江苏地区2023学年八年级下册期中备考真题汇编-作文专练(25题)Ⅱ
展开江苏地区2023学年八年级下册期中备考真题汇编-作文专练(25题)Ⅱ
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校考期中)“A green world”是我们共同的生活目标。我校英语专刊最近就此话题进行征文,请你根据以下提示内容写一篇不少于100词的英语短文来投稿。
内容要点:
*(1) 呼吁大家为“A green world”的目标而努力;
*(2) 写自己作为一名中学生为实现这一目标应该怎样做。
Hello, everyone. We share a common home—the earth.
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2.(2022春·江苏南通·八年级统考期中)疫情防控期间,居家学习、生活,有哪些值得你记录的或者有哪些感想?请用80词左右写一篇英语短文。
The days at home
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二、材料作文
3.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校考期中)阅读丰富人生,是我们获得知识的源泉。请以Reading Is a Wonderful Time为题,写一篇作文。
1.很多学生不像以前那么爱阅读了,忙于写作业,没有时间阅读;
2.不少学生花费太多时间看电视、上网……;
3.其实,好书就像朋友。当你失落时,给你信心和安慰;当你遇到困难时,给你建议解决问题……(适当发挥1-2点)
4.建议:合理安排时间;培养好的阅读习惯……(适当发挥1-2点)。
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包含以上所有要点,并作适当发挥;
3.字数在80字左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Reading Is a Wonderful Time
Reading is a wonderful time. It makes our daily life colorful and meaningful.
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If so, I’m sure we will live a more colorful and meaningful life.
4.(2022春·江苏淮安·八年级校考期中)过去这一段时间我们身边的生活发生了很大的变化。李华是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化了很多,学习进步很大,请根据下面表格提供的信息用英语写篇短文,向同学介绍李华的变化并简要说明理由。
过去
过去花很多时间打电脑游戏;讨厌看书;……(自拟一至两点)
现在
现在喜欢看科学书,觉得有趣;每天看书一小时;……(自拟一至两点)
原因
从书中获取知识、获得乐趣;开创新世界;(自拟一至两点)
注意:
1.字数,90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。Li Hua is my classmate.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校考期中)你校最近开展“书香校园阅读季”活动。请以“I Like Reading”为题写一篇短文,介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包含所给提示内容,并适当发挥;
3.90词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
I Like Reading
The importance of reading
open up one’s mind
get more knowledge
...
My reading habit
when to read
where to read
what to read
My favourite book(s)
...
My reading plan
...
I Like ReadingReading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
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Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
6.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校联考期中)树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护健康成长所手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈树你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
要求:1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80~100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
7.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校考期中)在英语课上,同学们就当前抗击新冠疫情的形势,如何选择自己的旅游方式展开了讨论。
请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文,汇报讨论结果,并谈谈自己的想法。
线下旅游
1、有导游,不会迷路 2、不必自己找旅馆 3、……
线上旅游
1、自由安排时间 2、选择自己喜欢的任意景点 3、……
你的想法
1、…… 2、……
注意:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
2. 词数在100左右;不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
3. 开头语已给出,不计入总字数。Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling. Here is the result.
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8.(2022春·江苏淮安·八年级校考期中)读万卷书,行万里路。在即将到来的4月23日世界读书日,我校将举行“读好书,行好路”的主题征文活动。请以“Reading and travelling make a better me”为题,写一篇80—100字的英语短文。内容必须包括表格中所有要点,不得出现真实的校名和人名。
读好书
一本世界著名小说:Robinson Crusoe。作者:英国作家Daniel Defoe。读后感受:生活时而让我们精疲力竭,但采取行动胜于自我放弃。
好处:开启一个全新的世界,在空余时间放松自己,……
行好路
一次旅游经历:时间、地点、感受。
好处:了解不同文化,……
Reading and travelling make a better meFriends are not books, yet books are friends. I have read different kinds of books. But my favourite one is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Reading and travelling make a better me and I hope you can find a better you some time in a future.
9.(2022春·江苏常州·八年级校考期中)“腹有诗书气自华”,一本好书往往能改变人的一生,而良好的阅读习惯更会让人终生受益。请你根据要点提示,用英文介绍一下如何才能养成好的阅读习惯。提示如下:
选好书
……(种类或来源)
规划好时间
……(时长或时段)
……
……
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包含所有信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 字数在90字左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。A good read may make a great difference to our life. It’s important for us to keep good reading habits.
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I hope my advice will be of some help.
10.(2022春·江苏苏州·八年级校考期中)2021年4月23日是第 26个“世界读书日”(World Book Day), 今年学校的主题是“Read and Share”, 为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动。介绍你读过的一本书。以下是草拟的写作流程图, 请根据下图写一篇英语短文参加活动。
注意事项∶
1. 短文须根据流程图自拟, 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 提供的书名非限定性内容, 仅供参考;
3. 词数在90个左右, 短文首尾已在答题卡上给出, 不计入总词数;
4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the book I’d like to share with you is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级统考期中)校刊Kids Mag中有个专栏HAVE YOUR SAY正在开展关于“计算机与学生生活” 的征文活动,请你根据下图中的信息要点,以“The computer in my life”为题,用英语写一篇文章参加征文,简述计算机在你生活中的功能(function)及用途,并就计算机对你生活的影响 (influence)谈谈你的感受。
注意事项:1. 征文须包括启事中提及内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.词数90个左右,征文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
4.征文内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
Computers in my life
The computer has become an important part in my life.
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12.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校联考期中)“You can either travel or read, but either your body or soul must be on the way.”去旅行,这是身体在路上,可以拓宽人的眼界;去读书,这是灵魂在路上,让心智成长。
当今时代的中学生们,假期生活丰富多彩,也热爱读书。某英文杂志正在开展“身体和灵魂在路上”的演讲,谈谈自己去过的地方,自己读过的好书。
身体在路上
1.叙述自己曾经去过的1个旅游景点。
2.在旅游景点游玩时我们应该注意哪些礼仪(自由发挥1-2点)。
灵魂在路上
1.介绍你读过的最喜欢的书。
2.谈谈这本书对你的影响 (自由发挥2-3句话)。
总结
你的个人观点 (自由发挥1-2句)。
要求:1. 注意人称和时态。2. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 不要逐字翻译,词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and mind must be on the way.
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13.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级统考期中)假设李明是你班上的一名同学。请根据表格中的要点提示,完成一篇作文。
Topic
Li Ming has changed a lot
Facts
past
present
In class
sleep, not take notes
listen to the teacher carefully ...
After school
play computer games, hate reading
do some reading every day
borrow books from the library, ...
Opinion
do well in, open up a whole new world...
注意:
1.短文必须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数90左右,开头已给,不计入总词数。Li Ming has changed a lot
I’m very glad my close friend Li Ming has changed a lot over the past few weeks._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校联考期中)Francis Bacon once said, “Reading makes a full man.” Books are the quietest and the best friends. 请你以“I love reading”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,分享你的阅读体会,要求要点完整。语句通顺,语法准确。文中不得透露真实学校、班级和姓名。
具体内容如下:
1.Your reading habits
①When and how often do you read?
②What types of book do you like to read? Which book do you like best and why?
③Who to ask for advice...
④Where do you get the books? Paper reading or online reading?
2.The benefits of reading (阅读的益处)
3.Encourage people to read (号召大家多阅读)
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三、电子邮件
15.(2022春·江苏苏州·八年级校考期中)假如你是李明,紧张的一学期已经过去了一半,请你写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友, 告诉他你这半学期以来的学习和生活情况以及你接下来的计划。
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
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So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
16.(2022春·江苏泰州·八年级校考期中)假如你是林涛,你校爱尔兰外教Johnson因病回国休假,请你给他写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
1.询问Johnson近况;
2.告诉Johnson你校上周五举行的活动并谈一谈你的感受;
3.从下周五的两项活动中选择你准备参加的一项,说明理由,与Johnson分享。
Time
Place
Activities
Reading Day
Last Friday
The classroom
*...(自拟)
Plans for the coming week
Next Friday
City park
*Plant trees
*Clean up the park
City library
*Listen to the talk about good manners
*Communicate with the speaker
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息;
2. 文章不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Johnson,I’m Lin Tao. I can’t tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will get well soon and I’m expecting your early return to China.
Yours sincerely,
Lin Tao
17.(2022春·江苏常州·八年级统考期中)假如你是李华,昨天你的好友Jack给你发了一封邮件,请你根据他的邮件内容给他回复。下面是他的邮件内容:
Dear Li Hua,
The April 23rd is World Book Day. You must have read a lot of books on Book Day this year. Now I’d like to know the following information about your reading habits.
1.What kind of book do you like best?
2.How much time do you spend reading every week?
3.How do you get most of your books?
4.Why do you like reading?
I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Jack
写作要求:
1.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
2.语句通顺,语法正确,逻辑正确;
3.词数不少于90字(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
注意事项:文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to receive your email. As we all know, the April 23rd is World Book Day and it is also an international festival. Now I tell you something about my reading habits.
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I hope everyone can build a good reading habit and enjoy reading books.
Yours,
Li Hua
18.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级无锡市东林中学校考期中)假如你是李华,你的网友Tommy正经历此次上海疫情,他很紧张,不知道该如何来防御病毒。请你按照下图要点给他写一封回信,告诉他在疫情期间要Stay Calm Stay Healthy.
注意事项:
1. 邮件内容根据图示自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意,不得使用真实信息;
2. 图示中举例部分非限定内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在80词左右,邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数。
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19.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)假如你是魏华,刚收到你的美国cousin—Mike的电子邮件,请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。
To: Wei Hua@netease.com
From: Mike @hotmail.com
Subject: changes
Dear Wei Hua, Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. I hear that there are many changes in our hometown, too. Can you tell something about it? You also told me that you used to spend a lot of time playing computer games, but now you have changed a lot. You spend much time reading books. That’s a good habit. Why are you so interested in reading books at present? I also want to read some books in my free time, but I’m not sure which book to read. Can you give me some ideas?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Mike
注意事项:
1.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.词数在90个左右,信的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Jiang Yin has changed a lot over the years.
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I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Wei Hua
四、书信作文
20.(2022春·江苏泰州·八年级统考期中)江苏省第20届运动会(The 20th Games of Jiangsu Province)将于2022年在泰州市举行。为了确保省运会圆满成功,组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华,希望成为其中一员。请按照要求用英语给组委会写一封申请信。
内容:
1、参加志愿者活动的意愿和原因;
2、曾经参加过的志愿者活动和感受;
3、成为志愿者能做些什么。
要求:
1、可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2、不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
3、标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数,词数120字左右。
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 8 student. I would like to recommend myself to be the volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province.
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I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
21.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校考期中)Tom是你班上的一名交流学生,这学期他变化很多,学习进步很大。请你根据下表中的要点提示,完成一篇英文作文,向他在英国的父母介绍他这一学期的变化。
过去
1. 花很多时间打电脑游戏; 2. 讨厌看书。
现在
1. 习惯每天看一小时书;2. 喜欢看科学类书籍,觉得有趣;3. 从图书馆借书或用电脑在互联网上看科学故事。
原因
1. 从书中获得知识和乐趣; 2. 打开新世界;3....。
注意:词数100左右,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,Tom has changed a lot over the past two months. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours,
Lily
22.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级统考期中)Alice 是一位八年级的英国中学生,一直想来中国旅行,受疫情影响,迟迟没能达成。假设你是她的中国笔友李华,请根据下面提纲,给Alice写一封信,介绍中国,帮助其了解中国。
注意事项:
1.提示内容为非限制性内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。
2.词数90个左右,信件首尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How are you going? I know you’re quite interested in China and Chinese culture. Here is something about our country. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Hua
五、讲稿
23.(2022春·江苏苏州·八年级校联考期中)英语课上,老师安排了小组活动,让同学们谈一谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息,写一篇发言稿。
过去
现在
学习
不努力,玩电脑游戏
学习刻苦,多阅读
礼仪
没礼貌,乱扔垃圾
行为得体,保护环境 ......
爱心
不与人分享
善待他人,乐于帮助 ......
展望未来
......(请自拟至少一点内容)
要求:1、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,省略号部分适当发挥;2、词数:80词左右;文章开头结尾已给出不计入总字数。
3、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress(进步) in some ways.
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24.(2022春·江苏镇江·八年级统考期中)又到了春暖花开的时节,宿迁迎来了全国各地的游客。假如你是宿迁晚报的英语小导游,请你根据下表中的内容提示,用英语向来宾做一个解说。
过去
1、生活贫困,房子破旧;
2、上班骑车或步行;
3、人们听收音机来放松;
现在
1、已成为一座现代化城市,污染少,以骆马湖(Luoma Lake)闻名;
2、上班乘公交,旅行乘火车或飞机;
3、人们喜欢看书,阅读可以为我们开创一个新世界;
出游
1、春天是旅行最好的时节,宿迁有很多名胜,如三台山森林公园(Santai Mountain Forest Park);在那里,我们可以……
2、去当地餐馆,品各种美食……
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Suqian! Let me introduce the beautiful city to you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
25.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)4月23日是世界读书日 (World Book Day),你代表班级参加阳光中学所举办的英文演讲比赛,号召广大学生读好书。请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿,要点如下:
1. Books & I
2. Reasons for reading good books;
3. Reading online(not suitable for...; too much time; ...)
4. My advice
参考词汇:影响 v. influence 鼓励 v. encourage 获得平衡 achieve a balance
注意事项:
1.短文须包括以上所有要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.省略号部分各用1—2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3.词数在90个左右,短文必须写在答题卷指定的位置上。
Good morning, everyone! I am the monitor Class 2 ,Grade 9, Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. April 23rd is World Book Day. We are encouraged to read good books these days.
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参考答案:
1.例文
Hello, everyone. We share a common home—the earth. We should help build a green world so that we can live a healthy life. Let’s work hard for it together.
To have a good environment, I’m going to ride a bicycle to school and ask people around me to drive their cars less to reduce air pollution. Then I will plant more trees with my friends and recycle waste to help protect the natural environment. Moreover, I should use cloth bags for shopping, not plastic bags. What’s more, I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是一篇校刊的征文稿。
②时态:本文以一般现在时为主。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,开头点明主题:我们要为了绿色世界做出努力;
②第二步,具体说明我们可以怎么做;
③第三步,结尾再次呼吁大家要付出行动。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 因此
②reduce air pollution 减少空气污染
③recycle waste 回收废品
④nake a difference 有区别
[高分句型]
①To have a good environment, I’m going to ride a bicycle to school and ask people around me to drive their cars less to reduce air pollution. (to do作目的状语)
②We should help build a green world so that we can live a healthy life. (so that引导结果状语从句)
③What’s more, I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. (when引导时间状语从句)
2.例文
The days at home
Since the outbreak of COVID-19, I’ve been staying at home. I helped my parents do some chores. During the epidemic situation, I usually helped my father water the flowers in the morming, then I cleaned up rooms. Sometimes I cooked dinner with my mother. What’s more, I washed clothes for my family. I always felt tired but happy after doing chores because they were interesting. In my opinion, it is necessary for students to do some chores. By doing chores, we can help our parents and understand them better. We’ll also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves from the work and develop our abilities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:要求以The days at home为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指出疫情期间帮助做了家务;
第二步,具体介绍做了什么家务以及自己的感受等;
第三步,介绍自己对做家务的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home待在家
②do some chores做家务
③In my opinion在我看来
④take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①I always felt tired but happy after doing chores because they were interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②In my opinion, it is necessary for students to do some chores.(it固定句型)
3.例文
Reading Is a Wonderful Time
Reading is a wonderful time. It makes our daily life colorful and meaningful. Many students don’t love reading as much as before because they are busy with their homework and have no time to read. Many students spend too much time watching TV and surfing the Internet. In fact, good books are like friends. When you are down, they give you confidence and comfort. When you are in trouble, they gives you advice to solve the problem. Good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me. Reading is a good habit. We should make good use of our time and read more books.
If so, I’m sure we will live a more colorful and meaningful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学生们在阅读上存在的问题;
第二步,介绍阅读的好处;
第三步,提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with忙于
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③in fact事实上
④open up打开
[高分句型]
①Many students spend too much time watching TV and surfing the Internet.(动名词作宾语)
②When you are in trouble, it gives you advice to solve the problem.(when引导时间状语从句)
4.例文
Li Hua is my classmate. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn’t like reading books. When he got home, he watches TV for a long time. He used to to be very fat because he never exercised. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him. After school, he sometimes plays soccer with his classmates. In his view, it is good for his health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,还要适当添加细节,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先说明李华同学这个学期发生了很大变化;
第二步,介绍李华同学过去的生活;
第三步,介绍李华同学现在的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③be interested in doing sth.对做某事感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②…and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.(省略that的宾语从句)
5.例文:
I Like Reading
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
I like reading very much. Because it can not only open up my mind but also make me get more knowledge. What’s more, it can make me relaxing. Every evening after I finish my homework, I will start reading in my bedroom. I like books about history and geography very much. Because I can know a lot from history and know more about nature.
There is an old book about the world geography in my home, with many beautiful pictures of different places in the world. That’s my favourite book. I want to travel around the world to see the beauty. I plan to read a lot and visit many different places.
Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,所需要点基本给出;
②时态:“一般现在时“;
③提示:考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并要适当发挥补充,如阅读的重要性以及最爱的书籍和阅读计划,注意使用正确的词汇和句型。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,说明阅读的重要性,引出下文;
第二步,详细说出自己认为阅读的重要性以及介绍自己的阅读习惯,注意行文逻辑和时态的正确性;
第三步,介绍最爱的书籍以及阅读计划,并总结呼吁大家都要尽可能多的阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②start doing sth开始做某事
③travel around the world环游世界
[高分句型]
①Because it can not only open up my mind but also make me get more knowledge.(not only…but also…连接的并列动词短语)
②There is an old book about the world geography in my home, with many beautiful pictures of different places in the world. (with短语做伴随状语)
6.Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.
What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So don’t do that.
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
【详解】1. 认真读表格,弄明白表格的内容。交通规则:禁止闯红灯、要走斑马线。关于食物:多吃蔬菜和水果、禁止吃垃圾食品。关于交朋友:禁止单独见陌生人、互相帮助。
2. 用简单明了的英语把这些提示内容写完整。
3. 要补充你认为重要的其他一项。
4. 人称用第一人来写。时态用一般现在时。
亮点说明:
1. 本文书写的内容完整、条理清楚。
2. 在文中使用了First,Second,Third等词汇,使文章层次分明。易于理解。
3. 作者所加的一条很好,防溺水,是当今安全隐患最大的。同时还运用了句型It’s dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文为上等之作。
7.例文
Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling. Here is the result.
Some students choose to travel offline. With a guide’s help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while traveling.
However, other students prefer to travel online. That’s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite tourist spots. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after themselves.
As for me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like. In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍有的学生喜欢线下旅游及原因;
第二步,介绍其他学生喜欢线上旅游及原因;
第三步,最后表达自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①get lost迷路
②help each other互相帮助
③what’s more此外
④as for至于
[高分句型]
①they can make friends and help each other while traveling.(while引导的时间状语从句)
②That’s because they can arrange their time freely(because引导的表语从句)
8.例文
Reading and travelling make a better me
Friends are not books, yet books are friends. I have read different kinds of books. But my favourite one is the English writer Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe, which is a famous novel in the world. After reading the book, I learn many things from it. Especially, when we get tried of the life, we should remember that taking measures to face it is better than giving up. Reading good books can teach us a lot of knowledge. It can help us know a new world, also can make us relaxed in our spare time.
Travelling is our friend, too. I have traveled to plenty of places. But my most unforgettable is the trip to Beijing in my childhood. During the trip, I experienced the long history of China and the deep pride. So travelling can help us to know the cultures of the different places.
Reading and travelling make a better me and I hope you can find a better you some time in a future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文应是一篇说明文。
②时态:本文要用到一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,开头已给出,接着开头来介绍自己最喜欢的书,并表达出读好书的好处;
②第二步,介绍自己的一次旅行,并表达出行好路的好处;
③第三步,总结全文,说明阅读和旅行会让我变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①learn…from… 从……学到……
②especially 尤其
③get tired of 厌倦
④take measures to do 采取措施做某事
⑤give up 放弃
[高分句型]
①But my favourite one is the English writer Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe, which is a famous novel in the world. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②when we get tried of the life, we should remember that taking measures to face it is better than giving up. (when引导时间状语从句,that引导宾语从句,动名词作主语)
9.例文
A good read may make a great difference to our life. It’s important for us to keep good reading habits. If you want to have good reading habits, I have some advice for you.
First, choose the right book. You can ask your teachers and parents for some advice about reading. You can borrow books from the school library or buy some from bookshops. You’d better read the four great classical Chinese novels. Second, plan your time well. You should give yourself at least half an hour for reading every day. After you make the plan, don’t change it easily. For example, make it a habit to read before you go to sleep. Third, always carry a book with you. When you leave home, remember to take a book with you. When you are free, you can read it. Finally, find a quiet place to read. You can find a quiet room with a comfortable chair, then you can enjoy reading a book in the chain.
I hope my advice will be of some help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要点要齐全,注意适当增加细节,内容要连贯,表达清楚,语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出培养好的读书习惯的话题;
第二步,具体介绍一些关于如何培养好的读书习惯的建议;
第三步,最后书写结语(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. for some advice 向某人寻求一些建议
②borrow sth. from some place 从某地借某物
③at least 至少
④make the plan 制定计划
⑤enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①For example, make it a habit to read before you go to sleep.(For example例如,用来举例子)
②When you leave home, remember to take a book with you.(When引导的时间状语从句)
10.例文
Good books are valuables. Among all the books I’ve read, the book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat.
A man can be destroyed but no defeated. The fisherman’s spirit encourages me most. We can do almost anything if we never give up.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。在第 26个“世界读书日”来临之际,学校英语俱乐部开展主题是“Read and Share”的征文活动,要求根据草拟的写作流程图,写一篇英语短文参加活动,介绍自己读过的一本书;注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
11.One possible version:
Computers in my life
The computer has become an important part in my life. Usually I use computer to search for some useful information and do further reading. With the help of computer, I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. By receiving and sending e-mails, I can communicate with my classmates and discuss problems with them. What’s more, I can enjoy music online to relax myself. I can even buy all kinds of things online. It can save not only time but also money.
In a word, the computer really helps me a lot. It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示要点介绍计算机在你生活中的功能、用途和影响,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入话题,表示计算机在生活中很重要;
第二步,从不同方面介绍计算机在生活中的用途和影响;
第三步,总结计算机带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①search for搜寻
②with the help of在……的帮助下
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
By receiving and sending e-mails, I can communicate with my classmates and discuss problems with them.(动名词作宾语)
12.例文
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and mind must be on the way.
In the summer vacation, I went to Suzhou and visited the great Hanshan Temple. When I walked on the tree-lined path, I took care of the public property carefully in the scenic spot and did not doodle. When people took photos, I also took the initiative to make places for them. Wherever I went, I kept clean and didn’t throw rubbish freely. I think although travel is often just for recreation, it’s also educational.
As for me, reading an instructive book is just like talking with a learned person. My favorite book is the Secret Garden. It gave me a lot of inspiration. Now I learn to care for and think of others. To keep healthy, I often go outdoors to breathe fresh air. When in trouble, I can also maintain a peaceful state of mind.
Travelling can broaden someone’s horizons, and reading can enrich his/her thoughts. Let’s keep our bodies and souls on the road.
【详解】1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据写作提示,结合自己的经历或经验,谈一谈对“身体和灵魂在路上”的理解,属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时、一般过去时为主,以第三人称为辅来展开叙述。写作时承接开头,根据要点提示,从旅游和阅读两个方面阐述对“身体和灵魂在路上”的理解,最后进行总结表明观点。行文注意主谓一致,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
13.例文
Li Ming has changed a lot
I’m very glad my close friend Li Ming has changed a lot over the past few weeks.
In the past, he didn’t listen carefully in class. He hated reading and even slept from time to time in class. After school, he often spent too much time playing computer games. His parents were both worried about him.
But now he loves reading and listens carefully in class. Reading makes his life colourful. So he does some reading every day. After school he often borrows books from our school library and even downloads books from the website.
Reading can open up a whole new world to us. He is now enjoying a happy life.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”,
③提示:要求包含表格中所有内容,并写出自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:总结变化很大;
第二步:阐述过去的表现;
第三步:阐述现在的变化;
第四步:阐述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②from time to time时不时
③be worried about担忧
[高分句型]
①Reading makes his life colourful.(动名词作主语)
②After school he often borrows books from our school library and even downloads books from the website.(and连接并列结构)
14.例文
I love reading
Reading is a very good habit. I think reading is important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading. It can not only enlarge our knowledge but also make us face more difficult things bravely.
I prefer paper reading to online reading. In my spare time, I often read books either at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. I have read many books, such as Cinderella, Little Red Riding Hood and so on. Cinderella is my favorite book because it makes me know that we should never give up. When I read books, my heart is always filled with pleasure. Now I often buy my favorite books online for its discounts.
Reading brings me a colorful life. Let’s start reading right now!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点中“个人阅读习惯、阅读的益处和号召大家多阅读”的作文内容,注意单词的正确拼写及避免出现语法表达上的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接说明阅读的益处。以“阅读是好习惯”为开头,衔接下文中关于阅读的重要性及其益处,从而引出重点写作内容——个人的阅读习惯;
第二步,详细阐述个人的阅读习惯。从“阅读的方式、阅读的时间及频率、偏好的书类型、最爱的书及原因、购买书的方式等”去具体介绍在阅读方面的个人情况;
第三步,书写号召。表达“大家应多读书”的期盼。
[亮点词汇]
① in one’s spare time 在某人的空闲时间
② either...or... 要么……要么……
③ such as 例如
④ give up 放弃
⑤ be filled with sth. 充满了……
⑥ right now 现在
[高分句型]
① I think reading is important in the whole life for people.(动名词作主语)
② It can not only enlarge our knowledge but also make us face more difficult things bravely.(“not only...but also...”句型)
③ Cinderella is my favorite book because it makes me know that we should never give up.(“it makes sb. do sth.”句型,that引导宾语从句)
15.One possible version:
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
I have been to my hometown where great changes have taken place twice so far. Besides, I have read five books and learned one hundred new English words. What matters most is that I have made plenty of new friends.
Furthermore, I have made some future plans. First, I intend to visit one of the most famous financial centers, namely Lujiazui. Second, I would like to go to the library as much as possible and borrow many books to read. Finally, I plan to visit my dream university, to wit, Zhejiang University.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:现在完成时和一般将来时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要补充1—2点接下来的计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步,撰写已完成的事情。
第二步,撰写接下来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①have been to去了某地(已回)
②intend to do sth.打算做某事
③to wit亦即
[高分句型]
What matters most is that I have made plenty of new friends.(主语从句)
16.例文
Dear Johnson,
I’m Lin Tao. I can’t tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. I’m wondering whether you feel much better these days.
We have organized many activities recently. Last Friday, we held a Reading Day in the classroom and it included a short play. Some of my classmates took part in it and had a good time. I also thought it was great fun. Next Friday, there will be two activities in our school. I prefer to listen to a talk about good manners in the City library. After the talk, we can also have a chance to communicate with the speaker. It will be very meaningful.
I hope you will get well soon and I’m expecting your early return to China.
Yours sincerely,
Lin Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,询问Johnson近况;
第二步,告诉Johnson你校上周五举行的活动并谈一谈你的感受;
第三步,从下周五的两项活动中选择你准备参加的一项,并说明理由。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②have a good time玩得开心
③prefer to do更喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
I’m wondering whether you feel much better these days.(whether引导的宾语从句)
17.Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to receive your email. As we all know, the April 23rd is World Book Day and it is also an international festival. Now I tell you something about my reading habits.
I like books about history. I hope to understand more historical stories by reading books. I usually spend more than three hours reading books a week. This means that I read at least half an hour every day. Most of my books are bought for me by my mother. My mother is a teacher. She wants me to read more books. She thinks reading books can make a person better. My mother often buys books for me as birthday presents. I like reading books, because I hope to learn more knowledge from books.
I hope everyone can build a good reading habit and enjoy reading books.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出“介绍自己读书爱好”的主题;
第二步,介绍自己的读书爱好;
第三步,表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
②at least至少
③buy sth for sb给某人买某物
[高分句型]
①I hope to understand more historical stories by reading books(动词不定式作宾语)
②She thinks reading books can make a person better.(动名词作主语)
18.One possible version:
Dear Tommy,
I’ve got your email and know that you are worried about the bad situation in Shanghai and want to know how to fight against the virus. I am writing to show you what I did during my stay at home.
First, you’d better develop a good habit. For example, you should wash hands more and stay at home as much as possible. If you have to go out, remember to wear a mask.
Second, you need to have a healthy lifestyle. Eating fresh fruit and vegetables, drinking much water and doing some exercise every day will make your body strong enough to win the fight.
Third, you should try your best to make a study plan. You can choose to read books, take online lessons or learn a foreign language.
Stay calm. Stay healthy. I believe you will be able to defeat the coronavirus in the near future.
Looking forward to your email.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封给出提纲的电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,指出要给对方一些建议;
第二步,分别从习惯、生活方式以及学习计划等方面给出具体的建议;
第三步,最后向对方表示祝愿,并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried about为……而担心
② as much as possible尽可能多地
③ try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事
[高分句型]
① If you have to go out, remember to wear a mask.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② I believe you will be able to defeat the coronavirus in the near future.(宾语从句)
19.例文:
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Jiang Yin has changed a lot over the years. The government has built many shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. Most people have moved into new flats. Many people have their own cars. People are enjoying a comfortable life. I have changed a lot, too. In the past, I spent too much time playing computer games. But now, I often read books in my free time. Summer holiday is coming. My parents and I are planning to visit you and go on a trip to New York.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Wei Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态主要为“现在完成时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目中Mike的邮件每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。介绍家乡改变了很多;
第二步,具体阐述有哪些变化;
第三步,书写结语,介绍将去纽约旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to乐于做……
②go on a trip去旅行
[高分句型]
①Summer holiday is coming.(现在进行时表将来)
②My parents and I are planning to visit you and go on a trip to New York.(一般将来时be going to结构)
20.例文:
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 8 student. I would like to recommend myself to be the volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province.
I really want to take part in the volunteer project. It is fantastic to be a volunteer. I think it is a good time for me to get some knowledge and experience. I can not only help others but also make some friends. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself.
I used to be a volunteer in a nursing home. I think voluntary work is important. It is also meaningful for me to help others in need.
If I become a volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province, I can do lots of things. First, I am active and I can communicate with the players easily. Second, I am experienced in volunteering so that I can help them in many ways.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,叙述意愿和原因;
第二步,叙述曾经参加过的活动以及感受;
第三步,介绍自己成为志愿者能做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②not only…but also…不但……而且……
③be experienced in在……方面有经验
[高分句型]
①I think it is a good time for me to get some knowledge and experience.(省略that的宾语从句)
②It is also meaningful for me to help others in need.(it固定句型)
③If I become a volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province, I can do lots of things. (if引导的条件状语从句)
21.例文:
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
Tom has changed a lot over the past two months. He used to spend much playing computer games. He hated reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from library or reads science stories on the Internet. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
Yours,
Lily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信。
②时态:时态是综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,要根据提示内容介绍Tom的变化以及变化的原因,不仅要注意要点齐全,还要自行适当增加变化的原因。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,文章开头已给出,接下来需要结合文章开头,详细介绍Tom过去和现在的一些表现和变化;
第二步,介绍他取得变化的原因,并适当拓展。
[亮点词汇]
①used to 过去常常做某事
②be interested in 对某事或某物感兴趣
③open up 打开
[高分句型]
①He used to spend much playing computer games. (spend...doing花时间做某事)
22.参考例文
Dear Alice,
I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How are you going? I know you’re quite interested in China and Chinese culture. Here is something about our country.
China is in Asia. Its capital city is Beijing. It is also a country with a long history.
There are many places to visit in China. If you go to Beijing, you can visit the Palace Museum. Do not forget to try Beijing duck. It is very delicious. If you like places of natural beauty, you should go to Guilin. You can enjoy the beautiful Li River.
The weather is very different around China. So prepare for it before you go. Moreover, remember that people use RMB here, not dollars or pounds!
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥,确保语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明中国的基本信息;
第二步,告诉对方来中国可以做的事情;
第三步,最后给出对方出行的一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①forget to do sth忘记做某事
②places of natural beauty自然美景胜地
③prepare for为……做准备
[高分句型]
①If you go to Beijing, you can visit the Palace Museum.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②Moreover, remember that people use RMB here, not dollars or pounds!(that引导的宾语从句)
23.One possible version:
Hello, everyone. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I work harder than before and find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day.
Second, I used to be rude and drop litter everywhere. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus. I also try my best to protect our environment. I often help clean the park with my friends.
Third, I didn’t know how to care about others in the past and never shared things with others. But now I am kind and helpful. I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope. I have made up my mind to be a volunteer in the future. I hope to do some charity work to help more people in need. I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】题干解读:题目要求根据表格内容写一篇发言稿;要求包括表格中所有的相关信息,并进行适当发挥。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用5段落格式,第一段:开门见山,描述自己取得的进步和变化;第二段:描述在学习方面的改变;第三段:描述在礼仪方面的改变;第四段:描述自己在爱心方面的改变以及对未来的展望;第五段:表示感谢。
24.例文
Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Suqian! Let me introduce the beautiful city to you.
In the past, people lived a poor life and their houses were shabby. They rode bikes or walked to work. People relaxed themselves by listening to the radio. Now it has become a modern city where there is less pollution. It is famous for Luoma Lake. People go to work by bus and travel by train or plane. People like reading books, which can create a new world for them. Spring is the best time to travel. There are many places of interest in Suqian, for example, Santai Mountain Forest Park, where you can watch birds and moose. You also can go to local restaurants to taste all kinds of delicious food. I hope that you will enjoy your stay in Suqian.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为解说稿。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中宿迁的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“假如你是宿迁晚报的英语小导游,请你根据下表中的内容提示,用英语向来宾做一个解说。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“过去、现在、出游等”几个方面重点介绍宿迁的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“谢谢你”。
[亮点词汇]
①live a poor life过着贫困的生活
②by doing sth通过做某事
③for example例如
④all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Now it has become a modern city where there is less pollution. (where引导的定语从句)
②People like reading books, which can create a new world for them. Spring is the best time to travel. (动名词作宾语)
25.例文
Good morning, everyone! I am the monitor Class 2 ,Grade 9, Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. April 23rd is World Book Day. We are encouraged to read good books these days.
I love reading. I’m especially interested in modern novels. Good books are good for our mind and body. They can help us learn about the world. However, some of my classmates used to enjoy reading online. In fact, not all the books on the Internet are suitable for students. They spent too much time reading online. As a result, they had less sleep. It influenced their schoolwork as well. I think teenagers should learn how to choose good books. It’s better for them to achieve a balance between schoolwork and reading online.
Reading is great fun. Reading makes us wise. Please read good books.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点写一篇演讲稿,号召学生读好书,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢读书以及读好书的好处;
第三步,介绍网上看书的不利之处;
第四步,介绍自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②in fact事实上
③be suitable for适合
[高分句型]
①They spent too much time reading online. (动名词作宾语)
②It’s better for them to achieve a balance between schoolwork and reading online.(动词不定式作主语
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