江苏地区2023学年八年级下册期中备考真题汇编-作文专练(25题)Ⅲ
展开江苏地区2023学年八年级下册期中备考真题汇编-作文专练(25题)Ⅲ
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、材料作文
1.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)目前,许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
要点:
不重视课外阅读的原因
1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上
课外阅读的好处
1. 更多地了解世界
2. 学会如何思考
3. 生活更加丰富多彩
对学校或同学的建议
……(至少一点)
注意:1. 词数: 80个左右(开头已给出的内容不记入总词数);
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译;
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
4.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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2.(2022春·江苏南京·八年级南京玄武外国语学校校考期中)目前,你们班有许多学生不喜欢阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇英语短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出意见。词数80左右。
原因
1)花太多时间做作业;2)没有读书习惯;3)时间花在网络上
课外阅读的好处
1)更好地了解世界;2)学会如何思考;3)生活更加丰富多彩
你的建议
……(至少两点)
注意:词数80左右。
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3.(2022春·江苏苏州·八年级统考期中)假如你是苏州某中学的一名学生李明,请你根据以下表格内的提示要点,以“美丽的苏州”为话题,用英语写一篇90词左右的短文,介绍一下美丽城市——苏州。
地理位置
江苏的南面
历史文化
历史悠久
自20世纪早期以来以现代工厂而闻名
自然环境
旅游最佳是春季(推荐一处旅游地并说明推荐理由)
苏州人正努力地保护环境,如……(请举出1—2个具体事例)
Suzhou is a beautiful garden city by Taihu Lake._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2022春·江苏苏州·八年级苏州中学校考期中)因为疫情的肆虐,我们不得不把在校线下学习切换为居家线上学习,网络成为我们学习生活中最密切的一个部分,它是一把双刃剑,用得好,能助力你学习进步;用得不好,是你学习进步的巨大绊脚石。使用互联网利弊共存,请你根据表格中的提示内容,结合自身观点,写一篇 90 词左右的英语文章。
益处
用网络搜索信息,增长知识;与朋友保持联系;……
弊端
一些学生喜欢玩网络游戏,有时甚至上课的时候也在打;
一些学生喜欢网上交友,和陌生人交友有危险;……
你的观点
我认为……((1-2句)。
注意:1.要点齐全,各省略号处适当发挥;
2.意思连贯,语言流畅,开头已给出,不计入词数。Due to the spread of COVID-19, schooling is now being conducted online. In which case, we students can get online anytime. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2022春·江苏南京·八年级南京外国语学校校考期中)李强是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化很多,学习进步很大。请你根据下表中的要点提示,完成一篇英文作文,不要逐字翻译。
过去
1. 花很多时间打电脑游戏; 2. 讨厌看书。
现在
1. 每天看一小时书;2. 喜欢看科学类书籍,觉得有趣;3. 从图书馆借书或在iPad上下载科学故事。
原因
1. 从书中获得乐趣; 2. 获得知识; 3. 打开新世界
注意:词数80左右。
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6.(2021春·江苏苏州·八年级苏州高新区实验初级中学校考期中)2021年4月23日是第 26个“世界读书日”(World Book Day), 今年学校的主题是“Read and Share”, 为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动。介绍你读过的一本书。以下是草拟的写作流程图, 请根据下图写一篇英语短文参加活动。
注意事项∶
1. 短文须根据流程图自拟, 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 提供的书名非限定性内容, 仅供参考;
3. 词数在90个左右, 短文首尾已在答题卡上给出, 不计入总词数;
4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the book I’d like to share with you is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2020春·江苏南通·八年级校考期中)上周日,你们全家去滨江公园游玩。请根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,以“How To Behave Politely”为题。要点提示:
亲身经历
1. 你们在滨江公园欣赏自然美景,看到野鸟在长江上飞。滨江公园确实是结束一天忙碌工作后放松的好去处。
2. 但我们发现了一位年轻女孩采摘公园里的花。
3. 然后我上前阻止,她意识到自己的错误行为。
我的观点
1. 对于我们而言,学习礼仪方面的知识是必要的。
2. 列举3条在公共场合应当遵守的规矩。
提示词汇:滨江公园 Binjiang Park 长江 the Yangtze River
注意:1. 短文中应包含所要求的信息,可以适当发挥。2. 词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名或姓名。
How To Behave Politely
Last Sunday, my family and I went to Binjiang Park. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(2021春·江苏镇江·八年级校考期中)假如你是李明,五一假期即将来临,请根据以下提示,给美国网友Daniel介绍一下你的假期安排。
要求:
1.层次清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2.短文必须包括以上要点,可作适当的发挥;
3.词数不得少于90个词,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Hi Daniel,
May Day holiday is coming. I have made a plan to spend this meaningful vacation.
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9.(2021春·江苏盐城·八年级统考期中)阅读是人们获得知识的主要途径,人们越来越注重阅读,请用英语写一篇短文,与同学们分享你在阅读方面的一些经验和看法。
注意:1. 词数100词左右;
2. 必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,便全文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My reading habits
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10.(2021春·江苏盐城·八年级统考期中)张华是你班的一名同学,本学期他发生了巨大的变化。请根据下表中的提示信息,以“Great changes”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍他的变化并简要说明理由。
要求:1.包括要点中所给信息,并作适当发挥;
2.行文连贯,书写规范;
3.词数:80词左右。
4.文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息。
Great changes
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11.(2021春·江苏盐城·八年级统考期中)学校网站英语栏目组织征文活动“Great changes in my hometown”,请根据提示,写一篇短文投稿。
Great changes in my hometown
1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What has happened in your hometown?
3. What do you think of the great changes?
4. …
注意事项:
(1)词数:90词左右;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
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12.(2021春·江苏扬州·八年级统考期中)阳光中学英语俱乐部正在征稿,请你根据以下提示,以“I like reading”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:1.What type of book do you like? Why? (至少阐述两点理由)
2.How do you read your favourite book? (读书的时间、地点、方式、习惯)
3.What is your feeling after reading? (写出两点)
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右。
I like reading
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13.(2021春·江苏盐城·八年级统考期中)读万卷书,行万里路, 身体和灵魂总要有一个在路上。请你结合表格中所给的信息, 以My hobbies为题,用英语谈谈阅读和旅行的好处及你的旅行和阅读计划。
爱好
旅行
● 开阔了我的视野;
● 让我了解到不同地方的人和文化;
(自主发挥, 一到两点)
阅读
● 使我们获得更多的知识;
● 有趣的故事让我们身心放松;
(自主发挥, 一到两点)
我近期的旅行和阅读计划
(自主发挥, 旅行和阅读至少各一点)
要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2. 短文必须包括所有的信息,注意适当发挥。
3. 词数100词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My hobbies
I have many hobbies. Among them, I like reading and travelling best. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(2021春·江苏南京·八年级统考期中)假如你是李华,在学校英文校刊上看到了你最喜爱的学校旅行的征文活动。请根据下面提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
My favourite school trip
* What place did you visit?
* How did you get there? What did you do there?
* Why did you like this trip best?
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数 80 词左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总次数);
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。We go on a school trip once a term. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(2021春·江苏南京·八年级统考期中)为庆祝今年的世界读书日,你校举办了阅读周活动并在活动后开展了征文大赛。请你根据征稿内容,用英文写一篇短文参赛。
Dear students,World Book Day is on April 23, which was set up by UNESCO in 1995 to encourage people to find the pleasure of reading.
To celebrate the day, we held a Reading Week this year. Now, share your ideas about the books you have read. Which book do you like best? Why do you like it? What have you learnt from it?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.短文须包括所有内容要点,并适当发挥;
3.词数 80 左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。I am really glad to share my ideas with you.
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二、电子邮件
16.(2021春·江苏泰州·八年级统考期中)假设你叫吴冰,在网络上读到来自英国的Simon的一封电子邮件,介绍了他家乡的变化和他的个人爱好,你也打算写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你家乡兴化的变化和你的个人爱好——阅读的情况。要点如下:
1)家乡变化( Environment, Transport and Living conditions)
2)阅读情况( Type种类,Time and Benefits益处)
3)个人看法(多读书,爱家乡)
要求:1)适当增加细节,表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;
2)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
3)词数要求100词左右。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Simon,
I’m very glad toread your e-mail. In your letter, you told me about the changes to yourhome1ownand your hobby. Now I’d like to tell you about mine.
There have beengreat changes in my hometown Xinghua. ▲
I have manyhobbies. I like reading best. ▲
In my opinion, ▲
Yours sincerely,
Wu Bing
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17.(2020春·江苏南通·八年级南通田家炳中学校考期中)Sandy的美国笔友Jack想要认识她的同学Daniel,请帮助Sandy按照提示和要求 写一封电子邮件介绍Daniel的情况。
Daniel’s hobbies
Travelling
香港
游览主题公园;观看烟火
英国
参观英国名胜;了解餐桌礼仪
Reading
阅读四大名著
讨论读书内容
获得大量知识
……(自拟一点)
Good manners
遵守交通规则
公共场合排队
自拟两点
注意:
字数90左右,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
文中须包括所有内容要点,不要简单翻译,可适当发挥,使语句通顺,意思连贯,符合逻辑。
Dear Jack,Daniel is both my classmate and my friend. I would like to tell you something about him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Daniel is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also be good friends. I’m looking forward to your letter soon.
Yours,
Sandy
三、看图作文
18.(2022春·江苏南京·八年级南师附中树人学校校联考期中)学生喜欢采用何种方式提高英语水平?就该话题你在班中做了调查(结果见下图)。请你据此写一篇短文,在学校英语社团主题活动中进行交流,并谈一谈你的选择、理由和做法。
要求:
1. 短文必须包括图中所有内容,可适增加细节;
2. 你的理由必须与图中所列理由不同;
3. 词数:80词以上;
4. 首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, I’ve done a survey about how students improve their English reading abilities.
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19.(2020春·江苏南京·八年级校考期中)世界在发展,生活在变化,社会的进步让我们的生活越越好。请通过以下4组图片,从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式等方面,以“How life changes!”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 词数80~100;
2. 请先简要介绍表格中的4组图片,再根据生活实际列举1~2个方面,做适当发挥;
3. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
4. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
How life changes!
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四、书信作文
20.(2021春·江苏扬州·八年级统考期中)假设你是李明,你的笔友Peter来信谈到他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡扬州的情况,请你用英语写一封回信。内容提示如下:
1. 扬州位于中国东部,因瘦西湖(the Slender West Lake)而出名;
2. 由3个区组成,如广陵区(Guangling District)、江都区等;
3. 过去许多工厂经常向湖里倾倒废弃物,最近政府已经采取措施减少污染;
4. 每天我们都能看到一大群游客;每年来扬州的最好的时间是春天;
5. 我希望……
注意: 1. 短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 第5要点内容须用2~3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数100个左右,短文的开头和结尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Yangzhou.
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21.(2021春·江苏盐城·八年级校考期中)假如你是张华,你推荐好朋友李明参加“最佳学生奖”的评选,请根据下面表格的内容,写一封推荐信。
个性
善良,乐于助人,聪明,……
事迹
1.经常参加一些为贫困儿童募集衣服、书本的活动,……
2.领养流浪狗(homeless dog),每天放学后带他散步,成为好朋友,帮他刷毛、洗澡、喂食;
3.上个月,一个七岁的男孩迷路,他帮助孩子找到了家;
4.上周末,他从大火中救出一位老人(救人过程不少于两句话)
5.……
希望
……
要求:语句通顺,条理清楚,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥。字数不少于100字。
Dear Sir/ Madam,I would like to recommend my friend Li Ming for the Best Student Award. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Zhuang Hua
五、讲稿
22.(2021春·江苏无锡·八年级统考期中)假如你是阳光中学八年级学生李华,本周是你们学校的阅读周,请你根据下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的英文演讲稿,推荐一本你喜欢的书。
Reference (参考):Gulliver’s Travels Alice in Wonderland The Old Man and the Sea
Treasure Island Journey to the West ...
注意事项:
1.演讲稿须包括所有提示内容,...处可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数在80个左右,演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3.演讲稿中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Hi, everyone. I’m Li Hua in Grade 8 from Sunshine Middle School. We will have a Reading Week in our school. Reading is very important in our daily life.
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Just read it for yourself! I’m sure you’ll like it. That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
23.(2021春·江苏扬州·八年级校考期中)进入梅岭中学以来,很多同学在学习和生活上都取得了很大的进步。假如你是来自八年级一班的David,请你写一篇演讲稿谈谈两年来自己的收获与变化。具体内容如下:
过去
现在
学习
很少阅读,花时间在……
我喜欢读书,因为……
环保
浪费水电,乱扔垃圾
意识到保护环境的重要性,垃圾入桶
礼仪
大声喧哗,插队推挤
举止礼貌,主动让座……
爱心
不知道关心他人
……
展望未来
相信自己的未来越来越好。
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右;
(4)不得使用真实姓名,校名和地名等。Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade8. I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways since I entered Meiling Middle school.
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24.(2021春·江苏盐城·八年级校考期中)为了争做“阳光好少年”,你的学校开展了一次主题为“读好书、行好路、做好人”的演讲活动,你将代表你们班同学发言。请根据以下要点提示并自主发挥,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意事项:1.词数100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文章中不能出现使用真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包括所提供的主要信息,并适当发挥。
How to be a better student
Dear my friends,
It is my great honor to make a speech here.________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
25.(2021春·江苏南京·八年级统考期中)假如你是李华,将代表本班参加学校的演讲比赛,谈谈自己在过去两年总的变化。请根据表格内容,写一份演讲稿。
过去
现在
未来计划
学习
上课不够专心,作业不够认真……
意识到学习的重要性, 养成了好的学习习惯……
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生活
花费大量业余时间上网
爱上阅读,感受到了阅读书带来的益处……
玩游戏;
喜欢“宅”在家里, 很少锻炼……
喜欢旅行,了解了不同国家的文化……
注意:
1、要点齐全,适当发挥,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
2、词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3、文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. In the past two years, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
参考答案:
1.At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【分析】这是一篇材料作文,许多中学生不重视课外阅读,文章要求对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
【详解】结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Here are…,quite a lot of students are…,reading has…,reading can…,teachers are supposed to…,it's a good idea to…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了许多中学生不重视课外阅读,接下来介绍阅读的好处,最后提出建议。此处be burdened with, form a habit of, would rather, learn about, last but not least, for one thing, for another, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2.例文
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【详解】1.题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们对目前很多学生不喜欢阅读的现状进行分析,阐述课外阅读的好处,并提出自己的建议。题目中用表格的形式罗列了文章中应包括的要点,学生们应根据这些提示,组织文章的内容,并结合实际,进行适当拓展,丰富文章的内容。
2.写作指导:审题可知,这篇作文应以第三人称、一般现在时态为主进行叙述。注意将题目中列出的要点都表达出来,并分清层次,使表达更加清晰。写作中应注意英语句式结构的特点和与汉语表达习惯的不同,使用简单句、并列句和复合句等多种句式,同时注意上下文意的衔接,使文章的表达流畅,意思连贯。
3.例文:
Suzhou is a beautiful garden city by Taihu Lake. Located in the south of Jiangsu, it has a long history and has been famous for its modern factories since the early 20th century. The best time to visit Suzhou is spring. Visitors can pay a visit to the Humble Administrator’s Garden, which is one of the most beautiful places in Suzhou in spring. In order to make Suzhou a better city, we, Suzhou people, are working hard to protect the environment. Not only do we plant as many trees as we can, but we also stop factories from throwing waste into the rivers.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本题要求以苏州学生李明的身份,根据表格中的信息写一篇90词左右的短文介绍美丽城市——苏州。
2. 写作指导:本文时态主要采用一般现在时;写作时应承接开头,紧扣提示内容进行发挥,注意表格中括号内的要求;本文还可在提示内容的基础上进行自我发挥,以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求;写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全,行文流畅,语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
4.例文
Due to the spread of COVID-19, schooling is now being conducted online. In which case, we students can get online anytime. However, everything has advantages and disadvantages just as a coin has two sides.
On the one hand, we can surf the Internet to find helpful information and increase knowledge. On the other hand, we can keep in touch with our friends whenever we like. We can also shop online.
The Internet can make some problems at the same time. For example, some students are crazy about playing computer games. Sometimes they even play them in class. It does harm to their schoolwork. What’s worse, some students like to make friends online. As we all know, it’s dangerous to make friends with strangers.
In my opinion, the Internet has more advantages than disadvantages if we use it in a proper way.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇议论文。题目要求按提示内容论述互联网的利弊,并给出自己的观点。
2.写作指导:本文时态应为一般现在时,人称应以第一人称和第三人称为主。文章首段开头已给出,写作时要承接上文,引出话题;第二段应论述使用互联网的益处;第三段应论述使用互联网的弊端;最后总结全文、提出自己的观点。
5.例文
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn’t like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or downloads science stories in his iPad.
Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍李强的变化,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段,第一段介绍李强过去和现在的一些表现和变化;第二段介绍他取得变化原因。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
6.例文
Good books are valuables. Among all the books I’ve read, the book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat.
A man can be destroyed but no defeated. The fisherman’s spirit encourages me most. We can do almost anything if we never give up.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。在第 26个“世界读书日”来临之际,学校英语俱乐部开展主题是“Read and Share”的征文活动,要求根据草拟的写作流程图,写一篇英语短文参加活动,介绍自己读过的一本书;注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
7.范文:
How To Behave Politely
Last Sunday, my family and I went to Binjiang Park. We enjoyed the natural beauty there and saw wild birds flying on the Yangtze River. There were many people playing in the park, because Binjiang Park is really a good place to relax after a busy day’s work.We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened. We found a young girl picking flowers in the park. Then I stopped her and she realized her wrong behavior.
In my opinion, it is necessary for us to learn the knowledge of etiquette. For example, we should pay attention to our manners. When we are in the library, we should keep quiet. When we cross the road. We should watch the traffic lights first. Before we get on a bus, we should wait in line and so on. All in all, we should behave politely.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头,根据汉语提示的内容,第一段叙述在游玩滨江公园时遇到的事情和自己的行为和做法,第二段介绍自己的观点并列举三条在公共场合应当遵守的规矩。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容,时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时。在叙述内容时,力求描写细致,叙述完整,保证条理清晰,行文连贯。
8.Hi Daniel,
May Day holiday is coming. I have made a plan to spend this meaningful vacation. Let me share it with you now.
I will have a three-day holiday. The first place I want to go to is the museum, because I can learn a lot about the city culture there. I will go there with my best friend Jack. After that, we plan to go to the amusement park to have fun. We will surely have a good time. And in the following two days, I will stay at home to finish my homework.
This is my plan for the coming holiday. Do you think it's meaningful?
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求你以李明的身份给美国网友Daniel介绍一下你的假期安排。要点按如图所给的提示展开叙述。
2. 写作指导:本文主要以第一人称和第三人称展开描述,时态以一般将来时为主。内容注意涵盖提示所给的所有要点。注意层次清楚,语句通顺,不要有语法和拼写错误。
9.One possible version:
I love reading. We can get knowledge through reading.
I usually spend over an hour a day reading books. I like history books best. So far, I have read many books. I borrowed most of the books from the school library. My parents often buy some books from the bookshop for me too. And I also like reading online books now.
Reading opens up a whole new world to me. It can also help me relax after a busy day. Good books are good friends. Reading is always a wonderful time.
I would like to advise that everyone should read more books. Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】1.题干解读:阅读题干可知,要求写一篇短文分享在阅读方面的一些经验和看法。写作从三个方面进行书写:阅读经验、收获和建议看法。写作前,可以先列举可能用到的单词、短语或句型;写作时注意写作习惯要符合英语的表达方式;写作后要进行检查。
2.写作指导:这是一篇材料型作文,时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。例文采取四段式的写作手法:第一段表明观点,喜欢阅读;第二段写自己的阅读习惯及经验;第三段写通过阅读得到的收获;第四段号召建议大家多阅读。
10.例文
Great changes
Zhang Hua is my classmate.He has changed a lot.In the past,he spent lots of time playing computer games because he thought they were interesting and exciting and he hated reading books because he thinks reading was useless .Now,he finds it interesting to read.He reads for an hour every day.He often borrows books from the library.He thinks he can get knowledge from books and open up a new world.
He thinks that students shouldn't waste their time on computer games.If students read a lot ,they will be happy.
【详解】题干解读:介绍张华同学,本学期发生了巨大的变化,要求叙述的过去和现在的做法,用第三人称单数形式,要注意时态的形式。
写作指导:叙述过去的情况句子用一般过去时,叙述现在的情况句子用一般现在时,注意动词用第三人称单数的形式,最后补充两点。
11.参考范文:
With the development of technology, great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past few years.
In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty. There was rubbish everywhere. Also, the river was full of dead fish. People lived in the old houses. Without lights at night, people had to go to bed as early as possible.
At present, everything has changed. People live a more comfortable life. The roads are wide and clean. There are lots of trees and flowers on both sides of the roads. Moreover, the living condition becomes better. Most people move into flats. People now can travel to and from the town by train or taxi if they like.
Just as the saying goes, “Each coin has two sides.” Even if the changes are fantastic. The environment pollution is still a problem. However, the government has taken action to prevent it. I believe that our hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示问题,写出自己家乡的具体的一些变化,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,用第三人称来写作,时态以一般过去时和一般现在时相结合,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
12.例文
I like reading
I love reading different types of books and I am especially interested in history books, because I can improve my knowledge of the past. I can also share interesting stories with my friends.
Every night before going to bed, I often read books for half an hour. It seems that I can’t sleep well if I don’t read for a while. I spend at least seven hours a week reading books. I get my books from the school library at the weekend.
Our Chinese teacher gives us lots of advice on books. Reading is great fun. Good books are good friends. Books can open up a whole new world to me.
【详解】1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生以“I like reading”为题,根据写作提示,谈一谈自己喜欢的书籍和阅读情况。
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时展开陈述。写作时需紧扣提示的要点,首先明确喜欢的书籍类型和原因,重点叙述日常的阅读情况,包括时间、地点、方式和习惯,最后谈谈自己的阅读感受。行文注意主谓一致,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
13.范文:
My hobbies
I have many hobbies. Among them, I like reading and travelling best.
Travelling opens my eyes. I can learn about people and culture in different places. I always experience a lot from my travelling. It’s also a good way for me to relax. Reading helps me get lots of knowledge. Good stories can relax myself. Books are my good friends. When I read a great book, I will forget all my worries.
This year, I will keep reading at least two good books. I will spend about half an hour reading every day. Besides, I plan to travel to Yunnan. I really want to visit Kunming—the Spring City. I think I can have a good time there.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据所给提示,介绍自己的爱好——阅读和旅行。按照表格提示要点,需要介绍阅读和旅行的好处,以及自己近期的旅行和阅读计划。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来写;时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。写作时,根据提示先谈旅行和阅读给自己带来的好处,并进行一到两点的扩展。最后谈自己的旅行和阅读计划,注意语句连贯,保证条理清晰。
14.例文:
We go on a school trip once a term. Last weekend, our class made a school trip to the beach. We went there by bike. We were glad to enjoy the sunshine and swim in the water. Some of our students had great fun playing games on the beach. However, there was more and more rubbish left on the beach, which made the beautiful beach dirty. Suddenly, our teacher came up with a good idea. We could play a game and the one who picked up the most rubbish would win a prize from the teacher. All of us tried our best to do it. After a short time, the dirty beach came back to its beauty. I like this trip because it makes me know the importance of protecting the environment.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示问题写一篇短文,介绍自己最喜欢的学校旅行,要指名地点、交通方式、做了什么及为什么最喜欢这次旅行,可进行适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合。可采用一段式写作,要在文中回答出提示中的几个问题,并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
15.范文:
I am really glad to share my ideas with you. Everyone has his favorite book. My favorite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, which was written by a famous American writer Mark Twain. I love this book because the characters in the book are very lovely and clever. There are six people in the story. They are Tom Sawyer, Polly, Huck Finn, Joe, Becky and Injun Joe. The Injun Joe is a bad man in the story, so I hate him very much. My favorite scene is the Funeral scene, because it makes me move when I read there. I think it is one of the greatest books in the world and it is worth reading by many people.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,在写作时要承接短文开头,根据征稿内容的提示,介绍最喜欢的书是什么,喜欢的原因以及读书所得。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容,时态采用一般现在时为主,在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,提示内容全面,保证条理清晰,行文连贯。
16.例文:
Dear Simon,
I’m very glad to read your e-mail. In your letter, you told me about the changes to your hometown and your hobby. Now I’d like to tell you about mine.
There have been great changes in my hometown Xinghua. In the past, there were dirty and narrow roads. People travelled around the town on foot or by bike. Local people lived in old and small houses. People in my hometown live a hard life. Now things have changed a lot. The streets are clean and wide, with green trees on both sides. And people go travelling by bus, taxi or train. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now.
I have many hobbies. I like reading best. I like reading books on novels because I am interested in novels. I usually read books before going to bed every day. Reading can improve my knowledge. Reading can help me relax after a busy day. /Reading can open up a whole new world to me.
In my opinion, I should read more and study hard to make my hometown more beautiful. I love my hometown.
Yours sincerely,
Wu Bing
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于一封电子邮件。要求以吴冰的身份,给Simon写一电子邮件,根据题干要点向他介绍家乡兴化的变化以及个人阅读的情况。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态应是一般现在时和一般过去时为主;文章分为三部分,第一部分介绍自己的家乡,第二部分介绍自己的兴趣爱好,最后一部分表达自己的看法,力求语言准确,内容完整,行文连贯,条理清晰,做到无语法和标点错误。
17.参考例文
Dear Jack,
Daniel is both my classmate and my friend. I would like to tell you something about him.
Daniel likes to travel. In Hong Kong he visited theme parks and watched fireworks. Besides, he has also been to England. He visited the places of interest of Britain and learned about table manners. Daniel also likes reading very much. For example, he often reads the Four Great Books. And he likes to talk about books. He thinks reading can help us get a lot of knowledge and make us feel relaxed at the same time. Daniel has good manners. He follows traffic rules and stands in line in public. And when he meets teachers and classmates, he always says hello.
Daniel is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also be good friends. I’m looking forward to your letter soon.
Yours,
Sandy
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是按照所给提示和要求给Jack写一封电子邮件,介绍下Daniel的情况。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;人称以第三人称为主。写作时注意要点不要遗漏,可适当发挥,使行文连贯。力求语句通顺,无单词语法错误,条理清晰。
18.范文:
Recently, I’ve done a survey about how students improve their English reading abilities. 47% of the students go to the movies because it can make them feel relaxed and have exciting feeling. 53% of the students read novels at home because it makes it easier to remember words and get wonderful ideas.
I usually read English newspapers and listen to English songs, which can not only let me know more news, but also let me learn more words and grammar. So I think all roads lead to Rome. As long as you can learn English well, you can do anything. What about you?
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据调查结果写一篇作文;要求包含图中所有内容。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态用一般现在时;采用第一人称口吻;可采用2段落格式,第一段描述调查结果;第二段:阐述自己的选择、理由以及做法。注意无单词和语法错误。
19.例文
How life changes!
In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV. But now they use mobile phones and computers. They used to go to the shop to buy things. But now they buy things on the internet. In the past, people lived in the old and dirty houses. But now, they live in the new and clean houses. In the past, they communicated with their friends by posting letters and postcards. But now, email, WeChat and QQ are used widely. People used to go to work on foot or by bus, but now most people drive to work.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据图片展示内容,写出人们的生活变化,改善的不同方面,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
20.例文:
Dear Peter,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou lies in the east of China. It is famous for the Slender West Lake. It is made up of three districts such as Guangling District, Jiangdu District. Many factories used to put waste into the lake. Recently the government has taken action to reduce pollution. Every day we can see a large group of visitors here. The best time to visit Yangzhou is spring. I hope you can come and visit soon. I’ll show you around it. I’ m sure you’ll have great fun.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:本篇要求以李明的身份向笔友Peter介绍家乡扬州。内容包括扬州的地理位置,过去和现在的环境以及旅游的最佳时间。
2.写作指导:本文介绍扬州的地理位置、旅游时间用一般现在时写作,介绍扬州过去的环境用一般过去时。书写时要围绕题干提示点展开,分层有条理地介绍扬州,适当使用连词使文句更有逻辑。
21.例文:
I would like to recommend Li Ming for the Best Student Award. He is the best student in Class 1, Grade 7.
First and foremost, he is very kind and always ready to help others. Besides, he is so smart that he is good at all his subjects. Above all, he always tries his best to help those in need. He often takes part in meaningful activities such as raising clothes and books. Last week, he saw a boy at the age of seven lose his way and helped him get back home. Yesterday there was a fire, and he saved an old man out of fire and saved his life. He even adopts some homeless dogs, walks with them, cleans them and feeds them so that they soon become good friends. If Li Ming can win the award, we will be happy.
We hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Zhuang Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇书信作文。要求我们推荐好朋友李明参加“最佳学生奖”的评选,并根据表格的内容,写一封推荐信。
2.写作指导:给出的材料比较全面,我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点;写作时注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误;注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯;注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题,时态一般是一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第三人称为主;写作中语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,符合逻辑。
22.例文:
Hi, everyone. I’m Li Hua in Grade 8 from Sunshine Middle School. We will have a Reading Week in our school. Reading is very important in our daily life.
We can improve our knowledge by reading. Reading can also open up a new world to us. I love reading. I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books. On weekdays, I usually read for half an hour. I usually read before going to bed. I like Treasure Island best. This novel tells the story of a young boy called Jim, who sails the sea to look for hidden treasure. He faces difficulties but never gives up.
Just read it for yourself! I’m sure you’ll like it.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求以阳光中学八年级学生李华的身份写一篇80词左右的英文演讲稿,推荐一本你喜欢的书。演讲稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,做到语句通顺、意思连贯,行文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
2.写作指导:这是一篇图表作文,根据所给提示可知,本文时态用一般现在时,人称主要以第一人称为主,注意人称代词的使用及主谓一致问题,写作中注意上下文的过渡,要符合逻辑关系,符合英文表达习惯。
23.例文:
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade8. I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways since I entered Meiling Middle school.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me.
Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins.
Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.
Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.
I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
【详解】1.题干解读:本篇书面表达是一篇演讲稿。题目要求作为八年级一班的David,根据表格里的内容来写一篇演讲稿,谈谈两年来自己的收获与变化。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主。首先进行自我介绍;然后可以分点进行描写:第一、描写过去和现在学习方面的对比变化;第二、描写过去和现在在环保方面的对比变化;第三、描写过去和现在在礼仪方面的对比变化;第四、描写过去和现在在爱心方面的对比变化;最后一段进行总结,希望未来做的越来越好。
24.例文:
How to be a better student
Dear my friends,
It is my great honor to make a speech here. A better student should keep a good habit. If you want to be a better student, there will be a lot of things you should do.
First, read more books. In order to increase our knowledge, we should read books. We can read all kinds of books. We will learn what one person is thinking by reading their books. It’s useful to us. Second, take wonderful travels. We can enjoy the beautiful view. And it’s a good way to relax ourselves. My most impressive travel experience is the travel to Guilin. The air is so fresh and the river is so clean. Finally, show good manners. It’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need.
Remember these things, and you’ll be a better student.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,以“How to be a better student”为题,依据题干所提供的主要信息用英文写一篇演讲稿。题干信息充足,条理清晰,考生需紧扣信息要点,有理有据。
2.写作指导:本文是一篇演讲稿,必须准确简洁,层次清晰。整体可分为三大部分,首先承接短文开头,总述优秀学生的特点和要求。其次分三个要点说明成为优秀学生的方法:1.多读书;2.美好的旅行;3.举止得当。最后总结全文。时态采用一般现在时。写作中,应注意表述的全面性,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英文的表达习惯,尽量选择自己熟悉的内容发挥,使用自己学过的句型,如 First..., Second..., in order to do sth. 等表达。
25.例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. In the past two years, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
In the past, I was not attentive enough to listen in class and did not finish my homework patiently. Moreover, I did not like to think or ask questions. Besides, I spent most of my free time listening to music, watching TV and playing computer games.
Everything has changed now. With the help of the teacher, I realized the importance of learning and gradually developed good habits of learning, such as finishing homework on time and listening to the teachers carefully. And now I try to spend my free time reading, because reading can make me happy and learn a lot. Besides, I like travelling vey much now because I can know different cultures of different countries.
I’m going to run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. I’m sure I can be better and better.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据提示内容,谈谈自己在过去两年总的变化,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文首尾两段已经给出,第二段介绍自己过去的情况;第三段介绍自己现在的情况;第四段介绍自己的未来计划。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误
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