初中英语中考复习 29 关爱 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

29 关爱

 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

相关话题解读

关爱他人，就等同于善待自己。关爱他人本身就是一个完善自己的过程，通过关爱他人，我们能相应地得到他人的回馈和帮助。

本话题的写作重心主要有以下三个方面:

1.关爱对象:我们需要关爱谁?是老人还是父母，亦或是其他需要关爱的人?

2.关爱原因:为何上述对象需要关爱?

3.如何关爱:我们应该如何把关爱落实到行动层面?

相关话题写作示例指导

实践案例

题目

Please look at the two pictures below carefully，and think about what has happened.Write passage in at least 60 words on the topic "How to care for the elderly”. (请仔细观察下列两幅图片，想想发生了什么，以“如何关爱老人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。)注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息。

审题

看图作文对初中的学生来说，是有一定难度的。 此类作文旨在考察学生的读题能力、想象能力以及遣词造句、语篇组织的书面表达能力。想要写好这篇作文，就必须要注意以下几个方面:

1.认真阅读提示信息:图片、图表等的材料作文通常都会给出一定的提示， 写作前务必看清这些提示和写作要求。

2.仔细分析图片内容:图画是作文的基础，因此在写作前要仔细观察图画，进行分析，了解图画所要表达的内容、反映的问题、蕴含的道理等。

3.观察细节，展开想象:对图画的主题进行展开，加以内容的扩充。

从这篇作文的图片内容来看，尽管两位老人家中都挂着全家福，但显然并没有家人陪伴左右，显得非常孤独，需要子女的关爱和陪伴。结合图片上方的提示信息，作文的主题应为“关爱老人”。在写作时，我们首先要对图片内容进行简要概述，突出重点一老人需要关爱。 接看，我们应就如何关爱老人，提出2-3条具体的、可行的做法，并对其进行解释说明。

此外，这篇作文还需注意避免出现人称，时态的混乱，或者对图片进行过度的想象，导

段落结构

本文可采用“总一分一总”的写作结构:

.第一段:用12句话简要措给图片中的情境和图片所呈现的内容，提出主题一 关爱老人

第二段:对文章的主题展开说明，给出2-3条关爱老人的具体做法，并解释说明为什153g么要这么做，或者这么做能起到怎样的效果等。

第三段:总结上述内容，呼吁大家共同关爱老人。

核心语汇

remind sb. of sth.让某人想起某事

 respect the elderly尊敬老人

be aware of sth.意识到....

family care家庭照料

enrich one's life丰富某人的生活

 focus on/ concentrate on sth.关注某事

have some trouble / difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难

参考句型

Filial piety is the most important in all virtues.100百善孝为先。

Nothing is more ... than ..没有比.........更......

no matter how ... we should无论...我们都应.....

Not only should we ... we also should ..我们不仅应....还.....

Make sure that ...确保...

习作

How to care for the elderly

As is shown in the two pictures above, some of the elderly live alone. They feel lonely and depressed with a sense of being useless.Therefore, one of the pressing problems facing us now is how to care for the elderly. What they need most is not material comforts, but mental ones. No matter how busy we are, we should try to find time to chat with them, look after them, and accompany them. In addition, we should let them have an annual physical examination to keep them healthy. After all, nothing is more important than taking good care of the elderly and making them happy.

点评:

该生准确地把握了图片的内容，能根据图片的主题进行表达。内容充实，句子连贯，表达通顺。在写作时，“feel depressed""material comforts" 等词汇的正确使用，展现了较大的词汇量，主语从句"What they need most ...以及让步状语从句“No matter how...”等句子体现了作者较强的表达能力。文章最后一句话回应了主题。总的来说，该生很好地完成了写作任务，本文是一片层次清晰、结构完整的佳作。

相关话题满分作文必背

（一）

题目

Write at least 60 words about the topic "Love around me". (请以“围绕在我身边的爱”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的作文。)

注意：

Use the following points as a guide.

1. Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)

2. How do you feel when you get love from him her 1 them?

3. What are you going to do to show your love?

范文

Love around me

Love is everywhere in my life. My parents support me and love me all the time. My friends care about me as well It is their love that helps me make progress and become better and better. When I have trouble with my studies or I fail the exams, my parents never get angry with me. Instead, they always cheer me up and give me confidence. My friends often help me with my studies. What they do makes me feel warm, touched and grateful. In order to show my love and gratitude, I will spend some of my pocket money buying gifts for them.I think they will like my gifts very much.

（二）

题目

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "I want to volunteer in/at                     ”

(以“我想在              担任志愿者”为题，写- -篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

注意

Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考 )

1. Where do you want to volunteer?

2. Why do you want to be a volunteer there?

3. Do you have any problem with volunteering?

范文

I want to volunteer at a nursing house

I want to volunteer at a nursing house. Firstly, the old at the nursing house may be lonely, because they seldom see their children. If I am a volunteer there, I can accompany them, chat with them and make them feel happier and less lonely. In addition, caring for the old is a traditional Chinese virtue. It's our duty to look after them well. I believe I can be the best volunteer because I can do many kinds of housework. And the most important thing is, I am patient and willing to help. I'm ready to be a volunteer there!

（三）

题目

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“Take care of the Earth together”(请以“一同爱地球”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）

范文

Take care of the Earth together!

Currently. the environment is getting worse and wore. We are surrounded by different kinds of population The Earth is our only home, so it is time for us to take care of the Earth and make it better. For example, we should drive cars less often and go to school by public transportation. In this way, we can help reduce carbon mission. Moreover, we should stop polluting the river by not throwing rubbish into it. All in all, nothing is more important than taking good care of the Earth. Let's take action together!