想是标准”。回首两年多的初中时光，你一定取得了不少的进步，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Progress I’ve Made”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。
要求：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
The Progress I’ve Made
Looking back on the past two years, I have made great progress.
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6．（2023·江苏徐州·校考一模）2021年已经成为过去，这一年许多人陪你度过。是谁理解你、信任你？是谁助你勇敢前行？是谁逆境中安抚你？拥有的都是幸运，我们应该心存感恩。请根据下面图示并结合你的成长体会，写一篇题为“My thanks”的短文表达你的感激之情和对他们的祝福。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
My thanks
The year 2021 has passed. A lot of lovely people were with me. I really want to show many thanks to them for their company in 2021.
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7．（2018·江苏南通·校联考一模）书面表达
“美丽中国”是我国生态文明建设的第一目标，时下，一些地区污染严重，作为中学生，我们应该做什么来保护环境呢？请你以Building a beautiful China为题，用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家立刻行动起来，保护我们的环境。
现状
空气污染，水质恶化
措施
绿色出行；节约水电；循环利用；（再自拟一点）
展望
……（请自拟至少一点内容）
注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.把表格中所示内容表达完整，可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
3.句式规范，字迹工整。文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名等信息。
Building a beautiful China
As we know the environment around us is getting worse and worse. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
8．（2018·江苏盐城·校联考一模）书面表达
初中的生活，虽短暂，但却是美好的。还有两个月，同学们即将奔赴中考的考场，此时此刻，相信大家一定有很多话要说……假如你是阳光中学的初三学生Nancy，学校将为初一同学举办主题为“What to learn in junior high school?'’的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
What to learn in junior high school
How to study
How to get along with others
…
master effective methods …develop good habits…
respect teachersbe friendly to classmate
…
要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
（提示：master effective methods 掌握有效的方法：preview(预习)；think more；review）
Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in junior high school．
Thank you for listening!
9．（2018·江苏无锡·校联考一模）为了纪念汶川大地震十周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes in Wenchuan”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：
1.十年前我搬到这以来，就一直住在这儿
2.地震如此强烈，大楼倒塌，大量受难者生活在为生命安全担忧中，别无选择只能离开
3.政府努力帮助人们重建，鼓励人们不灰心
4.我们满足于现在的生活；学会与自然和谐共处；很值得一游
5.我希望...
Great changes in Wenchuan
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in Wenchuan over the past ten years.
10．（2018·江苏盐城·校联考一模）发展中的中国，使我们的生活变得越来越好．请根据下面提示，以 "Changes around us" 为题用英语写一篇短文．
要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
2．短文需要包括所有要点，并适当发挥．
3．词数不少于 100 词 （文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
Changes around us
Great changes have taken place in our life around us
11．（2019·江苏盐城·统考一模）作为一名初三学生，你即将毕业。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对于初三生活的体会和对学弟学妹的建议。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Junior school always considered as the most meaning period of one's life. As a Junior 3 student would like to give you some suggestions on how to live happily is Junior 3.
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12．（2022·江苏盐城·统考一模）人要有目标、有理想，并坚定地追求自己的梦想。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My dream”的征文活动。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What is your dream?
2. What makes you have the dream?
3. How will you realize your dream?
注意事项：
（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。My dream
If dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that can never fly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2023·江苏无锡·校考一模）假设你是李华，你所在的阳光小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
One possible version:
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
14．（2022·江苏淮安·校考一模）岁月静好，不过是有人替你负重前行。面对新冠病毒疫情，没有人能够置身事外。在我们为“逆行者”点赞的同时，我们也要做好自己的分内事并承担一些责任。请以“Live a safe and colourful life”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容必须包括以下要点。
如何自我保护
1.在家时：保持室内卫生，……
2.在外：戴口罩，……
如何度过空闲时间
1.发展兴趣爱好（至少两种及其好处）
2.当志愿者（计划做的事）
注意：
1、文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。Live a safe and colourful life
Since COVID-19 broke out again, many people have to stay at home in their free time to protect themselves as well as others. As a result, I also need to plan my life well to make it safe and colourful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、看图作文
15．（2018·江苏南京·校联考一模）
Every child loves his mother. When we grow up, we should still respect our mother and try our best to care for her. Read the two pictures and write a passage about them. Your writing should include the following:
1. To describe the two pictures.
2. To tell us your opinion about the two pictures.
3. To tell us what you want to do for your mother now and in the future.
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。
四、书信作文
16．（2023·江苏徐州·统考一模）假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。
When and where did you buy the mobile phone?
What’s wrong with the mobile phone?
How would you like to solve the problem?
注意事项：
1．信件必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2．词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
提示词汇： 质量 quality 电池 battery
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17．（2019·江苏淮安·校联考一模）假如你是Jane, 现就读于第一中学，在临近初三毕业时，你想给你的父母写一封信，简要汇报一下你的初中三年的学校生活。不少于100词, 内容必须包括以下表格中的要点：
你的收获
1. 学到了很多知识，提高了学习技能
2. 从课本中了解了许多名人的事迹（举例2个）
3......
你的问题
感到有压力, 1......
2......
你的想法
1. 感谢......
2. 打算......
注意：1.文中不得出现真实人名，单位名或地名2.信件开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。
相关词汇：improve 提高 stressed 有压力的
Dear Dad and Mum,
I will graduate from No. 1 Middle School. Now I want to tell you something about my school life in the past three years.
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Yours sincerely,
Jane
五、讲稿
18．（2023·江苏无锡·江苏省锡山高级中学实验学校校考一模）伟大音乐家贝多芬说：“涓滴之水终可以磨损大石，不是由于它力量强大，而是由于昼夜不舍的滴坠。”坚持做好一件事情，成就更好自己，请根据下图提示，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.省略号部分必须用适当信息补充完整；
3.词数在100个左右，短文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息：
参考词汇：call on号召
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
19．（2023·江苏无锡·无锡市天一实验学校校考一模）Now we have learned a lot about the role models（榜样）. It is their own core abilities（核心能力）that make them able to serve the country. What core abilities do you need in the future? Why? What will you do to improve these abilities? You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please choose ONE core ability to write an English draft for it.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
20．（2022·江苏盐城·校考一模）水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing”为题，根据提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加毕业典礼的心得分享活动。
﹡What do you always keep doing ?
﹡Why do you keep doing that?
...
注意：1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息；
3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
参考答案：
1．例文：
My dream
If dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly. I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.
I am outgoing and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to the society. Children are the future of the nation. Education is a basic human right and it’s important in the development of children, communities, and countries.
To achieve my dream, first I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about education and other subjects. I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills is important for a teacher.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述自己的梦想，讲述有此梦想的原因，并讲述为了实现梦想自己的计划。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一、三人称为主，讲述自己梦想的缘由和实现梦想的计划，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
2．例文
Should we bring mobile phones to school?
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school?
Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it’s convenient for parents to contact us. When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.
Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can’t focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.
In my opinion, I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won’t turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。
3．例文
Spring is a good time to visit parks. There are a lot of colorful flowers and birds in the trees. People often go to parks to enjoy the beauty of the spring. They can do many things in parks, such as having picnics, taking photos, doing sports and so on.
However, the uncivilized behaviors of some tourists have become a hot topic. For example, someone likes talking and laughing loudly while enjoying the scenery; someone drops litter everywhere after having picnics in the parks; someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property.
It’s everyone’s duty to protect the parks. I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those bad habits. When we are traveling in the parks, we should obey the rules and take care of the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中提出游园的建议或希望，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动；
第二步，列举三个不文明的游园行为：大声喧哗、随地乱扔垃圾和踩踏草坪；
第三步，提出文明游园的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of大量，大量的
②and so on等等
③take care of注意
④pay attention to注意，留心
[高分句型]
①Someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property.（while引导的时间状语从句）
②I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those bad habits.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
③When we are traveling in the parks, we should obey the rules and take care of the environment.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear Mr Li,
I am worried about something in school these days. So I am asking you for some help.
When I was having PE, my coach let me choose run or not, I wanted to run but I couldn’t because of my disease, with which I couldn’t run or jump like other children. And because of that, I am afraid others will laugh at me. My coach was angry with my behavior.
I am so nervous these days. I think of my disability and I almost lose heart. What’s worse, I even don’t want to go to school.
I always tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease. But I really can’t run or jump. Can you give me some advice? What should I do?
Best wishes,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，格式为书信；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：文章要点给出了主要的提示，考生应注意围绕要点适当发挥，同时注意时态的正确性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，需要寻求帮助；
第二步，说明所遇到的事情，以及自己不能跑步的原因，并且说明因为这个事情自己的内心想法和教练的生气；
第三步，表示自己的处境，不想被别人发现自己的疾病，需要老师给出建议，并注意最后的书信格式。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about sth担心某事
②ask for help寻求帮助
③because of由于
④lose heart灰心丧气
[高分句型]
①I always tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②I wanted to run but I couldn’t because of my disease, with which I couldn’t run or jump like other children.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．One possible version:
The Progress I’ve Made
Looking back on the past two years, I have made great progress.
First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“Future”部分，需要自我发挥，描述自己对未来的展望。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题：回望过去两年，取得的进步很大；
第二步，具体描写自己在生活、学习方面取得的进步；
第三步，描写自己对未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
① make great progress 取得很大的进步
② each other 互相
③ not ... any longer 不再
④ do some housework 做家务
⑤ take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
① With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on.（learn to do sth.学会做某事；such as表示列举）
② Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.（and连接的并列句）
6．例文
My thanks
The year 2021 has passed. A lot of lovely people were with me. I really want to show many thanks to them for their company in 2021.
First, I want to thank my family. They looked after me well day after day. When I didn’t do well in schoolwork, they understood me and encouraged me to keep trying.
Also, I must say thanks to my friends. They not only shared their joy with me but also listened to my problems when I felt blue.
What’s more, I must give my thanks to my teachers. They always set a good example for us. They were willing to help me work out my problems. When I was absent from school, they spent extra time helping me.
Last, I would also say thanks to myself. Life is like a race. I hope to go to my ideal senior high school this year and I will never give up. I believe I can have my dream come true.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My thanks”为题，结合提示的图片进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别从对家人、对朋友、对老师以及对自己四个方面进行感谢。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．Building a Beautiful China
As we know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. While the human beings make us of the resources on the earth, they don’t protect them very well. As a result, water pollution and air pollution are becoming more and more serious. So as a middle school student, we should take good actions to protect our environment. The actions are as follows:
Firstly, we can choose walk or go around by bicycle rather than by car. Secondly, we should make good use of water and electricity. For example, we can use the washing water for plants. Thirdly, we ought to recycle things such as plastic bags, wasted batteries, and bottles as another way for life use. Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the small details. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn off the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbooks and so on.
We hope that every person will be more concerned about protecting environment. Only if everyone takes actions can the earth be more beautiful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文为一篇演讲稿，，要求学生根据表格内容进行发言，属于半开放性写作，时态主要采用一般现在时。
2.例文点评：本文采用三段式，首段，描述地球的现状，污染越来越严重，呼吁学生采取行动；第二段，主要是我们学生可以做什么事，从日常小事出发。最后，再次提出倡议，只有每个人都付出行动，地球才会变得更好。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as a result；more and more；take actions；rather than；turn off；be concerned about；
句型：while引导时间状语从句；that引导定语从句；only位于句首，主句倒装。
【点睛】本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
8．Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in junior high school．
In the past three years, I have learned a lot. Firstly, we have learned to study efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we have learned how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we took part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述你初中三年所学到的东西，包括如何学习以及如何与其他人相处等。注意时态的准确使用，切记不要遗漏要点。并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：learn to do, used to do, to do表示目的，be of importance, get involved in, 疑问词+to do, take part in, build up, in addition, personally以及finally等。
高分句型：Developing a good habit is also of importance中，动名词Developing a good habit作主语，谓语动词用单数；It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to do sth以及review后接what引导的宾语从句（what had been taught after class）。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如learn to do, used to do, to do表示目的，be of importance, get involved in, 疑问词+to do, take part in, build up，动名词作主语谓语动词用单数以及宾语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如in addition, personally以及finally等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．Great changes in Wenchuan
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in Wenchuan over the past ten years.
I have been living here since ten years ago. I survived the big earthquake in 2008. I’ll never forget that day. The earthquake was so strong that the building collapsed. So many victims were living in fear for their lives and they had no choice but to leave. Luckily, our government tried to help us rebuild our home and encouraged us not to lose heart.
Now Wenchuan has changed a lot. A number of new beautiful buildings have been built. The roads are wide and smooth. We are content with life as it is. Also, we have learnt to live in harmony with nature. Wenchuan has become more beautiful, so it is well worth a visit. I hope I can do more to build my hometown and my motherland.
【详解】题干解读：这篇短文要求描写汶川十年来的变化，是一篇给材料作文。审题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先介绍十年前的地震带来的严重后果；然后介绍重建家园后，汶川的变化；最后提出自己的希望。题目中给出了汉语提示，学生们可以此为提纲，组织语言，丰富细节，串联成文。短文应以一般过去时和现在完成时为主来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先内容完整，结构清晰。采用三段式，每段有独立的主题，叙述条理，主次分明。其次短文时态、人称符合表达需要，语言得体，用词准确，符合英语的语法规范。句式结构完整，以简单句结构为主，穿插使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等。
高分亮点：
短语：in fear for；lose heart；a lot；a number of；be content with；as it is；in harmony with；be well worth。
句型：The earthquake was so strong that the building collapsed. ；So many victims were living in fear for their lives and they had no choice but to leave.；Also, we have learnt to live in harmony with nature. ；Wenchuan has become more beautiful, so it is well worth a visit. ；I hope I can do more to build my hometown and my motherland.。
10．Changes around us
Great changes have taken place in our life for years.
Now there are tall buildings everywhere. People have also changed their diet. Fruit and vegetables are their favourite. In their free time, they like doing sports and travelling around. In the past, People went out mostly on foot. But now each family has a car and the roads are wide and clean. So it is very convenient to go out.
Now people pay more and more attention to study. Many people realize the importance of knowledge. They encourage their children to read more books and develop their teamwork skills. They would buy most things online instead of in the shop or market. This helps people save a lot of time.
In a word, people live better than before.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求写身边的变化，属于记叙文写作。本文开篇点题Great changes have taken place in our life for years；然后从饮食、出行和学习等方面做对比描述变化；最后总结点题people live better than before。
2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构。以一般现在时为主，主要用第三人称展开叙述，描写细致，内容充实，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
短语：take place, in life, in their free time, do sports, travel around, in the past, on foot, be convenient to, go out, more and more, instead of.
句型：So it is very convenient to go out.（固定句型）
They like doing sports and travelling around.（并列结构）
People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life.（宾语从句）
In a word, people live better than before.（比较级结构）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
11．How to be happy in Junior 3
Junior school is always considered as the most meaningful period of one’s life. As a Junior 3 student, I would like to give you some suggestions on how to live happily in Junior 3.
Firstly, it’s important to be in good health. You’d better eat healthily. Fresh vegetables and fruit are good choices. Also, having enough sleep can keep you healthy. Moreover, you should take part in sports actively.
Secondly, you should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Make a list of homework you need to do and manage your time carefully. Then you can spare some time for your hobbies to relax.
Thirdly, true friendship will be of great help to you. You can share your happiness with your friends. You can go to them any time when something worries you. You can ask your friends for advice if you are in need.
In a word, I hope you will have a good time in Junior 3 and achieve both happiness and success.
【分析】本文要根据提示，写自己的在初三体会和给学弟学妹的建议。题目给出较多的提示内容，学生需要将提示的短语组成句子，将句子组成篇章。
【详解】首段写出文章主旨：我会给大家一些建议。第二、三、四段分别是给出的建议：保持健康，多参加体育活动，保持学习和爱好的平衡，交真心的朋友，必要的时候可以向他们寻求建议。最后，希望大家能够在初三过的愉快。文章具有条理性，运用firstly，secondly和thirdly等连词，使文章层次分明，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．One possible version:
My dream
If dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly. I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.
I am outgoing and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to society. Children are the future of the nation. Education is a basic human right and it’s important in the development of children, communities, and countries.
To achieve my dream, first I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about education and other subjects. I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills are important for a teacher.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给的问题提示介绍自己的梦想，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出“我的梦想是……”；
第二步，介绍是什么让你有梦想，以及如何实现梦想；
第三步，书写结语。表示相信梦想会实现。
[亮点词汇]
①gain knowledge and skills获得知识和技能
②be useful to对……有用
③in the development of在……的发展中
④communicate with和……沟通
[高分句型]
①I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.（that引导的定语从句）
②If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to society.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills are important for a teacher.（because引导的原因状语从句）
13．例文
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.
In my family, we respect each other and everyone enjoys equal rights. We often communicate with our family members to encourage and support each other.
In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When someone has problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.
It is important for us to live a green life. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. Besides, we usually ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars. We try our best to protect the environment.
What’s more, my family members like doing volunteer work. We often take an active part in charity work to help people in need.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选，要适当进行发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文用第一人称进行写作，时态用一般现在时；正文内容主要从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和志愿者活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由。检查时注意是否遗漏要点，语言表达是否符合英文习惯。
14．例文
Live a safe and colourful life
Since COVID-19 broke out again, many people have to stay at home in their free time to protect themselves as well as others. As a result, I also need to plan my life well to make it safe and colourful.
To protect ourselves, we should seldom go out. When we have to go out, we must wear face masks. When we stay at home, we must keep the room clean and tidy.
Besides, we should do what is interesting and meaningful to make our life colorful. First, we should know how to spend our spare time. So we should learn some new skills. For example, we can learn how to take photos or learn a new language. Maybe it is challenging at first. But it will benefit us a lot. Second, we should know something about art and enjoy different art forms. Last but not the least, we should often do some sports. Because health is the most important to all of us.
I hope everybody can have a safe and colorful life and enjoy every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的材料，以“Live a safe and colourful life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下在疫情期间，你是如何自我保护和度过空闲时间的。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；第一段承接短文开头；其次介绍如何自我保护；第三是介绍如何度过空闲时间；最后是祝愿。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
15．例文
In the first picture, four young people are celebrating Mother’s Day. They are happily taking photos, while their mother looks lonely. In the second picture, the old woman sits alone at home. From the two pictures, we know the old woman's children seldom spend time with her except some get−together days. In daily life, the young ignore the elder’s inner feelings. Therefore, we should pay more attention to the elder's inner feelings. When we grow up, we’d better have more communication with our mother. We are expected to spend more time with our mother. We can go shopping, cook dinner or watch TV with her. All in all, we should respect our mother and try our best to take good care of her.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，描述两幅图并发表自己的看法。谈论一下现在、将来想为自己的妈妈做些什么。
2.例文点评：例文时态采用一般现在时为主，分别描述两幅图并表达观点。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：taking photos；at home；inner feelings；pay more attention to；have more communication with sb.；go shopping；all in all；take good care of。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；be expected to do sth.；we’d better do sth.。
16．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
Two weeks ago, I ordered a mobile phone from your online shop. However, the quality of this mobile phone is not up to standard.
First of all, its battery can last for half a day at most. I think it should last at least a whole day. Also, there is something wrong with its screen. From time to time, I can’t see what is on the screen.
I’m not satisfied with this mobile phone at all. I regret buying a mobile phone like this. I would like to get my money back.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏三个问题提示中涉及的内容，写信反映自己遇到的问题并希望得到解决。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的；
第二步，介绍具体有什么不满的；
第二步，期望得到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①complain about 抱怨
②first of all 首先
③at most 至多
④be satisfied with 对……很满意
⑤regret doing sth. 后悔做了某事
[高分句型]
①I think it should last at least a whole day.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, there is something wrong with its screen. （There be句型）
17．Dear Dad and Mum,
I will graduate from No. 1 Middle School. Now I want to tell you something about my school life in the past three years.
I have learned a lot of knowledge and have improved my study skills. I have learned about many famous people from my books. Spud’s story makes me know I should never give up when I have difficulty doing something. Hepburn helped many poor children in different parts of the world. I will learn from them. I have made many good friends and get on well with them.
However, I feel stressed sometimes. I have so much homework every day that I have no time for my hobbies. I can’t get enough sleep.
Anyway, I thank you for your help. I plan to study harder to get a good result.
Yours sincerely,
Jane
【详解】这是一篇书信，首先应注意英文书信的格式。信的内容包括三部分：你的收获，你的问题，你的想法。你的收获包括“学到了很多知识”，“提高了学习技能从课本中了解了许多名人的事迹（举例2个）”，另包含一个自由表达的要点；你的问题即你的心理问题、学习问题等；你的想法即你心中的感激之情和你对未来的打算。作文时态为现在时，人称为第一人称；写作中需注意语法正确，上下文衔接自然、连贯。
【高分句型一】Spud’s story makes me know I should never give up when I have difficulty doing something. Spud的故事让我明白，当我做事有困难时不应该放弃。I should never give up when I have difficulty doing something.为宾语从句，when I have difficulty doing something为状语从句，have difficulty doing sth.做某事有困难。
【高分句型二】I have so much homework every day that I have no time for my hobbies.我每天作业如此多，以至于我没有时间花在我的爱好上。so…that…如此……以至于……。
18．例文：
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am. I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I read with my friends. Honestly speaking, reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person.
Keeping reading helps me open my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出提示，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中关于“坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己”的相关内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点，句子语法要正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“演讲”来直接引出重点介绍的话题，表明“我”坚持的事情是每天阅读；
第二步，具体描述演讲内容。从“坚持阅读的理由、阅读带来的影响等”几个方面介绍“我”每天坚持阅读的原因及益处；
第三步，书写结语。表达感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech演讲
②keep doing坚持做某事
③no matter不管
④share ... with与……分享
⑤not only ... but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals.（what引导的主语从句）
②That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am.（why引导的表语从句）
③The more I read, the wiser I will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级）
19．例文
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. I think sports are the core abilities that we should have.
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. We should spend more time doing sports to keep healthy and improve our immunity.
We students should relax ourselves often. We need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day. On the weekend, it is better for us to go out and do some outdoor activities with our friends. It is good for our body and mind.
I think it is very important to do sports. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and try his best to keep healthy.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇应用文，图示给出了四种核心能力，包括：终身学习能力、时间管理能力、运动能力和沟通能力，还可以自由发挥，选择一种能力展开文章。需要指明哪种能力，如何做去改善这种能力。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第一段点名要写的能力，第二段介绍重要性，第三段介绍如何改善能力，最后总结。文章多用建议类型的句型或者情态动词，注意观点明确，上下文连贯。
20．例文
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that knowledge may be acquired through many ways, and the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broadens their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival. Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，讲述自己坚持做的事是阅读；第二段介绍为什么一直坚持阅读；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写
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