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江苏地区2023学年七年级下册期中备考真题汇编-作文特训(20篇)Ⅲ
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、材料作文
1.(2022春·江苏泰州·七年级统考期中)假如你是李明,来自兴化(Xinghua),住在Happiness Home。向你的朋友Simon介绍你的家乡。兴化著名的景点有:水上森林景区(Aquatic Forest Scenic Spot),千岛菜花景区(Kuril Cauliflower Scenic Spot)。
请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,词数90字左右,要求:包含以下所给要点,可以适当拓展;条理清晰,语意连贯;表述准确,句式灵活,字迹工整。开头已给出,不计词数。
1. Where is your hometown? What is it like?
2. What interesting places in your hometown do you like? What can people do there?
3. Where do you live? How are your neighbours?(举1—2个例子)
4. What do you want to say to visitors?
Hello, I’m Li Ming. I’m going to show you around my hometown.
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2.(2022春·江苏镇江·七年级统考期中)你校“英语文化节系列活动之英语写作竞赛”即将举行,要求大家积极投稿,请根据内容提示,以“My hometown” 为题,结合表格要点,完成此次作文。
要点提示:
My hometown
Introduction(介绍)
市中心,周围有……
还有一个公园,例如:……
Where I live
在公园南面的一幢18层公寓里。
每天早晨鸟语花香。
邻居们善良友好,互相帮助。
The way to my home
乘2路公共汽车在公园站(Park Stop)下车,直走,在第一个十字路口左拐。在超市隔壁。
My feelings
家乡正变得很现代,住在这样的小区很幸运。
要求:
1. 内容完整,可适当发挥,省略号处至少补充一点;
2. 表达清楚,意思连贯、符合逻辑;
3. 80词左右。My hometown
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3.(2022春·江苏常州·七年级统考期中)学校举行“My dream home”设计比赛,请你根据提示,用英语介绍一下你的梦想家园。
居住环境
绿树成荫;鸟语花香
房间设计
……(楼层、房间、原因)
花园设计
……(设施及原因)
要求:1. 内容完整,适当发挥:
2. 表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
3. 注意格式,不少于80词。
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4.(2022春·江苏盐城·七年级统考期中)假如你是李明,想邀请好友Jane来你的新家,请根据表格里的要点,用英文给Jane写一封邀请信。
新家地址
位于市中心
新家路线
沿着人民路(Renmin Road)走,在第三个十字路口左转,右边有个邮局,就在邮局旁边的高楼里,住十二楼。
人文环境
小区很多花和树,每天能闻花香、听鸟几唱歌。
邻居们友好善良,互相帮助解决各种问题,……(举一例)
我的心情
很幸运能住在这样一个小区:……(自拟一点)
要求:
1.内容必须包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合逻辑:
3.注意格式,字数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Jane.How are you? Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
5.(2022春·江苏南通·七年级校联考期中)你校将组织以“争做好学生”为主题的英语作文比赛,请根据所给提示,作适当发挥,写一篇 80 词左右的短文比赛。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Be a Good Student
If you want to be a good student, I think you need to do the following things. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2022春·江苏淮安·七年级统考期中)假设你是Simon,你想要写一封邀请函,邀请你的朋友来你家玩。依据以下信息,完成邀请函,做适当补充,开头结尾已给出。
位置
在阳光路,离镇中心不远。
路线与环境
乘公交车在阳光站(Sunshine Stop)下车,下车后直走,然后在第二个十字路口向左转。在房子周围有很多花和树,房子后面有一个湖,很容易找到。
可以做的事
在湖上划船
闻花香,听鸟唱歌
其他信息
其它......(至少两句)
要求:1.文中不要出现自己的真实姓名;
2.字数不少于80词。
Dear friends,I’d like to invite you to visit my home.
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Yours,
Simon
7.(2022春·江苏苏州·七年级校考期中)There are many kinds of happiness in the world—happiness from being together with family and close friends, happiness from reading interesting books, happiness from travelling to a wonderful place and so on. But you may become happier from helping others.
以“Happiness from Helping Others”为题,写一篇文章。文章包含以下要点:
What are you like?
...
What do you usually do to help others?
at school& in your neighbourhood; Examples (1-2)
What is your feeling?
Your feelings and opinions (看法)
要求: 1.意思连贯,书写规范,要点齐全,可适当发挥。2.词数 80 词左右,开头和结尾不计入字数。
3.不要出现真实的人名和校名。
Happiness from Helping Others
There are many kinds of happiness in the world. Among them, I think I can become happier from helping others.
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Let’s join our hands to help more people and to get more happiness from our kind act.
8.(2022春·江苏苏州·七年级校考期中)请根据你校校刊TEENS MAG中LET YOUR DREAM FLY栏目有关 “Dream home, Dream neighborhood” 的英文征稿,写一篇文章,表达你的想法。
Hi,At TEENS MAG we like to share ideas about anything you are interested in. In my column, LET YOUR DREAM FLY, you can let other students know what you think. This month, we want you to write about your dream home and dream neighborhood:
What is your dream home like?
What’s around your dream neighborhood?
Do the neighbors help each other? How?
What do you think of your dream home and neighborhood?
注意:
1. 内容覆盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。I am glad to share my ideas about my dream home and dream neighborhood._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2022春·江苏苏州·七年级校考期中)Mary是一位来自英国的交换生,她将在你们学校待半个月,你打算趁“五一”假期带她参观一下苏州。请根据下面所给的要点介绍苏州:
要点:
①苏州占地8000多平方公里,离上海不远,乘火车需要一个小时左右;
②这里空气新鲜,能闻到花香,听到鸟叫;
③在这里你可以参观园林,吃到美味的食物,还能欣赏精彩的昆曲(Kunqu opera);
④人们喜欢生活在这里,我觉得……
要求:
①文章内容要包括所有要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
②对第4要点的省略号部分作1 - 2句话的合理发挥;
③词数在90词左右,开头给出的内容不算字数。
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、电子邮件
10.(2022春·江苏镇江·七年级统考期中)假如你是王林,本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下面的地图,用英语给他写一封邮件,描述从学校到你家的具体路线,并告诉他生日会的具体活动。
提示词语:opposite(在……的对面),eat noodles,play games
要求:1.层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范;
2.邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点,可适当发挥;
3.词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Dear Mike,
Would you please come to my home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday?
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Yours,
Wang Lin
11.(2022春·江苏无锡·七年级无锡市天一实验学校校考期中)假如你是李平,班上的交流生Mike想去你家参观,请按照下表内容,给Mike写一封邮件介绍你家的情况。
住址
住在无锡市中心一幢大楼的12楼
居住条件
1. 不大但很温馨,有独立的卧室
2. 我最喜欢的地方是……因为我可以……
交通路线
乘坐地铁,然后从A口出来;在第二个路口左转,我家在银行的前面。
注意:1. 词数70左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);2. 参考表格内容,可进行补充和拓展;
3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I would like to invite you to visit my home this weekend.
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I think my home is a good place to visit. I hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
12.(2022春·江苏常州·七年级统考期中)假设你是Andy,你们班本周六要去野餐。请根据提示写一封英文邮件,邀请你们班的英语外教Ms. Green一起去野餐。
Activity: a picnic
Time: 10 a.m.—1:00 p.m., Saturday
Place: the park, east of the school
Distance: one kilometer from the school
Route: walk along Spring Street; take the first turning on the right…
要求:1. 短文应包含所有给出的信息,并可适当发挥。2. 字数70词左右(邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms. Green,
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Yours,
Andy
13.(2022春·江苏常州·七年级常州市第二十四中学校考期中)假设你是Alex。你的美国笔友Robert计划来你的家乡常州玩,并给你发了封电子邮件,想详细了解你的家乡常州。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件,并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
To:Alex@china. com
From:Robert2022@usa. com
Subject:your hometown
Dear Alex,
How are you? Glad to hear from you. I am planning my trip to China these days. I’m thinking about travelling to your hometown—Changzhou. I have some questions here. Would you please tell me?
①What do you think of the environment(环境)in your hometown?
②What special food or places is there in your hometown? (至少举两个例子)
③What else can I do when I travel in Changzhou?
Please write back.
Best wishes.
Robert
注意:
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数90个左右,短文的开头和结尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Robert, I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Changzhou. It is a good place to visit.
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I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Changzhou!
Alex
三、书信作文
14.(2022春·江苏淮安·七年级统考期中)假如你是李华,想邀请好友Jane来你的新家。请根据表格里的要点。用英文给Jane写一封邀请信。
新家地址
位于市中心
新家路线
沿着淮海路Huaihai Road走,在第三个十字路口左转,右边有个邮局,就在邮局边的高楼里,住五楼,我有自己的卧室和浴室。
人文环境
邻居们友好善良,互相帮助解决各种问题,他们中一些人是志愿者,……
我的心情
很期待见到你,……
要求:1. 内容必须包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥;
2. 要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
3. 注意格式,字数 80个左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
How are you? Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
15.(2022春·江苏盐城·七年级校联考期中)假如你是李梅,想邀请英国交流生Kitty来你家。根据下面提供的信息,用英语写一封邀请信。
要点:
位置
新家位于市中心
环境
空气清新,鸟语花香
邻居
友好善良,将为Kitty准备一些美味的中国食物,经常帮助人们解决各种问题,大家就像一家人。
可做的事情
去博物馆看精美的艺术品并用粉笔画3-D画,在当地剧场观看一部关于世界上令人惊奇事情的短电影。
路线
沿着花园路走(Garden Road),在第二个十字路口向右拐,过桥,你会看见一个银行。我家在银行隔壁。
要求:不要逐句翻译,包含所有要点,注意格式,字数80左右。
Dear Kitty, I would like to invite you to my new home.
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This is the way to my new home.
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Yours,
Li Mei
16.(2022春·江苏泰州·七年级统考期中)假如你是王华, 你的英国朋友Lucy听说中国中小学实行了”双减”政策, 他想了解一些情况, 请你根据下列内容, 用英语写一封回信, 谈谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化和感受。
To: Wanghua@china.com
From: Lucy@uk.com
Subject: “Double Reduction” policy
Dear Wang Hua, How are you? Glad to hear from you. I learned something about China’s “Double Reduction” policy in primary and junior high schools on the Internet. I have some questions here. Would you please tell me?
Can you tell me your life and study before “Double Reduction” policy?
What do you do in your free time after “Double Reduction” policy? (至少举两个例子)
What do you think of “Double Reduction” policy? (至少说两点)
Please write back.
Best wishes,
Lucy
注意:
(1)要包含所有要点, 并适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境;
(3)词数在80个左右, 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数;
(4)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
参考词汇: “Double Reduction” policy双减政策attend tutorial classes(参加补习班)
Dear Lucy:How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in school in China.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will be pleased with my replies.
All the best,
Wang Hua
17.(2022春·江苏淮安·七年级统考期中)“五一小长假”快到了。假如你是Millie,想要邀请你的朋友Alice来你的新家做客。根据下面提供的信息用英语写一封70词左右的邀请信。
地理位置
市中心公寓里,住在十九楼
社区
绿树环绕,……(至少再描写一个细节)
邻居友好,志愿者……(至少举一例)
路线
乘819路公共汽车在人民桥(Renmin Bridge)下,往前;
第一个路口右转,然后你就会看见一个超市,我家就在超市后面。
要求:
1. 信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括提示中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥。
Dear Alice,I am very happy to invite you to my new home._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Millie
18.(2022春·江苏无锡·七年级校联考期中)假如你是Amy,你想邀请你的美国交流生朋友Mary来参观你的新家。请根据下面提供的信息,用英文写一篇邀请信。
要点:1.我的新家在9楼。我家有1个餐厅,2个浴室和3个卧室。
2.我的新邻居们很善良,乐于助人。他们经常帮助我解决各种问题。……
3.我家周围绿树环绕。你可以闻花香,听鸟鸣。
4.沿着锡沪路(Xihu Road)走,然后过桥。你会看见一个银行在你右边。我家就在银行隔壁。
注意:1.短文应该包括所有要点,要求意思连贯,语句通顺,……处适当发挥;
2.词数:80词左右,信的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary
I’m happy to invite you to my new home.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Amy
19.(2022春·江苏苏州·七年级苏州市振华中学校校考期中)假如你是王强,你住在苏州市中心,你居住的小区在苏州中心附近。你得知你的英国笔友Ryan正在上海学习中文,于是你想要邀请他来你的家乡苏州游玩。现在你要写一封邀请信,邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容:
Where is Suzhou and what is it like?
What is around your neighbourhood?
What can you do in Suzhou?
How can Ryan get to your home?
注意:
1. 词数80左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 参考要点,可进行补充和拓展;
3. 文中不得透露校名、真实姓名、地址等信息。
Dear Ryan,
I know you are studying Chinese in Shanghai these days. I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Suzhou.
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Hope to see you soon in Suzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
20.(2021春·江苏淮安·七年级校考期中)假如肆虐全球的新冠病毒疫情已经结束,你是Sandy,想邀请好友Amy来你们小区的青年中心玩。根据下面提供的信息,用英语写一篇邀请信。
要点:
地理位置
青年中心位于市中心。
社区情况
环境优美,每天清晨可以闻到花香,听到鸟儿唱歌。
邻居们友好善良,……(发挥1-2点)
活动
有很多事情可做。欣赏电影;做各种运动。
路线
路线:沿着淮海路走(Huaihai Road),在第二个十字路口向右拐,你会看到一个学校。青年中心位于学校隔壁,在五楼。
要求:1)表达清楚,包含所有要点,上下文连贯,可以适当发挥;
2)词数:100词左右。
参考词汇:青年中心 the youth center 环境 environment
Dear Amy,I would like to invite you to visit the youth center in my community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Sandy
参考答案:
1.One possible version:
Hello, I’m Li Ming. I’m going to show you around my hometown.
Xinghua is my hometown. It is a very beautiful city. The air here is very fresh. Every year lots of plenty of visitors come to visit Aquatic Forest Scenie Spot and Kuril Cauliflower Scenic Spot. We can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there. I live in a new neighbourhood. The neighbours are kind and helpful. Volunteers often help people with all kinds of problems. They often help children with their homework. They help people check the computers and fix the bikes. My favourite place is Black Towel Park. It is in the north of Xinghua. It is a good place to meet friends. I like my hometown very much. Welcome to my hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,先介绍家乡的名字和样子,再介绍你家乡里你喜欢的一两个地方,说明在那里可以做什么,介绍你生活的小区,以及邻居们是什么样的人,要列举具体的事例;
第三步,说出你想对游客说的话并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①hear sb do听见某人做某事
②all kinds of各种
[高分句型]
It is a good place to meet friends.(动词不定式作定语)
2.例文:
My hometown
My home is in the center of city. Around my home, there are many supermarkets and a park. For example, there is a big park on the left side of my house. I live in an 18-story apartment building on the south side of the park. Every morning, I can hear birds sing and smell flowers. Besides, the neighbors are kind and friendly and help each other.
It’s easy to get to my house. You can take the No. 2 bus and get off at the Park Stop. Then go straight and turn left at the first crossing. My house is next to the supermarket.
My hometown is becoming very modern. I am lucky to live in such a community.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你住在哪里,周围有什么等;
第二步,阐述去你家的路途;
第三步,最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①for example比如
②besides此外
③turn left左转
[高分句型]
①Then go straight and turn left at the first crossing.(and并列句)
②I am lucky to live in such a community.(动词不定式作原因状语)
3.例文:
My dream home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. It is far from the city centre. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a house cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six bedrooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. There is a big garden around my house. In the garden there is a bench and a table. I can read books there when I’m free. There is also a pool with a lot of fish in it. Of course, different flowers must be grown in it.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,介绍自己梦想家园的情况,包括居住环境,房间设计等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍居住环境的情况;
第二步,具体介绍房间及花园的设计情况以及原因等;
第三步,最后再次点题,梦想的家园是享受生活的好地方。
[亮点词汇]
① at the foot of在……脚下
② at the same time同时
③ at the weekend在周末
[高分句型]
① I can read books there when I’m free.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② different flowers must be grown in it.(含有情态动词的被动结构)
4.Dear Jane,
How are you?Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home.
I live in the centre of the city.It’s easy to find my home.Go along Renmin Road and turn left at the third crossing.There is a post office on the right.It’s in the tall building next to the post office.My new home is on the twelfth floor.
There are many flowers and trees in my neighbourhood. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. My neighbours are also kind and helpful. They often help each other to solve all kinds of problems.For example, if there is something wrong with your computer, they will be ready to help you. I am lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.
I think we will have a good time at my home. I’m looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,是书信的形式;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点细节,也要注意补充的内容符合逻辑和主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据要点提示的顺序展开描写,从介绍新家地址引入;
第二步,具体阐述路线和人文环境,按照要点提示,并适当补充邻居互相帮助的例子;
第三步,书写自己的心情,表示对新家的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① in the centre of 在……的中心
② turn left 左转
③ each other 互相
④ solve all kinds of problems 解决各种问题
[高分句型]
① It’s easy to find my home. (it is+adj+to do sth的句型,表示做某事如何)
② If there is something wrong with your computer, they will be ready to help you. (if引导的条件状语从句,时态为“主将从现”)
5.例文
Be a Good Student
If you want to be a good student, I think you need to do the following things.
First, you should study hard. You need to listen carefully in class and do your homework by yourself.
Also, you should have a colourful life. You can join different clubs to learn new skills, read more books or do other interesting things in your free time.
What’s more, a good student helps people in need. You can be a volunteer at your community centre to help your neighbours. You can also give some of your pocket money to help children in poor areas.
A healthy body is very important for a good student, so you had better enjoy sports like running, jogging and swimming.
If you can follow all the above, I am sure you will be a good student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示,写一篇以“争做好学生”为主题的英语作文比赛。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示要点,分别就认真学习、拥有丰富多彩的生活、帮助有需要的人、运动等方面提出相关的建议,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表达以上方法会奏效并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a colourful life拥有丰富多彩的生活
[高分句型]
①A healthy body is very important for a good student, so you had better enjoy sports like running, jogging and swimming.(so连接两个并列分句)
②If you can follow all the above, I am sure you will be a good student.(if引导的条件状语从句,省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
6.例文:
Dear friends,
I’d like to invite you to visit my home. My home is in the Sunshine Community on Sunshine Road, not far from the town center. If you take a bus, you can get off at Sunshine Station. Get off and go straight, then turn left at the second crossing. You will see many flowers and trees around the buildings. And there is a lake behind the buildings. There is also a park near the buildings. My home is here. Is it easy to find?
We can usually go boating on the lake, smell the flowers and listen to birds singing in the park. If the weather is fine, we can also fly kites in the park.
Welcome to my home. I’m sure you'll have a great time at my house.
Yours,
Simon
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封邀请函;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括家庭住址、周围环境以及乘车路线等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,给出写邀请函的目的;
第二步,具体介绍家庭住址、周边环境以及乘车路线以及来作者家可以参与的活动等;
第三步,最后再次总结,欢迎朋友来家玩。
[亮点词汇]
① far from远离
② get off下车
③ have a great time玩的开心
[高分句型]
① If the weather is fine, we can also fly kites in the park.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② There is also a park near the buildings.(there be句型)
7.例文:
Happiness from Helping Others
There are many kinds of happiness in the world. Among them, I think I can become happier from helping others. I’m a clever and helpful boy. When my classmates have problems working out Maths problems, I am always willing to offer my help. At that time, I feel myself a useful person and that makes me happy. Also, as a member of the Helping Hands Club I usually help at an old people’s home at weekends. Quite often the elderly there laugh happily while I am telling them funny jokes. Seeing their happy face, I feel very happy as well. I think it is important to help others because that can make the world a better place.
Let’s join our hands to help more people and to get more happiness from our kind act.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,以“Happiness from Helping Others”为题写一篇短文,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明“帮助别人会让自己更快乐”这一主题;
第二步,介绍自己帮助别人的经历以及感受;
第三步,号召大家去帮助更多的人们。
[亮点词汇]
① many kinds of 各种各样的
② have problems doing sth 做某事有问题
③ be willing to do sth 愿意做某事
[高分句型]
① There are many kinds of happiness in the world.(there be句型)
② When my classmates have problems working out Maths problems, I am always willing to offer my help.(when引导时间状语从句)
8.例文
I am glad to share my ideas about my dream home and dream neighborhood.
My dream home can be small, but it must let me feel warm. I hope my bedroom has a big window to let in enough sunlight. I will keep some pets and plants that I like at home.
My dream community must be clean. There are flowers and trees in the community so that we can breathe the fresh air. There is a big enough square in the community for people to exercise. The neighbors often help each other. For example, young people often help old people take out the rubbish. I think my dream home and neighborhood are great. I not only like the environment here, but also like the people here.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己想要分享对梦想家园和梦想社区的想法;
第二步,具体阐述自己认为的梦想家园和梦想社区;
第三步,最后是叙述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① let in允许(空气、光线、水等)进入
② each other互相
③ For example例如
[高分句型]
① I will keep some pets and plants that I like at home. (that引导定语从句)
② There are flowers and trees in the community so that we can breathe the fresh air.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
9.例文
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou. Suzhou is an old city. It is near Shanghai. Suzhou covers an area of more than 8000 square kilometers and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There’re a lot of parks in it. The air here is fresh, you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要在文中介绍自己的家乡苏州的相关信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍苏州的地理位置和面积;
第二步,介绍苏州的景点、环境、美食以及特色昆曲;
第三步,总结全文,讲述自己对苏州的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cover an area of... 占地……
②It takes sb time to do sth 花费某人多少时间做某事
③all kinds of 许多种
④have great fun 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.(动词不定式作主语)
②I think you will like staying here too.(think后跟省略that的宾语从句)
10.Dear Mike,
Would you please come to my home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday? If you want to come to my birthday party, please follow the route.
You go out of school and enter Minghang Road, and go straight along People’s Road and go across Huayang Road. You need to turn left at the end of People’s Road and you can find my home. The opposite of my home is the supermarket. When we celebrate our birthday in China, we can eat noodles, and we can play games after dinner. I hope that we can have a good time on Saturday.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容邀请Mike来家里参加生日聚会,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,邀请Mike来家里参加生日聚会;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,根据地图介绍路线;
第三步,介绍中国过生日的风俗并表达周六会玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①go straight along沿着……一直往前走
②at the end of在……尽头
③play games玩游戏
④have a good time玩得开心
[重点句型]
①When we celebrate our birthday in China, we can eat noodles, and we can play games after dinner.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope that we can have a good time on Saturday.(that引导的宾语从句)
11.Dear Mike,
I would like to invite you to visit my house this weekend.
I live on the twelfth floor of a building in the center of Wuxi. My home is not big but very nice. There are two bedrooms. I share a bedroom with my younger brother, and we often play games and study there. My favorite place in my house is the balcony, because I can read books and look out at the blue sky.
You can come to my home by subway. Get out at Exit A and turn left at the second crossing. My house is just in front of the bank. My friends always come to my home to have parties at weekends. What fun it is!
I think my home is a good place to visit. I hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Ling Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,要求写一封邮件,介绍自己家的情况;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目中已经给出写作提示,写作时要围绕写作提示展开,并可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接文章开头,并引出下文的具体介绍;
第二步,按照写作提示具体介绍住址,居住条件和交通路线;
第三步,最后进行简单总结并期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①in the center of在……的中心
②share sth with sb和某人共享
③look out向外看
④at weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①My favorite place in my house is the balcony, because I can read books and look out at the blue sky.(用连词because引导原因状语从句)
②My friends always come to my home to have parties at weekends. (to do不定式表示目的)
12.One possible version:
Dear Ms. Green,
Our class will have a picnic in the park this Saturday. We hope you can come with us. The picnic will be from 10 a.m. to 1 p.m. About fifteen classmates will come. The park is east of our school and only one kilometre away. It’s easy to find it. Start from our school, walk along Spring Street and take the first turning on the right. Then you can see it. We will meet you at the park gate.
We are looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信,属于电子邮件写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明写信目的,邀请老师参加活动;
第二步,按照提示的要点介绍活动的时间、地点、距离和路线,可适当增加细节;
第三步,抒发希望老师参加活动的期待并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①from…to…从……到……
②look forward to doing sth期待做某事
[高分句型]
It’s easy to find it.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
13.例文:
Dear Robert,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Changzhou. It is a good place to visit.
The air is fresh in Changzhou. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. Central Park and nature museum are two places you must go. You can see many natural landscapes and animals and plants all over the world. When you come to Changzhou, you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food. If you go to different places in Changzhou, you can take a bus. There are buses to different places every day.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Changzhou!
Alex
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给邮件写一封回信。回信需回答邮件中的所有问题,不可遗漏,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对好友将要来家乡旅行表示欢迎;
第二步,具体介绍家乡的环境,特色景点及其它值得做的事情;
第三步,书写结语。期待相聚。
[亮点词汇]
①many natural landscapes许多自然景观
②all over the world全世界
③buses to different places去不同地方的公共汽车
[高分句型]
①When you come to Changzhou, you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food.(“When”引导时间状语从句)
②If you go to different places in Changzhou, you can take a bus.(“If”引导条件状语从句)
14.例文
Dear Jane,
How are you? Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home. I live in the centre of the city. It’s easy to find my home. Go along Huaihai Road and turn left at the third crossing. There is a post office on the right. It’s in the tall building next to the post office. It’s on the fifth floor. I have my own bedroom and bathroom. My neighbours are kind and helpful. They often help each other to solve all kinds of problems. Some of them are volunteers. If your computer breaks down, they will help you repair it. If you don’t have time to look after your children, someone will help you look after them. We are lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.
I think we will have a good time at my home. I’m looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:要求根据表格里的要点邀请好友Jane来你的新家。不要遗漏表格中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍新家地址和新家路线;
第二步,介绍新家的人文环境;
第三步,谈谈自己的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①next to紧邻
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③look after照顾
[高分句型]
①It’s easy to find my home.(It固定句型)
②If your computer breaks down, they will help you repair it.(If引导的条件状语从句)
③If you don’t have time to look after your children, someone will help you look after them.(If引导的条件状语从句)
④I think we will have a good time at my home.(宾语从句)
15.例文
Dear Kitty,
I would like to invite you to my new home. I’ll show you around my hometown first. My home is in the town centre. There are many flowers and trees around it. I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing every day.
The neighbours are kind and friendly. They will prepare plenty of delicious Chinese food for you. They often help us with all kinds of problems. People here are like a big family. There are many things to do in my hometown. There are many fine works of art in the museum. You can chalk 3-D paintings. You can watch a short movie about the amazing things in the world at a local theater.
This is the way to my home. Walk along the garden road, and then turn right at the second crossing. Cross the bridge, and you’ll see a bank. My home is next to the bank.
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍自己家的位置、环境和邻居以及可以去做的事情;
第二步:具体介绍到自己家的路线。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb around带某人参观
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①There are many flowers and trees around it.(There be句型)
②Walk along the garden road, and then turn right at the second crossing.(祈使句)
16.例文
Dear Lucy:
How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in school in China.
You learn about the “double reduction” policy in China and want to know about the changes of my life. Now let me tell you something about it. A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double Reduction policy. In the past, I usually had lessons and did my homework in the daytime. But now, I can visit museums, take computer lessons and draw pictures. In the evening, I usually did homework in the past. But now I can watch news on TV, read books and newspapers. In the past, because I had a lot of homework , I went to bed at 11: 30. But now I go to bed at 10: 00. I’m very happy now. Of course, because I have more free time, I am also very relaxed.
I hope you will be pleased with my replies.
All the best,
Wang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”“一般过去时”“一般将来时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生要注意时态的正确运用,及你在双减之后空闲时间做的事至少两个例子,你的感受至少两点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表达自己收到信后的感受,表明要回复的内容。
第二步:具体介绍双减前的生活和学习。用例子介绍双减后空闲时间做什么,及自己的感受。
第三步:结束语,表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②because of因为
[高分句型]
①A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double Reduction policy.(借助because of 加名词短语。)
17.例文
Dear Alice,
I am very happy to invite you to my new home.
My home is on the nineteenth floor in a flat in the city center. In our community, there are green trees everywhere. It’s clean and tidy. You can smell the beautiful flowers and hear birds singing in the morning. The neighbors are kind and helpful. The volunteers often help the elderly do some cleaning. We are like a big family.
You can take No. 819 Bus and get off at Renmin Bridge. Walk straight on, and take the first turning on the right. Then you will see a supermarket. My home is behind it.
Welcome to my home. I think you’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Millie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇邀请信,是应用文。
②时态:本文要用一般现在时。
③提示:写作要点已以表格的形式给出,考生主要不要遗漏要点,并适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,交代了写作的目的:邀请你来我的新家。
第二步,结合表格所给内容,介绍新家的地理位置、社区情况以及路线。
第三步,总结全文,表达对收信人的欢迎以及祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①the city center 市中心
②hear sb./sth. doing sth. 听某人/某物正在做某事
③the elderly 老年人
④have a good time 玩得高兴
[高级句型]
①The neighbors are kind and helpful. (含有短语help sb. do sth.“帮助某人做某事”)
②I think you’ll have a good time here. (think后为省略that的宾语从句)
18.例文:
Dear Mary
I’m happy to invite you to my new home.
My new home in on the ninth floor. There is a living room, two bathrooms and three bedrooms in it. My new neighbours are kind and helpful. They often help me with all kinds of problems. For example, they often help me with my homework. There are many green trees around my home. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. Walk along Xihu Road, and cross the bridge. You’ll see a bank on your right. My home is next to the bank.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,确保意思连贯,语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的居室以及邻居;
第二步,介绍房屋周围的环境;
第三步,最后介绍如何可以到达自己的家。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③hear sb do sth听到某人做某事
[高分句型]
There is a living room, two bathrooms and three bedrooms in it.(there be句型)
19.例文
Dear Ryan,
I know you are studying Chinese in Shanghai these days. I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Suzhou.
It has a history of over 4000 years and lies in Jiangsu Province. It is a beautiful city that is famous for its elegant classical gardens. There are lots of tall buildings around my neighbourhood. My neighbours are very friendly and hospitable. You can visit many beautiful gardens and enjoy delicious food. My home is in the center of city. You can take the No. 2 bus and get off at the Nanjing Road station. You can easily find my home.
Hope to see you soon in Suzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍苏州以及社区的情况;
第二步,介绍在苏州可以做一些什么事情以及如何到达“我的家”。
[亮点词汇]
①has a history of有……的历史
②be famous for因……而出名
③get off下车
[高分句型]
①It is a beautiful city that is famous for its elegant classical gardens(that引导定语从句)
②There are lots of tall buildings around my neighbourhood. (there be句型)
20.例文:
Dear Amy,
I would like to invite you to visit the youth center in my community.
The youth center is in the city centre. The environment in my community is very nice. Every morning, I can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds singing. My neighbors are friendly and kind. They often help people with all kinds of problems. People here are like a big family.
We have many things to do in the youth center. We can enjoy the films and do all kinds of sports there.
Let me tell you the way to the youth center. Walk along Huaihai Road, take the second crossing on the right, and then you will see a school. The youth center is next to the school. It is on the fifth floor.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Sandy
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点写信邀请Amy来你们小区的青年中心玩,要包括地理位置、社区情况、活动、路线几方面,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二、三人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。文章可分五段式:第一段和第五段用题目已给出的;第二段介绍青年中心的位置及社区的情况;第三段介绍活动内容;第四段指出到达青年中心的路线。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误
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