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初中英语中考复习 34 乐观 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）
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这是一份初中英语中考复习 34 乐观 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版），共8页。
相关话题解读
人难免会遇到挫折和困难，这时候，我们应该积极面对，迎难而上，勇于克服困难，接受挑战。耐挫，也就是用乐观的心态，积极面对困难的种生活态度。
此话题的写作，可以是一篇记叙文， 比如记叙一次具体的挫折或遇到的困难， 并描述自己是如何克服的;也可以是一篇说明文， 比如闲述如何应对生活中的难题， 或是介绍积极面对困难的-一个好办法等。无论什么体裁，涉及这一话题的写作， 关键是要体现出积极乐观的态度。
相关话题写作示例指导
实践案例
题目
Write a cmpsitin in at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin. (根据所给情景写篇短文，字数不得少于60个词。
Jasn, a Junir Three student, wrte t Angela, the editr f the newspaper"Teenagers Life," cmplaining that his parents never allw him t surf the Internet even when he wants t find sme infrmatin fr study. As a result, he ften has a quarrel with his parents .Jasn is upset and asks Angela fr advice abut what he shuld d”deal with the prblem Suppse yu are Angela, please write back t him and help him ut truble
审题
根据题目要求，写作的内容是封回信。 通过审题，可以明确所给的写作情境: Jasn父母不让他上网，Jasn为此经常和父母沙果。Jasn向Angela求助，希望Angela能帮助他解决这一问题。
那么，我们的回信应该包含以下两部分内容:
1.分析Jasn父母不让他上网的原因或目的，让Jasn明白父母行为背后的动机;
2.帮Jasn想出应对该问题的方法，并具体说明该方法能取得的效果，或者说明为什么采取这一方法， 鼓励他要积极面对，努力解决。
段落结构
本文可采用“总一分总”的写作结构:
第一段:点明问题，亮出看法。
第二段:(1)分析父母不许Jasn上网的原因
(2)提供应对问题的方法，并做具体说明。
第三段:概括总结以上内容。
核心语汇
be wrried abut sth.为感到担忧
deal with sth.应对、处理某事
be in truble处于困境中
calm dwn冷静下来
Find a way t d sth.找到做某事的方法
face the challenge bravely勇敢面对挑战
slve the prblem in a wise way聪明地解决问题
have a psitive attitude twards sth.对某事持积极的态度
参考句型
Thanks fr yur letter and I am nw replying t yu and tllig yu my pinin.感谢你的来信，现在我给你回信，并说说我的看法。
I am lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
我期待着能够尽快收到你的回信。
I hpe yu will find these suggestins helpful.
我希望这些建议对你有帮助。
There's n need t d sth.
做某事是没有必要的。
It is a waste f time 1 energy t d sth.
做某事是浪费时间/精力的。
Life is full f changes and challenges.
生活总是充满着变化和挑战。
习作1
A letter t Jasn
Dear Jasn,
I have heard frm yu. I knw yu want t surf the Internet but yur parents dn't allw yu t d that.①Yu shuld knw that yur parents d this nly fr yur wn gd. They think nline games are very attractive. We may easily be attracted. Study harder t prve that surfing the Internet isn't that harmful t yur studies as lng as yu make prgress. Tell them yu wn't surf the Internet fr t lng s that they may agree t let yu surf it. What yu shuld d is t calm dwn, and talk abut it with them plitely. Gd luck!
Yurs sincerely,
Angela
点评:
题目中所要求的写作内容，都在习作中有所呈现，是-篇内容完整、结构明了的习作。有些句子的表述有待改进，比如“yur parents d ... fr yur wn gd ... We may easily be attracted" 可以改成:"Hwever, yu shuld knw yur parents are trying t prtect yu, because smetimes we may easily be attracted by nline games"这样既显得句式多样，也使得语言更为简洁。
习作2
A letter t Jasn
Dear Jasn,
I have read yur letter. There is n need t quarrel with yur parents because it desn't help but will make the matter wrse. They dn't let yu surf the Internet because there is smething bad fr yu n the Internet. I knw that it is cnvenient and it helps t find the infrmatin fr yur studies n the Internet, s yu need it. Try t talk with yur parents.Limiting the time yu spend n the Internet may be a gd way, which helps yur parents realize what yu want is just a shrt time rest. Yu can als allw yur parents t sit beside yu when yu use the Internet s that they may believe yu next time. I believe yu can handle this prblem with yur parents well.
Yurs sincerely,
Angela
点评
这篇习作能按照题目要求精心构思，客观地分析了父母不让Jasn上网的原因，并站在Jasn的角度，给他提出了切实可行的建议，语气客观委貌。本文结构清晰，行文连费活言优美，感情真挚，是篇出色的应用文。此外， 文中使用了不少好间好句。 比如there is n need t quarrel with yur parents .. Limiting the time . may be a gd way等，值得大家借鉴。
相关话题满分作文必背
（一）
题目
Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic "Face life with a smile". (以“笑对人生” (微笑着面对生活)为题，写-篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
The fllwing pints must be included. (必须包含下列要点。)
1. Hw d yu usually face life? / D yu usually face the life with a smile?2. Especially when shuld yu smile t face life? (Give at least tw examples)3. Why?
满分优秀范文
Face life with a smile
It's said that life is like a mirrr. When yu smile t it, it smiles t yu, When yu cry t it, it als cries t yu. Therefre, I chse t face life with a smile!
I smile especially when I'm faced with smething difficult. I think I shuld be cnfident enugh t vercme it instead f giving up easily. S, I always chse t smile in rder t cheer myself up. The mre ptimistic I am, the easier the life will be. I als chse t smile when I am sick, because smiling is a way t cmfrt myself. It is the smile that reduces the pain I am suffering.
That's why I chse t face life with a smile. Use yur smile t change the wrld. Dn't let the wrld change yur smile.
（二）
题目
Write a passage f at lest 60 wrds n the tpic "Les learn t smile". (以“让我们学会微笑”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
Suggested pints:
1. D yu ften smile in yur daily life?
2. Why shuld we learn t smile? (Give ne r tw examples)
3. What changes will we see if we smile mre ften?
满分优秀范文
Let's learn t smile
I frmed the habit f smiling all the time in my childhd. A big smile n my face can break the ice, let my friends feel warm and make us clser t each ther. Besides, smiling can bring peple supprt and cnfidence. Whenever I feel frustrated by the difficulties I meet, a bright smile frm thers will sn cmfrt me and bring me t peace. And I ften smile t myself, as I want t encurage myself t wrk hard and achieve mre. Therefre,mre smiles will nt nly make ther peple cmfrtable, but als make myself feel better.
（三）
题目
Write a passage f at least 60 wrds n the tpic "When I met a difficulty". (以“当我遇到困难时”为题，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Questins fr reference:
1. What kind f difficulty did yu meet nce? Give ne example.
2. Hw did yu face and vercme it?
3. Hw did yu feel after yu vercame it?
满分优秀范文
When I met a difficulty
As we all knw, life is full f difficulties and we must be brave and cnfident t face the challenges and vercme the difficulties.
When I was six years ld, I decided t learn hw t ride a bike. At first, I thught it was easy fr me t learn it. But when I was n the bike, I culdn't keep balance and fell dwn again and again. I was really frustrated and upset at that mment. But then, I thught if I gave up, I wuld never be able t ride a bike. Instead, if I tried again, it wuld be pssible fr me t succeed. I gt up frm the grund quickly, and tld myself that I culd d it with a smile. It made me mre cnfident. Finally, I made it! I was s happy and felt prud f myself.
Frm then n, I realized that as lng as we face difficulties bravely, we can make a difference.
相关话题解读
人难免会遇到挫折和困难，这时候，我们应该积极面对，迎难而上，勇于克服困难，接受挑战。耐挫，也就是用乐观的心态，积极面对困难的种生活态度。
此话题的写作，可以是一篇记叙文， 比如记叙一次具体的挫折或遇到的困难， 并描述自己是如何克服的;也可以是一篇说明文， 比如闲述如何应对生活中的难题， 或是介绍积极面对困难的-一个好办法等。无论什么体裁，涉及这一话题的写作， 关键是要体现出积极乐观的态度。
相关话题写作示例指导
实践案例
题目
Write a cmpsitin in at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin. (根据所给情景写篇短文，字数不得少于60个词。
Jasn, a Junir Three student, wrte t Angela, the editr f the newspaper"Teenagers Life," cmplaining that his parents never allw him t surf the Internet even when he wants t find sme infrmatin fr study. As a result, he ften has a quarrel with his parents .Jasn is upset and asks Angela fr advice abut what he shuld d”deal with the prblem Suppse yu are Angela, please write back t him and help him ut truble
审题
根据题目要求，写作的内容是封回信。 通过审题，可以明确所给的写作情境: Jasn父母不让他上网，Jasn为此经常和父母沙果。Jasn向Angela求助，希望Angela能帮助他解决这一问题。
那么，我们的回信应该包含以下两部分内容:
1.分析Jasn父母不让他上网的原因或目的，让Jasn明白父母行为背后的动机;
2.帮Jasn想出应对该问题的方法，并具体说明该方法能取得的效果，或者说明为什么采取这一方法， 鼓励他要积极面对，努力解决。
段落结构
本文可采用“总一分总”的写作结构:
第一段:点明问题，亮出看法。
第二段:(1)分析父母不许Jasn上网的原因
(2)提供应对问题的方法，并做具体说明。
第三段:概括总结以上内容。
核心语汇
be wrried abut sth.为感到担忧
deal with sth.应对、处理某事
be in truble处于困境中
calm dwn冷静下来
Find a way t d sth.找到做某事的方法
face the challenge bravely勇敢面对挑战
slve the prblem in a wise way聪明地解决问题
have a psitive attitude twards sth.对某事持积极的态度
参考句型
Thanks fr yur letter and I am nw replying t yu and tllig yu my pinin.感谢你的来信，现在我给你回信，并说说我的看法。
I am lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
我期待着能够尽快收到你的回信。
I hpe yu will find these suggestins helpful.
我希望这些建议对你有帮助。
There's n need t d sth.
做某事是没有必要的。
It is a waste f time 1 energy t d sth.
做某事是浪费时间/精力的。
Life is full f changes and challenges.
生活总是充满着变化和挑战。
习作1
A letter t Jasn
Dear Jasn,
I have heard frm yu. I knw yu want t surf the Internet but yur parents dn't allw yu t d that.①Yu shuld knw that yur parents d this nly fr yur wn gd. They think nline games are very attractive. We may easily be attracted. Study harder t prve that surfing the Internet isn't that harmful t yur studies as lng as yu make prgress. Tell them yu wn't surf the Internet fr t lng s that they may agree t let yu surf it. What yu shuld d is t calm dwn, and talk abut it with them plitely. Gd luck!
Yurs sincerely,
Angela
点评:
题目中所要求的写作内容，都在习作中有所呈现，是-篇内容完整、结构明了的习作。有些句子的表述有待改进，比如“yur parents d ... fr yur wn gd ... We may easily be attracted" 可以改成:"Hwever, yu shuld knw yur parents are trying t prtect yu, because smetimes we may easily be attracted by nline games"这样既显得句式多样，也使得语言更为简洁。
习作2
A letter t Jasn
Dear Jasn,
I have read yur letter. There is n need t quarrel with yur parents because it desn't help but will make the matter wrse. They dn't let yu surf the Internet because there is smething bad fr yu n the Internet. I knw that it is cnvenient and it helps t find the infrmatin fr yur studies n the Internet, s yu need it. Try t talk with yur parents.Limiting the time yu spend n the Internet may be a gd way, which helps yur parents realize what yu want is just a shrt time rest. Yu can als allw yur parents t sit beside yu when yu use the Internet s that they may believe yu next time. I believe yu can handle this prblem with yur parents well.
Yurs sincerely,
Angela
点评
这篇习作能按照题目要求精心构思，客观地分析了父母不让Jasn上网的原因，并站在Jasn的角度，给他提出了切实可行的建议，语气客观委貌。本文结构清晰，行文连费活言优美，感情真挚，是篇出色的应用文。此外， 文中使用了不少好间好句。 比如there is n need t quarrel with yur parents .. Limiting the time . may be a gd way等，值得大家借鉴。
相关话题满分作文必背
（一）
题目
Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic "Face life with a smile". (以“笑对人生” (微笑着面对生活)为题，写-篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
The fllwing pints must be included. (必须包含下列要点。)
1. Hw d yu usually face life? / D yu usually face the life with a smile?2. Especially when shuld yu smile t face life? (Give at least tw examples)3. Why?
满分优秀范文
Face life with a smile
It's said that life is like a mirrr. When yu smile t it, it smiles t yu, When yu cry t it, it als cries t yu. Therefre, I chse t face life with a smile!
I smile especially when I'm faced with smething difficult. I think I shuld be cnfident enugh t vercme it instead f giving up easily. S, I always chse t smile in rder t cheer myself up. The mre ptimistic I am, the easier the life will be. I als chse t smile when I am sick, because smiling is a way t cmfrt myself. It is the smile that reduces the pain I am suffering.
That's why I chse t face life with a smile. Use yur smile t change the wrld. Dn't let the wrld change yur smile.
（二）
题目
Write a passage f at lest 60 wrds n the tpic "Les learn t smile". (以“让我们学会微笑”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
Suggested pints:
1. D yu ften smile in yur daily life?
2. Why shuld we learn t smile? (Give ne r tw examples)
3. What changes will we see if we smile mre ften?
满分优秀范文
Let's learn t smile
I frmed the habit f smiling all the time in my childhd. A big smile n my face can break the ice, let my friends feel warm and make us clser t each ther. Besides, smiling can bring peple supprt and cnfidence. Whenever I feel frustrated by the difficulties I meet, a bright smile frm thers will sn cmfrt me and bring me t peace. And I ften smile t myself, as I want t encurage myself t wrk hard and achieve mre. Therefre,mre smiles will nt nly make ther peple cmfrtable, but als make myself feel better.
（三）
题目
Write a passage f at least 60 wrds n the tpic "When I met a difficulty". (以“当我遇到困难时”为题，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Questins fr reference:
1. What kind f difficulty did yu meet nce? Give ne example.
2. Hw did yu face and vercme it?
3. Hw did yu feel after yu vercame it?
满分优秀范文
When I met a difficulty
As we all knw, life is full f difficulties and we must be brave and cnfident t face the challenges and vercme the difficulties.
When I was six years ld, I decided t learn hw t ride a bike. At first, I thught it was easy fr me t learn it. But when I was n the bike, I culdn't keep balance and fell dwn again and again. I was really frustrated and upset at that mment. But then, I thught if I gave up, I wuld never be able t ride a bike. Instead, if I tried again, it wuld be pssible fr me t succeed. I gt up frm the grund quickly, and tld myself that I culd d it with a smile. It made me mre cnfident. Finally, I made it! I was s happy and felt prud f myself.
Frm then n, I realized that as lng as we face difficulties bravely, we can make a difference.
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