江苏地区2023学年八年级下册期中备考真题汇编-作文专练(25题)Ⅳ
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学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级景山中学校考期中)践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生,我们应该不断提升文明素养,做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题, 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点:
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen?
2. What’s your opinion about it?
3. How can you be a student with good manners?
注意:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
2.词数在80-100之间,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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二、材料作文
2.(2022春·江苏南通·八年级统考期中)疫情无情人间有情,心怀希望砥砺前行。在面对疫情带来的变化时,积极向上的态度更能有助于人们早日取得抗疫胜利。英文杂志“Teenage Magazine”正在举行以“疫情带给我们的变化与思考”为主题的征文比赛,请你根据下面表格中的提示,用英语写一篇短文来描述疫情给我们的生活和学习带来的变化,并谈谈你的思考。
变化
1. 学校停学→居家线上学习(可自拟其他内容)
2. 图书馆暂停开放→网上阅读(可自拟其他内容)
3. 景点关闭→在线旅游(可自拟其他内容)
思考
1. 互助,……。
2. 感恩,……。
3. ……,……。
要求:
1. 不要逐字翻译,表达清楚,语法正确,语言连贯;
2. 短文中应包含表格中所有信息,可自拟其他内容,省略号部分适当发挥;
3. 词数90词左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数);
4. 短文中请勿提及本人真实姓名和校名等。As we all know, we had a special but hard time in the past few weeks. I think what we experienced during the time can help us learn a lot.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’ve thought a lot about this experience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校联考期中)4月23日是世界阅读日。我校在读书节前夕对全体学生的阅读情况做了一次问卷调查。请根据下列调查数据和相关文字提示,用英语写一篇短文,说明阅读的现状和意义,并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的建议。
要点
内容
调查数据
大部分学生每天阅读不足20分钟
一些学生每天阅读30分钟
很少学生每天阅读达到1个小时
阅读的意义
帮助放松心情
让生活更加丰富多彩
…
你的建议
每天坚持阅读至少半小时
读书时养成记笔记的好习惯
…
要求:
1. 写全要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 The World Reading Day is coming and our school has done a survey on students’ reading situation.
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Let’s take action right now!
4.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校联考期中)假如你校将开展“读好书,促成长”活动,请你根据这项活动的主题,向全校同学发出倡议。请参考表格内容,用英语写一份倡议书。
过去
1. 作业、上网占时多;2.无良好的阅读习惯……
现状
1. 通过……(途径)看多种类型的书;
2. 旅行……(自由发挥一点)。
倡议
1. 养成良好的阅读习惯,如……;
2. 与他人分享好书……
意义
至少两点。
注意:
1. 要点齐全,适当发挥,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
2. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear friends,Reading is very important in our daily life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校联考期中)近年来,我区一直在推广“书香江都,让阅读走进生活”活动,这一活动的实施使市民的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华,请用英文写一封信,向你的美国笔友Tom介绍近年来江都打造“书香城市”的变化与影响。请根据下面的信息完成这封信。
变化
过去:借书地方少,书籍种类缺乏……
现在:社区有阅览室供居民借阅书籍;江都新图书馆开放,有多种书籍……
影响
越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性:使人愉悦,益于学习;
你的感受
……(至少两点)
注意事项:1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯,可根据自己的认识,适当增加细节;
2. 词数在90个左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 信中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tom, I’m Li Hua. The activity of Letting Reading into Life has started in Jiangdu.
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I hope you can enjoy the world of books with me together.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)上周五,你们班就“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了一次热烈的讨论.请根据讨论内容,以Past and present为题写一篇短文.
注意事项:
1. 作文必须表格中所有相关信息,并适当发挥;语句通顺,上下文连贯;
2. 词数80个左右,作文开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。
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7.(2022春·江苏南通·八年级校联考期中)阅读对人成长的影响是巨大的。“腹有诗书气自华”,一本好书往往能改变人的一生。每年的4月23日是世界读书日,为此你想给同学们提一些养成阅读好习惯方面的建议。要点如下:
1.选择适合自己读的书。从老师或家长处寻求读书建议,可以从学校图书馆借书或者到书店买书……
2. 计划好自己的时间。每天至少匀出半小时来阅读;不要轻易改变计划。比如,可以养成在睡觉前进行阅读的习惯;
3. 随身带一本书。当有空的时候,随时随地进行阅读……
4.再补充一条建议……
要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包含所有信息,并作适当发挥;
3.字数在100字左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Having good reading habits makes a great difference to you. If you want to have good reading habits, I have some advice for you.
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I hope my advice can help you form some good reading habits.
8.(2022春·江苏淮安·八年级淮安市浦东实验中学校考期中)假设你叫李华,近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动,你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。字数80左右。
提示:
生活中变化
1)以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾,现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。
2)以前住在低矮破旧的房子,现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。
3)以前家里只有自行车,现在很多家庭有轿车。
自己的变化
1)去了许多名胜古迹,忍不住拍了很多照片。
2)比以前更加喜爱阅读。
3)阅读的益处……
要求:1)内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2)词数80个左右;
3)展开的内容需合理想象,用1句话补充完整。The Changes
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9.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校联考期中)学校双语报社正在举行“My good reading habits”为主题的征文活动,请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. What types of books do you like reading?
2. What are your reading habits?
3. Why are good reading habits important for you?
注意事项:1.词数:100词左右,所给开头不计入词数;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等;
3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Good reading habits
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10.(2022春·江苏宿迁·八年级统考期中)为了促进全民阅读,某校对全体学生的课外阅读情况做了个问卷调查。请以“Let’s Read More!”为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明课外阅读意义,并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的建议。
要点:
调查数据:某校学生每天的课外阅读时间约每天半小时。
阅读的意义:1. 更多的了解世界;
2. 帮助我们放松;
3. 培养良好的习惯,使生活丰富多彩。
你的建议:1. 读名著或对我们有益的书;
2.……
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Let’s Read More!
To go with the Civil Reading, our school has done a survey and found that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)在世界读书日到来之际,你校英语俱乐部正在开展征文活动,要求介绍你所读过的一本书,你草拟了写作流程图,请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加征文活动。
注意事项:
1. 短文需根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;
2. 提供的书名为非限定性内容,仅供参考。
3. 词数在90个左右。文章首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
This year’s World Book Day is coming and I would like to introduce a book.
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I strongly recommend this book and I hope you will love it.
12.(2022春·江苏南京·八年级统考期中)假如你是英语校刊English Garden的小记者李明,请以My Hometown为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,内容提示如下:
1. Where is your hometown?
2. What was it like in the past?
3. What is it like now?
4. How do you feel about these changes? Why?
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范。
My Hometown
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13.(2022春·江苏泰州·八年级靖江市靖城中学校联考期中)过去这一段时间同学们都有了很大的变化和收获。Jack是你班上的一名同学,这学期他也变化了很多,学习进步很大,请根据下面表格提供的信息用英语写篇短文,向同学介绍Jack的变化以及他对未来的打算。
过去
现在
学习
大部分业余时间花在……;讨厌看书,认为……
认真学习;热爱读书,因为……;最喜欢看……,觉得……
环保
浪费水电,……(自拟一至两点)
意识到环保的重要性(举例说明)
礼仪
大声喧哗,……(自拟一至两点)
举止礼貌,主动让座,……
爱心
不知道如何关心他人
……
展望未来
决定做一些志愿者工作……(自拟一至两点)
注意:
1.字数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。Jack is my classmate. Back to the life in the last year, Jack has changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(2022春·江苏镇江·八年级统考期中)阳光中学校报英文版正在开展以“I Love Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍你对阅读的看法及你的阅读计划。
I Love Reading
The importance of reading
open up one’s mind,
get more knowledge,
…
My reading habit
when to read
where to read
what to read
My favorite book
…
My reading plan
…
要求:
1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范;
2. 短文必须包括以上要点,可作适当的发挥;
3. 词数不少于90词,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。Reading is very important and necessary for everyone.
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15.(2022春·江苏苏州·八年级星海实验中学校考期中)由于疫情的再次爆发,线上工作,居家办公已经成为了很多人的生活常态。因此人们很多生活习惯也在随之改变。目前苏州日报就人们阅读习惯进行了一次线上调查,结果如下表所示。假设你是该报的特约小记者,请以Changes of People’s Reading Habits为题写一篇报道。
疫情(epidemic)前
疫情(epidemic)后
阅读时间
大约半小时
大约一个小时
阅读内容
明星、时尚、体育等
健康、饮食、烹饪、教育、疫情动态
阅读媒介
手机、iPad 等
纸质书、手机、iPad 等
阅读目的
了解时事新闻
消磨时间,增长知识
你对这种变化的看法
……(至少两点)
注意:
1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
2. 短文需包含所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。According to the online survey, people’s reading habits have changed a lot because of the epidemic._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16.(2022春·江苏淮安·八年级统考期中)假设学校正在举办 “Changes in my hometown” 主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,写一篇80词左右的短文,参加本次活动。注意:已给出句子不计入总词数。
过去
现在
环境
狭窄肮脏的道路,大的开阔地
宽阔干净的街道,绿树成荫,高楼林立
生活
房子破旧
……
听收音机、看电视
……
写信给朋友
发邮件
交通
步行、自行车
私家车
感受
……
Changes in my hometownGreat changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.
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17.(2022春·江苏镇江·八年级丹阳市第九中学校考期中)李强是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化很多,学习进步很大。请你根据下表中的要点提示,完成一篇英文作文,不要逐字翻译。
过去
1. 花很多时间打电脑游戏; 2. 讨厌看书。
现在
1. 每天看一小时书;2. 喜欢看科学类书籍,觉得有趣;3. 从图书馆借书或在iPad上下载科学故事。
原因
1. 从书中获得乐趣; 2. 获得知识; 3. 打开新世界
注意:词数80左右。
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18.(2022春·江苏泰州·八年级统考期中)在初二学生举行的“十四岁青春仪式”活动中, 同学们围绕着“How to Be a Better Teenager”主题进行了热烈的讨论, 请根据以下提示信息, 谈一谈 你的观点和看法。
How to Be a Better Teenager
Enrich(充实) our mind
Improve our manners
Do something meaningful
1. study hard
2. read more books
3. . . .
1. . . .
2. . . .
3. . . .
1. help others
2. to be volunteers
3. . . .
注意:
1. 词数90词左右, 文章的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息, 并作适当发挥。How to Be a Better Teenager
Since we have grown up, it’s time to improve ourselves. Here are some ways I can think of to help us.
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In a word, if every one of us tries our best to do better, the world will become more and more beautiful.
19.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)社会不断在发展进步,成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校英文校刊正在开展“走进新时代,争当合格中学生”的大讨论,请写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外,我们还应该做些什么?提示如下:
平时
1.学会照顾自己, 学习努力,善良,乐于分享;
2.有好的阅读习惯,阅读为我们打开全新世界;
3.环保绿色生活......(自由发挥1-2句);
4.懂餐桌礼仪,举止文明......(自由发挥1-2句)。
空余时间
1.关注残疾人,给他们向公众展示能力的机会;
2.欣赏大自然的美,理解保护大自然人人有责。
总结
……(1-2句)
要求:
1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 不要逐字翻译,词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
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20.(2022春·江苏常州·八年级统考期中)随着“双减”政策(double reduction policy)的落实,中学生的周末生活发生了巨大的变化。假设你是八年级一班的Simon,请你根据自己的实际,结合以下三个问题写一篇短文,参与学校英语角活动的交流。
1. What was your weekend like in the past?
2. How do you spend your weekend now?
3. What do you think of the double reduction policy?
要求:
1. 条理清楚,语言流畅,语法正确,书写工整;
2. 必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥
3. 词数:80词左右,不包括所给的开头。
I am Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
21.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)过去这一段时间我们身边的生活发生了很大的变化。李强是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化了很多,学习进步很大,请根据下面表格提供的信息,以“Great Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文,向同学介绍李强的变化并简要说明理由。
过去
1.花很多时间打电脑游戏
2.讨厌看书
现在
1.发觉阅读有乐趣,每天看书一小时
2.喜欢看科学书,觉得有趣
3.图书馆借书
4……
原因
1.从书中获得乐趣,获得知识
2.开创新世界
3……
要求:1、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
2、词数:100词左右; 3、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Great Changes
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三、看图作文
22.(2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校联考期中)世界在发展,生活在变化,社会的进步让我们的生活越越好。请通过以下4组图片,从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式等方面,以“How life changes!”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 词数80~100;
2. 请先简要介绍表格中的4组图片,再根据生活实际列举1~2个方面,做适当发挥;
3. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
4. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
How life changes!
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四、书信作文
23.(2022春·江苏徐州·八年级统考期中)近年来,徐州市一直在推广“全民阅读”活动,市民的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华,请根据以下信息用英文向你的英国笔友Simon介绍近年来徐州市开展全民阅读活动的变化与影响。
变化
过去:借书地方少;
书籍种类少;
现在:社区有阅览室;
徐州市图书馆有多种书籍;
影响
越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性,……(至少一点)
你的感受
……(至少两点)
注意事项:
1.词数在90个左右,开头和结尾已给出
2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息
Dear Simon,I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
24.(2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中)假如你是李梅,近日,你收到了澳大利亚的网友Tom给你的一封信,询问你这学期以来的学习生活情况,请你阅读来信,并根据提示,给他回一封90词左右的信。
Hi, Li Mei,How time flies! I haven’t heard from you since this term started. How are you? Have you got any interesting things to share with? And do you have any plans you’re going to finish? I hope to hear from you soon!
提示:1.由于疫情(COVID-19),云课堂... 2. 读完多本书... 3. 计划... 4. 你认为......注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
3.提示为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
4.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something interesting and my future plans with you.
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So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Lei Mei
五、讲稿
25.(2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校联考期中)作为学校书香校园活动中的“优秀读者”,你被读书俱乐部邀请给同学们做一次关于“勤读书,促成长”为主题的演讲,谈谈你的读书习惯的变化,号召大家都来读好书。请参考下面的内容,用英语写一份演讲稿。
过去
1.作业太多,没有足够的时间读书;
2.不知道该选择什么种类的书籍阅读;
3.电视和网络占时多。
现在
1.读书成为你生活中最重要的一部分,每天至少半小时;
2.最喜爱历史书籍和小说。
希望
……(自由发挥)
注意:1)要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2)正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3)80词左右,自由发挥部分1-2句,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,Reading is very important in our daily life.
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Let’s start reading now!
参考答案:
1.One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,阐述文明礼仪的好处;
第二步:阐述自己的观点;
第三步:阐述如何做一名文明礼仪的倡导者。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尝试做某事
②refuse to do拒绝做某事
③none of my business与……无关
[高分句型]
①While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked.(时间状语从句)
②what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.(主语从句)
③Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.(倒装句)
2.例文
As we all know, we had a special but hard time in the past few weeks. I think what we experienced during the time can help us learn a lot.
Some changes took place. We had to take online classes at home instead of learning at school. However, many students found it hard to understand what the teachers said. Luckily, our teachers were patient enough to explain important points to us again and again.
Also, public places like libraries and places of interest were closed. But we could read online to improve knowledge or take an online tour to enjoy the beautiful sights.
I’ve thought a lot about this experience. Firstly, we should help each other. “Many hands make light work”. Secondly, we should be thankful to doctors, nurses and volunteers for their hard work and kindness. What’s more, we should be full of hope for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,从“学习、阅读、旅游”三方面介绍这段时间疫情给我们的生活和学习带来的变化;
第二步,谈谈自己针对这次变化的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②instead of而不是
③places of interest名胜古迹
④be thankful to 感谢
[高分句型]
many students found it hard to understand what the teachers said.(what引导的宾语从句)
3.例文
The World Reading Day is coming, and our school has done a survey on students’ reading
situation We find that most of the students spend less than twenty minutes reading after class each day ,while some students read for thirty minutes, and few people read for more than one hour.
As we all know, reading makes a full man. Reading not only helps us relax, but also makes the life more colourful. At the same time, reading opens up a whole new world to us. As students, it’s time for us to read more. We should keep reading for at least half an hour every day. While reading books, we also need to develop a good habit of taking notes. What’s more, we can read more history books because they help improve our knowledge of the past.
Let’s take action right now!
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图。介绍全体学生的阅读情况的调查结果;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。说明阅读的意义;
第三步,书写结语。建议人们坚持阅读。
【亮点词汇】①not only...but also不仅……而且
②colourful多彩的
③at the same time与此同时
④improve提高
【高分句型】①reading opens up a whole new world to us.(动名词作主语)
②we can read more history books because they help improve our knowledge of the past.(because引导的原因状语从句)
4.例文
Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all, reading can help us get a lot of knowledge from all kinds of books. It can help to open a whole new world to us. Second, reading can make us clever and happy. It’s good for our study. Third, it can also help us relax after a busy day.
However, there used to be so much homework for us to do that we didn’t have enough time for reading. Moreover, some of us didn’t have a good habit of reading but often spent too much time watching TV and searching the Internet. But now, we can read various kinds of books by borrowing them from the library or on the Internet. We also have more time to travel around and some people like reading during their trip.
So I think we should form a good habit of reading by spending one hour or more reading different types of books, such as science, health, culture and so on. Besides, after reading, we can share some good books with others. As a result, we can have a better future.
Let’s start reading now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封倡议书,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,介绍读书的意义;
第二步,先阐述过去我们的阅读情况,再介绍现在的阅读情况,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,提出倡议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②have a good habit of doing有做某事的好习惯
[高分句型]
①However, there used to be so much homework for us to do that we didn’t have enough time for reading.(so…that引导结果状语从句)
②But now, we can read various kinds of books by borrowing them from the library or on the Internet.(动名词作宾语)
5.例文:
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua. The activity of Letting Reading into Life has started in Jiangdu. I’d like to tell you something about this activity.
In the past, there weren’t many places for people to borrow books from. And there weren’t many kinds of books. It was really inconvenient. But now, people can borrow books easily. There are reading rooms in our neighbourhoods and the new library in Jiangdu is open for everyone. Many kinds of books can be found there.
With this activity, more and more people know the importance of reading. We find that reading makes us happy and it is beneficial for our study.
I love this activity because I can find more information about study and I can know more about the world through books. At the same time, I won’t spend too much time on computer games and phones. It is really helpful and useful.
I hope you can enjoy the world of books with me together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,格式是书信格式;
② 时态:时态主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,也要补充自己的两点感受,注意突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,以“想介绍这个活动”引出下文关于阅读情况的变化;
第二步,重点阐述过去和现在变化,注意时态的改变,以及表明活动对人们的影响;
第三步,抒发自己的感受,表达自己对这个活动的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
① would like to 愿意
② the importance of ……的重要性
③ is beneficial for 对……有好处
④ at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
① There are reading rooms in our neighbourhoods and the new library in Jiangdu is open for everyone.(there be句型)
② We find that reading makes us happy and it is beneficial for our study.(that引导的宾语从句)
③ I love this activity because I can find more information about study and I can know more about the world through books.(because引导的原因状语从句)
6.例文
Past and present
Last Friday, we had a discussion about life’s changes in the past and at present. Here are some of the changes.
In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in our city. But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. Now the government has built many shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. Years ago, people lived in small old houses. Now most of them have moved into new flats. In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground. Most families have their own cars.
Now people are enjoying a comfortable life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:题干中给出了写作方向,考生应从交通、环境、生活等方面对比过去与现在的变化,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍上周五针对“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了讨论;
第二步,具体从交通、生活及交通等方面介绍变化;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① have a discussion 进行讨论
② in the past 在过去
③ on foot 步行
④ by bicycle 骑自行车
[高分句型]
① But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides.(with的复合结构)
② In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground.(but连接的并列句)
7.例文
Having good reading habits makes a great difference to you. If you want to have good reading habits, I have some advice for you.
First, choose the right book. You can ask your teachers and parents for some advice about reading. You can borrow books from the school library or buy some from bookshops. You’d better read the four great classical Chinese novels.
Second, plan your time well. You should give yourself at least half an hour for reading every day. After you make the plan, don’t change it easily. For example, make it a habit to read before you go to sleep.
Third, always carry a book with you. When you leave home, remember to take a book with you. When you are free, you can read it any time.
Finally, find a quiet place to read. You can find a quiet room with a comfortable chair, then you can enjoy reading a book in the chair.
I hope my advice can help you form some good reading habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图,提出建议。
第二步:具体说明四条建议内容有哪些;
第三步:表明希望建议有帮助的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①good reading habits好的读书习惯
②some advice一些建议
③school library学校图书馆
[高分句型]
① You should give yourself at least half an hour for reading every day.(含有should情态动词的句型)
②You can find a quiet room with a comfortable chair, then you can enjoy reading a book in the chair.(enjoy doing sth.短语)
8.例文
The Changes
There are many changes in my life. For example, the factory used to dump waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment. Besides, I lived in a low and shabby house before, but now I have moved into a tall and modern apartment instead. I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago. On the other hand, I have changed a lot, too. I went to many places of interest and took many photos. I tend to like reading more than before. Reading helps me relax myself after class. To conclude, many good changes have taken place both in my life and upon myself. I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要用第一人称叙述,不要遗漏“提示信息”中的“阅读的益处”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍文章主题是生活的改变;
第二步,具体阐述改变的细节,对过去和现在的进行对比;
第三步,书写结语。表达对未来的美好期望。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do过去成常常做……
② take action采取行动
③ on the other hand另一方面
④ places of interest名胜古迹
⑤ take place发生
[高分句型]
① There are many changes in my life.(there be句型)
② I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter!(省略that的宾语从句)
9.例文
Good reading habits
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. Reading is a good way to improve ourselves. I have read lots of good books. I prefer to read novels, especially The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Heimingway. I often ready half an hour before bedtime. I often read books on weekends afternoon in the garden. I feel relaxed. I make a plan to read two books a month. It makes me develop good reading habits. These reading habits help me develop good character and perfect personality.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍阅读的重要性;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢什么类型的书籍,读书习惯是什么以及这些习惯的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to更喜欢
②make a plan制定计划
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.(it固定句型,动词不定式作主语)
②It makes me develop good reading habits.(省略to的动词不定式作宾补)
10.
例文
Let’s Read More!
To go with the Civil Reading, our school has done a survey and found that students at our school spend about half an hour reading books. Reading can benefits us in many ways. Not only can it help us know more about the world, but it can also help us feel more relaxed. What’s more, we can develop good habits with the help of reading, which makes our life more colorful. So I’d like to advise all the students to spend more time reading classics or other books that are good for us. Also, I think it is good to take notes while we are reading. In the end, I hope we can all develop a good habit of reading books.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作内容提示已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息,并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥,使文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步:陈述调查数据;
第二步:陈述阅读的意义,注意题目给出的三条意义全部都要陈述出来;
第三步:陈述自己的建议,此处,需要自己适当补充合适的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① What’s more此外
② with the help of...在……的帮助下
③ advise sb. to do sth.建议某人做某事
④ spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
① Not only can it help us know more about the world, but it can also help us feel more relaxed.(Not only...but also...连接两个句子时,not only后的句子需用倒装)
② So I’d like to advise all the students to spend more time reading classics or other books that are good for us.(that引导的定语从句)
11.例文
This year’s World Book Day is coming and I would like to introduce a book. It is a book for children and the name is Alice in Wonderland. The main character is a girl called Alice. One day, Alice sat by a river with her sister. Suddenly she saw a rabbit in a coat passing by. Alice followed the rabbit and fell into a hole. In the hole, a lot of amazing things happened. For example, Alice ate a piece of cake, and her body became bigger and bigger. I love the book because the story is so interesting and the language in this book is not difficult to understand.
I strongly recommend this book and I hope you will love it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,是记叙文;
② 时态:时态可能会涉及“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:草拟的流程图即是要点内容,应不遗漏每个要点提示,结合实际展开阐述,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用“世界读书日要来临了,想要介绍一本书”来直接引出后文对书本是什么,以及一些基本信息;
第二步,具体阐述书本的相关内容,注意时态的变化以及能够抓住要点,使读者对书本感兴趣;
第三步,结尾升华,表达自己强烈希望读者能够喜欢阅读这本书。
[亮点词汇]
① main character主角;
② by a river在河边;
③ bigger and bigger越来越大;
④ fell into掉进去
[高分句型]
① The main character is a girl called Alice.(过去分词called作后置定语,修饰名词girl)
② I love the book because the story is so interesting and the language in this book is not difficult to understand.(because引导的原因状语从句)
12.例文:
My Hometown
My hometown is Nanjing and it has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, many roads were narrow and dirty and the tallest building in the city was Jinling Hotel. But now there are wide roads and tall buildings everywhere. People used to watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and they can even enjoy films online. Years ago, people usually travelled around the city by bicycle or bus. Now they can take the underground or drive cars.
In a word, these changes have made our life much easier and more comfortable.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“How do you feel about these changes? Why?”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山点明自己的家乡,并提出家乡有很大变化;
第二步,具体阐述家乡的变化;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①over the years多年来
②in the past在过去
③in a word总之一句话
④in their free time在他们的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①In the past, many roads were narrow and dirty and the tallest building in the city was Jinling Hotel. (运用了形容词最高级)
②People used to watch TV in their free time. (运用used to结构)
13.例文
Jack is my classmate. Back to the life in the last year, Jack has changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. He used to hate reading books and spend a lot of time playing computer games. He thinks playing computer games is interesting. But now he studies hard. He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books. He likes reading books about animals best, because he thinks animals are so cute. He used to waste water and electricity. For example, he never turned off the light when he left the room. But now he realizes the importance of protecting the environment. For example, he always goes shopping with a cloth bag. He used to speak loudly in public. He never waited in line for the bus. But now he’s polite. He often gives seats to old people on the bus. He doesn’t speak loudly in public. He didn’t know how to care for others. But now he often cares and helps others. In the future, he decides to do some volunteer work. He wants to help those in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从学习,环保,礼仪,爱心等方面介绍Jack的变化;
第二步,介绍他未来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress取得巨大进步
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
④turn off关闭
⑤give seats to sb给某人让座
[高分句型]
①He thinks playing computer games is interesting.(省略that的宾语从句)
②He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books.(because引导原因状语从句)
14.例文:
Reading is very important and necessary for everyone. Reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge.
As for me, I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library. Before going to bed, I always spend some time reading. That really makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I enjoy reading some novels. Journey to the West is my favorite book. And the Monkey King is my superhero.
The summer holiday is coming, and I am going to read Harry Potter, which is a very popular book.
Reading a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,强调阅读的重要性;
第二步,先介绍自己的阅读习惯,包括何时阅读、在何地阅读和读什么;再介绍自己最喜欢的书,可以列举最喜欢的角色,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,介绍自己接下来的阅读计划并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend some time doing sth花费时间做某事
②enjoy doing喜欢做某事
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①That really makes me feel relaxed.(省略to的动词不定式作宾语补足语)
②The summer holiday is coming, and I am going to read Harry Potter, which is a very popular book.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
15.例文:
According to the online survey, people’s reading habits have changed a lot because of the epidemic.
First of all, people now spend more time reading because they spend more time at home now. They used to have only about half an hour for reading every day. However, they often spend about an hour reading now.
Besides, what people read has changed too. Before the epidemic, people often cared about the news of pop stars, fashion and sports events. But now the epidemic situation has been their first concern. They prefer to read books about health, food, cooking and education because these books can help them kill the time and improve their knowledge. In the past, people often read on their iPad or phone, but now they are more willing to read paper books.
I think these changes will make it easier for people to go through the hard times. Also, the extra time spent on reading will surely bring them more knowledge and inner peace.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为记者的报道;
② 时态:疫情前的情况,时态为“一般过去时”,疫情后的情况,时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:调查结果以表格的形式已给出,不要遗漏任何信息,但不要逐词翻译,另外需添加你对这些变化的看法,至少两点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直入主题(已给出);
第二步,具体介绍疫情前后人们的阅读习惯都有哪些变化,可根据表格从“阅读时间”、“阅读内容”、“阅读媒介”、“阅读目的”这四个方面分别进行报道;
第三步,针对这些变化,写出你的看法(至少两点)。
[亮点词汇]
① First of all 首先
② used to过去常常
③ kill the time消磨时间
④ be willing to乐意(做某事)
[高分句型]
① First of all, people now spend more time reading because they spend more time at home now. (spend…doing…;because引导的原因状语从句)
② I think these changes will make it easier for people to go through the hard times.(it作形式宾语)
16.例文
Changes in my hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.
In the past, there were narrow and dirty roads in the town. But now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. What’s more, the government has built tall buildings in some large open spaces.
In the past, we lived in small old houses. Now most of us have moved into new flats. We used to listen to the radio or watch TV in our free time, but now most families have computers and the internet, and we use mobiles to communicate with each other. In the past, we wrote letters to our friends, but now we can send emails.
In the past, we could only walk or ride bikes to somewhere, but now we even have our own cars and it’s easier to travel around the town.
Now we are enjoying an easy and comfortable life. I hope our life will be better and better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:要求根据表格内容介绍家乡的变化。不要遗漏表格中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍家乡环境的变化;
第二步,介绍人们生活、交通的变化;
第三步,谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In the past在过去
②most of大多数
③communicate with sb.与某人沟通
[高分句型]
I hope our life will be better and better in the future.(宾语从句)
17.例文
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn’t like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or downloads science stories in his iPad.
Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍李强的变化,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段,第一段介绍李强过去和现在的一些表现和变化;第二段介绍他取得变化原因。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
18.例文
How to Be a Better Teenager
Since we have grown up, it’s time to improve ourselves. Here are some ways I can think of to help us.
As students, the most important thing is to study hard. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Also, we need to do lots of reading. Reading can open up a whole new world to us. Besides, traveling is another way to enrich our mind, because it can help us learn about different people and cultures.
What’s more, we should improve our manners. When we are walking or riding in the street, it’s necessary for us to obey traffic rules. In public places, we should queue for our turn. In the library, we’d better keep our voice down.
It’s never too late to do something meaningful, I think we should try our best to help people in need. We can work as volunteers as often as possible. Moreover, we can donate our pocket money to charities to help homeless people and children in poor areas.
In a word, if every one of us tries our best to do better, the world will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇议论文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏自己的观点和看法,适当补充写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明观点,我们需要通过一些方法提升自己;
第二步,具体阐述提升自我的方法。从丰富我们的思维、改进我们的文明礼貌和做有意义的事情这三方面重点谈论如何变成一个更好的青少年;
第三步,谈谈自己的观点和看法并作出总结。
[亮点词汇]
① queue for one’s turn 排队等候轮到某人
② keep one’s voice down 把声音降低
③ try one’s best 尽某人最大努力
④ as...as possible 尽可能……
⑤ donate 捐赠
⑥ charity 慈善
[高分句型]
① The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have.(the+比较级……,the+比较级……句型)
② It’s necessary for us to obey traffic rules.(It’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型)
19.With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work hard and we are generous and easy to share things with others. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. It also open up a new world to us. Third, we live a green life. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.
Moreover, in our spare time, we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their abilities to the public. Also, we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature. It’s our duty to protect nature.
In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves. The more we act, the better we will improve.
【分析】这是篇演讲稿,主要介绍自己在课余时间做些什么来提高自己,成为一名合格的中学生。
【详解】从内容上说材料比较详细,考生只需要结合所给的要点,将内容表达清楚连贯即可,较简单;语言方面首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体;规范性方面,检查单词,标点的准确;其次要注意格式的正确;最后一定要保证次数要符合要求。
20.例文
I am Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. I’d like to talk about changes to my weekends.
In the past, I usually took some lessons at weekends. I had only 3 hours of free time. I was tired of attending so many extra lessons.
Now, I can spend my time more freely at weekends. I have only three hours of homework each weekend. I don’t need to attend any lessons online. As a result, life is more relaxing and colorful.
I think the double reduction policy is good for not only my body but also my mind. I can spend more time on what I like. And of course, I need to spend my free time more wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,包括过去和现在的对比,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍过去的周末;
第二步,介绍现在如何度过周末;
第三步,介绍自己对政策的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②In the past过去
③not only...but also不但……而且
④As a result结果是
[高分句型]
I think the double reduction policy is good for not only my body but also my mind.(that引导的宾语从句)
21.例文:
Great Changes
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn’t like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library. Sometimes he reads books on the Internet. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him. It is also helpful for him to have a good reading habit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,还要适当添加细节,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先说明李强同学这个学期发生了很大变化;
第二步,介绍李强同学过去的生活;
第三步,介绍李强同学现在的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③be interested in doing sth.对做某事感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②…and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.(省略that的宾语从句)
③It is also helpful for him to have a good reading habit.(It固定句型)
22.例文
How life changes!
In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV. But now they use mobile phones and computers. They used to go to the shop to buy things. But now they buy things on the internet. In the past, people lived in the old and dirty houses. But now, they live in the new and clean houses. In the past, they communicated with their friends by posting letters and postcards. But now, email, WeChat and QQ are used widely. People used to go to work on foot or by bus, but now most people drive to work.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据图片展示内容,写出人们的生活变化,改善的不同方面,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
23.例文
Dear Simon,
I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou.
In the past, People couldn’t find any places to borrow books. They didn’t know where to borrow the books they wanted to read. Besides, there weren’t enough types of books.
Over the years, things have changed a lot. There are reading rooms in each community. People can borrow or read books nearby. What’s more, Xuzhou library has become big and modern. We can find all kinds of books. It’s fantastic to enjoy reading there.
From this activity, More people have realized the importance of reading. Many of them have developed the habits of reading. Reading makes a full man. They will feel happy and relaxed when reading.
For me, I think reading can make me feel confident. It can bring me a lot of knowledge. It’s really helpful to my study, and the most important is that it opens up a whole new world to me.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生适当完善内容,表达通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的。
第二步,讲述阅读的变化和影响。
第三步,表达对于阅读变化和影响的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more另外
②fantastic极好的
[高分句型]
①Reading makes a full man.(动名词作主语)
②It’s fantastic to enjoy reading there.(it的句型)
24.Dear Tom,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something interesting and my future plans with you.
Because of the COVID-19, I had to take online classes at home instead of going to school. I’ve finished reading many books and learned over 100 new English words. And I’ve made a lot of new friends since school began.
This term, I plan to go to the library more often to borrow more books. Moreover, I will keep working hard at my lessons.
In my opinion, reading can open up a whole world to us and help us improve our knowledge. It’s important for us to read more books and read good books.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Lei Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的介绍要点以及Tom的来信中提到的问题,介绍以来的学习生活情况,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“感慨时间飞快”来引出下文要介绍的趣事和计划(已给出);
第二步,介绍这段时间的学习和生活情况,并谈论自己的几乎;
第三步,谈论自己的观点;
第四步,书写结语(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②instead of而不是
③keep working hard继续努力
④hear from sb收到某人的回信
[高分句型]
①And I’ve made a lot of new friends since school began.(since引导的时间状语从句)
② It’s important for us to read more books and read good books.(It固定句型;动词不定式作主语)
25.One possible version:
Reading is very important in our daily life.
In the past, I had too much homework and I didn’t have enough time to read books. I didn’t know what kind of books to read. What’s more, I spent much time on TV and Internet.
But now, reading has become an important part of my life. It takes me at least half an hour to read books every day. I like history books and novels best.
I hope more and more students will read books because books are our friends. Reading can open up a whole new world to us.
Let’s start reading now!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括自己读书习惯的改变,并提出倡议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体指出读书很重要;
第二步,具体介绍自己读书习惯的改变,包括过去的情况和现在的改变;
第三步,最后号召学生们多读书。
[亮点词汇]
① too much太多
② What’s more况且
③ open up打开
[高分句型]
① It takes me at least half an hour to read books every day.(表示“花费”的固定句型)
② I hope more and more students will read books because books are our friends.(省略that的宾语从句,because引导的原因状语从句
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